2024届高考写作短文故事续写的英语作文 讲义

2024年高考写作短文故事续写的英语作文

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasafreshmaninhighschool(Bell)wasmyonlyclose

friend.Usually,Iwouldjustsittherequietly,totallyunsureofmyself,It

seemedliketheonlytimetheotherclassmatestalkedtomewasjustto

sayjokingly,"Youaresoquiet.Doyouevertalk?”]wantedtotalk.Ijust

couldn'tfindthewords.IneverfeltlikeIknewwhattosayinabiggroup

ofpeople.OneSaturday,Bellawassupposedtocomeoverandspendthe

nightatmyhouse.Wealwayshadalotoffuntogether.Butbeforeweleft

theschoolthatday,someoftheothergirlsinvitedhertogotothemovies

withthem.SinceBellahadalreadymadeplanswithme.theyaskedifI

wouldliketogotomovieswiththem,too.Iwasnervousatfirstand

wantedtodecline,becauseallofthemweretotallyoppositetome.Iwas

cautiousandshywhiletheyweretotallyoutgoingandevenalittlewild.I

thoughtIwouldneverreallyfitin.ButBellainsistedthatIgowiththem.

Ieventuallyagreed.Itturnedoutthatmydecisiontogowiththemwould

changemylife.

Oneofthemomsdroveustothecinema,andweallsatintheback

seatofhercarBella,Rhiannon,Destinee,Christine,Sabella,andme.On

theway,theysharedtheirsecretsandlaughedTheyeventoldeachother

thefunniestthingstheyhaddonetothecuteboysinclass.Atfirst,Iwas

kindofquiet,buteventuallyIlaughedwiththemuntilmychest

hurt.Encouragedbytheirboldness,Ialsosharedwiththemmy“secrets",

too.Ieventoldajokeandtheyalllaughed.Sabella,thewildestgirl,

turnedaroundandyelledenthusiastically,C']can'tbelievewe'veneverhung

outbefore.Youaresofuntobearound!”

注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Afterthemovie,Bellasuggestedthatallofusshouldspendthenightat

myhouse.

Thatnighttotallychangedmylifeatschool.

ThenSabellastaredatmewithanexpectantlookandsaidwith

happiness,"Isthatok?Areyourparentsathome?"Ididn'tknowwhat

Ishoulddo.WhilemyMomandDadwenttothecountrysidetovisit

grandparents,Iwasafraidofcausingtroubleathomewhentheyspent

thenightatmyhouse.Ifellintoadilemma,butonsecondthought,I

replied,"That'sok!"ThenSabellathrewherarmsaroundmewithan

excitedshout."Oh!Dear,Socool!"Webroughtsomesnacksand

drinkshome.Andweatesnacks,playedgames,andevensharedour

deepestsecretswitheachother.Afterthatday,itwastimetogoto

school.

Myshynessgavewaytooutgoingnessatschool.Whentheyhave

lunch,playgames,anddosomethinginteresting,theyalwaysaskme

tojointhem.Theotherclassmatesweresoamazedatwhymy

personalityhadchanged.IknowitwasBellawhohelpedmetobe

myselfandexpressmyselfwithoutfear.Iteventuallydawnedonme

thatarandomactofkindnesscouldmakeafar-reachingdifference.

进一步优化润色成拔高款作文，蓝色是好词好句好素材，尖子生

可以选用

Sabellastaredatmeeagerlyandexclaimedhappily,"CanIcomeover?

Areyourparentsaround?"Ihesitated,notsurewhattosay.My

parentshadgonetovisitmygrandparentsinthecountrysideandI

wasworriedaboutanycommotionathomeduringtheirabsence.

Slightlyconfused,Ifinallyreplied,"Sure,that'sfine!"Sabella

huggedmetightly,shoutingexcitedly,"Yay!Thisisgoingtobeso

muchfun!"Together,westockeduponsnacks,readytoenjoy

ourselvesathome.Wemunchedontreats,playedfungames,and

evensharedourdeepestsecrets.Afterthatmemorableday,itwas

timetogetbacktoourstudies.

Atschool,Ifoundmyselfmoreoutgoingthanbefore.Wheneverthere

waslunch,agame,oranyexcitingactivity,myclassmateseagerly

invitedmetojointhem.Theywereamazedathowmypersonality

hadchanged.IknewitwasBellawhohadhelpedmeopenupand

speakmymindfreely.Gradually,Irealizedthatasimpleactof

kindnesscouldhaveaprofoundimpact.

赛贝拉急切地盯着我，高兴地喊道："我可以去你家吗？你父母在

吗？'我犹豫了，不知道该说什么。我父母去乡下看望我祖父母了，

我担心他们不在家时家里会出什么乱子。我有点困惑，最后回答

说："当然可以「‘赛贝拉紧紧地抱住我，激动地大喊："太好了！

这一定会很有趣的！'我们一起买了很多零食，准备回家好好享受。

我们吃着零食，玩着有趣的游戏，甚至分享了我们内心最深处的

秘密。在那难忘的一天之后，是时候回到学习中了。

在学校，我发现自己比以前更外向了。每当有午餐、游戏或任何

令人兴奋的活动时，我的同学都会热情地邀请我加入。他们惊讶

于我的性格发生了变化。我知道是贝拉帮助我打开心扉，让我可

以自由地说出自己的想法。渐渐地，我意识到一个简单的善举可

能会产生深远的影响。

第五步：优化改写理由供参考1.“staredatmeeagerly"比“gazedat

mewithaneagerexpression”更简洁且易于理解。

2.exclaimedhappily”替换了"exclaimedjoyfully”,因为"happily”更

常用，更符合日常用语。

3,将“Myparentshadjourneyedtothecountrysidetoseemy

grandparents"简化为"Myparentshadgonetovisitmygrandparents

inthecountryside^^,更口语化，易于理解。

4.“Slightlyconfused”替换了"Iwasperplexed^^,因为“confused”是更

常用的词汇/'munchedontreats"比"indulgedinthetreats”更贴切描

述吃零食的情景。

5.“Afterthatmemorableday”替换了"Followingthatfatefulday”,因

为"memorable”更常用于描述值得记住的日子。

6.moreoutgoingthanbefore"比"amoreoutgoingdemeanor”更简洁

明了/'Theywereamazedathowmypersonalityhadchanged"比"My

classmatesweregenuinelyastonishedbythenoticeableshiftinmy

per