2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼二十三

2022届高考英语读后续写精读精炼（二十三）目录内容PartA读后续写模考经典原文PartB读后续写思路引导PartC写作优秀句式翻译PartD篇章写作润色PartE课后练笔巩固提升PartA 读后续写模考经典原文Lungsnearlybursting,Istruggledtoliftmyheadoutofthewater.Inchbyinch,mytiredbodyreachedfortheendofthepool.Theextentofmyswimmingcareerwaspurelyrecreational,whilethecompetitiveswimmersnearbythoughtnothingoftheseeminglysimpletaskofa500-meterswimtest.PushingmyselftofinishwhatIhadstarted,Icouldonlythink:whynottaketheeasywayout?Earlierthatweek,Ihadturnedinmyfirstjobapplicationatalocalpool.Overqualified,Iwashiredonthespot.However,thetaskswereboring:helpingconfusedvisitorsandmeasuringtheheightofchildrenbeforetheywentdowntheslide,thosesortsofthings.Iwascapableofmore.Soaswimtestwasrequired,establishingthemerefactthatIwasnotcompletelyhelplessinapool.Midwaythrough,themanageradministeringthetestremarked,“Thislooksreallyeasyforyou.Whyaren'tyouapplyingtobecomeaguard?"“Thethoughthadn'tcrossedmymind."“Well,lifeguardingdemandsmoreresponsibility,strengthandrespect.Thusthepositionpays$2moreperhour.Yourswimmingskillsarestrongenough.Allyouneedtodoiscompleteacertificationclass.”InsideIwasunsureofmyself,buthiswordsinspiredme-Youneverknowwhatyouarecapableofuntilyouforceyourselftodoit.SoonIpassedtheswimtest.Allleftwastopracticeandlearnfirstaid,CPR(心肺复苏),andproceduresfordifferentlandandwater-basedemergencies.Workstartedsoon.Awell-intentionedyetanxiousfeelinginmesoonpassed.Days,weeks,andmonthswentbywithoutincident;emergencieswererare.TheskillsandtrainingIhadsocarefullystudiedandacquiredseemedunnecessary.Todayappearedtobeanotheruneventfulday.However,shortlyaftertheotherguardssignaledtothechildrentoexitthepool,Inoticedoneboywasstillinthemiddlewhiletheothershadclimbedup.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PartB 读后续写思路引导本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者向一家游泳馆递交了第一份工作申请，完成一些诸如帮助困惑的游客，在孩子滑下滑梯之前测量他们的身高等事情。在进行测试时，经理提议让作者去当一名救生员，于是作者采纳了这个建议。经过一系列培训，作者成为了一名救生员，但好像所学的东西也无用武之地。1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“‘他一定是出了什么问题，’我心想。”可知，第一段可描写作者发明并营救这个溺水男孩的经过。②由第二段首句内容“让男孩躺在地板上，我把耳朵凑到他的嘴边，手指放在他的脖子上。”可知，第二段可描写作者如何运用自己学过的救生员知识救了这个孩子的。2.续写线索：发现男孩溺水——抱起男孩——实施急救——男孩恢复知觉——松了口气3.词汇激活行为类游泳：diveinto/swimtowards/sinkto走路：reach/headto情绪类①.担忧：anxiously/frightandconcern/begrateful②.高兴：happy/cheers/inreliefPartC 写作优秀句式翻译“他一定出了问题，”我对自己想。果然，我仔细看，发现男孩拼命地挥手。我迅速地跳入水中，全速地向那个男孩游去。当我到达他身边的时候，他已经沉到池底，头垂着，我的心里充满了恐惧和忧虑我把那个男孩抱起来，走向泳池边，把头抬出水面。让男孩躺在地板上，我把耳朵放在他的嘴里，手指放在他的脖子上。我看看出他没有心跳，没有呼吸。每一秒都计算一次！我毫不犹豫地做了急救，给他口对口呼吸，并按照训练做心肺复苏。其他警卫焦急地看着，我继续说，汗流浃背。突然，一股水从他嘴里流出来，男孩使劲地咳嗽起来。看到男孩恢复了知觉，周围的人爆发了欢呼声。我筋疲力尽，一口气叹了口气。我想，如果我接受了这个轻松的立场，我只会是一个旁观者。我很高兴我没有轻松地走出困境。参考答案：“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.Sureenough,withacloserlook,Ifoundtheboywavinghishandsdesperately.Iquicklydivedintothewater,swimmingtowardstheboyatfullspeed.BythetimeIreachedhim,hehadsunktothebottomofthepool,hisheadhangingdown,whichfilledmyheartwithfrightandconcern.Ipickedtheboyupandheadedtothepoolside,keepinghisheadabovethewater.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.Icouldtellthathehadnoheartbeatandwasn’tbreathing.Everysecondcounted!Withouthesitation,Ididfirstaid,givinghimmouth-to-mouthbreathinganddoingCPRastrained.Otherguardswatchinganxiously,Icarriedon,sweating.Suddenly,astreamofwaterburstoutofhismouthandtheboycoughedintensely.Seeingtheboyregainconsciousness,thosearoundbrokeintocheers.Exhausted,Isighedwithrelief.IthoughthadIacceptedthateasyposition,Iwouldhavebeennothingbutabystander.I’mhappyIdidn’ttaketheeasywayout.PartD 篇章写作润色“Somethingmusthavegonewrongwithhim,”Ithoughttomyself.Sureenough,withacloserlook,Ifoundtheboywavinghishandsdesperately.Iquicklydivedintothewater,swimmingtowardstheboyatfullspeed.BythetimeIreachedhim,hehadsunktothebottomofthepool,hisheadhangingdown,whichfilledmyheartwithfrightandconcern.Ipickedtheboyupandheadedtothepoolside,keepinghisheadabovethewater.Havingtheboyonthefloor,Iputmyeartohismouthandmyfingersathisneck.Icouldtellthathehadnoheartbeatandwasn’tbreathing.Everysecondcounted!Withouthesitation,Ididfirstaid,givinghimmouth-to-mouthbreathinganddoingCPRastrained.Otherguardswatchinganxiously,Icarriedon,sweating.Suddenly,astreamofwaterburstoutofhismouthandtheboycoughedintensely.Seeingtheboyregainconsciousness,thosearoundbrokeintocheers.Exhausted,Isighedwithrelief.IthoughthadIacceptedthateasyposition,Iwouldhavebeennothingbutabystander.I’mhappyIdidn’ttaketheeasywayout.PartE 课后练笔巩固提升.Onceuponatime,twobrotherswholivedonneighbouringfarmsfellintoconflict.Itwasthefirstseriousdisagreementinfortyyearsoffarmingsidebyside,sharingmachinery,andtradinglabourandgoodsasneededwithoutahitch.Thenthelongcooperationfellapart.Itbeganwithasmallmisunderstandingandthengrewintoamajordifference,andfinallyitexplodedintoanexchangeofbitterwordsfollowedbyweeksofsilence.Onemorning,therewasaknockonJohn'sdoor.Heopenedittofindamanwithacarpenter'stoolbox."I'mlookingforafewdays'work,"hesaid."Perhapsyouhaveafewjobshereandthere.CouldIhelpyou?""Yes,"saidJohn."Idohaveajobforyou.LookacrossthesmallCreekatthatfarm.That'smyneighbor.Infact,it'smyyoungerbrother.Lastweektherewasameadowbetweenusandhetookhisbulldozer（推土机）thereandnowthereisacreekbetweenus.Well,hemayhavedonethistoannoymebutI'lldobetter.Seethatpileofwoodbythebarn（谷仓）?Iwantyoutobuildafence—an8-foot-highfence-soIwon'tneedtoseehisplaceanymore."Thecarpentersaid,"IthinkIunderstandthesituation.Showmethenailsandhole-diggerandI'llbeabletodoajobthatpleasesyou."Theolderbrotherhadtogotothetownforsupplies,sohehelpedthecarpentergeteverythingreadyandthenheleft.Thecarpenterworkedhardallthatdaymeasuring,sawingandnailing.AtsunsetwhenJohnreturned,thecarpenterhadjustfinishedhisjob.John'seyesopenedwide,.hisjawdropped.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1:Therewasnofenceatall.Itwasabridge!_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Theyturnedtoseethecarpenterliftthetoolboxontohisshoulder.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________