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02记叙文之记事型【题型设置与意图】叙事类记叙文主要是对事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。主要是说明事件的时间、背景、过程及结果,即我们通常所说的五个“W”(what,who,when,where,why)和一个“H"(how)。叙事类记叙文的表达方式主要是“叙述”和“描写”,因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚,描写生动形象。题型设置旨在考查学生叙述事件的能力,以考查学生对一般过去时态和一般将来时态陈述句的运用为主要目的。【写作方法】第一段:开门见山,交代事件的大体情况,如时间、地点、人物、事件等;第二段:详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因或结果等;第三段:评价该事件:表明自己的看法、感受等。【写作角度与注意事项】写作时要写清事情发生与发展的过程以及事情发生的前因后果等。一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述。写已发生的真实事情和虚拟的故事常用一般过去时;写将要发生的事情用一般将来时。叙事类记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交代人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在英文写作中很少用到。写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式1.

“开门见山”式开头

一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A

Trip

to

Huangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:Lastmonth,myfamilywenttoHuangshanbytrain.Ittookustenhourstogetthere.Whatalongandtiringjourney!Weweretiredbutthebeautifulsceneryexcitedus.2.回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如neverforget(永远无法忘记)、remember(记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad(难过的)...如“ATriptoHuangshan(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:IwillneverforgetmyfirsttriptoHuangshan.或ItwasreallyanunforgettableexperienceIhad.3.疑问性开头在叙事类或论述性的文章中,都可采用疑问型开头,这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“PlantingTrees(种树)”的开头可以是:Haveyoueverplantedtrees?Don’tyouthinkplantingtreesis...再如“TravelingAbroad(出国之旅)”的开头可以是:Ifyouhaveanopportunitytotravelabroad,whynotconsiderSingapore?4.倒叙式开头在有的文章,特别是叙事类的文章中,可以采用倒叙的写作手法,先写出事件的结果,再陈述过程。如“CatchingThieves(捉贼)”的开头可以这样写:Ilayinbedinthehospital.Ismiledatmyfriendseventhoughmylegshurt.Doyouwanttoknowwhathappenedtome?Letmetellyou.It’sa...story.模板①开门见山引出事件,点名了基本信息____________(时间)开门见山引出事件,点名了基本信息(人物)hadabasketballmatchwith.叙述了整个事件的过程及结果________________________Wheneverwescored,I____________(我观看比赛时的表现).Inthelastquarter,ourteam____________.Inthelastminute____________(我们队的表现).Ourclass____________thematch(比赛结果).叙述了整个事件的过程及结果对整个事件的评价Theexcitingmatchgaveusalotoffun.对整个事件的评价【模板范文】YesterdayourclasshadabasketballmatchwithClassTwo.ClassTwowasthetopteamofourgrade,butwedidn’twanttosettleforsecondbest.Thematchbeganat4:30.Atfirst,ClassTwoplayedbetterandwasalwaysinthelead.Wewerestandingaroundthecourt,cheeringloudlyforourteam.Wheneverwescored,Ijumpedandshouted,forgettingI’magirl.Theunfavorablesituationlastedforthreequarters.Inthelastquarter,ourteamchangedtheplanandslowlycaughtup.Inthelastminutethescorebecame81to80.Ourclasswonthematch.Theexcitingmatchgaveusalotoffun.典例赏析:(2023·辽宁抚顺·统考中考真题)初中三年生活转瞬即逝,如今即将毕业离开母校,此时此刻,你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢?请以“MyFirstDayintheMiddleSchool”为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受,再次体验曾经的美好时光,满怀信心地去迎接新的未来!词数:80~100词。要求:(1)语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。(3)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。MyFirstDayintheMiddleSchoolWhenIfirstwalkedintothemiddleschool,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________NowIwillleavemyschool.I’mgoingtoworkhardinthefuturetomakemyschoolproudofme.【答案】例文MyFirstDayintheMiddleSchoolWhenIfirstwalkedintothemiddleschool,Iwasexcitedaswellasworried.IwasexcitedbecauseIwasastudentofjuniormiddleschoolnow.IwasworriedbecauseIdidn’tquiteknowabouttheteachersandstudentsinthisschool.IwasafraidIcouldn’tfitinwell.However,whenIsatdownatmydeskandbegantoknowaboutmyteachersandclassmates,Ifoundeveryonewasreallynicetome.Teacherswereverykindandreadytohelpus.Myclassmateswereactiveandeasytogetalongwith.Afterclass,Iplayedsoccerwithmynewly-madefriendsontheplayground.Lookingatthebeautifulcampus,Igraduallyforgotmynervousness.Ifeltathome.Attheendofthatfirstschoolday,IfeltnomorefearandIbelievedIwouldhavelotsoffunatthisnewschool.NowIwillleavemyschool.I’mgoingtoworkhardinthefuturetomakemyschoolproudofme.[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于话题作文写作;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;③提示:文章开头以及标题已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,承接短文开头,描述你入校当天的感受;第二步,结合自身经历,描述你入校时的所见所闻和经历感受,可列举具体的事例;第三步,抒发毕业感悟并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①aswellas也,又,和②fitin适应③feelathome感觉自在[高分句型]①IwasexcitedbecauseIwasastudentofjuniormiddleschoolnow.(because引导的原因状语从句)②IwasafraidIcouldn’tfitinwell.(省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)③Lookingatthebeautifulcampus,Igraduallyforgotmynervousness.(现在分词短语作状语)模板②叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构,模板如下:介绍景观介绍景观介绍旅行经历总结旅行感受…isoneofthemostbeautifulsceneryspots.Ivolunteeredaguidetointroduce…ItwasabusyandtireddaybutIwasveryhappy典例赏析:(2023·四川宜宾·统考中考真题)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Moore来信希望了解你的家乡宜宾的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信必须包括下面的内容。注意:1.词数:100词左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。2.参考词汇:placesofinterest名胜古迹;hotpot火锅;economy经济DearMoore,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.YouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutmyhometownYibin.Nowletmetellyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文:DearMoore,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter.YouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutmyhometownYibin.Nowletmetellyou.Yibin,locatedinthesouthofSichuanProvince,isthefirstcityoftheYangtzeRiver.TherearemanyplacesofinterestinYibin,suchasLizhuangAncientTown,BambooSeaandsoon.Thereareplentyoffoodssuchashotnoodlesandhotpot.Yibin’seconomyisdevelopingrapidly.People’slivesaregettingbetterandbetter.IloveYibinverymuch.WouldyouliketovisitYibinthissummer?I’llbeyourguide.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中所包含的要点,写回信介绍自己的家乡宜宾。[写作步骤]第一步,引出信件的主题;第二步,具体介绍家乡宜宾并表达自己的感受;第三步,收尾,邀请对方来宜宾玩。[亮点词汇]①locatedin位于②suchas例如③lookforwardto期待,盼望[高分句型]①TherearemanyplacesofinterestinYibin,suchasLizhuangAncientTown,BambooSeaandsoon.(Therebe句型)②WouldyouliketovisitYibinthissummer?(表示邀请的常用句型)1.

Amongvariouskindsofthings/personsinmymind,

...isthemostunforgettableone.2.

Onasunny/rainymorning,whileIwas...Firstofall...Then...Afterthat...Intheend...3.He/she/thiswasoneofthemostmeaningful/enjoyable/unforgettablepersons/thingsthatIhaveevermet/experienced,

Iwillrememberhim/inforever.加分句子:1.Sth.impressedmegreatly...2.Whatimpressedmemostisthat...经典句型:1.

Last

Sunday(Saturday...),it

was

sunny(rainy,

windy,

foggy).

2.

I

got

up

very

early

(late).

After

breakfast

I

went

to

with

my

friends

by

bike,

bus...

3.

We

enjoyed

ourselves.4.

We

forgot

the

time.

We

didn’t

come

back

until

5

o’clock.

5.

We

all

felt

very

tired,

but

we

were

happy.

6.

I

thought

I

would

never

forget

this

trip.

7.

Last

summer,

my

parents

and

I

went

to

Beijing

for

our

holidays.

8.

We

visited

a

lot

of

places

of

interest.

9.

We

had

a

good

time

there.

10.

We

bought

a

lot

of

things.

The

clothes

here

are

good

and

cheap.

(2023·辽宁丹东·统考中考真题)保持善良,传播爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历,以“TheSpreadofLove”为题,讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历,并谈谈你的感悟及今后的打算。写作要求:1.语言表达准确,语意通顺连贯;2.书写工整规范;3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名;4.词数:70词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheSpreadofLoveEveryonehasdifferentideasaboutlife.Inmyopinion,lifeisbeautifulandfulloflove.Severalweeksago,myclassmateBobwasbadlyill.Hehadtobeinhospitalforalongtime.Buthisfamilywastoopoortoaffordit.SoIdecidedtoraisemoneytohelphim.WhenIsentallthemoneytoBob,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.Helpingothersmakesmehappy.Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelievethatlifeisbeautifulandlovewillbearoundusforever.AndIwillalsohelpmorepeopleinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步,开门见山,介绍生活充满爱;第二步,具体阐述你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历;第三步,最后表达自己的感悟及今后的打算。[亮点词汇]①inmyopinion在我看来②too...to...太……而不能……③decidetodo决定做[高分句型]①WhenIsentallthemoneytoBob,heandhisparentsweredeeplymoved.(when引导的时间状语从句)②Maybesometimeswefeelunlucky,butweshouldbelievethatlifeisbeautifulandlovewillbearoundusforever.(that引导的宾语从句)(2023·吉林长春·统考中考真题)某报正在以“Challenge”为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语故事及体会来投稿。要求:1.写一个自身或其他人的故事;2.适当增加细节,行文连贯;3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:ChallengeLifeisfullofupsanddowns.Noonecanleadalifewithoutanychallenges.However,Ibelievechallengesmakeabetterme.IwaspoorinEnglishinGrade7,whichtroubledmealot.ThenImadeupmymindtolearnEnglishwell.FromthenonIgotupearlytomemorizenewwordsandusefulsentencepatterns.Besides,IdidmanyEnglishexercises.Indeeditwasnotaneasyjobtocatchupwithmyclassmates,butIkeptgoingandnevergaveup.Atlast,myhardworkpaidoff,andImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Thistaughtmealesson:Don’tbeafraidofchallenges,becausetheycomehandinhandwithachievements.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;③提示:题目要求以“Challenge”为题写短文投稿,结合自身或他人的故事来谈谈遇到的挑战及自己的感悟。[写作步骤]第一步,讲讲自身应对挑战的经历;第二步,谈谈自己从这次挑战中学到了什么。[亮点词汇]①befullof充满②makeupone’smindtodosth.下定决心做某事③catchupwith赶上[高分句型]①IwaspoorinEnglishinGrade7,whichtroubledmealot.(which引导非限制性定语从句)②Don’tbeafraidofchallenges,becausetheycomehandinhandwithachievements.(祈使句的否定形式;because引导原因状语从句)(2023·新疆·中考真题)每个人的成长,都经历过很多次尝试,有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“MyFirstTry”为题,用英语写一篇短文,记录你成长中的第一次尝试。要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,内容详实,语法正确,书写规范;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数80—120。开头已给出,不计入总词数。MyFirstTryWhenitcomestothetopicof“MyFirstTry”,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:MyFirstTryWhenitcomestothetopicof“MyFirstTry”,I’llneverforgetthemeaningfulexperienceIhadinGrade7.Itwasmyfirsttimetobeavolunteer.AsamemberofAnimalHelpers,Ivolunteeredtoberesponsibleforwashing,feedingandplayingwithhomelessdogs.Atthesametime,Itooksomephotosofthemandmadepostersonlinetocallonmorepeopletogiveahand.Throughmyefforts,overeightdogswereluckytofindtheirnewhomes.WhenIsawthemtakengoodcareofandtheybroughtthepeoplemuchfun,Igotsuchastrongfeelingofpride.IrealizethateachlifeisimportantandthetinythingsIdocanmakeadifference.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;③提示:要求“MyFirstTry”为题,讲述自己成长中的第一次尝试,注意描述清楚细节,用词要准确,语句要通顺。[写作步骤]第一步,引出主题,讲述自己第一的尝试是在什么时候;第二步,具体介绍第一次尝试做的事情,以及自己的感受;第三步,书写结语。阐述自己的领悟。[亮点词汇]①volunteertodosth志愿做某事②beresponsiblefor负责③callon号召④takegoodcareof好好照顾[高分句型]①WhenIsawthemtakengoodcareofandtheybroughtthepeoplemuchfun.(when引导的时间状语从句)②IrealizethateachlifeisimportantandthetinythingsIdocanmakeadifference.(宾语从句)(2023·黑龙江绥化·统考中考真题)我们的生活丰富多彩,每个家庭都发生过一些有趣的事,请选择一件用英语写一篇短文,与我们分享。写作要求:(1)文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;(3)词数不少于80词。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Ihaveahappyfamily.Therearemanyfunnythingsinmyfamily.Oneday,mymotherandIwenttoapark.Wehadagoodtimeandwedecidedtohavelunchinthepark.Mymotherboughtsomemilkandbread.Mymothertoldmetowashmyhandsbeforelunch.However,whenwecameback,ourbreadwasgone!Wethoughtthatsomeonetookit.Weareveryangry.Ithoughtthatthethiefwouldcomebacktotakethemilk.So,mymotherandIhidbehindatreeandwaited.Onehourlater,noonecameandwewereveryhungry.Wegaveupandwewantedtogohometohavesomethingtoeat.Suddenly,Ifoundsomethingunderthechair.Oh,it’sourbread!Whatafunnything!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;③提示:本文主要介绍自己家庭中发生的一件趣事,适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步,引出话题;第二步,详细介绍自己家发生的一件趣事;第三步,书写结语。[亮点词汇]①haveagoodtime玩得开心②giveup放弃[高分句型]①Mymothertoldmetowashmyhandsbeforelunch.(动词不定式作宾语补足语)②whenwecameback,ourbreadwasgone!(when引导的时间状语从句)③Whatafunnything!(感叹句)(2023·贵州·统考中考真题)请结合下图内容及提示,以“My__________FamilyMemory”为题,根据写作要求,写一篇不少于80词的短文。describethememoryWhathappened?Whendidithappen?Whowasinthememory?expressyourfeelingsoropinionsWhatdoyouthinkofit?Whydoyouthinkso?写作要求:1.结合实际,用适当的形容词补全标题。2.短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展。3.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyFunniestFamilyMemoryTherearecountlessinterestingmemoriesinourfamily.Letmetellyouoneofthem.It’sabouteating.Irememberonce,whenIwasatmygrandma’shouse,it’stimefordinner.IwassohungrythatIrantothetableinawindymannerandstartedeating.Ijusthadabiteofthefood,feelingveryspicy.Iaskedmymother,“Mom,whyisvegetablepeppersohot?”Momranoverandtastedit.Shesaid,“Thisisnotvegetablepepper.It’spepper!”“Ah?”Iaskedinconfusion.Thisischili.Nowonderit’ssospicy.“Givemesomewater!”Thefamilylaughedwhentheyheardit.Infact,therearemanyinterestingfamilystories,waitingforustodiscover.Aslongasyouareseriousaboutdiscoveringit,youwillfeelthatfamilyfuneverywhere.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,属于材料作文写作;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;③提示:文章标题以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,不要遗漏提示中的“补全题目”这一要点,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,开篇点题,引出话题;第二步,根据要点讲述这一事件发生的时间、人物及经过,要列举具体的事例;第三步,抒发你对这件事的评价并书写结语。[亮点词汇]①countlessinterestingmemories无数的有趣回忆②inconfusion疑惑地③nowonder难怪[高分句型]①IwassohungrythatIrantothetableinawindymannerandstartedeating.(sothat引导的结果状语从句)②Aslongasyouareseriousaboutdiscoveringit,youwillfeelthatfamilyfuneverywhere.(aslongas引导的条件状语从句)(2023·福建厦门·厦门双十中学校考模拟预测)成长是一种蜕变,在跌跌撞撞中成就更好的自己。你可能学会了一项新技能,或者掌握了新知识,也可能是养成了一种好习惯。请选择一个方面谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获。词数80左右。注意事项:1.必须包含所有的内容要点;2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Inthefinalexamoftheninthgrade,Igotthefirstplaceinmyclass.Ihaveregainedmyconfidence.Ibelieveeverythingiseasy.Intheseventhgrade,Iwascrazyaboutcomputergames.Atthattime,Iwenttobedverylateeverynight.Icouldn’tgetupinthemorning.Isleptinclassanddidn’tlistencarefully.SoIfailedtheexam.Ifeltthatmyclassmateslookeddownonme,andmyteachersandparentsworriedaboutme.Later,Irealizedthatthiswasnotgood.Ibegantoaskmyteachersandmygoodfriendsforhelp.Sincethen,Ididn’tplaycomputergamesanymore.Idevelopedgoodlearninghabits.Istudiedhardandachievedmydreams.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,话题作文,谈谈你成长改变的经历以及收获;②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;③提示:写作时,围绕话题进行叙述,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,引出主题(总写)。我获得了第一名,认为一切很简单;第二步,叙述成长改变的经历;第三步,谈谈收获,结尾。努力学习,实现了梦想。[亮点词汇]①Inthefinalexamof在……的期末考试中②getthefirstplace获得第一名③becrazyabout迷恋④lookdownon瞧不起⑤ask…forhelp请求帮助⑥developgoodlearninghabits养成良好的学习习惯⑦studyhardandachievedreams努力学习,实现梦想[高分句型]Ifeltthatmyclassmateslookeddownonme,andmyteachersandparentsworriedaboutme.(宾语从句)2.(2023·重庆渝中·重庆巴蜀中学校考模拟预测)习总书记告诫青年人“艰难困苦,玉汝于成”。每个人的成长都是一种蜕变的过程,从幼稚走向成熟,从逆境走向成功。“精感石没羽,岂云惮险坚”,初中三年你有过逆势前行克服困难和的经历吗?请以“Theharder,Thebetter”为题,写一篇书面表达讲述你的一次经历和感悟。要求:(1)确定主题;(2)围绕主题,表达内容积极向上,有具体生动的事件;(3)词数80—120;(4)作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。提示问题:Whatwasthedifficulty?Whatdidyoudotogetoverthedifficulty?Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Theharder,ThebetterInourlife,wemaymeetwithdifferentkindsofdifficulties.Buthowcanwedealwiththem?Hereisoneofmyownexperiences.WhenIfirstwentintothemiddleschool,Iwastooshytocommunicatewithothers.AndIwasafraidtoaskothersquestionsthatIcouldn’tworkout.Iturnedtomyparentsforhelpandtheygavemeusefulsuggestions.TheytoldmethatIneededtobebravetotalktoothersandmakenewfriends.ItriedmybesttofollowtheirsuggestionsandfinallyIdidthat.NowIunderstandthatIneedtolearnhowtogetoverdifficultiesbymyselfwithconfidence.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应以“Theharder,Thebetter”为题,写一篇书面表达讲述你初中三年的一次经历和感悟。[写作步骤]第一步,开篇点题,表明每个人都会遇到困难;第二步,具体阐述你遇到的困难是什么,以及怎样克服的;第三步,总结,写出你从困难中学到了什么。[亮点词汇]①dealwith处理②communicatewithsb.与某人交流③turntosb.forhelp向某人求助④tryone’sbesttodosth.尽某人最大努力去做某事[高分句型]①WhenIfirstwentintothemiddleschool,Iwastooshytocommunicatewithothers.(when引导时间状语从句)②NowIunderstandthatIneedtolearnhowtogetoverdifficultiesbymyselfwithconfidence.(that引导宾语从句;“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)3.(2023·陕西西安·校考模拟预测)在过去的三年学习生活中,相信每个人都有印象深刻的日子,这一天的回忆也许是最开心的、难忘的,也可能是不幸的、难过的,请以“The______DayinMyJuniorHighSchool”为题写一篇英语作文,描述一下你印象深刻的一天。注意:1.补全标题;2.文章内容必包含上面提及的要点,可以适当发挥;3.表达清楚,语句通顺,行文流畅,字迹工整,卷面整洁;4.词数:不得少于70词。5.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等个人信息,否则不予评分:The______DayinMyJuniorHighSchool______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheUnforgettableDayinMyJuniorHighSchoolI’llneverforgetJune11th,2012.Itwasasunnyday.Onthewaytoschool,myfrienddidsomethingrudetome.Itmademesad.What’sworse,Igota“C”inmyfavoritesubject.Afterschool,Iwenthomeunhappily.Itwasdarkintheroom.Suddenlythelightswereon,andIheardthesong“Happybirthday”.Iwassurprisedtoseemanypeopleandabigcake.“Oh,it’smybirthday.”Iwassoexcitedandhappy.Itwasmyfirsttimetohaveabirthdayparty.I’llneverforgetthatday.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。介绍让自己难忘的一天;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。详细地描述印象深刻的一天;第三步,书写结语。发表自己的感悟。[亮点词汇]①Onthewaytoschool在去学校的路上②What’sworse更糟糕的是[高分句型]Itwasmyfirsttimetohaveabirthdayparty.(“Itwasone’sfirsttimetodosth.”句型)(2023·河南开封·统考三模)马克思认为,劳动创造了人和人类社会,劳动是区分人与动物的标志。学校将开展以“劳动”为主题的教育活动,请你以“Anunforgettablelaborexperience”为题,写一篇英文短文向学校报刊投稿。1.要点:1)你的劳动经历;2)你这次劳动的感受。2.要求:1)文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;2)词数100左右。Anunforgettablelaborexperience_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:AnunforgettablelaborexperienceItookpartinatree-plantingactivitywithmyfriendsthisMarch,whichwasanunforgettableexperienceforme.Onthewaytothemountain,weweresoexcitedthatweevensangsongsloudly.Aftergettingthesmalltrees,webegantoworkhard.First,wedugadeepholeontheground,andthenweputasmalltreeintoit.Afterthat,weputtheearthbacktofillthehole.Finally,wewateredthetreesverycarefully.Wewerebusyplantingtreesthewholeday.Itwassaidthathundredsoftreeswereplantedintheend.Seeingthemountaincoveredwithsmalltrees,weallgotagreatfeelingofsatisfaction.Tree-plantingmadeushappyandproud,becauseweweredoingsomethingmeaningfultomakeourhometownmorebeautiful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,引出话题;第二步,具体阐述写作内容,重点讲述你的劳动经历;第三步,讲述你这次劳动的感受,并表达自己的愿景。[亮点词汇]①bebusydoingsth.忙于做某事②hundredsof数百;③agreatfeelingofsatisfaction巨大的满足感[高分句型]①Itookpartinatree-plantingactivitywithmyfriendsthisMarch,whichwasanunforgettableexperienceforme.(which引导的非限制性从句)②Itwassaidthathundredsoftreeswereplantedintheend.(it作形式主语)(2023·重庆九龙坡·重庆实验外国语学校校考一模)“不经一番寒彻骨,怎得梅花扑鼻香。”在奔跑的路上,每个人都会跌倒,而只有站起来继续奔跑的人才能抵达终点。在旅途中,我曾历经艰险,爬上了山顶;在学习中,我可能通过千百次努力,终于改进了英语发音,取得了成绩的进步;在交友中,我可能克服了不善言辞的弱点,交到了知心朋友。某英语网站以“有风雨,也有阳光”为主题发起故事分享活动,请讲述一件你在生活中克服困难、并取得进步的小故事,且谈谈你的感想。要求:1.80-120词;2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息:1.起因,经过;2.结果,感悟;3.……________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Everyonehasencounteredmanydifficultiesinhislife.IstillrememberclearlymyexperienceofdealingwiththedifficultmathproblemImetlastyear.ThemathproblemwassohardthatIcouldnotworkitoutintwentyminutes.Ididn’twanttogiveup.Idecidedtotrysomewaystoovercomethedifficulty.Atfirst,IfoundsomesimilarquestionsfromtheInternet.Istudiedthemandtriedtofindouttherules.IdidthetestoverandoveragainuntilIcouldtrulyunderstanditandknowhowtosolvethiskindofproblem.Atlast,Iworkedthemathproblemout!Wemaymeetlotsofdifficultiesinourlives,butifwecantakethemseriouslyandtrydifferentways,theywillbesolvedfinally.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为话题作文;②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;③提示:主要介绍遇到的困难及如何解决困难。[写作步骤]第一步,引出困难是什么;第二步,描述如何克服困难;第三步,总结自己的感受和收获。[亮点词汇]①dealwith处理②workout解出③giveup放弃④findout发现,找出[高分句型]①ThemathproblemwassohardthatIcouldnotworkitoutintwentyminutes.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)②Ifwecantakethemseriouslyandtrydifferentways,theywillbesolvedfinally.(if引导的条件状语从句)(2023·吉林长春·统考一模)“凡事预则立,不预则废。”某英文网站正在开展主题为“做一个有准备的人”的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿,谈谈是什么经历让你意识到准备的重要性,以及你从中获得的感悟。要求:文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。BeingP

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