读后续写543法则课件高三英语二轮复习

高考读后续写（五四三法则）--高考总复习作文专题

目录1.读后续写技巧2.高考真题训练3.优秀范文实例读后续写技巧

五四三法则

5R解读故事

4句确定框架3大续写原则5R解读故事1.

Readforcharacters2.

Readforconflict/problems3.

Readforplot4.

Readforemotionalchanges5.

Readfortheme4句确定框架Step1：先写最后一句（主题句）Step2：再写衔接句（第一段的最后一句）Step3：根据所给段首语句写角色的情感Step4：补全续写每段的中间内容三大续写原则

1.

Action—Response原则2.

Conflict

—Solution原则3.

Negative

—Positive原则三大续写原则

1.

Action—Response原则：一个角色的所言、所行、所感和所想会引起其他角色的一系列反应。每段对话1-2句，不一定两个人都要说话，无声的动作也是一种response。三大续写原则2.

Conflict

—Solution原则：一般而言第二段会有问题的solution。（同时思考：能否在第一段出现一个问题，然后把它解决了或者没有解决。一方面是增加看点，另一方面也是给第二段作铺垫。）三大续写原则3.

Negative

—Positive原则：写作中一定要有情感的变化，无论前面是怎样的情感，最终都应该是积极的。高考真题训练

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2022·唐山模拟)Ajaywassittingquietlyinhislastannualfunction(典礼)ofmiddleschool.ThePrizeCeremonywasabouttostartandhewasconfidentthistimethathewouldgetaprize.Hedidn'treallyknowwhyhedesperatelywantedaprize—toholdtheprecioussmallcup,togettheapplausefromtheaudiences,ortounderstandthefeelingofotherswhogettheprizes.

Inpreviousyearshetriedveryhardandparticipatedinalltheactivities—academics,literature,sportsandetc.—tostandonthisbigstage.Unfortunatelyhecouldnevermakeittoanyof1st,2ndor3rdpositionsinanyevents.Atlast,inthefinalyearhetriedthetoughestbutsafestbet—Target“TheStudentwithMostAttendance”.

Theprize“TheStudentwithMostAttendance”wasabouttobeannounced.Hewasrestlesswithanxietyandexpectationthoughhewasquitesuretowinit.Butfatedidnotfavorhim.Itwasnothisname.Hecheckedtherecordslatertofindhimselfabsentfortwodaystotakecareofhissickmother.

Hetriedhardtoforgethisfailurebutdeepinhisheartthedreamwasstillalivewithoutgettingevenslightlyfaded.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Eightyearslater,hebecameanofficerinarmy.

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Onedayhewasinvitedbytheheadmasterofhisoldmiddleschool.第一步：5R解读故事1.Readforcharacters:

Ajay,headmaster,Ajay’smother

2.Readforconflict/problems:Ajayhadadesireforthelittlecup,buthefailed.

3.Readforplot:SitquietlyinhislastannualfunctionTriedhardandparticipatedinallactivitieswithoutwinningTriedthesafestbet---thestudentwithmostattendanceFatedidnotfavorhim---hewasabsentfortwodaystotakecareofhismother4.ReadforemotionalchangesConfidentDesperatelywantedaprizeRestlesswithanxietyandexpectationQuitesuretowinTriedhardtoforgetbuthisdreamwasalive5.ReadforthemeHowtodealwithfailuresandsetbacks？第二步：4句确定框架

读后续写不同于其他作文，有时候可能需要先倒着写。

Step1：先写最后一句（主题句）.

Step2：再写衔接句（第一段的最后一句）Step3:

根据所给段首语句写角色的情感根据第一段

提示写：根据第二段提示写Step4：补全续写每段的中间内容

第三步：3大续写原则

1.

Action—Response原则2.

Conflict—Solution原则3.

Negative—Positive原则优秀范文示例

Eight

years

later,he

became

an

officer

in

army.Itwasveryhardforhimtotrain,buthenevergaveup.Healwayshadthedreamthathewantedtobeanexcellentofficer,holdingthepreciouscup,gettingtheapplausefromtheaudiences.Itwasobviousthathecameacrossmanyfailures,however,heknewthatexperienceisimportantandfailurebreed