应用文申请信

应用文写作—申请信评分原则1.本题总分15分,按5个档次给分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.词数少于60和多于100的,从总分中减去2分。4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。2019全国Ⅰ卷高考英语

假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.个人优势；3.能做的事情。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。Step1审题体裁:应用文________主题:________结构:三段

第一段:_______________________第二段:_______________________第三段:_______________________人称:_______________________时态:_______________________自我介绍+背景信息+写作目的自身优势（性格、学术、经验）表态和期待Step2词组素材Para.11.招募

__________________________2.申请_______________________Para.3把…考虑进去__________________________Para.21.(可)胜任_________________________________2.符合你们的资历要求__________________________3.首先、其次、最后__________________________4.负责可靠__________________________5.热心外向__________________________recruit;want;beinwantofapplyfor；applicationbequalified/fit/suitable/competentfor…;beequaltomeetyourqualificationsFirstofall,moreover,mostimportantly.responsibleandreliablewarm-heartedandoutgoingtake...intoconsideration/account6.对……乐观

__________________________7.良好的人际关系__________________________8.富有合作精神

__________________________9.与(某人)协作、合作__________________________10.有优势

__________________________11.在......方面熟练__________________________12.擅长；精通__________________________13.有丰富的工作经验__________________________14.肯定、注定、必定__________________________beoptimisticaboutgoodinterpersonalrelationshipbecooperative/agoodteamworkplayer/withteamworkspiritcooperatewithsbgaintheupperhand;haveanadvantage/edgeoverbeskilledat/in=beexpertinhaveagoodcommand/knowledgeof;excelin；begoodat;dowellinhaverichworkingexperiencein;beexperiencedin;beboundtoStep3句型素材Para.1我是李华。得知你们正在招募志愿者，所以我写信申请这个职位。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2首先，我负责可靠并且热心随和，此外，我......掌握得很好，最重要得是，我在......方面有着丰富的经验。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.3如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激_____________________________________________________________IamLiHua.Learningthatyouarerecruitingvolunteers,Iamwritingtoapplyforthisposition.Forastart,Iamresponsible,reliableaswellaswarm-heartedandeasy-going.Besides,Ihaveagoodcommandof...Mostimportantly,Ihaverichexperiencein...Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.DearSir/Madam，IamLiHua.Learningthatyouarerecruitingvolunteers,Iamwritingtoapplyforthisposition.Forastart,Iamresponsible,reliableaswellaswarm-heartedandeasy-going.Besides,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinesepainting.Mostimportantly,Ihaverichexperienceinmuseumvolunteers.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyatyourconvenience.Yours,LiHua9-10三档最高分，4档最低分Step4润色文章1.非谓语动词（做主、宾、定语、状语）2.定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句3.介词短语,with的复合结构

4.强调句5.倒装

6.it做形式主语、形式宾语7.无灵主语1.补全信息（1）Para.1，_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2）一二段衔接句__________________________________________________________________________

IamLiHua,aChinesestudentstudyingartinLondon.LeaningthattherewillbeanexhibitionofChinesepaintingsatthelocalartgallery,Iamwritingtoapplyforavolunteerposition.IamconfidentthatIamcompetentfortheposition.2.用介词短语改写(1)Iamresponsible,reliableaswellaswarm-heartedandeasy-going.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2）IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinesepainting.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Iamaresponsibleandreliablestudentwithawarm-heartedandeasy-goingpersonality.WithagoodcommandofspokenEnglish,Ihavenodifficultyincommunicatingwithforeigners.3.非限制性定语从句改写（1）IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinesepainting.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2）Ihaverichexperienceinmuseumvolunteers.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhaveagoodcommandofspokenEnglish,whichenablesmetocommunicatewithforeignersfluentlyandeffectively.Ihaverichexperienceinmuseumvolunteers,whichhelpsmedealwiththeunexpectedchallengespositively.4.动名词做主语改写1）IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinesepainting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________HavingagoodknowledgeofEnglishmeanslanguagebarrierwillbynomeanshindermefromcommunicatingwiththelocalseffectively.HavingagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintingsallowsmetoaddrelevantinformationaboutChineseartproperlyandspreadChineseculturepositively.5.无灵主语改写(1)Iamresponsible,reliableaswellaswarm-heartedandeasy-going.________________________________________________________________________

(2)IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinesepainting.______________________________________________________________________________________________(3)Ihaverichexperienceinmuseumvolunteers.______________________________________________________________________________________________(4)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.______________________________________________________________________________________________Beingeasy-goinggainsmeanupperhandtogetalongwellwithother.AgoodcommandofEnglishensuresthatIcancommunicatewiththelocalvisitorswithease.Richvoluntaryexperienceinmuseumshelpsmedealwiththeunexpectedchallengespositively.Yourfavorableconsiderationofmyapplicationwillbegreatlyappreciated.实战篇【实战演练】

假如你是某高三(1)班的学生李华，最近你校正在招募志愿者家庭，接待下个月来你校进行文化交流的一些英国学生。你家愿意作为hostfamily接待一位英国学生，请用英语写一篇申请。内容包括：提出申请；个人优势；安排英国朋友参加的活动注意：1.词数80词左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Parttwo:优势假如你是某高三(1)班的学生李华，最近你校正在招募志愿者家庭，接待下个月来你校进行文化交流的一些英国学生。你家愿意作为hostfamily接待一位英国学生，请用英语写一篇申请。内容包括：提出申请；个人优势；安排英国朋友参加的活动（硬件设置+软件设置+表决心）1.家里有空调房，靠近公交站/商场2.英语好3.给我这个机会，我会…➡️生活便利➡️交流方便➡️出去玩/体验当地美食/文化Partone假如你是某高三(1)班的学生李华，最近你校正在招募志愿者家庭，接待下个月来你校进行文化交流的一些英国学生。你家愿意作为hostfamily接待一位英国学生，请用英语写一篇申请。内容包括：提出申请；个人优势；安排英国朋友参加的活动IamLiHua,astudentfromclass1,grade3.QuiteexcitedtolearnthatBritishexchangestudentswillcometoourschool,Iamwritingtoapplytobeoneodthehostfamilies.Parttwo假如你是某高三(1)班的学生李华，最近你校正在招募志愿者家庭，接待下个月来你校进行文化交流的一些英国学生。你家愿意作为hostfamily接待一位英国学生，请用英语写一篇申请。内容包括：提出申请；个人优势；安排英国朋友参加的活动Tobeginwith,ourhouse,equippedwithaspareroom,haseasyaccesstopublictransportationandshoppingmall,whichmakesitconvenientforexchangestudentstolivein.Parttwo假如你是某高三(1)班的学生李华，最近你校正在招募志愿者家庭，接待下个月来你校进行文化交流的一些英国学生。你家愿意作为hostfamily接待一位英国学生，请用英语写一篇申请。内容包括：提出申请；个人优势；安排英国朋友参加的活动Additionally,withagoodcommandoforalEnglish,Icancommunicatefluentlywithforeigners.Parttwo假如你是某高三(1)班的学生李华，最近你校正在招募志愿者家庭，接待下个月来你校进行文化交流的一些英国学生。你家愿意作为hostfamily接待一位英国学生，请用英语写一篇申请。内容包括：提出申请；个人优势；安排英国朋友参加的活动Ifgivenchance,Iwill