在机场误以为别人偷了自己的东西真相大白后诚恳道歉 课件-2025届高考英语复习读后续写

高考英语读后续写语篇练习在机场误以为别人偷了自己的东西，

真相大白后诚恳道歉题目再现题目分析

范文呈现

努力方向读后续写Part

1题目呈现Danniswaswaiting

at

the

airline

ticket

counterwhenhe

first

noticed

the

youngwomanwithshiny

black

hair.She

wore

black

boots

ofsoft

leather.Dannis

struggled

to

see

her

face.She

was

ahead

ofhim

in

line,but

it

was

not

until

she

bought

her

ticket

and

turned

to

walk

away

that

he

realizedhowbeautiful

shewas,whowasfair-skinnedandbig-eyed.She

seemedaware

that

he

was

staring

ather

and

loweredhergaze

abruptly.Hisflightwasleavinginanhour.Tokilltime,Dannis

stepped

into

an

airport

bar

and

ordereda

cup

of

Scotch.While

sipping

it,he

caught

sight

of

black-haired

girl

in

the

leather

coat

again,

deepinconversationwithablondegirl.“Inviteher

for

a

drink?”Dannis

hesitated

and

didn't

come

upto

her.续写原文When

next

he

saw

her,Dannis

was

buying

a

magazine

and

became

aware

someone

waspushinghim.Atfirst,hewasstartled(受惊吓的)thatanyonewouldbe

so

close

asto

touch

him,but

whenhesawwhoitwas,he

smiled.“Busyplace,”Dannissaid.Shelookedupathimandblushed.Wordlessly,she

moved

away

andjoinedthe

crowdsin

the

terminal.续写原文Dannis

wasatthecounterwithhismagazine,butwhenhereachedintohispocketforhiswallet,the

pocket

was

empty.Where

could

I

have

left

it?His

mind

was

racing,the

credit

cards,thecash,the

identificationcard,etc.Hisstomachstirredwithsomething

verylikefear.“Thegirl

whowas

so

near

to

me!”he

said

to

himself.All

at

once

he

understood

she

had

picked

his

pocket.What

should

he

do?First,find

a

policeman,and

tell

him

what

has

happened.He

would

probably

never

see

his

wallet

again.Dannis

gritted

his

teeth.When

glancing

around

for

the

police,suddenly,he

spottedthe

black-haired

girl,seated

against

a

frontwindow

ofthe

terminal.She

seemed

absorbed

in

a

book.续写原文Para1:Aseatbesideherwasempty,andDannisoccupied

it.Para2:Thegirlranand

Dannis

ran

after

her.段首句Part

2题目分析本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了主人公在机场遇到了一个美丽的年轻女人，十分心动，但是在后来误以为这个女人在靠近他时偷走了他的信用卡和现金等，于是主人公

对女人大喊大叫，把她下得跑掉，结果警察告知有人在厕所里捡到了他的东西。主人

公非常惭愧，向女人诚恳道歉。9续写原文分析点1:位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接

前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2:位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接

第二段段首句；点3:位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接

第二段段首语；点4:文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，

揭示和强调主题。段首句2点2

点3

点4(升华)情节构建的重点段首句1点1续写第一段

续写第二段10>Para1:A

seat

beside

her

was

empty,and

Dannis

occupied

it.由第一段首句内容“她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐了下来。”可知，第一段可描写

丹尼斯质问女人，女人感到很困惑并被吓了一跳。续写思路分析11>Para

2:The

girl

ran

and

Dannis

ran

after

her.由第二段首句内容“女孩跑着，丹尼斯在后面追。”可知，第二段可描写丹尼斯追上了

女孩，这时有警察询问，并告知有人在厕所里捡到并上交了他丢失的东西。续写思路分析12续写素材质问——困惑——愤怒——吓到——追赶——警察询问——找到失物——道歉续写素材13续写素材续写素材>

行为类①变得：turn/grow>②抓住：grab/pounce

at>③发生：happen/occur

→情绪类①困惑的：confused/puzzled②愤怒：anger/rage续写素材续写素材[高分句型1]The

girl

turned

deadly

pale,looking

so

restless

that

words

failed

her.

(运用

了现在分词作伴随状语)[高分句型2]At

exactly

that

moment,a

policeman

approached

them

andaskedabout

whathappened.(由连接代词what引导的宾语从句作介词about的宾语)[高分句型3]What

a

mistake

he

had

made!

(

由what

引导的感叹句)Part

3范文呈现A

seat

beside

her

was

empty,and

Dannis

occupied

it.He

felt

a

wave

ofanger

sweptover

him.“Where

is

my

wallet?”he

yelled.The

black-haired

girl

glanced

up

from

herreading,with

a

confused

look

on

her

face.Dannis

stood

up,glared

at

her

and

shouted,

“You

stole

my

wallet!”The

crowds

began

to

gossip.The

girl

turned

deadly

pale,looking

so

restless

that

words

failed

her.A

strange

silence

hung

in

the

air.Abruptly,she

leaped

from

the

seat.范文呈现17The

girl

ran

and

Dannis

ran

after

her.After

a

while,Dannis

finally

grabbed

herbythearm.At

exactly

thatmoment,a

policeman

approached

them

and

asked

about

what

happened.Dannis

hastened

to

explain

it

while

the

girl

frowned

with

ashakeof

herhead.Afterfurtherenquiries,thepolicemantook

out

awalletand

handed

it

to

Dannis,adding

that

someone

had

found

it

in

the

toilet.What

a

mistakehe

had

made!Overwhelmed

by

guilt,Dannis

made

an

apology

to

the

girl.范文呈现18她旁边的座位是空的，丹尼斯坐了下来。他觉得一阵怒火席卷了他。“我的钱包在哪里?”

他喊道。黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，

一脸困惑。丹尼斯站起来，怒视着她喊道：“你偷了

我的钱包!”人群开始闲聊起来。女孩脸色变得惨白，看起来坐立不安，说不出话来。空气

中弥漫着一种奇怪的寂静。突然，她从座位上