老高考旧教材适用2025版高考英语二轮复习35分写作限时满分练五

分写作限时满分练(五)Ⅰ.短文改错(2024四川德阳二模)LastSaturdaymorning,Iwonderedwhattodoontheweekendwhileliedonbed.Suddenly,IrememberMomhadpromisedtotakemysisterandmetothezoo,soIgotupandgotdressingveryquickly.Atthethoughtofgettingcloselytothelovelymonkeysthere,Ifeltveryexcited.Assoonasshearrivedatthezoo,wewenttothemonkey’shomedirect.WiththehelpofmysisterItooksomegoodpictureofthemformyscienceproject.MysistersaidIwasbigfanofmonkeys.Yes,thatshesaidwasright.AndIwasconfidentaboutthatIwouldgetan“A”intheproject.Ⅱ.书面表达(2024吉林长春三模)目前,全国许多中学都在课后开展阳光体育活动(sunshinesports)。请你给校英文报写一篇短文共享你对中学开展阳光体育活动的看法。要点包括:1.阳光体育的内容(gymnastics,taichi,runningexercises等);2.活动的好处;3.支持开展此活动。留意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细微环节,以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________35分写作限时满分练(五)Ⅰ.第一句:lied→lying解析考查动词的时态和省略。时间状语从句中主语和主句的主语一样,且从句中有be动词时,可省略从句中的主语和be动词。故将lied改为lying。其次句:remember→remembered解析考查动词的时态。通篇时态是一般过去时,故将remember改为remembered。其次句:dressing→dressed解析考查形容词。got后用过去分词作表语,故将dressing改为dressed。第三句:closely→close解析考查固定短语。getcloseto是固定短语,意为“接近”,故将closely改为close。第四句:she→we解析考查代词。由后面的“wewenttothemonkey’shome”和语境可知,是“我们一到动物园”,故将she改为we。第四句:direct→directly解析考查副词。修饰动词went应用副词directly,意为“干脆”,故将direct改为directly。第五句:picture→pictures解析考查名词的复数。some后应用名词的复数pictures,故将picture改为pictures。第六句:在big前加a解析考查冠词。fan是可数名词的单数形式,且此处表泛指,前面需加不定冠词,big是辅音音素开头,因此不定冠词用a,故在big前加a。第七句:that→what解析考查主语从句。分析句子结构可知,此处是主语从句,从句中said为及物动词,缺少宾语,因此应用what引导主语从句,故将that改为what。第八句:去掉about解析考查宾语从句。beconfidentthat...是固定用法,意为“很有信念……”,that引导的是宾语从句,about是多余的。Ⅱ.Sunshinesportsusuallycovergymnastics,taichi,runningexercisesandsoon.Wecanbenefitalotfromsunshinesports.Firstofall,sunshinesportscanstrengthenourbodythatisthebasisofourlearning.Goodhealthisnotonlytheguaranteeforsuccessfulcompletionofstudyinschool,butalsothenecessityforhardworkaftergraduation.Secondly,sunshinesportscandevelopourgoodhabitofexercising.Atlast,whenwedogroupgymnastics,sunshinesportscanimproveourteamworkcapacity.Westudentsofseniorhigh