读后续写专题第7章如何写出漂亮的开头句和结尾句

读后续写开头句六大句式「首句超级重要!衔接满分秘诀」六大句式①时间状从+动作:While/When/As/themoment...sbdosth②让步状从+动作:“Adj.+as/though+sbwas,sbdosth”(含转折意味)③情绪形容词+动作:“情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2,sbdosth,独立主格.④无灵主语句+定从:无灵主语句式，which...(进一步描写宾语)⑤对话/独白:“..小短句)”,sbyelled/thought/saidtooneself.⑥What引导的主语从句+定从:“What..was(that...,which..”解析①时间状从+动作:While/When/As/themoment...sbdosth.(...时，某人做某事)->思路:原sbdosth->改When....sbdosth(效果:场景转换，画面分离)[真题例句:2020年7月浙江卷]:基础版本:“登直升机”:Wegotontothehelicopter.改为进阶版本:“当直升机降落时，我们马上登直升机，(兴奋又松了一口气...”）->Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.②让步状从+动作:Adj.+as/though+sbwas,sbdosth(尽管某人很...某人仍做某事)->思路:情绪形容词至于句首，含转折意味;语法句式为“让步倒装”[真题例句]:Exhaustedandhungryashewas,hecarriedonclimbingthemountain.虽然他筋疲力尽、又饿，他仍继续爬山。Uglythoughthemanwas,heboreakindheartaspureasadiamond.虽然这个人外貌丑陋，但他有一颗像钻石一样纯洁善良的心。③情绪形容词+动作:情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2,sbdosth,+独立主格.(感到..某人做某事，五官如何)->思路拓展:最后加独立主格，描写五官神态，扩写成长句。[真题例句:201610浙江]Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherface.感到绝望的，简跪了下来，泪水顺着她的脸流了下来。Delightedandrelieved,werantothehelicopter,eyesglitteringwithhope.感到欣喜若狂和松了一口气,我们跑向直升机，眼睛里闪耀着希望。常用描写情绪的副词总结总结一happily/delightedly开心地firmly/determinedly坚定地proudly骄傲地bravely勇敢地enthusiastically热心地，满腔热情地gratefully感激地confidently信心十足地generously慷慨地，大方地eagerly热切地politely礼貌地gently轻轻地，温柔地sincerely真挚地secretly偷偷地angrily生气地.rudely粗鲁地anxiously焦虑地enviously嫉妒地unhappily不开心地uneasily/nervously不安地sorrowfully伤心地tiredly疲倦地fearfully害怕地disappointedly失望地desperately/hopelessly绝望地regretfully/remorsefully后悔地heavily沉重地，缓慢而忧郁地总结二confusedly困惑地cautiously谨慎地calmly冷静地seriously严肃地doubtfully怀疑地coldly/indifferently冷淡地blankly茫然地reluctantly/unwillingly不情愿地casually随意地aimlessly漫无目的地hesitantly犹豫不决地impatiently不耐烦地deliberately故意地carefully仔细地constantly持续不断地temporarily暂时地;临时地violently猛烈地cruelly残忍地clumsily笨拙地wildly/crazily疯狂地hurriedly匆忙地unexpectedly出乎意料地hopefully满怀希望地gradually逐渐地repeatedly反复地immediately/swiftly立即地，迅速地④无灵主语句+定从:情绪名词+固定动词+sb/sth,who/which...(xx情绪抓住了sb/sth,这..）->思路:无灵主语句式+定从(进一步描写宾语)[真题例句:2020年7月浙江卷]Furyseizedthebear,wholookedevenfiercer.愤怒抓住了熊(熊愤怒了)，它看起来更加凶猛。⑤对话/独白:“...(小短句)”sbyelled/shouted/thoughttooneself/saidtooneself.(“...",某人大喊/大叫/心想/对着自己说)->思路:对P1P2给定句的核心内容,进行独白式的评价[真题例句]题目给定句:Paragraph2;Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.->核心内容“helicopter"，对话/独白写法:“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!"Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.”谢天谢地，我们得救了!”艾丽喊道。直升机降落后，我们很快就上了直升机，兴奋而松了一口气。⑥What引导的主语从句+which定从:What..was(that.....which...)(令人..的是...这使得..)->思路:突出给定句的核心内容，后面用定从作为评价，扩写成长句。[真题例句:2020浙江卷]题目给定句:Paraqraph1:Afeuminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.”->核心内容“thebear,ourcamp”,描述核心词的状态，对我们的影响:Whatthrewusintodeeperterrorwasthebear'smoreviolentpunchingthefence,makingoursituationworsethanever.让我们陷入更深的恐惧的是熊更猛烈地击打围栏,使我们的处境比以往任何时候都更加糟糕。大总结六大句式①时间状从+动作:While/When/As/themoment...sbdosth②让步状从+动作:“Adj.+as/though+sbwas,sbdosth”(含转折意味)③情绪形容词+动作:“情绪形容词1+情绪形容词2,sbdosth,独立主格.④无灵主语句+定从:无灵主语句式，which...(进一步描写宾语)⑤对话/独白:“..小短句)”,sbyelled/thought/saidtooneself.⑥What引导的主语从句+定从:“What..was(that...,which..”读后续写结尾句「回忆.悟道.写景」1、回忆体:The+adj.+experiencestilllingeredinone'smind.仍萦绕在心中Whenlookingbackonthestory,sbstillfeel..当回首..时，某人仍觉..2.悟道理:Fromthenon,sbalwaysdosth,hopingto...从那之后，某人总是...希望..Itwassththatmatteredmost,whichwasdeeplyengravedinone'smind.某事是最重要的，这深深地刻在某人的脑海中3.写景式:Sbdosth,withwind/air/sunlight+非谓语+人身体部位+副词Feeling+theadj.+wind/air/sunlight+非谓语,sbdosth解析1、回忆体句式1:①The+adj.+experiencestilllingeredinone'smind.(这个xx的经历仍然萦绕在某人的心中)(lingerin=beengravedin)[真题例句]Interestingly,thefunnystorywasstilldeeplyengravedinmymind.有趣的是，这个有趣的故事仍然深深地刻在我的脑海中。Theinterestingstorytaughtusthatnevershouldwejudgeabookbyitscover.这个有趣的故事告诉我们，我们永远不应该通过封面来判断一本书(不可以貌取人)ThenarrowescapemadeMacrealizehowtreasurablelifewas.这次惊险的逃生让麦克意识到生活是多么珍贵。句式②:Whenlookingbackonthestory,sbstillfeel...(回想起这个故事)或:Lookingbackonthestory,sbstillfeel...或:Sbwouldstillfeelastrongsenseof..wheneverlookingbackonthe..experience.[真题例句]Whenlookingbackonthestory,Samstillfeelsitinteresting,thinkingofthesayingagainthatnevershouldanyonejudgeabookbyitscover.回想起这个故事，山姆仍然觉得它很有趣,再次想到了那句话，任何人都不应该通过封面来判断一本书。2、悟道理句式①:Fromthenon,sbalwaysdosth,hopingto...或:Fromthenon,sbalwaysdosth.Onlyinthatwaycouldsbdosth.(思路:Fromthenon,sbdosth,+非谓语表目的/后接单独的倒装句)[真题例句:2020年浙江卷]Followingthenon,wealwayskeepawayfromwildanimals,hopingtomaintaintheharmonyoftheecology.(..Onlyinthiswaycouldwemaintaintheharmonyoftheecology.)此后，我们始终远离野生动物，希望保持生态的和谐(只有这样，我们才能保持生态的和谐)。句式②:Itwassththatmatteredmost,whichwasdeeplyengravedinone'smind.(正是xx是最重要的,这深深地刻在某人的脑海中)或:Itissththat....whichsbfeltdeepinheart.(强调句+定从)[真题例句]Itwasloveandcarethatmadetheworldgoaround,whichwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.是爱与关怀，让世界运转起来，这深深地刻在我的脑海里。Itwasprocrastinationthatmademypaperafailure,whichremindedmetosetpriorities.正是拖延症使我的论文失败了，这提醒我确定优先事项。结尾句:3.写景式小结思路:自然环境+人:(优先顺承写原文已有景物)句式①sbdosth,withwind/air/sunlight+非谓语+人身体部位+副词sbdosth,withthewindblowingsb'shairandwhippingsb'sface.某人做某事，风吹着某人的头发，拍着某人的脸。sbdosth,withthelightairwhisperinginsb'sears.某人做某事，轻盈的空气在某人的耳边低语。sbdosth,withthesun/sunlight/windgreetingsbgentlyandwarmly.某人做某事，sb做sth,随着太阳/阳光/风轻柔而温暖地迎接某人。句式②Feeling+theadj.+wind/air/sunlight+非谓语，sbdosthFeelingthewarmsunlightbreakingthrought