Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation？-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版）（学生版）

Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation？单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度度假＂三步五要素法＂写游记本单元主要话题是节日与假期，与本单元相关的写作题目可以与节假日里的旅游相结合。命题内容以游览为主，根据提示记叙在节假日里旅游的大致情况。写作时应注意游记的内容、格式以及事态的运用。内容一般从以下几方面着手：1.Wheredidyougo?2.Howwastheweather?3.Whatdidyoudo?4.Howwasthefood?5.Howwasthepeople?6.Howdidyoufeelaboutthetrip?写作步骤◆步骤一：在第一行写明日期（年月日与星期）和天气等信息。◆步骤二：正文用一般过去时态描述当天发生的事情。◆步骤三：在日记的最后描述自己的感受和体会。游记三个段落内容要点：I.何时与何人到何地；II.交通方式；天气；活动（美食、观光、拍照、购物...）；III.感受。【词汇积累】1diary(n.日记;记事簿)-(复数)diaries2bored(adj.厌倦的,烦闷的)-boring(adj.没趣的,令人厌倦的)3enjoy(v.享受······的乐趣;喜爱)-enjoyable(adj.有乐趣的;令人愉快的)-enjoyment(n.乐趣;乐事)4activity(n.活动)-(复数)activities5decide(v.决定;选定)-decision(n.决定;抉择)6build(v.建筑;建造)-building(n.建筑物;房子)-builder(n.建筑者)7trade(n.贸易v.做买卖;从事贸易)-trader(n.商人)8wonder(v.想知道;琢磨n.惊叹;惊奇)-wonderful(adj.精彩的;绝妙的)-wonderfully(adv.精彩地)9different(adj.不同的)-difference(n.差别;差异)10.like(v.喜欢n.喜好;爱好)-(反义词)dislike［v.&n.不喜爱(的事物);厌恶(的事物)］11below(prep.&adv.在······下面;到······下面)-(反义词)above[prep.&adv.在(·····)上面］12hunger(n.饥饿;渴望)-hungry(adj.饥饿的;渴望得到)【句式积累】总体概括ThebestplacethatIhaveevervisitedisBeijing替换地名.IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentslastsummer.我去过的最好的地方是北京。去年夏天我和父母去了北京。Itisbettertotraveltenthousandmilesthantoreadtenthousandbooks.Today,I’dliketosharemysummerholidaywithyou.

读万卷书，不如行万里路。今天，我想和大家分享我的暑假。ItwassunnyonMay1st.Iwentonatripwithmyparents替换同行人.5月1日，天气晴朗。我和父母去旅行了。OnthefirstdayofNationalDay,IwentforatriptoShanghaiwithmyparents.国庆节的第一天，我和父母去上海旅游。MyfamilyandIwenttoXi’anduringtheMayDayholiday.Everythingwasgreat.我和家人在五一假期去了西安。一切都很棒。IamsoexcitedtotellyousomethinginterestingIhaveexperiencedinsomeplace替换地名.我很高兴告诉你我在某地有趣的经历。Ihadagoodtimewithmyfamilylastsummerholiday.去年暑假我和家人玩得很开心。旅游活动Wewenttherebytrain/plane...Westayedthereforfivedays.Wevisitedsomeplacesofinterest.我们是坐火车/飞机去的...我们在那里住了五天。我们参观了一些名胜古迹。Theflowersonthemountainwereverybeautiful.Itwasnotcoldorhotthosedays.Ilikedtheweatherverymuch.山上的花很漂亮。那几天不冷不热。我非常喜欢这里的天气。Therewasalwayssunshineandsoftwind,whichmadeussocomfortable.总是有阳光和柔和的风，这使我们如此舒适。4.Itwasanexcellentvacation.Iwenttherebytrainandmytraintripwasrelaxing.Theweatherwassunnyandwarm.这是一个极好的假期。我是坐火车去的，我的火车之旅很轻松。天气晴朗温暖。5.Onthefirstday,...Onthesecondday,...Onthethirdday,...6.Wesawbeautifulgreenhills,cleanwaterandsoon.我们看到了美丽的青山绿水等等。7.ThefoodinChangchunisverydelicious.Peoplearealsoveryfriendly/kindandwarm.长春的食物很好吃。人们非常友好和热情。8.ChangchunliesinthenorthofChinaanditisareallybeautifulplace.长春位于中国的北部，它是一个非常美丽的地方。9.WewentbacktoChangchunbyplane.Itwasfasterandmorecomfortablethanbytrain.我们坐飞机回长春。比坐火车更快，更舒适。10.Weenjoyedthetripandatelotsoflocalsnacks.Whatawonderfultripwehad!我们很喜欢这次旅行，吃了很多当地的小吃。我们的旅行真是太棒了！11.IclimbedtheWestHill.Itwasalittledifficulttoclimb,butIwasveryhappy.我爬上了西山。爬起来有点难度，不过还是很开心。12.Wetookmanyphotosthere.Welivedinafive-starhotelatnight.我们在那里拍了很多照片。晚上我们住在五星级酒店。13.Myparentstookmetotasteallkindsofdeliciousseafood.

父母带我去品尝了各种美味的海鲜。旅游感受1.Myvacationtherewasreallyexciting.Xi’anisreallyanancientcitywithalonghistoryandIplantovisitthereagain!

我在那里的假期真的很令人兴奋。西安真的是一座历史悠久的古城，我打算再去一次！2.I’minterestedinthetraditionsindifferentplaces.I’mlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.我对不同地方的传统很感兴趣。我期待着再次去那里。3.Weweretiredbutreallyhappy.Wehadagreattime.

我们很累，但真的很开心。我们度过了一段美好时光。4.WehadawonderfultimeinChangchun.Ilookforwardtogoingthereagain./Ihopetovisitthereagainsomeday.

我们在长春度过了一段美好的时光。我期待着再去那里。/我希望有一天再去那儿。【谚语积累】1.Readtenthousandbooksandtraveltenthousandmiles.读万卷书，行万里路。2.Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行，始于足下。3.Abosomfriendafarbringsadistantlandnear.海内存知己，天涯若比邻。【万能写作模板】模板叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构，模板如下：介绍景观介绍景观介绍旅行经历总结旅行感受…isoneofthemostbeautifulsceneryspots.Ivolunteeredaguidetointroduce…ItwasabusyandtireddaybutIwasveryhappy.写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式1.

＂开门见山＂式开头

一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到＂开门见山＂，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。

对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如＂A

Trip

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Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头可以是：Lastmonth,myfamilywenttoHuangshanbytrain.Ittookustenhourstogetthere.Whatalongandtiringjourney!Weweretiredbutthebeautifulsceneryexcitedus.2.回忆性开头在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如neverforget(永远无法忘记)、remember(记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad(难过的)...如＂ATriptoHuangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头还以这样写：IwillneverforgetmyfirsttriptoHuangshan.或ItwasreallyanunforgettableexperienceIhad.3.疑问性开头在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如＂PlantingTrees(种树)＂的开头可以是：Haveyoueverplantedtrees?Don’tyouthinkplantingtreesis...再如＂TravelingAbroad(出国之旅)＂的开头可以是：Ifyouhaveanopportunitytotravelabroad,whynotconsiderSingapore?4.倒叙式开头在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如＂CatchingThieves(捉贼)＂的开头可以这样写：Ilayinbedinthehospital.Ismiledatmyfriendseventhoughmylegshurt.Doyouwanttoknowwhathappenedtome?Letmetellyou.It’sa...story.写一篇游记。写作提示：时间、地点、人物、出行方式、游览顺序、感受。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】时间、地点、人物LastweekIwithmyparentswenttoBeijingforaholiday.出行方式、游览顺序ItismyfirsttimetovisitBeijing.ThecityisthedreamcityforalltheChinese.IttookusaboutfivehoursfromChangchuntoBeijingbytrain.Theweatherwassunnyandwarmduringmyvacation.Onthefirstday,myfamilyvisitedtheGreatWallandTian’anmenSquare.IwassoexcitedwhenIclimbedTheGreatWall.ThenextdaywewenttothePalaceMuseumandWangfujing.Iboughtsomegiftsformyfriends.HowhappyIam!WehadBeijingDuckonthelastday.Itwasreallydelicious.感受WereallyenjoyedthistripandIwilltakealongtourtoBeijingnexttime.一、写出下列单词1._______________adj.厌倦的；烦闷的2._______________pron.某人3._______________n.日记；记事簿4._______________adj.有乐趣的；令人愉快的5._______________n.活动6._______________v.决定；选定7._______________v.&n.尝试；设法；努力8._______________n.鸟9._______________n.自行车；脚踏车10._______________n.建筑物；房子11._______________n.商人12._______________v.想知道；琢磨13._______________n.差别；差异14._______________n.顶部；表面15._______________v.等待；等候16._______________n.伞；雨伞17._______________adj.湿的；潮湿的；下雨的18._______________prep.&adv.在……下面；到……下面19._______________adj.&adv.足够的（地）；充足的（地）；充分的（地）20._______________adj.饥饿的重点短语1.___________________________去度假2.___________________________待在家3.___________________________参加夏令营4.___________________________相当多；不少5.___________________________当然6.___________________________大多数时间7.___________________________玩得愉快8.___________________________记日记9.___________________________给……的感觉；感受到10.___________________________因为11.___________________________在过去12.___________________________乘火车13.___________________________到达14.____________________________决定做某事 15.____________________________做一个决定 16.___________________________尽力做某事 17.________________________等待 18.________________________足够的钱 19._________________________另外两个小时 20.___________________________与…相同 三、重点句子1.很久不见了。_______________________________2.在那里我们拍了大量的照片。_______________________________3.我给父母买了一些东西，但是什么也没给自己买。_______________________________4.我真的没有看到我喜欢的东西。_______________________________5._______________________________似乎仍然没有人觉得无聊。6._______________________________天气晴朗炎热，因此我们决定到我们旅馆附近的沙滩去。7._______________________________我感觉自己就像是一只鸟儿。8._______________________________我想知道过去这里的生活是什么样子的。9._______________________________一天的差异是多么大啊！10._______________________________我的双腿很累，我想停下来。四、连句成文上个月2号(8月2号)，周五，天气晴朗，你和父母去北京观光旅游，游览了北京天安门广场、紫禁城和长城等几个地方，玩得非常开心。要求：1.写一篇英语日记，注意格式；2.词数不少于70。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________佳句欣赏与模仿：1.ItismyfirsttimetovisittheGreatWall.【one'sfirsttimetodosth.意为“某人第一次做某事”】这是他第一次赢得了这个比赛。________________________________________________________________________2.Ialwaysgotoschoolwithmysisteronweekdays.【goto...意为“去……地方”，with介词表示“伴随，跟着”】上个月，我和我的家人去了贵州度假。________________________________________________________________________3.Intheevening,wewenttothebeachandenjoyedourselvesthere.【and连接并列的谓语】下午，我们去爬山了，在那里我们欣赏到一些特别的东西。________________________________________________________________________4.ThebookissointerestingthatIdecidetoreaditagain.【so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”】他是如此好的一个老师，以至于我们都喜欢他。________________________________________________________________________（一）1．假如你是LiMing，你第一次收到美国笔友Paul的来信，信中他提了一些问题想要了解你。请你仔细阅读下面的邮件，针对邮件中的问题进行回复。要求：语言通畅得体，词数80左右。DearLiMing,It’ssoexcitingtobeyourpenpal.Wehaven’tseeneachother,wouldyouliketoshareyourlifewithme?Whatdoyouusuallydoinyourfreetime?Howoftendoyoudothem?Whichactivitydoyoulikebestandwhy?AsIknow,youhada7-dayholidayinOctober.Whatdidyoudoandhowwasyourholiday?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!PaulDearPaul,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing2．寒假即将来临，你一定想做一些有意义的事情来度过一个轻松、愉快的假期，例如锻炼放松，拜访亲友，陪父母聊天、做家务，认识更多的人等等！请以“MyWinterVacation”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。参考词汇：knowledge知识socialactivities社会活动提示：1.Whereareyougoingtospendyourwintervacation?2.Whatareyougoingtodoforyourself,yourfamilyorothers?要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.词数80个左右；3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称。MyWinterVacationThewintervacationiscoming.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．三年初中生活即将结束，近期毕业生QQ群里正在谈论关于即将来临的暑假活动安排,请你根据QQ群里采集的信息以及你自己的想法，写一篇英语短文。注意事项：1.词数100个左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。RecentlywehadadiscussiononhowtospendourcomingsummerholidayintheQQgroup.Herearetheresults.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．在新学期开始之际，校英语报发起了题为“AWonderfulVacation”的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的暑假中一次难忘的经历，向校报投稿。内容提示：l.Wheredidyougo?2.Whatdidyoudothere?3.Howdidyoulikeit?要求：90词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．三年的初中学习生活就要结束，暑假即将来临。你打算过一个什么样的暑假呢？放松的(relaxing)？忙碌的(busy)？有意义的(meaningful)？……你准备在这个暑假做些什么？(吃喝玩乐？学习？做志愿者？旅行？……)请你以MySummerVacation为题写一篇短文，说说你的计划和安排。写作要求：1、先填好标题，再围绕标题展开作文；2、100词左右；3、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名；4、短文内容与标题相符，文章逻辑结构合理，字、词、句、语法使用正确。My________SummerVacation_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1.（2022·广东深圳·统考中考真题）假定你是李华，你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频，打算做成视频日志（vlog），参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。内容包括：1.海边活动：下午：①沙滩排球；②……；晚上：搭帐篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享会。2.活动感言。注意：1.词数80左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。参考词汇：冲浪surf

帐篷tentHi,everyone!IamLiHua.It’smygreatpleasuretopresentmyvlogtoyou.LastSaturday,wewenttotheseasidetocelebrateourgraduation.Intheafternoon,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Somuchformyvideo.Ihopeyouhaveenjoyedit.Thankyou.2.（2022·宁夏·统考中考真题）暑假临近，你有什么计划吗？你校英语社团正在开展以“MySummerVacationPlan”为主题的征文活动。请根据思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的暑假计划。要求：1.文中须包含思维导图中的所有信息；2.补充至少两条计划；3.合理增加细节，以使行文连贯。注意：1.词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。提示词语：takepartin参加socialpracticeactivities社会实践活动MySummerVacationPlanThesummervacationiscoming.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（2018·四川泸州·统考中考真题）暑期将至，我们都应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示，以“MySummerVacationPlan”为题，用英语写一篇短文。要点提示：1.放松自己：听音乐，看电影，锻炼身体等；2.陪伴家人：旅行，散步，与父母交流等；3.做志愿者：看望老人，赠送礼物，为他们唱歌等；4.努力学习：阅读书籍，复习知识，为以后学习做准备等；5.个人观点：……。要求：1.词数110词左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）；2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；3.字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅；4.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。参考词语：relaxmyself,spendtimewith…,volunteer,review,prepareforMySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________