Unit 9 Can you come to my party？-【同步写作课】2023-2024学年八年级英语上册单元写作深度指导（人教版） （教师版）

Unit9Canyoucometomyparty?单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度应用文邀请信本单元的话题是“邀请”，涉及邀请他人参加聚会或活动或回复他人的邀请信。无论是收到哪种邀请信都要复信，明确表示接受与否。而且无论接受与否都要对邀请者表示感谢。接受邀请的回信一般包含以下内容：首先感谢对方的邀请，并重述邀请信中的主要内容；然后愉快地表示接受邀请，并简要说明自己的打算；最后表示期待赴会和与对方见面的心情。谢绝邀请的回信一般包含以下几方面的内容：首先还是要对对方的邀请表示感谢;然后具体说明自己无法接受邀请的原因，并对无法出席表示遗憾；最后表达自己的祝愿，即祝愿自己未能参加的会议或者活动能够顺利进行。邀请信开头简要说明活动信息，并邀请对方问候

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写信目的主体介绍邀请的具体事项活动的时间、地点、内容（主题）、活动的意义等细节信息。结尾希望对方接受邀请，表示感谢，期待回复希望参加、表达感谢期待回复“三步法”写提出／拒绝邀请类作文提出邀请类作文：一、解释：为什么邀请二、邀请：提出邀请，告知时间、地点、活动内容三、嘱托和期待拒绝邀请类作文：一、感谢二、婉拒三、解释原因词汇积累1.invite邀请2.accept接受3.refuse拒绝 4.preparation准备5.haveanexam参加考试 6.opening开幕式；落成典礼7.guest客人；宾客 8.reply回答；答复9.havetheflu患感冒10.event大事；公开活动11.beavailable=befree有空的，空闲的12.surprised惊奇的；感觉意外的13.preparefor为……做准备14.helpout(帮助……)分担工作、解决难题15.hangout闲逛 16.lookafter照料;照顾17.turndown拒绝 18.takeatrip去旅行19.lookforwardto盼望;期待20.hearfrom接到(某人的)信、电话等21.anothertime其他时间；别的时间句型积累1.Tosaygoodbyetohim,wewillorganizeaparty.为了和他告别，我们将要组织一场聚会。2.Attheparty,youcanenjoyallkindsoffoodaswellasmusic.3.Wehopethatyoucanacceptourinvitation.我们希望你能够接收我们的邀请。4.Pleaseletmeknowifyoucancome.如果你来了请让我知晓。5.I’dlovetogotothemuseumwithyou,butI’mnotfreethisSaturday.6.Samisn’tleavinguntilnextWednesday.萨姆直到下周三才离开。7.Iamsorry,Imuststudyforamathtest.我很抱歉，我必须要为数学考试做准备。8.She’snotavailable.Shemustgotothedoctor.她没空。她必须去看医生。9.I’msadtoseehergo.看到她离开我很难过10.Let’shaveasurprisepartyforhernextFridaythe28th!我们在（本月）28日下周五为她举办一场惊喜聚会吧！Iwouldliketoinviteyoutotheopeningofournewlibrary.我想邀请你们参加我们新图书馆的落成典礼。12.Ialreadyhaveagreatideaabouthowtodothat.我已经有怎样做它的好主意了！◆开头句①Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetoyourbirthdayparty.②I'dlovetogobutIcan't./I'dlovetocometotheparty，butI'mnotavailable.③Iwouldliketoinviteyoutomybirthdayparty.◆中间句①I'msorry.I'mnotavailable.Ihavetolookaftermygrandma.②IhaveanexamonMondaysoImustprepareforit.③Toshowhowmuchwe'llmissher，I'llhaveasurprisepartyforheratmyhomethisSaturdayevening.④IalsoneedtostudyforthecomingEnglishtest.◆结尾句①Thankyouforinvitingme.②Ihopeyoucanhaveagoodtime.③Letmeknowifyouwanttocome.④I'mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.【谚语积累】1.Loveme，lovemydog.爱屋及乌。2.Togiveisbetterthantoreceive.给予胜于接受。【万能写作模板】Dear________,________(开门见山地点、活动)，Itwouldbepleasanttohaveyouhere(表达邀请愿望).Willyougivemethepleasureofyourcompany(正式发出邀请)？Duringtheparty/conference,wewillhavealotsofactivitiesyouwillbeinterestedin(开始介绍活动内容).First,__________(介绍举行的活动一).Second,_________(介绍举行的活动二).Iknow/believeyoubeveryinterestedin_________(引出受邀请人参加的理由).First/Foronething________(希望受邀人参加的理由一)，Second/Foranother__________(希望受邀人参加的理由二)。

Theparty/conferencewouldnotbecompletewithoutyou(总结受邀人参加的必要性).Theparty/conferencewillbeginat________(提出活动的地点).Itispossibleforustomeetat________(提出具体约定时间).Wedohopeyoucancome________(再次发出邀请).

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LiHua假如你是一名美国学生Danny，你的同学李丽是一名来自中国的交换生，她在你们学校为期一年的学习生活即将结束。为此，你打算本周六晚上在你家给她举办一场送别聚会。请根据以下要点提示，在你们班级群里留言，邀请你们班其他同学参加本次聚会。提示：1.对李丽的评价；2.举办此次聚会的原因；3.希望同学们来参加聚会并表演节目(putonashow)。要求：80词左右。◆◆审题指导1.文体：邀请函；2.时态：以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；3.注意事项：注意段落布局和恰当使用if引导的条件状语从句或连接词来增加得分点。◆◆思路点拨◆◆组句成篇Hi，everyone，YoumustknowourclassmateLiLi.Inmyeyes，she'ssonice.Shestudiesveryhard.Andshe'salwaysgladtohelpothers.IlearnedmoreaboutChineseculturefromher.Sadly，she'sgoingbacktoChina.Toshowhowmuchwe'llmissher，I'llhaveasurprisepartyforheratmyhomethisSaturdayevening.Canyoucome？Ifyoucan，pleasehelpwiththesethings：Thinkofsomegamestoplayandifyoucouldputonsomekindsofshowsattheparty，thatwouldbegreat.Letmeknowifyouwanttocome.I'mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.词汇积累(一)拒绝邀请时说明理由的动词短语1．准备考试________________2．看医生________________3．得了流感________________4．帮我的父母________________5．见我的朋友________________6．太多的作业________________7．骑自行车________________8．为考试学习________________9．去看电影________________10．和……打网球________________11．帮助某人做某事________________12．在某方面帮助某人________________13．去旅行________________14．照顾；照料________________(二)时间短语1．在星期六________________2．这个周末________________3．在这个月末________________4．去年秋天________________5．放学后________________6．后天________________7．下一次________________8．前天________________9．到下周五为止________________10．28日，周五________________(三)其他短语1．有空的________________2．为……感谢________________3．多好的主意啊！________________4．一个惊喜派对________________5．乔迁派对________________6．招待食物与饮料________________7．期待做某事________________8．收到某人的来信________________9．邀请某人做某事/到某地________________10．想要做某事________________11．直到……才……________________12．计划做某事________________13．有空做某事________________14．拒绝________________15．外出闲逛________________16．书面形式回复________________17．经过努力，成功；胜利________________18．来参加我的聚会________________二、句子积累(一)请用①Canyou…？②Wouldyouliketo…？发出邀请；请用①Sure，I'dloveto.②Sure，thatsoundsgreat.接受邀请；请用①Sorry，I'mnotavailable/free.Imay/might/haveto/must/amgoingto…②I'dloveto，butI'mafraidIcan't.Imay/might/haveto/must/amgoingto…有礼貌地拒绝邀请。请根据英文提示，写出简单的邀请话语、接受话语、礼貌拒绝话语及理由陈述。1．Inviting：________________________________________________________________________(can/gotothelibrary)Accepting：________________________________________________________________________Refusing：________________________________________________________________________Reason：________________________________________________________________________(takeatriptoWenzhouwithfamily)2．Inviting：________________________________(wouldliketo/birthdayparty)Accepting：________________________________________________________________________Refusing：________________________________________________________________________Reason：________________________________________________________________________(havetheflu，gotothedoctor)(二)佳句欣赏与模仿1．Whatagreatidea！【Whata/an＋adj.＋可数名词感叹句；多么……】多么棒的安排！________________________________________________________________________2．I'msadtoseehergo，andthisisthebestwaytosay“Thankyouandgoodbye.”【thebestwaytodosth.做某事的最好方式】这个派对是庆祝她生日的最好方式。________________________________________________________________________3．Thankssomuchforplanningthis.【Thanksfordoing感谢某人做某事】非常感谢你邀请我。________________________________________________________________________4．Toshowhowmuchwe'regoingtomissher，let'shaveasurprisepartyforhernextFridaythe28th.【toshow为了表达……】为了表达我们多么感激她，让我们为她举办一次惊喜聚会吧。________________________________________________________________________5．BringMs.Steentothepartywithouttellinghersothatshecanbesurprised.【withoutdoing不做某事；sothat因此】悄悄地为贝蒂做个生日蛋糕，因此她肯定很开心。________________________________________________________________________6．I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.【lookforwardtodoingsth.期待做某事】我期待着能在派对上见到你。________________________________________________________________________三、汉译英。1.他爸爸昨晚直到晚上11点才回来。____________________________________________________________________________2.谢谢你请我吃饭。____________________________________________________________________________3.你能本周五晚上六点顺便到我家里来讨论一下那个计划吗？____________________________________________________________________________4.看到她离开，我很伤心，这次晚会是表达谢意和告别的最佳方式。____________________________________________________________________________5.我们一家将在这个月底去武汉旅游，看望我的姑姑和姑父。____________________________________________________________________________6.由于下着大雨，我们不得不待在家里为数学考试而学习。____________________________________________________________________________7.为了表明我们将会多么想念她，让我们在下周五晚上给她开一场惊喜聚会吧！____________________________________________________________________________8.我期盼收到你们所有人的来信。____________________________________________________________________________9.把斯蒂恩女士带到聚会来而不要告诉她，这样能使她感到惊喜。____________________________________________________________________________10.如果你需要我的帮助，请让我知道。____________________________________________________________________________【答案】一、词汇积累(一)拒绝邀请时说明理由的动词短语1.prepareforanexam2.gotothedoctor3.havetheflu4.helpmyparents5.meetmyfriends6.havetoomuchhomework7.gobikeriding8.studyforatest9.gotothemovies10.playtenniswithsb.11.helpsb.dosth.12.helpsb.withsth.13.takeatrip14.takecareof/lookafter(二)时间短语1.onSaturday2.thisweekend3.attheendofthismonth4.lastautumn/fall5.afterschool6.thedayaftertomorrow7.nexttime8．thedaybeforeyesterday9.bynextFriday10.Friday，28th(三)其他短语1.befree/available2.thanksfor3.Whatagreatidea！4.asurpriseparty5.ahousewarmingparty6.servefoodanddrinks7.lookforwardtodoingsth.8.hearfromsb.9.invitesb.todosth./tosp.10．wouldliketodosth.11.not…until…12.plantodosth.13.befreetodosth.14.turndown15.hangout16.replyinwriting17．makeetomyparty二、句子积累1.Canyougotothelibrarywithme？Sure，I'dloveto./Sure，thatsoundsgreat.Sorry，I'mnotavailable.IamgoingtotakeatriptoWenzhouwithmyfamily.2.Wouldyouliketocometomybirthdayparty？Sure，I'dloveto.I'dloveto，butI'mafraidIcan't.IhadthefluandImustgotothedoctor.(二)佳句欣赏与模仿1.Whatagreatplan！2.Thepartyisthebestwaytocelebrateherbirthday.3.Thankssomuchforinvitingme.4.Toshowhowmuchweappreciateher，let'shaveasurprisepartyforher.5.MakeabirthdaycakeforBettywithouttellinghersothatshemustbehappy.6.I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyouattheparty.三、汉译英。1.Hisfatherdidn'tcomebackuntil11:00p.m.lastnight.2.Thankyouforasking/invitingmetodinner.3.Canyoucomeovertomyhousetodiscusstheplanat6:00p.m.thisFridaynight?4.Iamsadtoseeherleave/go,andthispartyisthebestwaytosay“thankyouandgoodbye".5.MyfamilyistakingatriptoWuhanattheendofthismonthtovisitmyauntanduncle.6.Asit'sraininghard,wehavetostayathomeandstudyforamathtest.7.Toshowhowmuchwearegoingtomissher,let'shaveasurprisepartyforhernextFridayafternoon!8.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouall.9.BringMs.Steentothepartywithouttellinghersothatshecanbesurprised.10.Pleaseletmeknowifyouneedmyhelp.（一）1．假如你是Becky，你要邀请你的同学Rita参加你的生日聚会，请根据下面表格提示信息，完成这封邀请函。WhatBecky’sbirthdaypartyWhereBecky’shouseonNanjingStreetWhen2:30p.m.—5:00p.m.FridayHowtheNo.5orNo.10busPhonenumber8456258要求：1.条理清楚，语意连贯、通顺，格式正确；2.80词左右。InvitationDearRita,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Becky【答案】Onepossibleversion:InvitationDearRita,IamgoingtohavemyfourteenthbirthdaypartyatmyhouseonNanjingStreet.Ithinkitwouldbegreatifyoucanjoinus.Thepartyisgoingtolastfrom2:30p.m.to5:00p.m.onFriday.YoucantaketheNo.5orNo.10bustocomehere.LiHuiisgoingtocome.Ithinkyoumustbehappytomeethim.Ifyoucan’tfindmyhouse,pleasecallmeat8456258.Comeandhaveagoodtime!Yours,Becky【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但写作时要按邀请函的格式写。内容是根据所给的材料，以Becky的身份，写一封邀请函邀请你的同学Rita参加你的生日聚会。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；在邀请函中要介绍此处邀请函的目的，举办生日的时间和地点以及乘车路线和联系方式等。（二）2．假设你是李华，你们学校将举行中国传统文化节(ChineseTraditionalCultureFestival)活动。届时活动会同步进行网络直播，你打算邀请你的外国朋友Peter观看。请你根据以下要点及要求，给他写一封英文电子邮件。要点：1.时间：4月30日的下午2点至5点；2.直播网址：/ccf；3.活动内容：京剧表演、武术表演、汉服秀等；4.……要求：1.不少于70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：表演performance；汉服秀HanfushowDearPeter,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?TherewillbeaChineseTraditionalCultureFestivalinourschoolonApril30th.Itwilllastforthreehoursfrom2pmto5pm.TherewillbeBeijingOperaperformances.Amasterwillbeinvitedtoplaywushu,andIexpecttheshowverymuch.What’smore,somestudentswillputonaHanfushow.Alltheactivitieswillbeonlineatthesametime.Youcanenjoythemat/ccf.It’sagoodchanceforyoutolearnmoreaboutChineseculture.Ihopeyouwillenjoytheactivitiesonlinethen.Yours,LiHua[总体分析]①题材：本文为一篇应用文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍中国传统文化节的时间；第二步，介绍中国传统文化节具体的活动内容；第三步，告诉Peter文化节的直播网址，并邀请他观看。[亮点词汇]①what’smore此外②puton上演③atthesametime同时[高分句型]①TherewillbeaChineseTraditionalCultureFestivalinourschoolonApril30th.（therebe句型）②Ihopeyouwillenjoytheactivitiesonlinethen.（省略that的宾语从句）（三）3．假如你是John，你将举行一个生日聚会，你想邀请好朋友们来参加，请根据下面的内容提示写一封邀请函给他们。80词左右。内容提示：1.生日聚会的时间：2月3日周五，下午6点开始；2.生日聚会的地点：在家（位于长街2号）；3.生日聚会的主要活动：大餐，游戏，生日蛋糕。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dearfriends,Tocelebratemybirthday,IamgoingtohaveabirthdaypartyatmyhomeonFriday,February3rd.Iwouldliketoinviteallofyoutocometotheparty.Thepartywillstartatsixp.m.Whenthepartystarts,wewillhaveabigmealfirst.Thenwewillplaygames.Atlast,therewillbeabirthdaycakewithcandlesforeveryone.Myhouseisat2LongStreet.Pleasemakesurethatyouallcanmakeitontime.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,John【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求考生根据提示的要点，写一封邀请函，邀请好朋友们来参加自己的生日聚会，属于书信作文。2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般将来时为主，以第三人称为辅来叙述。写作时紧扣要点提示，交代清楚聚会的时间、地点、邀请对象以及主要活动，最后表达自己的盛情。行文格式正确，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。（四）4．假如你是LiPing，请根据以下写作要点写一封80词左右的email，向你的朋友Tom说明自己不能去参加他的生日宴会。写作要点：1.感谢邀请；2.道歉，说明你不能去参加他的生日宴会。3.简要说明你不能参加的理由：(1)奶奶卧病在床需要人照顾；(2)父母出差要到香港下个月才能回来；(3)自己的英语不是很好，英语考试即将来临，要为英语考试准备，多做听力练习；4.告诉Tom你感到十分抱歉，请他见谅。祝他生日快乐！写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名；2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清楚；4.至少80词。（不含已写出的英文）DearTom,Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetoyourbirthdayparty.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BestWishes!Yours,LiPing【答案】OnepossibleversionDearTom,Thankyouverymuchforinvitingmetoyourbirthdayparty.I’dlovetogobutIcan’t.Ihavetolookaftermygrandmabecausesheisillinbed.AndmyparentsareoutonbusinessinHongKong.Theyarecomingbacknextmonth.Also,myEnglishisnotsogood.Imustdomorelisteningpractice.IneedtostudyformycomingEnglishexam.I’mverysorrythatIcan’tgotoyourparty.Thankyouforinvitingme.Ihopeyoucanhaveagoodtime.Happybirthday!BestWishes!Yours,LiPing【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作文体是邮件。在写作时应承接邮件开头，按照邮件的格式来写；首先是称呼；然后是正文内容，正文包含三个方面的内容：感谢对方的邀请，拒绝对方的邀请，叙述拒绝的理由；结尾告诉对方自己无法参加的歉意以及对对方的祝福；最后落款，署名。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；按照邮件的格式叙述内容；表达拒绝别人的邀请时，语言表达要委婉，态度要温和；叙述拒绝的理由时，层次分明，条理清楚，内容得当；表达歉意时，诚恳真诚。（五）5．假如你是来自美国的丹尼(Danny)，你的中国朋友孙丽即将结束为期一年的交换生生活。为此，你打算周六晚上在你家为她举办一场送别聚会。请根据以下写作要点，在你们班级群里留言，邀请你班同学参加本次聚会。写作要点：1.对孙丽的评价；2.举办此次聚会的原因；3.希望同学们来参加聚会并表演节目(putonashow)。写作要求：90词左右；格式已给出，不计入总词数。Hieveryone,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Danny【答案】参考范文Hi,everyone,YoumustknowourclassmateSunLi.Inmyeyes,she’ssonice.Shestudiesveryhard.Andshe’salwaysreadytohelpothers.IlearnedmoreaboutChineseculturefromher.Sadly,she'sgoingbacktoChina.ToshowhowmuchI'llmissher,I'llhaveapartyforheratmyhomethisSaturdayevening.Canyoucome?Ifyoucan,pleasehelpwiththesethings:thinkofsomegamestoplayandifyoucouldputonsomekindsofshowsattheparty,thatwouldbegreat.Danny【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时按留言格式写。在写作时根据汉语提示的要点，在班级群里留言，邀请同学们参加本次聚会。2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称为主来写留言内容；时态采用一般现在时来评价孙丽，采用一般将来时来邀请同学们参加聚会；写留言时力求语言准确，描述聚会的原因、时间、地点和过程等需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。（一）（2022·广西梧州·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David很喜欢春联。正巧你市将于6月28日举行春联艺术展，你想邀请他同去，请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.春联的寓意和相关习俗；2.艺术展的内容展览品、体验活动.；3.艺术展的时间、地点。注意：1.文中必须包括以上内容，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息；3.词数不少于80开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：theSpringFestivalcouplets春联

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Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearDavid,How’sitgoing?SpringFestivalcoupletsarealsocalledspringstickers.Theancientsputuptheword“Yichun”onthebeginningofspring,andthengraduallydevelopedintospringcouplets,expressingthegoodwishesoftheChineseworkingpeopletowardoffevilspirits,eliminatedisasters,welcomegoodfortune.OurcitywillholdanartexhibitionofSpringFestivalcoupletsinthestadiumonJune28.Inthisexhibition,youcanenjoytheexhibits,experiencetheactivityofputtingupSpringFestivalcouplets,andfeeltheatmosphereofChineseNewYear.Ifyoucancome,youwillbeveryhappy.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以李华的名义，写一篇电子邮件邀请自己的英国朋友David一起去参加春联艺术展。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；人称以第三人称和第二人称为主；文章可分为三段式：第一段承接上文，具体介绍春联的寓意和相关习俗。第二段介绍春联艺术展的相关信息，包括内容、时间和地点。最后一段文章已给。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，正确运用好几种时态。（二）（2022·辽宁盘锦·中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校将组织一次主题为“用行动温暖世界”的志愿者活动，活动地点在养老院。你打算邀请你校的交换生Peter参加，请你用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间、地点、内容以及需要做什么准备。写作要求：（1）内容包含以上信息，词数80—100；（2）文中已给出内容，不计入总词数；（3）语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（4）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。DearPeter,How’sitgoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusforthevolunteeractivity“Actsmaketheworldwarm”.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,How’sitgoing?I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusforthevolunteeractivity“Actsmaketheworldwarm”.Wearegoingtoorganizetheactivityattheoldpeople’shomeinourneighborhoodnextFridayafternoon.We’llmeetatthegateofourschoolat8:00am.Assoonaswereachtheoldpeople’shome,we’llhelptheoldtocleantheirroomsfirst.Thenwe’llhaveatalkwiththem.We’lltellthemsomethinginterestingsothattheycanfeelhappyandcomfortable.Atlast,therewillbeatalentshow.Someclassmateswillsingsongs,danceandplaygameswiththem.Besides,remembertotakeacameratotakephotosandyoushouldpreparesomethingthatyouwanttogivethem.I’msureyoucanlearnalot.I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件，要求以李华的名义给Peter写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加学校组织的志愿者活动，需要将活动的时间、地点、内容以及准备事项一一列出。2.写作指导：文章以第一人称为主，时态主要为一般将来时，注意主谓一致问题。写作时注意按要点分段叙述，第一段介绍活动的时间、地点；第二段介绍活动的安排及准备事项；最后一段作为结束语。写作时应注意英语句式结构的特点，语法应符合英语规范，用词准确。（三）（2021·广西柳州·中考真题）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“ALettertoMyParents”的短文，用于投稿。你的感谢父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你你的决心努力学习你的祝愿祝愿父母健康快乐注意：1.词数70左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：感谢某人.....thanksb.for...养育raise做饭cookfood生病besick信任trust关心careabout个人感受personalfeeling处于困难中beintrouble健康的healthyALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad,I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:ALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad,I’mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.Firstofall,Iwanttothankyouforraisingme.IthankyouforcookingformeeverydayandtakingcareofmewhenI’msick.Iwouldalsoliketothankyouforyourtrustandcareaboutmypersonalfeelings.YouencouragedmewhenIwasintrouble.SoIhavetostudyhardtorepayyou.Atthesametime,Iwishyoukeephealthyandhappy.Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇给材料的书信作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写一篇题为“ALettertoMyParents”的短文，来感恩父母。注意要点齐全。2.写作指导：短文主要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。文章开头和结尾已给出，也给出了相关要点的词汇，在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。注意保证语法正确，无单词的拼写错误。（四）（2021·湖北黄石·中考真题）Asanoldsayinggoes,“Atruefriendreachesforyourhandandtouchesyourheart.”假如你叫李华，在你的初中学习生涯中，一定有许多朋友给了你不少帮助。在毕业之际，请给你的好友李雷写一封感谢信。要点：1.感谢他（她）对你的帮助。2.他（她）是如何帮助你的。要求：1.请结合具体事例，适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯。2.文中不能出现与本人相关信息。3.80词左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua例文DearLiLei,Howtimeflies!Wearegoingtograduatefromjuniorhighschool.Ireallywanttoexpressmythankstoyou.IstillrememberthatwhenIfirstarrivedatthisnewschool,Iwasshyandnervous.Ididn’tknowanyoneinourclassandyouwerethefirsttosayhellotome.Ifeltwarmandhappy.Duringthethreeyearsofstudy,youalwayshelpedmewhenIhaddifficultylearning.YouhelpedmewithmyEnglishandgavemealotofusefulsuggestions.MyEnglishhasimprovedalot.Wishyouallthebest!Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求针对初中生活好友的帮助，给李雷写一封感谢信，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题，感谢对方的帮助；第二段介绍他是如何帮助你的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（五）（2020·山东烟台·中考真题）假设你是李华，你校将要举办“劳动实践周”活动。请根据以下提示，给你的英国朋友Scott写一封信，邀请他参加。内容包括1.活动时间：……2.活动内容：校园环境美化、实践基地劳动、劳动主题演讲……3.活动意义：……要求1.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2.包括所有提示要点，并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯；3.信中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。参考词汇∶LabourPracticeWeek劳动实践周；practicebase实践基地DearScott,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________