考研英语（写作）模拟试卷6（共40题）

考研英语（写作）模拟试卷6（共9套）（共40题）考研英语（写作）模拟试卷第1套一、大作文(本题共4题，每题1.0分，共4分。)1、HarmfulnessofFakeCommodities标准答案：Fakecommoditieshavealmostfoundtheirwayintoeveryfield.Comparedwiththegenuineproducts,theyhavemoreattractionfortheconsumersbecauseoftheirmuchlowerprices.This,ofcourse,causesgreateconomiclossestothegenuine-productmanufacturers.Besides,asfakecommoditiesareoftenofpoorquality,theydamagethecredibilityofthegenuineproducts.Fakecommoditiesalsocausemuchtroubletoconsumers.Forexample,ifsomethinggoeswrongwiththefakecommodities,consumerswon’tenjoythefreeafter-saleservicesprovidedbythegenuine-productmanufacturers,whichmaybringabouteconomiclossestoconsumers.Furthermore,fakecommoditiescanbedangerousandsometimesevenharmthelivesofconsumers.Forexample,it’sreportedthatsomeconsumersdiedafterdrinkingfakewine.Sofakecommoditiesareseriousproblemsinourcountrywhichdeserveattentionfromallangles.Thelegitimateproducersshouldsafeguardtheirlegalrightsbypowerfulprecautionsand,atthesametime,trytoimprovetheirproductsandcuttheirpricessoastoattractmoreconsumers.Theauthoritiesshouldalsoredoubletheireffortstoforbidtheproductionandsaleoffakecommodities.Atlast,consumersshouldfreethemselvesfromthetemptationbycheaperfakecommoditiesandnotgivethemanyopportunities.知识点解析：暂无解析2、HowtoTackletheHousingProbleminBigCities?标准答案：Withthefastdevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeoplefloodintobigcitiestofindjobs.Soitisofgreatimportanceforustopayattentiontothehousingprobleminbigcities.Ontheonehand,thepopulationisgrowingveryfast.Ontheotherhand,thelimitedurbanareacannothousetheincreasingpopulation.Wehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvethisproblem.Firstly,itisagoodideatobuild"satellitecities"inthesuburbsofbigcitiessothatpeoplewillbedispersedinalargearea.Secondly,thegovernmentshouldbuildmorehigh-risebuildingstohousemorepeople.Thirdly,thegovernmentshouldalsoofferadiscountforlow-incomeresidentstobuytheirhouses.Consideringallthese,Ibelievethatthehousingproblemisverycomplicated.Firstofall,itinvolvesmanyotherproblemssuchastransportation,utilities,etc.Furthermore,buildingmorehousesneedsalargesumofinvestment.Therefore,weshouldmakefurthereffortstotakereasonableandeffectivemeasurestotacklethehousingprobleminbigcities.知识点解析：暂无解析3、HowtoProvideaBetterLifeforSeniorCitizens?标准答案：Nowwehaveagrowingpopulationofseniorcitizens.Toensurehappylivesforthemhasbecomeafocusofattention.Ourtraditionalrespectoftheagedneedsupdating.Theydeserverespect,understanding,companion,entertainmentandsoon.Therearemanythingstobedonetohonorseniorcitizens.Incities,seniorcitizensshouldenjoysomeprivileges,suchasspecialseatsonbuses,reducedfaresforentertainmentandtraveling,andotherbenefits.Weshoulddoeverythingtosolvetheirpracticalproblems,towarmtheirhearts,andtomakethemhappy.Inaddition,weshouldfindsomewaystoprovideaffordablemedicalhealthcare,whichisofvitalimportanceforthem.Besides,thereshouldberecreationhallsandcare-centersfortheaged.Mostimportantofall,thestateshouldensureadecentpensionforthem,peasantsinparticular.Inthevastcountryside,mostagedpeoplearefinanciallysupportedbytheirsons,whoselifeisaperpetualstruggleagainstpoverty.Whatcantheydoiftheyarechildless?Seniorcitizens,parentsinparticular,needourloveanddeservethebestcare.Respectingseniorcitizensbearsvitalimportancetothefamily-planningpolicyinChina.Ifwedoourbesttohonorourparentsandtheaged,ourchildrenwillfollowourexample.知识点解析：暂无解析4、RentorBuyanApartment?标准答案：Whenaskedabout"rentorbuyanapartment",differentpeoplewillofferdifferentanswers.Somepeopleholdtheopinionthattorentanapartmentistheirfavoritechoice,whileotherpeopleprefertobuyana-partment.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformerseemsmorereasonable.It’sbeyondallquestionthattorentahouseischaracterizedbysomeaspectsasfollows.Tobeginwith,itissohardforpeopletodecidewheretheyfinallylive.Inaddition,comparedwiththehighpriceofhouses,manypeople’sincomeissolowthattheycannotaffordtobuyaprivatehouse.However,onehastomentionsomeweaknessesofrentinghousesthatmayalsogoalongwithit.Acaseinpointisthatitlacksasenseoffamily.Asisshowninourpreviousdiscussion,rentingahouseindeedbearssomedistinctivefeaturesanditwillstillplayessentialrolesinourmodernsociety.Ofcourse,weshouldnotneglectthepositiveeffectsofbuyingahouse.Onetypicalpointisthatitcangivepeopleasenseofsecurityandcomfort.知识点解析：暂无解析考研英语（写作）模拟试卷第2套一、大作文(本题共4题，每题1.0分，共4分。)1、Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)标准答案：Withtherapiddevelopmentoftourism,agrowingnumberofpeoplethrongtothescenicspotsduringtheirvacations.Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoon,inthemiddleofalakerowsaboat,carryingtwotourists,whoarelitteringwhileenjoyingthescenery.Wecandeducefromthepicturethatthedraweristryingtocaptureourattentiontothetragedyofthedestructionoftheriversandlakes,whichispartofthethreattotheecologicalbalanceoftheplanet.Occurrencesofwaterpollutioncausedbytherapiddevelopmentoftourismindustryareunderstoodbymanypeople.Unfortunately,inrealpractice,tourismhasdevelopedinamannerwhichoftenconflictswiththeenvironment.Tosomeextent,thefasterthetourismeconomydevelops,theworsetheenvironmentbecomes.Whatisthesignificanceoftourismdevelopmentiftheecologicalbalanceisdestroyed?Inmyview,measuresshouldbetakenwithoutanydelaytoaddresstheproblembeforecostispaidforthenegativedevelopmentofthetourism.Whatshouldbedonefirstistomakemorepeopleawareoftheimportanceofenvironmentprotection.Otherwise,sightseeing,asarelaxationformostcitydwellers,wouldbeimpossibletoberealizedwithinafewyears.Meanwhile,relatedlawsmustbelaiddowntoprotectthefragileenvironmentandtopenalizethosewhoviolatethelaw.Onlyinthiswaywillweenjoyawonderfulnaturalecosystemandafastgrowingtourismeconomy.知识点解析：本文准确把握了图画的寓意，文章内容切中题意，并且涵盖了题目中的信息要点。文章思路清晰，清楚地表达了其内涵。句子形式具有多样性，词语选择恰当，准确地表达了意义，词语的使用面比较宽。第一段紧扣提纲，第二段主题突出，第三段衔接顺畅。2、Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen3)giveyourcomments.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)标准答案：Theenlighteningpictureportraysthatahotpot,withnumerousingredientsinit,includesdomesticandalienculturessuchasliterature,moralvaluesandperformingarts.Itseemsthatthehotpottastesverydeliciousbecauseoftherichnutritionofthemulti-culture.Obviously,thepicturecharacterizesthestatusquoofChinesesocietyinwhichChineseandWesterncultureconflictwitheachotherbuttheymergeintoauniqueformtoacertaindegree.SinceChinahasopeneditsdoorwidelytotheoutsideworld,manypeoplefromdifferentcountrieshavebeendeeplyfascinatedbyChineseculture.TheywillacceptandloveChinesecultureasawhole.Inaddition,Chinesecultureshouldbewellsharedwithforeignpeople,whohaveshowntheirenthusiasmtowardsChina.Meanwhile,theChinesepeoplearealsoexposedtoforeigncultureswhenmoreforeignpeoplecometothisorientalcountry.Inthiswaypeoplefromvariousnationsintheworldwillbeabletoacquirebetterunderstandingofeachother.Inmyopinion,thecultureofanynationisakindofpreciousheritage,andbelongstothewholemankind.Witheconomicglobalization,theblendingofdifferentcultureshasbecomeaninevitabletrendofthetime.Nocountryisanisolatedisland,beitChinaorthewesternworld.Theclearerwegraspthecurrentsituation,themoreitwouldbebeneficialtotheglobalvillagers.知识点解析：本文分两段具体阐述了图画背后的深层含义。第一段在点出图画的两个主要对象“spiderweb”和“cubiclefarm”后，首先对前者“蜘蛛网络”进行具体说明，指出其就是现代互联网的隐喻，它受欢迎是由于它为人们之间的沟通带来便利。第二段首先解释了“隔间农场”的含义。接着在说明互联网的好处的同时，用while引出它会带来的副作用，即让人更加孤立。全文主题理解准确，内容对比鲜明。3、Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen3)giveyourcomments.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)标准答案：Thispicturefeaturestwothings,thespiderwebandthe"cubiclefarm".ThespiderwebisofcourseourmodernmetaphorfortheInternet,whichconnectsonepointtoeveryotherpoint,thusallowingawebusertoaccessagreatdealofinformation.BeinginterconnectedlikethisiswhatmakestheInternetsopopular,aspeoplecancommunicatewithanyoneinavarietyofwaysfromallovertheworld.Peopleareattheirdesksonthe"cubiclefarm"usingthecomputers,butwithoutalotoffacetofacecontactwithpeoplearound.SomepeoplemightarguethattheInternetallowspeopletoalwaysstayintouch,makemorefriendsandevenfindromanceonline,whileasideeffectisthatsometimesitmakespeoplemoreisolated.Somepeoplestayintheirhomesandonlymakeonlinefriends,chatonlineandneverexperiencedirecthumancontact.Iftheiraveragedayatworkislikethistoo,thentheInternetmaybeacurseratherthanablessing.知识点解析：范文正确解读了图画的深层含义，主题思想鲜明，论述的层次清晰严谨，论据紧紧围绕中心，合乎逻辑性。第一段概括了图画反映出的寓意，第二段分析了遇到困境相互帮助的必要性，第三段提出了如何发扬互帮互助的精神。句子与句子、段落与段落之间采用了多种衔接手法，过渡自然通畅，整体性强。4、Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,andthen3)giveyourcomments.YoushouldwriteneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)标准答案：Asisillustratedinthepicture,thetwodisabledpersonswhosecrippledlegsareboundtogethertravelinthejourneyoflife.Accordingly,thisfar-reachingpicturereflectsacommonphenomenonintoday’ssociety:thepeoplewhoareinthedarkandwanttoturnthecornercannotmakeitrespectivelybutinturnhavetochoosetopulltogetherintimesoftrouble.Thereareseveralreasonsaccountingforthis.Sincewehavetoliveinanon-the-movelifestyle,wemayencountervariousplights,whereit’sbettertoseekforothers’assistancethantofeeloverwhelmed.Furthermore,ifwedonotofferhelptoeachotherwhenweconfrontdilemmas,wewillnotrealizeourdream.AndtobuildaharmonioussocietyinChina,noissueisasbasicastoconductcoordinationinfaceofdisasters.Judgingfromwhathasbeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizethevalueofmutualaid.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadetoadvocatespiritofsupportingeachother.Tobeginwith,thegovernmentshouldmakelawstoencouragepeopletounite.Inaddition,peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofcaringeachotherespeciallywhentheyareintrouble.Onlyinthoseways,canwemakepeople,evenstrangers,helpeachother.知识点解析：本文正确把握了图画的寓意，文章内容切合题意，并且涵盖了题目中所给的信息点；结构完整合理，层次分明，每一段的段落主题句都出现在句首，段落衔接紧凑。句子形式具有多样性，语言表达通顺。考研英语（写作）模拟试卷第3套一、小作文(本题共4题，每题1.0分，共4分。)1、YouhavejustcomebackfromCanadaandfoundamusicCDinyourluggagethatyouforgottoreturntoBob,yourlandlordthere.Writehimaletterto1)makeanapology,and2)suggestasolution.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"LiMing"instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)标准答案：DearBob,Iamwritingtoexpressmyapologytoyou.Severaldaysago,IborrowedyourmusicCDwhenIlivedinyourhouse.Unfortunately,afterIcamebackfromCanada,Ifounditinmyluggage.IwasinsuchahurrythatIforgottoreturnittoyou.Iwillsendittoyoubypostorexpressassoonaspossible.Ifnecessary,Iwillcompensateforanytroublesitmaycause.Onceagain,Ifeelsosorryforanyinconvenience.Pleaseacceptmyapology.Sincerelyyours,LiMing知识点解析：范文很好地完成了题目规定的任务，内容要点完整。文章开篇说明的写信的目的即是道歉，然后讲述了要道歉的事情，并解释了错误的原因。第二段结尾提出了有效的解决办法。最后再次表示歉意，态度诚恳真挚。文章简洁明了，涵盖全面，成功地完成了题目的要求。2、Writealettertoyouruniversitylibrary,makingsuggestionsforimprovingitsservice.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"LiMing"instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)标准答案：DearSirorMadam,Asanenthusiasticreader,Iamwritingtosharesomeofmysuggestionswiththehopeofmakingsomeimprovement.Ihavefoundthatthereareagreatnumberofmagazinesoutofdatehere.ManytimesitisdifficultformetofindthelatestreadingmaterialsIneedbadly.Itwillhelpusalotifyoucanintroducesomenewjournals,whichwillbringfreshairtothelibrary.Meanwhile,sincethebooksaredistributedeverywhere,wecanintroduceacomputerinformationsearchingsystemsoastogiveuseffectiveresultsandsaveourprecioustime.ThankyouforyourreadingandIamlookingforwardtonewchangessoon.SincerelyYours,LiMing知识点解析：本文围绕三段式展开，第一段开门见山，直奔主题，点明写信目的；第二段委婉地指出了图书馆现存问题带来的不便之处，并提出了相应的改进措施；第三段礼貌地表达出期望尽快看到新的变化。全文结构紧凑，合情合理。3、YouwanttocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotearea.Writealettertothedepartmentconcerned,askingthemtohelpfindacandidate.Youshouldspecifywhatkindofchildyouwanttohelpandhowyouwillcarryoutyourplan.Writeyourletterinnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"LiMing"instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)标准答案：DearSirorMadam,IamateacherofRenminUniversityofChinaandIwouldliketocontributetoProjectHopebyofferingfinancialaidtoachildinaremotepart.So,Iwouldbemostgratefulthatyoucouldsendmetheinformationregardingsuchachildwhomeetsthefollowingstandards:First,hemustbeverypoorandtrulyinneedofhelp.Second,hemusthavethestrongdesiretoimprovethingsaroundhim.Third,hemustbehealthy,happyandoptimistic.Lastbutnotleast,hemustbewillingtoreturntohishometowntodosomethingforitafterhisgraduationfromtheuniversity.Iwillsendhimmoneyeveryyear,fromthisyearonuntilhefinisheshishighereducation.Yourpromptattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Sincerelyyours,LiMing知识点解析：范文层次分明，环环相扣。第一段向有关部门提出请求，明确表达了写信的目的；第二段对自己希望捐助的儿童的特点进行了具体的描述。语言运用得体、恰当，细节内容合情合理。第三段说出了自己的资助计划，并以致谢收尾。4、TwomonthsagoyougotajobasaneditorforthemagazineDesigns&Fashions.Butnowyoufindthattheworkisnotwhatyouexpected.Youdecidetoquit.Writealettertoyourboss,Mr.Wang,tellinghimyourdecision,statingyourreason(s),andmakinganapology.Writeyourletterwithnolessthan100words.WriteitneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"LiMing"instead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.(10points)标准答案：DearMr.Wang,Iamwritingtotellyoumydecisiontoleavemyposition.Duringthelasttwomonths,Ihaveenjoyedmyselfinthecompanywheretheinterpersonalatmospherewaspleasant.ButmyjobasaneditorrequiresanextraordinarybroadmindandperceptionandIfindithardtocollectandcomballthematerialsandfinallygetalogicalorganization.Ontheotherhand,itisroutineforpeopleinthepositiontoworklatetillmorning,whichexceedsmyhealthconditionsincemyfeebleheartneedssoundsleeptofunction.Iwanttomakeanapologyforquittingmypositionsosoonandforanyinconvenienceitmightbringtoyou.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmyapprehension.Yourssincerely,LiMing知识点解析：本文思路清晰，结构完整。第一段点明了写作目的，即提出辞职申请。第二段陈述了两个理由，一是自己能力不适合这样的工作：二是不适应加班。结尾再一次点明自己的歉意。考研英语（写作）模拟试卷第4套一、大作文(本题共5题，每题1.0分，共5分。)1、TeachChildreninAccordancewithTheirAptitudeWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)interpretitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.标准答案：Inthepicture,aduckmotherisrequestingamonkey,whoistheteacher,toteachherbabyducktoclimbatree.Themonkeyfeelsstartledandawkward.Thepicturevividlyillustratestheimportanceofteachingkidsaccordingtotheiraptitude,withoutwhichanyteachingwouldbethoughtlessandfutile.AsfarasIamconcerned,IquiteagreewiththisteachingprincipleandIthinkparentsneedtosetrealisticgoalsfortheirkids.Therearetimeswhenparentsoverreachtheirkidsandforcethemintolearningsomethingtheyarenotinterestedinorgoodat.Forinstance,someparentsspendafortunetotraintheirdaughterstobeapianist.Sadly,"oneman’smeatisanotherman’spoison".Ifwhatthekidsarereallyfondofisdancing,whynotfollowtheirinterestsandtrainthemtobeexcellentdancers?Inconclusion,parentsshouldnotforcekids’toundertakeanimpossiblemission,butratherbesensitivetotheirinterestsandcreateafavorableenvironmentforthemtoflourish.知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了鸭妈妈要求猴子老师教会小鸭爬树。鸭妈妈的要求可谓有点强人所难，忽视了因材施教的重要性。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：任何教学，如果没有考虑孩子的资质和才能，都可能是徒劳无功的。第二段提出个人看法：家长应为孩子制定现实的目标，因材施教才能更好地培育孩子。第三段总结全文：应该根据孩子的兴趣和潜能对孩子加以培养，而不是把大人的期望强加于孩子。2、HappyTeachers’Day!Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.标准答案：Ascanbeseeninthepicture,agroupofpeoplearepresentingflowerstoanelderlyladysittingonawheelchair.Theyareallwishingtheladya"HappyTeachers’Day".Thispictureintendstoconvinceusoftheimportanceofpayingtributetoteachers.Weshouldneverforgetwhatourteachershavecontributedtouseventhoughwehavegraduatedandbecomesuccessfulinourownprofession.Personally,Ithinkmostteachersarerespectedanddeserverecognition.First,goodteachersguideustothinkindependently.Takemyliteratureteacherasanexample.Henevertoldustheanswerstothediscussionquestionsdirectly.Instead,heoftenaskedasuccessionofquestionsaccordingtoourresponses.Gradually,wedevelopedourcriticalthinkingabilityanduntiltodayIstillbenefitfromhis"interrogation".Second,goodteachersareourspiritualmentors.Theyknowhowtoencourageus,motivateus,andmakeusconfident.Theyareattentivelisteners,empatheticwithwhatwehavebeenthrough,andalwaysreadytohelpusoutofdilemma.Allinall,weneedtoexpressourheartfeltgratitudetoalltheteacherswhohaveshapedus,enlightenedusandguidedus.知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了一群成年人向坐在轮椅上的教师传递节日祝福的情景。尽管当年的学生都长大成才了，但是他们还是不忘师恩。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：即使我们已经毕业，事业有成了，也要不忘师恩。第二段提出个人看法：大部分的教师都值得我们尊敬和赞美。其一，教师引导学生独立思考，以教师训练学生批判性思维为例加以说明。其二，好的教师是学生的精神导师，他们知道如何去鼓励学生，带动学生的积极性，让学生对自己充满信心。第三段，总结全文。3、TheLighthouseofKnowledgeWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.标准答案：Inthepicture,twokidsarerowingaboatacrosstheseainthedark.Inthedistance,alighthouseisvisibleandashaftoflightiscomingfromit.Thelighthouseisindicativeof"school"andthesourceoflight"knowledge",whichisrepresentedbyabookheldupinateacher’shands.Thispicturegivesusgraphicillustrationoftheimportanceofknowledge,whichenlightensuswhenwearelostorindifficulties.Asastudent,Ivalueknowledgeandalsobelievethataknowledgeablepersonisoftenhappierandwiser.Tobeginwith,knowledgekeepsourmindopen.AstudyinAmericashowsthatthosewhoreceivemoreeducationtendtobemorepatientandlessprejudiced.Theyaremoreopentonewideasandaremorelikelytoliveacolorfulandnon-confrontationallife.Besides,knowledgeenablesustomakejudiciouschoices.Therearetimeswhenweconfrontdilemmas,havingnoideawhichtochoose.Ifwerefertotheinformationandknowledgerelevanttotheoptions,wecouldbetterweightheprosandcons,andmakeawisedecision.Therefore,weshouldtryourbesttomasterallkindsofknowledge,whichcanilluminatethedirectionforus.知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了两名孩子在海上航行的情景。在远处的学校，老师高举的课本犹如灯塔，为他们照亮了航行的方向。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：当我们迷失或遇到困难时，知识能启迪我们。第二段提出个人看法：有知识的人通常更开心、也更睿智。其一，知识让我们思维开阔，以美国一项研究结果为例加以说明。其二，知识能让我们更好地权衡利弊，做出明智的选择。第三段总结全文。4、ExpensiveKindergartenEducationWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.标准答案：Inthepicture,a￥-shapedscaleisfeatured.Ontheleftsideiskindergartenwhiletherightsideisuniversity.Thebalanceistiltedtotheleftside.Thispictureillustratesthatkindergartenismorecostlythancollege,andasksustohavearethinkofwhetherpayinganexorbitantfeeforkindergartenisjustified.Inmyview,high-pricedkindergartenmustbeavoidedandmoneyshouldbebetterspentelsewhere.Despitethefamoussaying"yougetwhatyoupayfor",IratherdoubtwhetheritistrueforChinesekindergartens.Earlierthisyear,anewspaperreportedthataprivatekindergarten,withamonthlyday-carefeeupto5,800RMB,servedonlyplainandmediocrefood.Theso-callednutritiousmealswerenothingbutplainporridgeanddilutedmilk.Ifparentssavethe5,800RMB,theycouldbuyvariouskindsofnutritiousfoodfortheirkids.Tosumup,high-costkindergartenismorelikeagimmickandaplaceboforparentswhocarefortheirkidstoomuch.Ibelieveparentshadbetterallocatetheirresourcesforgreaterbenefits.知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了幼儿园成本和大学成本的对比。从图中的天秤来看，现在幼儿园的花费比大学的花费更加高昂。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：质疑上费用昂贵的幼儿园的合理性。第二段提出个人看法：花一大笔钱上幼儿园是不值得。以幼儿园收取昂贵的费用，但给小孩提供普通食物的新闻报道为例，说明一分钱并不一定有一分货。第三段总结全文：高昂的幼儿园费用有时候只是父母的安慰剂，父母应将钱用在更有效益的地方。5、DisparitybetweenOrdinaryMiddleSchoolandKeyMiddleSchoolWriteanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthedrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)explainitsintendedmeaning,and3)giveyourcomments.标准答案：Inthepicture,twoschoolsarefeatured.Ontheleftisanordinarymiddleschoolwithsmallandshabbybuildings.Ontherightisakeymiddleschoolwithhighandglamorousbuildings.Bothofthemaremiddleschoolsintendedforcompulsoryeducation.Thispicturevividlyillustratesthegreatdisparitybetweenordinarymiddleschoolsandkeymiddleschools,withthelatterreceivingmoreandbetterresourcesthantheformer.Inmyopinion,thisdisparityshouldnotbeallowedinthestageofcompulsoryeducation,becausethepurposeofcompulsoryeducationistoensureequaleducationopportunityforschool-agechildrenandteenagers.Ifthegapexists,theMattheweffectwilloccur—thegoodgetbetterandthepoorgetpoorer.Withbetterresources,thekeymiddleschoolswillattractmoreexcellentstudentsandteachers,resultinginproducingbettergraduates.Onthecontrary,giventhepoorerresources,theordinarymiddleschoolswillendupwithordinarystudentsandteachers,leadingtoproducingordinarygraduates.Tosumup,weshouldnotlabelormakeadistinctionbetweenordinarymiddleschoolsandkeymiddleschoolsinthestageofcompulsoryeducation,foritviolatestheprincipleofeducationalequality.知识点解析：这幅图片刻画了普通中学和重点中学之间的差别。重点中学明显比普通中学拥有更多的资源。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，文章内容可以安排如下：第一段简要描绘图片，并指出图片的意图：普通中学和重点中学之间的差距巨大，教育资源分配不均。第二段提出个人看法：义务教育阶段，学校之间不应存在巨大的差距。义务教育的目的是要保证适龄儿童和青少年得到平等的教育机会，而划分普通中学和重点中学会引起“马太效应”(指强者愈强、弱者愈弱的现象)，使得重点中学越办越好，普通中学越办越糟糕。第三段总结全文。考研英语（写作）模拟试卷第5套一、小作文(本题共4题，每题1.0分，共4分。)1、Someinternationalstudentsarecomingtoyouruniversity.WritethemanemailinthenameoftheStudents’Unionto1)extendyourwelcomeand2)providesomesuggestionsfortheircampuslifehere.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyournameattheendoftheletter.Use"LiMing"instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)标准答案：Dearfriends,IamthechairmanoftheStudents’Union.I’vejustreceivedtheemailsfromyouandgotthenewsthatyouwouldcometoouruniversity.Aboveall,I’dliketoshowourwarmwelcome.Onbehalfofouruniversityandallthestudentshere,Ireallylookforwardtoyourcoming.Inordertomakeallofyoufeelathome,herearesomeconducivesuggestions.Firstly,you’dbettertakesomewarmclotheswithyoubecauseitiswinterinChinanowanditisverycoldinBeijing.Secondly,IadviseyoutopreparesomerelevantknowledgeaboutChinesecultureforbetterunderstandinginyourstudiesandbettermergingintotheenvironmenthere.Ireallyhopeyou’11findtheseproposalsuseful.AndI’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming!Yourssincerely,LiMing知识点解析：本文包含了题目要求的内容要点。首段介绍了自己和写信的目的，并代表全校学生表达了欢迎之意。第二段针对留学生的特点，从中国气候和中国文化两方面人手提出建议，建议内容实际、有意义。结尾再次表达欢迎之意。全文句式多样，词汇丰富。2、Writealettertoafriendofyoursto1)recommendoneofyourfavoritemoviesand2)givereasonsforyourrecommendation.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"LiMing"instead.Donotwritetheaddress.(10points)标准答案：DearMarry,IhighlyrecommendyoutowatchInception,a2010Americansciencefictionfilm,written,producedanddirectedbyChristopherNolan,whohasworkedonthescreenplayforadecade.Itisamovieaboutideas,realityandbrokendreams.ThefactthatInceptionisveryfunnyandthrilling,thoughnotquiteperfect,makesitatruemarvel.Asaheistfilmsetwithinabrand-newuniverseinwhichdreamscanbeshared,itexploreshowtwopeoplecanmeetinadreamandinrealitywithdifferentresults.Youwillenjoythemovie,Ibet.Withlove,LiMing知识点解析：本文书信格式完整、正确，书信目的明确、清楚。段落安排合理，层次清楚，内容连贯。首先开门见山指出论点，提出向朋友推荐一部电影；接着从剧情等方面阐述推荐理由，理由充分。语言自然流畅，句式多样，词汇丰富。3、YouaresupposedtowriteforthePostgraduates’Associationanoticetorecruitvolunteersforaninternationalconferenceonglobalization.Thenoticeshouldincludethebasicqualificationofapplicantandtheotherinformationyouthinkrelative.Youshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use"Postgr