读后续写个人成长不要过分关注白纸中的小黑点某一次失败安慰鼓励课件高三上学期英语作文复习专项

不要过分关注白纸中的小黑点文

本

Linda,ahighschoolgirl,wasfeelingdepressedaftershehadfailedhermid-termexams.Shedidn’tanswerherteachers’questionsactivelyinclasslikesheusedto.（冲突）Instead,shebegantolowerherheadandgotabsent-mindedeasily.（冲突）Herfriendsandclassmateswereworriedabouther,butshedidn’tfeelliketalkingaboutitwiththem.MrsGreen,herEnglishteacher,noticedherchangesanddecidedtodosomethingbeforeitgotworse（解决方法）.

Oneday,MrsGreenenteredtheclassroomandaskedherstudentstoprepareforasurprisetest（解决方法）.Theywaitedanxiouslyattheirdesksforthetesttobegin.MrsGreenhandedoutthequestionpapers,withthetextfacingdownasusual.Aftershehandedthemallout,sheaskedherstudentstoturnthepageandbegin.Toeveryone’ssurprise,therewerenoquestions,justablackdot(点)inthecenterofthepage.（冲突）MrsGreen,seeingtheexpressiononeveryone’sface,toldthemthefollowing:

“Iwantyoutowritewhatyouseethere.”

Thestudents,confused,gotstartedonthetask.

Attheendoftheclass,MrsGreencollectedalltheanswerpapersandstartedreadingthemaloudinfrontofallthestudents.JustasMrsGreenhadexpected,withnoexception,allofthemdescribedtheblackdot,tryingtoexplainitspositioninthemiddleofthesheet,etc.（解决方法）MrsGreenthenpickedoutLinda’spaperandadded,“Linda,Ilikeyouridea.Wouldyoupleasefollowmetotheofficeandtalkaboutit?”

“Er...Yes,madam!”Lindawaspuzzledbecauseshethoughtherideawasnobetterthananyoneelse’s.（冲突）Likeothers,shealsodescribedtheblackdotonlyandignoredthewhitepartofthepaper.Paragraph1：

Feelingnervous,LindawentintoMrsGreen’soffice.Paragraph2：“MrsGreenisright.Ishouldfocusmoreonthewhitepartofthepaper!”（解决方法）Lindagotrefreshed.思

路Step

1

快读文本获取信息故事发展线索:Linda期中考试没有考好,心情低落→MrsGreen想帮助她→一天,MrsGreen让学生进行一次特别的测试,试卷上只有一个黑点→学生都描述那个黑点,包括Linda在内→MrsGreen说她喜欢Linda的想法→Linda感到困惑Step

2

细读续写段首句合理推测根据续写第一段首句设问:(1)WhatwouldMrsGreensaytoLindaintheoffice?(2)HowwouldLindareact?根据续写第二段首句设问:(1)WhatwouldbeLinda’sreflection?(2)WhatwouldLindadecidetodoafterthetalk?推测:MrsGreen会告诉Linda不要注意那个黑点,要注意范围更大的纸上的白区。这个黑点就像是一次失败,不要让失败使我们忽视生活中其他更多的美好的事情。Linda听了老师的话以后会做出改变——变得乐观、豁达。最后根据续写第二段的首句进行主旨升华。恢复精神的表现：眼中闪过一丝希望1234512345Para.2:“MrsGreenisright.Ishouldfocusmoreonthewhitepartofthepaper!”（解决方法）Lindagotrefreshed.续写框架：五五拍戏法Para.1:Feelingnervous,LindawentintoMrsGreen’soffice.承上老师的反应：微笑着安排她坐下满怀希望地离开办公室希望：指出应该关注白纸的白色部分谈心：指出这个黑点就像是一次失败承上不要让失败使我们忽视生活中其他更多的美好的事情她终于在期末考试中取得好成绩她意识到过去忽视了很多生活中的美好故事结局改变态度，开始积极参与课堂启下情感态度价值观升华①⑥⑦②③⑧⑨④⑤她明白了老师的用意，点了点头逐句写作第一句：老师的反应：微笑着安排她坐下MrsGreensmiledwarmlyandaskedLindatositdown.MrsGreensmiledwarmlyandgesturedforhertositdown.第二句：和她谈心：指出这个黑点就像是一次失败第三句：希望：指出应该关注白纸的白色部分ShepointedatLinda'sanswerpaperandsaidgently,"Linda,lifeislikethispieceofpaper.Theblackdotrepresentsthechallengesanddifficultiesweface,butthewhitepartrepresentstheopportunitiesandpossibilitiesthatsurroundus.Don'tletthesmallthingsovershadowthebigpicture."第四句：她明白了老师的用意，点了点头Lindanodded,feelinginspired.Lindanodded,hereyesshowingunderstanding.第五句：满怀希望地离开办公室ShethankedMrsGreenandwalkedoutoftheofficewithanewfoundsenseofhopeanddetermination.第一句：她眼中闪过一丝希望Aglimmerofhopesparkedinhereyes.Shefeltanewfoundstrengthwithinher.第二句：她意识到过去忽视了很多生活中的美好Onlythendidsherealizethatshehadbeentoofocusedonhermistakesandfailures,ignoringthemanypositiveaspectsofherlife.第三句：改变态度，开始积极参与课堂Withnewfounddetermination,shedecidedtochangeherattitude.Shedecidedtoletgoofthepastfailureandembracethefuture.Shestartedtoactivelyparticipateinclassagain,readytofillthewhitespaceofherlifewithcolorsofsuccess.第四句：她终于在期末考试中取得好成绩Shemadesteadyprogressinstudyandeventuallygotthebestgradesinthefinalexams.主题升华：不要让失败使我们忽视生活中其他更多的美好的事情Afterthisexperience,Lindadeeplyrealizedthatsometimeslifecanbehard,butweshouldalwaysbepositiveandlookatthebrightside.Don'tletfailurepreventusfromnoticingthemanyotherwonderfulthingsinlife.Failure

shouldn't

cause

us

to

lose

sight

of

life's

many

wonderful

aspects.范文1Feelingnervous,LindawentintoMrsGreen’soffice.MrsGreeninvitedhertoshareherideas.Afterthat,MrsGreensmiled,“Haveyouevernoticedthewhitepartofthepaper?”Lindashookherheadconfusedbecauseitneveroccurredtoher.MrsGreencontinued,“Theblackdotisjustlikethefailureinlife,onlyasmallpart.Ifwefocusonlyonit,wemighteasilyoverlookthehappinessoflife,thebiggerpart.”Suddenly,Lindaunderstoodit.Tearswellinguphereyes,sheexpressedgratitudetoMrsGreenbeforeleavingtheoffice.“MrsGreenisright.Ishouldfocusmoreonthewhitepartofthepaper!”Lindagotrefreshed.Onlythendidsherealizethatshehadalotofadmirableteachers,belovedfamiliesandfriendlyclassmates.Thefailureoftheexamswasjustasmallpart.Fromthenon,Lindabecameactiveintheclassagain.Shemadesteadyprogressinstudyandeventuallygotthebestgradesinthefinalexams.Afterthisexperience,Lindadeeplyrealizedthatsometimeslifecanbehard,butweshouldalwaysbepositiveandlookatthebrightside.范文2Feelingnervous,LindawentintoMrsGreen’soffice.MrsGreensmiledwarmlyandaskedLindatositdown.ShepointedatLinda'sanswerpaperandsaidgently,"Linda,lifeislikethispieceofpaper.Theblackdotrepresentsthechallengesanddifficultiesweface,butthewhitepartrepresentstheopportunitiesandpossibilitiesthatsurroundus.Don'tletthesmall