2025版高考英语一轮总复习10年高考真题分类题组专题八短文改错组

专题八短文改错Proofreading1(2016课标全国Ⅰ)MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.答案Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantcloseto①thatwherebuttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleeven③hadhavetowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessis④honesthonesty.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetables⑤orandhighqualityoilare⑥usingusedforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreams⑦∧ofbecomingrichin⑧thea解析①考查宾语从句。where引导宾语从句且在从句中作状语。②考查连词。though和but不能连用。though引导的让步状语从句是一个省略句,不能再省略,故只能去掉but。③考查动词的时态。文章通篇叙述的是客观事实,采纳的是一般现在时,且句子的主语somepeople为复数,故需将had改为have。④考查名词作表语。宾语从句中的主语为名词短语thekeytohissuccess,故从逻辑上看应当用名词作表语,来说明名词短语的含义,即“什么是什么”结构。⑤考查并列连词。此处表示并列关系,故用并列连词and。⑥考查动词的被动语态。主语freshvegetablesandhighqualityoil和use之间为被动关系,故需用被动语态。⑦考查介词。从dreams后的动名词becoming可知此处应加一个介词of。dreamof幻想。⑧考查冠词。inashortperiodoftime“在短时间内”。⑨考查形容词性物主代词。由句子的主语he可知,他希望他的(his)生意稳步增长。⑩考查副词。此处用副词作状语修饰动词grow。steadily意为“(发展、增长等)稳步地,持续地”。Proofreading2(2016课标全国Ⅱ)Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.答案Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabout①howwhattododuringtheholiday.Wecan②chosechoosebetweenstayingathomeand③taketakingatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortable④butandthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleabout⑤∧theworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroaden⑥yourourcangotoplacesofinterestnearby.I⑨thoughtthinkthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcost⑩many解析①考查“特别疑问词+不定式”。do后边缺少宾语,故用what。②情态动词后应当用动词原形。③和staying并列,故用taking。④依据句意“假如我们待在家里,舒适而且没有必要花钱”可知前后不是转折关系。⑤world前须要加定冠词the。⑥此处为“我们能开阔我们的视野”,故把your改为our。⑦knowledge是不行数名词。⑧本题考查虚拟语气。suggest“建议”后的从句的谓语动词应用“should+动词原形”,should可以省略。⑨本句表示的是作者现在的看法而不是过去的看法。⑩此处表示“不须要花费许多钱”,故用much。Proofreading3(2016课标全国Ⅲ)Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn'tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.答案Theteenage①yearyearsfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestand②worsethefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsby④yourselfmyself.However,myparentsdidn'tseemtothink⑤suchso.Theyalways⑥telltoldmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbe⑦freelyfreefromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentby⑧解析①考查名词。由from13to19可知year应改为years。②考查形容词最高级。由并列连词and前的thebest可知此处应用形容词的最高级形式。③考查固定结构。atfirst“起初”为固定结构。④考查反身代词。表示“我自己”用反身代词myself。⑤考查副词。so在此处替代前边出现的“Ikneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbymyself”。⑥考查动词的时态。前后文语境告知我们应运用一般过去时,故需用该动词的过去式told。⑦考查形容词。befreefrom“从……释放/解脱”为固定短语。⑧考查动名词。by为介词,其后要接动名词。⑨考查固定结构。leave...for...“离开……去……”为固定结构。⑩考查代词。whenever引导的时间状语从句缺主语,由句意可知答案。Proofreading4(2016浙江)WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we'dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.答案WhenIwasaveryyoung①childrenchild,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyears②latelater.Everytimehearrivedhomeat③∧theendoftheday,we'dgreet④herhimatthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowe⑤washadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whilethey⑧chatchatted,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptosit⑨inonthetopofthefridge.Itwasboth⑩解析①考查名词单复数。句中主语是I,为单数,故应用child。②考查副词。lateadj.迟到的,晚的;lateradv.后来,以后。③考查冠词。attheendof...是固定短语,意为“在……结束的时候”,故at后应加上冠词the。④考查代词。此处指的是“我的父亲”,故应用him。⑤考查主谓一样。主语是we,为复数,故应当是were。⑥考查非谓语动词。pretendnottodosth.假装不做某事,所以应当用动词原形。⑦考查时态。依据上文Everytime和句中would可知父母常常这么做,would后加上动词原形,表示过去常常做某事。⑧考查时态。此句是时间状语从句,讲解并描述的是父母过去的事情,故应用一般过去时,chat应改为它的过去式chatted。⑨考查介词。onthetopof...为固定短语,意为“在……顶部,在……上面”,此处指在冰箱的顶部。⑩考查形容词。此句主语是it,指孩子们被父亲放在冰箱顶部这件事是令人兴奋的,exciting常修饰事物,故用exciting。excited常用来修饰人。Proofreading5(2016四川)ItisMother'sDaytoday.Thoughit'sawesternfestival,it'spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother'sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom'sfavoritest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother'sDay!”Momwasgratefulandmoving.答案ItisMother'sDaytoday.Thoughit'sawesternfestival,it'spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,①sobutshehastodomostofthe②houseworkshousework.Sheisagreatmother.BothDad③orandIplannedtodosomethingonMother'onshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersin⑥herhishand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedin⑦∧thekitchen.Thedishes⑧whatwhatIcookedwereMom's⑨favoritestfavorite.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother'sDay!”Momwasgratefuland⑩moving解析①考查并列连词。两个分句之间为转折关系,并非因果关系,故用but。句意:妈妈有一份全职工作,但是她还得担当大部分家务活儿。②考查名词。housework家务,为不行数名词。③考查并列连词。both...and...为固定搭配,意为“……和……都……”。④考查动词时态。依据上下文以及inthemorning可知本句是在叙述过去的事情,故用一般过去时。⑤考查固定搭配。句意:爸爸打扫完房子,然后就去购物了。goshopping去购物。⑥考查物主代词。依据句中的he可知此处为his。⑦考查冠词。此处特指家里的厨房,故在kitchen前加定冠词the。⑧考查定语从句。先行词为thedishes,且定语从句中cooked后缺少宾语,故用关系代词that/which引导定语从句,因其在从句中作宾语,故也可以省略关系代词。⑨考查名词。favorite最喜爱的事物。⑩考查形容词。此处作表语,主语为Mom,故用moved(感动的)。moving感人的;动人的。Proofreading6(2015课标全国Ⅰ)WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we'lllivetoregretit.答案WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.I①thinkthoughtIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomein②∧thecountryside.Theretheairisclean③orandthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,④beenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeavery⑥seriouslyseriousproblem.The⑦airsairwebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.⑧MuchManyrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemust⑨foundfindwaystoprotect⑩解析①考查动词的时态。由was、hoped和wouldbe可知,此处叙述的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。②考查冠词。inthecountryside“在农村/乡下”为固定表达。③考查并列连词。由本句句意可知,此处表示并列关系,故须用并列连词and。④考查介词。表示“随着……”用介词with。⑤考查动词的语态。主语studies和动词show之间为主动关系,故须用主动语态。⑥考查形容词。修饰名词须用形容词。⑦考查名词的数。air为物质名词,是不行数名词。⑧考查代词。many修饰可数名词复数,much修饰不行数名词。此处修饰复数名词animals,故用many。⑨考查情态动词。情态动词后的动词须用原形。⑩考查代词或冠词。此处为形容词性物主代词作定语,句子的主语为we,故须用our与之相呼应。也可用定冠词the来限定。Proofreading7(2015课标全国Ⅱ)Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried.”Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.答案Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhis①parentparents.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoy②onverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.After④lookslookingatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfound⑤wherewherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredand⑥begunbegantocry.Awomansawhimcryingand⑦tellingtoldhimtowaitoutside⑧athe解析①由第五句和第八句可知Tony是和“parents”一起去了购物中心,故parent改为parents。②Tony是“在商店橱窗(shopwindow)里”看到了玩具,故用in。③此句为so...that...句型,so用来修饰much,very为多余词,故去掉。④此句中After为介词,其后应用动名词作宾语,故looks改为looking。⑤考查宾语从句。此处宾语从句中不缺成分且意思完整,故用that引导(that也可以省略)。⑥考查时态。and连接两个并列谓语,时态应一样。begin的过去式应为began。⑦此处and连接的是两个并列的谓语动词,前文用的是saw,故telling改为told。⑧考查冠词。此处提到的shop与上文提到的是同一个,故用定冠词the。⑨此处提到的父母是主子公Tony的父母,故加上代词his。⑩形容词worried应用副词修饰,故terrible改为terribly。Proofreading8(2015四川)Hi,Janice,It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon'tliketogoanymore,soI'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace答案Hi,Janice,It'sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywant①∧tosharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsI②telltoldyoulasttime,Imadethreenew③friendfriendshere.Wehangouttogetherduringlunchandafterschool.We'vebeenspendingalotoftime④singsinginginkaraokebars.It'sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsme⑤manymuch.AndIstartedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact,Idon'tliketogoanymore,⑥sobutI'mafraidI'lllosetheirfriendship.⑦HowPleasehelp⑩withmeandgivemesomeadvice.Grace解析①wanttodo为固定搭配,故在want后加to。②依据时间状语lasttime可知,本句时态应为一般过去时,故将tell改为told。③句中three表示复数概念,后面的名词应为复数形式,故将friend改为friends。④spendsometime(in)doingsth.为固定搭配,故将sing改为singing。⑤much在此处为代词,表示花的钱,故将many改为much。⑥依据“我不想再去了”和“我胆怯 失去他们的友情”可知,此处应为转折关系,故将so改为but。⑦在此句中,特别疑问词充当其次个do的宾语,故将How改为What。⑧条件从句与现在事实相反,谓语动词运用虚拟语气,故将are改为were。⑨依据上文可知,这里指作者的三个新挚友,此处代词指代错误,故将him改为them。⑩help为及物动词,与me构成动宾结构,因此,with在此处多余,故去掉with。Proofreading9(2015浙江)Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.Fartherinthedistance,Icouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildwhenIstudiedinthatclassroom,Iwillneverforgetit.答案Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethree①sidesidesoftheclassroomweremade②fromofglass.Ienjoyed③sitsittingclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icould④easyeasilyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroom⑤notenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversin⑧∧ahurryinthemorning.Thepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademe⑨feltfeellikeIwasdreaming.⑩If解析①side是可数名词,前面有three修饰,side要改为sides。②bemadefrom由……制成,看不出原材料;bemadeof由……制成/组成,看得出原材料,所以from要改为of。③enjoy后加动名词形式,所以sit要改为sitting。④修饰动词see应用副词,所以easy改为easily。⑤时态误用。全文用的都是过去时,所以要把is改为was。⑥代词误用。这里指代的是park,所以要把them改为it。⑦依据上下文可知这里表确定,所以把not删掉。⑧固定短语inahurry仓促;匆忙。⑨makesb.dosth.使某人做某事,所以felt要改为feel。⑩句意:虽然我在那个教室学习时还是个孩子,但是我恒久都忘不了它。依据句意可知要把If改为Although或Though。Proofreading10(2014课标全国Ⅰ)Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!答案Nearlyfiveyears①beforeago,andwiththehelp②byofourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes(圣女果)inourbackgarden.Sincethen—forallthese③yearyears—we④hadhavebeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.As⑤∧aresult,theplantsaregrowing⑥somewhereeverywherebut/butyetwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowing⑩wonderfully解析①此处讲解并描述的是过去发生的事情,和一般过去时连用的应是ago,before常和完成时连用。②withthehelpof...在……的帮助下,为固定短语。③句中year是可数名词,前面的these应修饰复数形式的名词。④时间状语sincethen通常和现在完成时连用,而不是过去完成时。⑤asaresult结果,为固定短语。⑥依据句意可知此处表示“圣女果到处生长”,所以用everywhere。⑦本句中small,juicy和tasty是并列的表语,所以要用形容词。⑧依据前面的be动词are和后面的them可知应是代替可数名词复数的many。⑨引导让步状语从句的although不能和连词but连用,但是可以和副词yet连用。所以可以删掉but,也可以把but改为yet。⑩修饰名词时应用形容词。Proofreading11(2014课标全国Ⅱ)Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn'tneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.答案Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.①TheyTherearethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.We②didn’tdon’tneedtodoso③manymuchhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretime④withMydreamschool⑥looklookstheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,or⑧satsitbythelakelistening⑨∧tomusic.Theteachersherearekindand⑩helpfully解析①表示“上午有三节课,下午有两节课”应运用therebe句型。②全文时态是以一般现在时为主,故应将didn't改为don't。③homework是不行数名词,故应用much修饰。④表示时间、金钱、空间等足够/足以(用于……)时,应运用介词for。⑤“一个半小时”要说oneandahalfhours。⑥主语Mydreamschool(我幻想中的学校)是单数,谓语动词也应运用第三人称单数形式。⑦allkindsof(各种各样的)后干脆加可数名词复数或不行数名词,不用再加冠词。⑧Wecanlie...,or(can)sit...⑨listen是不及物动词,接宾语时要加介词to。⑩and连接两个形容词作表语,故应将副词helpfully改为形容词helpful。Proofreading12(2014浙江)IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.Ihadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticketbutbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingtheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundaticketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.答案IwastakingatraintoLondon'sVictoriaStation.I①hadnoticedthatthecarriagewas②noisenoisyBeforelong,atraininspector③comescametocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn'tfindhisticket④butandbecamequiteupset.Theneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearching⑤∧fortheticket,whichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfrom⑥hisits/theNooneinthecarriagehad⑧previouspreviouslyspokentoorevennoticedtheticket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthe⑨strangersstrangertheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothers⑩解析①此处指过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。②此处作表语,应当是形容词。③此处是过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。④此处是顺承关系。⑤搜寻某个东西应当用searchfor。⑥此处指票的主子。⑦此处特指在找的那张票。⑧此处应当用副词形式。⑨此处指的是票的主子,只有一个人,所以用单数。⑩此处是固定词组inneed。Proofreading13(2014辽宁)DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwe'vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we'rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.We'vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo'searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficulttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o'clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely,JackandRose答案DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwe'vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we'rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbothers①tous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.We'vecalledseveral②timetimesaboutCleo'searlymorningbarking.Itisdifficultto③understandingunderstandwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarking④havehasbeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.⑤BesideBesides,Cleotendstobark⑥aanaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshe⑦startsWeappreciate⑨ouryourSincerely,JackandRose解析①bothersb.打搅某人。②考查名词复数。severaltimes好几次。③依据it'sdifficulttodosth.句型可知。④考查主谓一样。theearlymorningbarking为单数,所以谓语动词也应为单数形式。⑤此处应为副词besides(此外)而不是介词beside(在……旁边)。⑥考查冠词。average为以元音音素开头的单词,所以应用冠词an。⑦考查时态。因为是今日早晨发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。⑧考查形容词。形容词close作表语。⑨考查物主代词。⑩依据动词短语figureout(想出)可知答案。Proofreading14(2014四川)Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Don'tpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit'safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroom.Ifyounoticethatwhensomeoneismissingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.答案Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalk①withaboutwhatyoushoulddowhenafirealarm②gogoesoff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwait③∧foryourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherand④classmateclassmates.Don'tpanicorgetoutofline,and⑤tryingtrytoremainquietand⑥calmlycalm.Soonthefirefighterswillcomeandputout⑦awhensomeoneismissing⑩andor解析①talkwithsb.和某人交谈;talkaboutsth.谈论某事。②主语是afirealarm,谓语动词要用单数形式。③waitforsb.todosth.等待某人做某事。④classmate是可数名词,依据语境可知不止有一个同学,所以要用复数形式。⑤and连接的是并列的两个祈使句,前面是表示否定的祈使句,后面应是确定的祈使句,所以要用动词原形。⑥此处作系动词remain的表语,所以应用形容词,和quiet并列。⑦此处应当是特指上文提到的火灾。⑧人称代词错误。前文用的是人称代词you,所以此处也应当是you。⑨引导词运用重复,that已经引导宾语从句,所以when多余,而且不符合语境。⑩此处应当是选择关系而不是顺承关系。Proofreading15(2013课标Ⅰ)Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.答案Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedto①holdingholdmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshe②passespassedaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfathervery③muchwell/clearly.Hewastall,withbroad④shouldershouldersandabeardthatturnedfromblack⑤afact,heevenscaredmyclassmatesaway⑨duringwhentheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhave⑩never解析①此处用usedto表示“过去常常”,后面接动词原形。②依据句中的Iwasonlyfour可知,此处讲的是过去的事情,故用一般过去时。③依据下文的描述可知,作者对自己的祖父记忆犹新。所以把much改为well/clearly。④shoulder是可数名词,人有双肩,所以用复数形式。⑤turnfromAto/intoB表示“由一种状态转为另一种状态”。⑥此处指深厚的声音使他和其他人不同。⑦hewasstrongandpowerful和Hehadadeepvoice是并列关系。⑧infact是固定短语,表示“事实上”。⑨during是介词,不能引导状语从句,when是连词,可以引导状语从句,从句中的动词既可以是短暂性动词也可以是持续性动词。此处须要表示时间的连词,所以用when。⑩此处表示他是我曾经相识的最温柔的人。由此可知用ever。Proofreading16(2013课标Ⅱ)ThebookI'mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800's.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o'clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.答案ThebookI'mreading①oftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800's.②HaveHavingteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,③thatwhichmightnotbeserveduntil8o'clockatnight.Thiscustomsoon④becomesbecameanothermealof⑤∧theday.⑥InterestingInterestingly,ithadaconnection⑦bywith/totheBritishporcelain(瓷器)industry.TeainChinawastraditionally⑧drank解析①read是一个及物动词,后面可干脆接宾语,不须要加介词。I'mreading是定语从句,修饰先行词thebook。②此处应当用动名词短语充当句子的主语,动词原形不能作主语。③that不能引导非限制性定语从句。④此处叙述的是过去的事情,时态用一般过去时。⑤句意:这一习俗很快成为了一天中的另一顿饭。⑥此处修饰后面整个句子,故应当用副词形式。⑦此处为固定搭配haveaconnectionwith/to与……有关。⑧此处表被动,应当用drink的过去分词drunk。⑨cup是可数名词,与第六句中的cupswithouthandles一样要用其复数形式。⑩由该词前的定冠词the可知此处需用其名词形式growth。Proofreading17(2013浙江)DearDiary,HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI'llneverfallsleep.Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.Yours,Rosemary答案DearDiary,HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350miles①farawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywe②movemovedlastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofind③otheranotherone.”HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomy④classmateclassmates,myschool⑤orandjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakematters⑥badworse,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowis⑦∧the/myfirstdayofschool.Iamawfully⑧tiringGoodnightandremember,you,deardiary,⑩isareYours,Rosemary解析①表示距离时,假如前面已经有详细的数词,就不用副词far。②有时间状语lastweek,故该句陈述的是过去的事情。③此处指另一份工作。④此处指我的同学们,应当是复数形式。⑤此处myclassmates,myschool和everythingelseIloveintheworld是并列关系,而非选择关系,故用and。⑥此处意思是“更糟糕的是”,所用的固定表达应当是tomakemattersworse。⑦此处须要加上限定词,特指上学的第一天。⑧此处指人很累,应当运用tired。⑨fallasleep入睡。⑩此处主语是you,故用are。Proofreading18(2013辽宁)Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhishealthy.Weareworriedabouthim.”Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,IpaidvisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstopped.Ihadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim.答案Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtime①withonsoheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardwork③havehasmadehimveryill.“Hehasruinedhis④healthyhealth.Weareworriedabouthim.”Thatis⑤whichwhatotherteacherssay.Yesterdayafternoon,Ipaid⑥∧avisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutside⑦herhisroomIstopped.Ihadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyI⑧stepstepped解析①spend...onsth.(在某事上花费……)是固定搭配。②本句是一个简洁句,withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak作状语,所以要去掉并列连词so。③句子的主语hardwork是第三人称单数形式,所以have要改为has。④此处该用名词health(健康)。healthy是形容词(健康的)。⑤say后面少宾语,而且又没有范围,所以应当是what。⑥payavisitto探望,探望,是固定短语。⑦人称代词的逻辑错误。前文是Mr.Johnson,所以此处应当是“他的”而不是“她的”。⑧时态误用。此处应当用一般过去时态。⑨picture为可数名词,此处表示“一些照片”,故要用其复数形式。⑩此处修饰动词miss,所以应当用副词much。Proofreading19(2013四川)Todaywehadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetestdifficulty,butItriedhardlytodoit.SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,askingmetolethertocopymyanswers.Afterthinkforsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher'soffice.Theteacherwasangrybecausewehadsameanswersinthetests.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents.Iwasveryupset.Ididn'tcheat.Iwasjusthelpingafriend.Whydoesshepunishme?答案Todaywehadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetest①difficultydifficult,butItried②hardlyhardtodoit.SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,③tocopymyanswers.After⑤thinkthinkingforsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,⑥allboth