高中英语北师大版选择性必修四Unit 11 Period 8　Writing-An Opinion Essay

Period8Writing—AnOpinionEssayUnit11CONFLICTANDCOMPROMISE细读文本写作指导写作实践达标检测细读文本Readthepassagecarefullyandchoosethebestanswer.1.WhichisNOTmentionedinthepassageasunhealthyproduct?A.Fastfood. B.Tobacco.C.Alcohol. D.Computergame.√Activity1

Readforsomedetails.2.Accordingtothesecondparagraph，whichisthesecondfactorthatcausesdeath?A.Obesity.B.Smoking.C.Drinkingalcohol.D.Unhealthyproduct.√3.Howisthepassagemainlydeveloped?A.Bylistingexamples.B.Bymakingcomparison.C.Byinferring.D.Byanalyzingcausesandeffects.√4.WhichopinionmighttheauthorNOTagreewith?A.Thegovernmentshouldtakestrictermeasurestobanadvertisements

forunhealthyproducts.B.Themoneymadefromunhealthyproductsshouldbeusedforcharity

work.C.BanningTVadvertisementsofunhealthyproductsisbeneficialtoboth

individualsandanation.D.Advertisementsforunhealthyproductsandactivitieshaveareallybad

influenceonchildren.√1.Completethestructureofthetextbyputtingthedifferentpartsinthecorrectorder.Activity2

Readforthestructures.dabc2.AccordingtotheopinionessayonP40，wecanlearnwhenwewriteanopinionessay，wecanusethefollowingoutline.(写作模板)Recently，wehavehadadiscussionabout...Therearetwooppositeopinionsaboutit.Thosewhofavortheideathink/Somestudentsholdtheirviewforthereasonthat

(理由一).Whatismore，

(理由二).Moreover，_________(理由三).Ontheotherhand，themajorityofthepeoplebelievethat/Thosewhoareagainsttheideathink/Othersprefer...Firstly，

(理由一).Secondly/Besides，_________(理由二).Thirdly/Finally，

(理由三).Personally/Frommypointofview/Ithink

(我的观点).Thereasonisasfollows.

ReadthepassageonP40carefullyagainandfindoutthepersuasivesentences.答案

1.Undoubtedly，unhealthyproductsharmourhealth.2.ItisclearlydesirabletolimitTVadvertisementsforfastfood.3.However，surelythisisafalseargument.4.Furthermore，itisnotrighttomakemoneyfromactivitieswhichharmhumanhealth.5.Toconclude，lawstobanTVadvertisementsofunhealthyproductsarebeneficialtosociety.Activity3

Readforsomegoodsentences.返回写作指导本单元的写作任务是写一篇正反观点对比类议论文。议论文是对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点和看法的一种文体。论点、论据和论证是议论文的三要素，论点是作者对所论问题所持的见解和主张；论据是用来证明论点的事实和道理的根据；论证就是用论据来证明论点的方法和过程。一般来说，议论文每段应有主题句(topicsentence)来确定论点。文章结尾往往会提出自己的看法、意见或建议，表示对某一现象或论点的赞成或反对。此类议论文常用以下形式安排文章：[注意事项]1.论点要鲜明；论据要充分；论据过程要条理清晰。2.文章安排逻辑性要强，推理要严密。3.主要使用现在时态。4.结合题目要求阐述相关的观点，切忌随意发挥。[常用表达]1.引出讨论话题(1)Recentlywehavehadaheateddiscussionon...最近我们就……进行了激烈的讨论。(2)Accordingtoarecentsurvey...依照最近的一项调查……(3)Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.在这个问题上有意见分歧。2.陈述正/反方观点及论据(理由)(1)Somestudentsarefortheidea，whileothersthinkotherwise.一些学生赞成这个想法，而另一些学生则不这么认为。(2)However，therearealargenumberofpeoplewhoholdadifferentviewconcerningthiscase.然而，有很多人对这个事情持不同的看法。(3)Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.它的弊大于利。(4)Someholdtheviewthat...，whileothersthinkthat...有些人认为……，然而另一些人认为……。3.归纳总结或发表自己的观点(1)Therefore，wecandrawtheconclusionthat...因此，我们可以得出……的结论。(2)Iholdthebeliefthat...我相信……(3)Takingeverythingintoconsideration，weshouldmakegooduseofthepreciousresources.考虑到一切，我们应该好好利用宝贵的资源。(4)AsfarasIamconcerned...就我而言……4.承接词汇与句式(1)表示并列：what’smore，inaddition，aswell，besides，furthermore，moreover，what’sworse(2)表示因果：therefore，forthisreason，thus，consequently(3)表示转折：but，however，onthecontrary，instead(4)表示时间顺序：later，afterwards，fromthenon，eventually，inthemeantime，then，atthesametime，afterawhile，atpresent，afterthat，finally(5)表示列举：first，tobeginwith，secondly，firstofall，then，next，finally(6)举例说明：suchas，forexample，forinstance，take...forexample(7)表示让步：nevertheless，still(8)表示对比：onthecontrary，incontrast(9)陈述事实：infact，actually，asamatteroffact，totellyouthetruth(10)表示总结：inaword，inshort，tosumup，inconclusion，onthewhole，toconclude，inbrief，insummary，ingeneral，allinall(11)表示意义重复：that’stosay，inotherwords，toputitinanotherway，toputitdifferently，similarly(12)表示强调：aboveall，moreimportantly，indeed，withoutanydoubt返回写作实践当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Filmorbook，whichdoyouprefer？”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。1.看电影：省时、有趣、易懂；2.读原著：细节更多、语言优美；3.我的看法及理由。参考词汇：原著originalwork/bookintheoriginal第一步审题谋篇[审题]写作要求是写一篇对比正反观点的议论文，对比选择看电影和选择读原著的不同观点。写作时应注意下面几点：1.确定文体：这是一篇对比正反观点的议论文。写作时注意对比正反观点的议论文的写作特点。2.主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3.主体人称：应该以第一和第三人称为主。[谋篇]本文是一篇正反观点对比类议论文。内容可分为三段，

时态采用一般现在时。论点要鲜明，论据要有说服力。第一段(引言段)：简洁明了地提出问题或现象；第二段(主体段)：分别提出并论证正反两方观点与论据；第三段(结尾段)：用一两句话明确阐述自己的观点，并发出呼吁或号召。第二步遣词造句[核心词汇](含本单元词汇)1.详细的信息 ___________________2.生动优美 _________________3.热衷于 ___________4.更喜欢 _________________________5.一些人……其他人…… ______________6.就个人而言 _________________________________detailedinformationvividandbeautifulbekeenonprefer/haveapreferenceforSome...others...personally/asfarasIamconcerned...7.坚信 __________________8.以……为原型 _____________9.改编自…… ____________firmlybelievethat...bebasedon...adapt...from[连词成句]1.Films_______________________orbooksintheoriginal，whichdoyouprefer?你更喜欢看原著还是看由其改编的电影？2.Astothisquestion，___________________________________.对于这个问题，不同的人有不同的观点。3.Someofusarguethat________________________________________________________.我们中的一些人认为我们应该看电影而不是看原著。whicharebasedonbooksdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsweshouldseethefilmratherthanreadthebookintheoriginal4.Becauseittakeslesstime___________________________.因为那样能花更少的时间了解整个故事。5._____________________________________________________________但是，其他人持相反的观点。6.Theythinkthatthey________________________________fromtheoriginalbook.他们认为看原著能获得更多细节。7._____________________________________________________________就我个人而言，我更喜欢读原著。tounderstandthewholestoryHowever，othershavejusttheoppositeopinion.cangetmoredetailedinformationPersonally，Ihaveapreferenceforreadingtheoriginals.8.Ithinkreadingoriginals_____________________________________________andnottobeinfluencedbytheadaptations.我认为读原著能更好地理解作者的思想，并且不受改编的影响。enablesmetobetterunderstandthewriter’sidea第三步句式升级1.将句1中的定语从句改成过去分词作定语。_______________________________________________________________2.将句2改为whenitcomesto...结构。_______________________________________________________________3.用Thereasonisthat...句型改写句4。_______________________________________________________________Filmsbasedonbooksorbooksintheoriginal，whichdoyouprefer?Whenitcomestothisquestion，differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.4.用同位语从句把句5和句6合并成一个句子。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.用现在分词作状语把句7和句8合并成一个句子。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________However，othershavejusttheoppositeopinionthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginalbook.Personally，Ihaveapreferenceforreadingtheoriginals，believingthatitcanenablemetobetterunderstandthewriter’sideaandnottobeinfluencedbytheadaptations.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。范文展示Filmorbook，whichdoyouprefer?Filmsbasedonbooksorbooksintheoriginal，whichdoyouprefer?Whenitcomestothisquestion，differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Someofusarguethatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides，thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting，anditiseasiertofollow.However，othershavejusttheoppositeopinionthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginalbook.Meanwhile，thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorevividandbeautiful.Personally，Ihaveapre