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阅读下面的材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。InaverycoldJanuary,apuppywanderedaroundMr.Lacey’shouse,wherehelivedwithhiswifeMamieandtheirdaughterDoris.Icicles(冰锥)hungthreefeetormorefromtheroofsofhousesandsnowswallowedupcars.Thepuppyhadbeenabandoned,anditmadeitswaydowntheroadtowardtheLaceys’smallhouse,withitsearsdownandtremblingfromshynessandcold.Doris,whoseschoolhadbeencalledoffbecauseofthesnow,wasclearingthestepswhenshespottedthepuppyontheroad.“Comeon,littledog!”shecalleditover.ThepuppyshylywaggeditstailwhenDorisapproached.AssoonasDorisputthedogdowninthekitchen,hermom,Mrs.Lacey,askedwherethedogcamefrom.Mr.Lacey,whowascleaninghisfingernailswithhispocketknifeatthetable,said,“Idon’tknowwhereitcamefrom,butIknowforsurewhereit’sgoing.”Dorishuggedthepuppyhardagainsther.Shesaidnothing.Becauseofthesnowyweather,Mr.Laceycouldn’ttakethepuppytotheshelterrightaway.So,itstayedinthebasement,andDorisfeditleftovers,eventhoughhermomdidn’twanttowastefood.Doristhoughtthepuppywasaroundsixmonthsoldandwouldbequitenoisysometimes.Surprisingly,thepuppybehavedwell,didn’tcryormaketroubleinthebasement,andonlyfollowedDorisupstairswhensheinvitedit.Dorisoftenfounditonthebasementstepslisteningtothekitchentalkandsmellingthefood.Shefeltthepuppywantedcompany.Evenafteraweek,Dorisdidn’tnamethedog,knowingherparentswouldn’tletherkeepit.Herfathermadesolittlemoneythatanypetswereoutofthequestion.Desperatetokeepthedog.Doristriedtoconvinceherparentsbypraisingthedog’sgoodbehaviorandexpressingherloveforit,butherparentsdidn’tgiveadefiniteanswer.Despiteherefforts,Dorissecretlywishedthebadweatherwouldnevergoaway,fearingthepuppy’sunavoidabletriptotheshelter.However,ninedaysafterthedoghadarrived,thesunwasshining.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dorisknewitwastimetosaygoodbyetothedog.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Dorisputherhandtohermouthandcouldn’tbelievewhatshehadheard._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一个寒冷的一月,一只被遗弃的小狗来到了Lacey家的小房子前。Doris发现了这只小狗,把它带回了家。尽管天气恶劣,但小狗在地下室安顿下来,Doris用剩饭喂它。尽管她的母亲不想浪费食物,但小狗表现得非常好,不吵不闹,只在Doris邀请时才上楼。Doris意识到小狗渴望陪伴,但因为家庭经济状况不允许养宠物,她知道不能留下小狗。尽管她试图说服父母,但他们没有给出明确的回答。当天气转晴,Doris知道是时候和小狗说再见了。然而,就在她父亲准备带小狗去收容所的时候,她的母亲出人意料地宣布他们可以留下小狗。这个决定让Doris感到惊喜和感激,小狗终于成为了Lacey家的一员。在原文中,有几处伏笔暗示了故事可能的发展方向,并在续写中得到了回应:1.伏笔:Doris的学校因为雪天关闭了,这让她有机会在家发现小狗。回应:在续写中,Doris有了更多时间和小狗相处,建立了深厚的感情。2.伏笔:Mr.Lacey提到了小狗的来历不明,但肯定知道它要去哪里,暗示了可能会被送到收容所。回应:续写中提到了Doris担心小狗被送到收容所,增加了故事的紧张感。3.伏笔:Doris没有给小狗起名字,因为她知道父母不会让她留下它。回应:续写中,尽管Doris努力说服父母,但他们没有明确表态,这增加了故事的不确定性。4.伏笔:小狗在地下室表现得非常好,没有制造麻烦。回应:续写中,小狗的乖巧行为最终赢得了Lacey家人的心,成为他们决定留下它的关键因素。5.伏笔:Doris对小狗的爱和她对小狗可能被送走的担忧。回应:续写中,Doris的爱和担忧得到了回应,她的父母最终决定留下小狗。6.伏笔:天气的转变,从雪天到阳光明媚。回应:续写中,天气的转变象征着故事情绪的转变,从悲伤和不确定性到喜悦和希望。在续写中,这些伏笔得到了回应,使得故事情感丰富,情节合理,同时也满足了读者对小狗命运的关心。续写要点第一段:Doris与小狗的告别-Doris意识到天气转晴意味着小狗即将被送往收容所。-她与小狗共度最后的时光,心中充满了不舍和悲伤。-Mr.Lacey准备带小狗离开,Doris紧紧拥抱小狗,试图抑制自己的情感。-小狗似乎也感受到了即将到来的分离,用尾巴摇摆和亲昵的舔舐来安慰Doris。第二段:意外的转机-正当Mr.Lacey要带小狗离开时,Mrs.Lacey出人意料地提出了留下小狗的建议。-Doris震惊于这突如其来的好消息,她的情感从绝望转为喜悦。-家庭经济状况的考虑被对小狗的爱和Doris的坚持所克服。-小狗最终成为Lacey家的一员,象征着家庭的扩展和爱的包容。读后续写Dorisknewitwastimetosaygoodbyetothedog.Recallingtheninedaysshespentwiththepuppy,amixtureofworriesandsadnesssweptoverDoris.However,thedogwaggeditstailanditdidn’tknowthecrueltruth.WhenDorishuggedthedogandwalkedtoherparents,shemadeonelastattempttoconvinceherparentstoletherkeepit.“Ireallywanttoraisethedog.IcanaccompanyitforalongtimeandIwilltakecareofit.Please!”.Mr.LaceyandhiswifeMamielookedateachotherandfinallyagreed,“OK,youwilltaketheresponsibilityforraisingit.”Dorisputherhandtohermouthandcouldn’tbelievewhatshehadheard.Overjoyedandspeechlesswithhappiness,sherushedtohugherparentsandexpressedhergratitude.ThenshenamedthedogTreasureandpreparedalittlehomeforit.Treasurewaggeditstailhappilyasifitknewthatitwasacceptedbythefamily.NowDorishadanewfriend.ShebeamedatTreasure,anticipatingthenewlifewiththefriend.ItwasonthatdaythatDorisrealizedtheloveandkindnesswouldmakeabigdifference.下水文1Dorisknewitwastimetosaygoodbyetothedog.Sheheldthepuppyclose,hereyesbrimmingwithtearsasshewhisperedsoftgoodbyes.Thesun'sraysstreamedthroughthewindow,castingawarmglowonthescene,yetitdidnothingtoalleviatethechillinDoris'sheart.Shehadgrownattachedtothelittlecreature,andthethoughtofpartingwayswasalmostunbearable.AsMr.Laceypreparedtotakethedogtotheshelter,Dorisclungtothelastmomentswiththepuppy,hersmallframeshakingwithquietsobs.Dorisputherhandtohermouthandcouldn'tbelievewhatshehadheard.Herfather,withagentlesmile,announcedthattheycouldkeepthedogafterall.Itseemedthatthepuppy'sgoodbehaviorandDoris'sunwaveringlovehadwonherparents'hearts.Theicethathadencasedtheirdecisionseemedtomeltawaywiththeweather,andthefamily'scollectivewarmthhadmaderoomforanewmember.Doris'stearsofsorrowtransformedintotearsofjoyassherealizedthatthepuppywouldnotbeleavingafterall,butwouldbecomeapermanentpartoftheirfamily,acompaniontosharethecoldwintersandthewarmsummerstocome.下水文2Dorisknewitwastimetosaygoodbyetothedog.Thesun'srayshadchasedawaythesnow,andwithit,theexcusetokeepthepuppyalittlelonger.Sheheldthesmall,shiveringbodyclose,breathinginthescentofthedogthathadbecomeacompanioninthecoldwinterdays.Herheartachedwiththethoughtofparting,butsheknewherfamily'ssituation.Thepuppydes
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