山西省2024八年级英语上册Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

UNIT1Wheredidyougoonvacation？UNIT1写作能力提升练目

录CONTENTS01写作任务02思路点拨03写作实践旅游能开阔我们的视野，增长我们的见识，放松我们的

心情。同学们，在这个悠闲的暑假，你是游历了祖国的名山

大川，还是参观了历史名城？请以“MySummerVacation”

为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文介绍你自己是如何度过暑假

的，并谈谈你的感受。学会分段描写，本文要求介绍两部分内容：1.介绍你自

己是如何度过暑假的；2.谈你的感受。因此，本文至少要分

两段。为了能更好地导入正题，建议在叙事前加开篇的

beginning。[谋篇布局][遣词造句]

beginning＜基础句式＞

Iliketravellingbecauseitcanmakemerelax.＜提升句式＞

Asthesayinggoes，

“Readtenthousand

books，traveltenthousandmiles.”SoIalwaystravelalot

duringmyvacation.(引用谚语“读万卷书，行万里路”)＜升华句式＞

Travellingis

agoodwaytoopenupoureyesand

relaxourmind.(整合信息，用不定式从精神层面说明旅游的

好处)

body1.

＜基础句式＞

Thissummervacation，IwenttoBeijing.My

parentswenttherewithme.Wewenttherebytrain.＜提升句式＞

Thissummervacation，IwenttoBeijingwith

myparents.Wetookthetrainthere.＜升华句式＞

MywholefamilywenttoBeijingby

trainduringthissummervacation.(尽量整合信息，用

长句代替短句)2.

＜基础句式＞

Weatesomedeliciousfoodthere.＜提升句式＞

Weatesomespecialfoodthere.Itwas

delicious.(special指出是特色，强调其味美)＜升华句式＞

Wedidn’tmissthespecialfoodthere，

especiallyBeijingDuck.Howdeliciousitwas！(使用miss和感叹句，表达情感更加强烈)

ending＜基础句式＞

Thetripwasveryexciting.Ican’tforgetit.＜提升句式＞

ThetripwassoexcitingthatIcan’tforgetit.

(so…that充分表达了旅行令人难以忘记)＜升华句式＞

Ifeltsoexcitedafterenjoyingitslonghistoryaswellasitsbeautifulnaturalsights.Iwillvisititagainin

thefuture.(aswellas强调让作者兴奋的不仅有美景还有其历

史文化，升华了文章的中心思想)MySummerVacationTravellingisagoodwaytoopenupoureyesandrelaxour

mind.MywholefamilywenttoBeijingbytrainduringthissummer

vacation.Itisnotonlythecapitalofourcountrybutalsoacity

withalonghistory.So，therearequiteafewoldplacesof

interest.Wecouldn’twaittovisitthePalaceMuseumfirsttosee

whatlifewaslikeinthepast.Onthesecondday，wewenttothe[连句成篇]GreatWall.Whenweclimbedonit，wecouldenjoythebeautifulviewbelow.Asfordinner，

wedidn’tmissthespecialfoodthere，especiallyBeijingDuck.

Howdeliciousitwas！ThemostspecialpartwasthatwevisitedPekingUniversitybecauseitismydreamtostudythere.Ifeltsoexcitedafterenjoyingitslonghistoryaswellasits

beautifulnaturalsights.Iwillvisititagaininthefuture.[太原期中]每个人的记忆深处都有一份属于家乡(hometown)的回忆。现代的高楼大厦，古香古色的老街老巷，难以忘怀的特色美食……每当别人问起我们的家乡时，我们总会面带微笑，侃侃而谈。在我们的家乡山西，你最喜欢的地方是哪里？为什么？请讲述你在那里的一次美好经历。要求：

不少于80词。

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MyfavoriteplaceinmyhometownisMountTai.Itis

thebestplacetogoonweekends.Itisbeautifulandtheairis

clear.

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LastSunday，myfriendsandItookthebustoMount

Tai.Wegotthereatabout8：00a.m.Wegottothetopof

themountainexcitedly.Weenjoyedthemostbeautiful

sceneryandwedrewpicturestogether.Atnoon，wewentto

TaishanRestaurant.Ithadthemostdeliciousfood.After

lunch，wewenttotheguestcenterandtookpartinsome

interestingactivities，suchastouhu，andtryingonHanfu.

Wereallyhadawonderfulandhappyday.

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