人教版高中英语选择性必修第二册UNIT5 Part 4 Writing练习含答案

Part4Writing关于急救的写作写作题目假设你和你的同学李明一起去锅炉房打开水,在回寝室的路上,李明的热水瓶突然破裂,开水烫伤了他的脚。于是你对他实施了必要的急救。请你结合此事,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文,向学校英文报投稿,主要内容包括:1.描述事故发生的经过;2.你是如何实施急救的(冷水冲洗、送医院做进一步的处理);3.简要谈谈你对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。参考词汇:锅炉房boilerroom;热水瓶Thermosbottle

思路点拨遣词造句Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空1.adj.(身体部位)肿起的;肿胀的

2.adj.切实可行的;实际的;实践的

3.vi.&vt.减轻;缓解

4.立刻;马上

答案1.swollen2.practical3.ease4.atonceⅡ.本单元语块、语法运用1.完成句子第一段:描述事故发生的经过和烫伤的症状(1)Theboiledwater(对……造成伤害)hisfeet.

(2)Theburnwas(非常严重).

(3)Theskinwas(又红又肿).

第二段:实施急救的措施(4)Imanagedto(保持镇静),andquicklyrecalledwhatIhadlearntinmy(急救课程).

(5)Iplacedhisfeetunderthecoolrunningwater(立刻)to(减轻疼痛).

第三段:简述对掌握一定急救知识的重要性的认识(6)OnlythenwasIawareof(多么重要和实用)thebasicknowledgeaboutfirstaidwas.

答案(1)causedaninjuryto(2)veryserious(3)redandswollen(4)remaincalm;first-aidcourse(5)atonce;easethepain(6)howimportantandpractical2.句式升级(7)将句(2)和句(3)合并为含有so...that...引导的状语从句的主从复合句

(8)将句(4)改写为含有现在分词短语的句子

答案(7)Theburnwassoseriousthattheskinwasredandswollen.(8)Imanagedtoremaincalm,quicklyrecallingwhatIhadlearntinmyfirst-aidcourse.连句成篇Oneday,LiMingandIwerewalkingbacktothedormfromtheboilerroomwhenhisThermosbottleburst.Theboiledwatercausedaninjurytohisfeet.Theburnwassoseriousthattheskinwasredandswollen.However,Imanagedtoremaincalm,quicklyrecallingwhatIhadlearntinmyfirst-aidcourse.Iplacedhisfeetunderthecoolrunningwateratoncetoeasethepain.Afterwards,Icalledataxiandrushedhimtothehospital.OnlythenwasIawareofhowimportantandpracticalthebasicknowledgeaboutfirstaidwas.写作积累和急救有关的表达1.开头Yesterdayhewasonhiswaybackhomeafterschool,findinganoldmansuddenlylyingonthegroundunconscious.昨天在放学回家的路上,他发现一位老人突然倒在地上不省人事。2.主体Weputhimonhisbackandappliedthemouth-to-mouthrescuebreathingoverandoveragain.Meanwhilemyfriendcalledforanambulance.我们让他平躺,然后实施口对口人工呼吸。与此同时,我的朋友呼叫了救护车。3.结尾Werealizedthattheknowledgeoffirstaidcouldmakearealdifference.我们意识到急救知识真正有作用。实战演练(2023湖北期末)假定你是李华,上周一下午你校举行了急救演练(firstaiddrill)。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.演练目的;2.演练过程;3.你的感受。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。FirstAidDrill

答案与分层梯度式解析UNIT5FIRSTAIDPart4Writing实战演练Onepossibleversion:FirstAidDrillLastMondayafternoonwitnessedapracticalfirstaiddrillheldbyourschoolattheStudentCenter,whichwasaimedatraisingoursafetyawarenessanddevelopingourlife-savingskills.Tobeginwith,amedicalexpertwasinvitedtogiveusalectureonfirstaid,fromwhichwelearnedalot.Thenadrillwascarriedout.Underinstructionsofmedicalprofessionals,weperformedCPRstepbystepandtreatedwoundswithbandagesonourown.Thedrillwashighlythoughtof.Notonlydidwerecognizethesignificanceoffirstaid,butwehadagoodcommandoffirst-aidskills.Wedobelievewecanmakeadifferenceincaseofanemergency.1.重点词汇①raiseone'ssafetyawareness提高某人的安全意识②tobeginwith首先③thinkhighlyof高度评价④makeadifference有作用/影响⑤incaseof如果;万一2.亮点句型①LastMondayafternoonwitnessedapracticalfirstaiddrillheldbyourschoolattheStudentCenter,whichwasaimedatraisingoursafetyawarenessanddevelopingourlife-savingskills.(时间名词短语作无灵主语,拟人的修辞手法;过去分词短语作后置定语;which引导非限制性定语从句)上周一下午,我们学校在学生中心举行了一场实用的急救演练,演练旨在提高我们的安全意识和培养我们的救生技能。

②Tobeginwith,amedicalexpertwasinvitedtogiveusalectureonfirstaid,fromwhichwelearnedalot.(fromwhich引导非限制性定语从句)首先,邀请了医学专家给我们做关于急救的讲座,我们从