山东中考英语2022-2024年真题汇编-教师版-专题10 书面表达

三年（2022-2024）中考英语真题分项汇编（山东专用）专题10书面表达(2024中考真题）（2024·山东威海·中考真题）英国学生Joe在学习中国文化，他对成语“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”感兴趣，在某网站论坛上发起讨论。请你回帖发表你的见解：阐述你对该成语的理解，并从择友、交友的角度举例加以说明。注意：（1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）内容需涵盖所有要求，可适当发挥；（3）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息。Hi,Joe.I’mhappythatyou’reinterestedinChineseculture.ThisisafamousChineseidiom._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Version1Hi,Joe.I’mhappythatyou’reinterestedinChineseculture.ThisisafamousChineseidiom.Itmeansthatweareinfluencedbypeoplearoundus.Therearepeoplewhocanmakeuskinder,braverandmoreconfident.Soitisimportantforustochooseagoodfriend.Atthesametime,weshouldkeepawayfrompeoplewhohavebadeffectsonus.Here,Iwanttosharemyownexperiencewithyou.WhenIwasinGrade8,Ihadafriendwhowasnotgoodatschoolwork.Sheoftenaskedmetoplaycomputergameswithher.IspentsomuchtimeplayingwithherthatIfailedinmyexams.Thisyear,Ihavemadeanewfriend.Shewasexcellent.ShewaspatientwithmeandgavemeahandwheneverIhadproblems.Shealwaysencouragedmetostudyhard.Withthehelpofher,Ihavemadegreatprogress.Igotbettergradesintheexam.Becauseofher,Ibecomebetterandmoreconfident.NowIlookforwardtogoingtothesameseniorhighschoolwithher.ThisfamousChineseidiomcanguideushowtochoosefriends.IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutChineseculture,Iwillbereadytoofferhelptoyou.Version2Hi,Joe.I’mhappythatyou’reinterestedinChineseculture.ThisisafamousChineseidiom.Inmyopinion,itshowshowimportantitistochoosefriendsbecausetheyreallyplayanimportantroleinourlifeandwewillbeeasilyinfluencedbythem.We’llbecomebetterbecausewemakeagoodfriend.Ididn’thaveacleargoalandusedtogiveupeasily,butnowIhavebecomemorestrong-mindedbecauseofmybestfriendCindy.Cindylikesplayingtennisandshedreamstobeatennisstaroneday.Tomakeherdreamcometrue,shekeepspracticingtennisreallyhardeverydayandnevergivesupwhenfacingdifficulties.WheneverIgothroughahardtime,IwillthinkofCindy.Itisherspiritthatencouragesmetochallengemyselfandholdontomydream.Later,Ialsofallinlovewithtennisandtakepartindifferentkindsoftenniscompetitionstobettermyself.Allinall,Ithinkeveryoneshouldchoosefriendswisely.Agoodfriendisreallyhelpfultoyou.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：采用“一般现在时”；③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。[写作步骤]第一步，阐述对“近朱者赤，近墨者黑”的理解；第二步，结合自己的经历讲述朋友对自己的影响；第三步，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①inone’sopinion在某人看来②playanimportantrolein在……中扮演重要角色③cometrue实现[高分句型]①itshowshowimportantitistochoosefriendsbecausetheyreallyplayanimportantroleinourlifeandwewillbeeasilyinfluencedbythem.（宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句）②WheneverIgothroughahardtime,IwillthinkofCindy.（让步状语从句）（2024·山东枣庄·中考真题）为了培养学生的发明和创新精神，学校将举行中学生科技创新大赛。假定你是李华，你准备发明一件物品，参加本次大赛。请你以“Iwanttoinvent________”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的发明物。内容包括：注意：（1）请先补全标题；（2）短文须全面反映图文信息；（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；（4）词数80~100。Iwanttoinvent_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文IwanttoinventaspecialpenIwanttoinventaspecialpenthatcanhelpstudentslearnmoreefficiently.Itlookslikeanormalpen.Thispenwillhaveabuilt-indictionaryandtranslationfunction,allowingstudentstolookupwordsandtranslatesentencesinstantly.Itwillalsohaveavoicerecordingfeature,sostudentscanrecordlecturesandlistentothemlater.Thepenwillbelightweightandeasytocarry,makingitperfectforuseinclassrooms,libraries,andathome.Ibelievethispenwillgreatlyenhancestudents’learningexperiencesandmakestudyingmoreenjoyableandeffective.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，想要发明一种特殊的钢笔；第二步，具体介绍发明这种钢笔的原因、外观和用途、使用场合；第三步，进行评价。[亮点词汇]①looklike看起来像②lookup查阅[高分句型]①Iwanttoinventaspecialpenthatcanhelpstudentslearnmoreefficiently.（定语从句）②Ibelievethispenwillgreatlyenhancestudents’learningexperiencesandmakestudyingmoreenjoyableandeffective.（省略that的宾语从句）（2024·山东枣庄·中考真题）阅读下面短文，根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于60，不多于80。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。Campingisoneofthemostpopularformsofoutdooractivities.Now,mostpeopleareundertoomuchpressureandlikegoingoutdoorstorelax.Otheractivitieslikehuntingandfishingareoftenconnectedwithcampingtrips.It’salsoagoodideatospendtimewithyourfamilyduringaholiday.Thatwillhelpyouleavesomeofthebestmemorieswithyourfamily.Herearesomethingsyouhavetoconsiderbeforeyourcampingtrip.Thefirstthingthatyouneedtothinkaboutisdecidingthecampingplace.Formostpeoplewholikecamping,thebestplacetochooseistheplacethattheyhaven’tvisitedbefore.Ofcourse,foodisanothernecessarythingtobeconsidered.You’dbettercarrysomeconvenientfoodlikecakes,nuts(坚果)andboiledeggs.Whenallthethingsaredone,funactivitiesshouldbeplanned.Ifyourkidsareoldenough,activitieslikefishingandhorse-ridingaregoodtochoose.Assoonasyougettoyourcampingplace,therewillbealotyouwillhavetodo,suchaputtingupyourtentandlayingyourtableandchairs.Lotsofopenspaceisperfectwhenyouwanttoletyourkidsridetheirbicycles.Thesearetheideasabouthavingfuncamping.Onceyougetreadyforit,youdon’tneedtoworryaboutanything.Goaheadandbeahappycamper.(1)Whatiscamping?(2)Whydomostpeoplelikecamping?(3)Whichthingsshouldbeplannedbeforecamping?(4)Whatshouldyoudowhenyoureachthecampingplace?(5)Howcanyoubeahappycamper?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Campingisapopularoutdooractivitythathelpspeoplerelaxandspendqualitytimewithfamilymembers.Beforecamping,youshouldchooseanewplace,prepareconvenientfood,andplanfunactivitieslikefishingorhorse-riding.Uponarrival,setupyourtent,layyourtableandchairsandarrangeyourspace.Ensuringyouhaveeverythingreadywillmakeyouahappycamper.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇小作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]结合提示问题，介绍露营的含义、流行原因、准备工作和到达露营地后的安排等。[亮点词汇]①helpspeoplerelax帮助人们放松②planfunactivities计划有趣的活动③setupyourtent搭起帐篷[高分句型]①Campingisapopularoutdooractivitythathelpspeoplerelaxandspendqualitytimewithfamilymembers.（定语从句）②Ensuringyouhaveeverythingreadywillmakeyouahappycamper.（动名词作主语）（2024·山东泰安·中考真题）中国传统节日是中华民族丰富多彩文化的重要组成部分。假如你是李平，你校英语社团正在开展以“TraditionalChineseFestivals”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语短文投稿，介绍端午节的习俗和意义，并描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的。内容提示：1.WhatdoyouknowabouttheDragonBoatFestival?2.Whatdoyouthinkofthisfestival?3.HowdidyouspendtheDragonBoatFestival?参考词汇：the5thdayofthefifthlunar(农历)month；inhonorof纪念；wormwood艾草；sachet香囊要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。I’mLiPingfromClass1,Grade9.Therearemanytraditionalfestivalsinourcountry.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文I’mLiPingfromClass1,Grade9.Therearemanytraditionalfestivalsinourcountry.TheDragonBoatFestivalisoneofthemostimportanttraditionalfestivalsinChina.Itfallsonthe5thdayofthefifthlunarmonth.ItiscelebratedinhonorofthegreatmanQuYuan.Ithinkwecanlearnmoreculturesandcustomsfromthemsoit’sourdutytotryourbesttokeepthemgoingon.Thisyear,IhadagreattimeduringtheDragonBoatFestival.Iatezongzimadebymymotheranditwasverydelicious.Wealsodrankrealgarwine,hungChinesewormwoodaroundthedoorsandcarriedasachetaroundwithme.Whatmadethefestivalspecialformewasthedragonboatrace.Itwasveryexciting.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：要求根据提示内容介绍端午节的习俗和意义，并描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍端午节的相关信息；第二步，介绍端午节的意义；第三步，描述今年的端午节你是如何度过的。[亮点词汇]①inhonorof纪念②goon继续[高分句型]①Ithinkwecanlearnmoreculturesandcustomsfromthemsoit’sourdutytotryourbesttokeepthemgoingon.(宾语从句)②Whatmadethefestivalspecialformewasthedragonboatrace.(what引导的主语从句)（2024·山东青岛·中考真题）在多彩的初中校园生活中，你可能学会了一项体育技能，发展了一项艺术才能；也可能进行了一次精彩的演讲，参加了一次有意义的研学……这些都助力了你的成长，让你终身受益。假如学校公众号以MyStoryinJuniorHighSchool为题征稿，请选择1—2项内容，讲述你的成长故事，并谈论你的感受以及相关的发展计划。要求：1.词数80—100；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyStoryinJuniorHighSchoolLastterm,ourteachertookustoafarmforastudytour.Intheactivity,wenotonlylearnedhowtoplantcrops,butalsoexperiencedtheimportanceoflabor.Atthesametime,italsoallowedustoexperiencethehardshipsoffarmers.Afterthisevent,althoughweweretired,wewereveryhappy.Ithinktheschooltripisreallymeaningfulforus.Wecannotonlyrelaxourselvesbutalsolearnalotfromit.Iwilltakepartinmoresuchactivitiesinmyfuturefreetime.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：根据提示信息讲述你的成长故事，并谈论你的感受以及相关的发展计划，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，讲述你的成长故事；第二步，谈论你的感受以及相关的发展计划。[亮点词汇]①notonly...butalso不但……而且②allowsb.todosth.允许某人做某事③takepartin参加[高分句型]①Afterthisevent,althoughweweretired,wewereveryhappy.（although引导的让步状语从句）②Ithinktheschooltripisreallymeaningfulforus.（宾语从句）（2024·山东日照·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jack正在学习中文，对理解成语“愚公移山(YuGongMovesaMountain)”有困难，来信向你请教。请用英语写一封回信，内容包括：1.解释成语故事及其含义；2.提出学习成语的建议。注意：1.词数：90左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJack,IgotyourletterabouthavingtroubleunderstandingtheChineseidiomYuGongMovesaMountain.Letmeexplainittoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Don’thesitatetoaskifyouhaveanymorequestions.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearJack,IgotyourletterabouthavingtroubleunderstandingtheChineseidiomYuGongMovesaMountain.Letmeexplainittoyou.ThestorygoesthataveryoldmannamedYuGongdecidedtomovetwolargemountainsthatblockedthewaytohishome.Despitehisageandtheenormityofthetask,hewasdeterminedtoremovethemountains.Hisperseveranceanddeterminationeventuallymovedthegods,whosentdivinebeingstohelphimcompletethetask.Theidiom“YuGongMovesaMountain”symbolizesthespiritofperseveranceandthebeliefthatwithdetermination,eventhemostdifficulttaskscanbeaccomplished.TobetterunderstandandlearnChineseidioms,IsuggestyoureadmoreChinesestoriesandtrytousetheidiomsinyourdailyconversations.WatchingChinesemoviesorTVshowscanalsohelpyouseehowtheseidiomsareusedincontext.Don’thesitatetoaskifyouhaveanymorequestions.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，说明写信目的；第二步，介绍“愚公移山”故事及其含义，并提出学习成语的建议；第三步，表达期望或主动提供帮助。[亮点词汇]①blocktheway拦路②bedeterminedtodo下定决心做③perseveranceanddetermination毅力和决心[高分句型]①TobetterunderstandandlearnChineseidioms,IsuggestyoureadmoreChinesestoriesandtrytousetheidiomsinyourdailyconversations.（不定式表目的）②Hisperseveranceanddeterminationeventuallymovedthegods,whosentdivinebeingstohelphimcompletethetask.（定语从句）（2024·山东济宁·中考真题）你校英文报编辑想了解最受学生欢迎的英语社团活动。假如你是英语课代表李华，请结合下图你班的调查结果，给编辑写一篇报告。内容须包括：1.调查结果的描述及简单评价；2.你本人最喜欢的社团活动（从调查结果中任选其一）及理由陈述。最受学生欢迎的英语社团活动注意：1.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；2.100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：takepartin,raiseone’sinterest(in),behelpfulto,improveone’sEnglish,learnmoreaboutdifferentculturesDeareditor,YesterdaywedidasurveyinourclassaboutthemostpopularactivitiesbytheschoolEnglishclub.Herearetheresults._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua【答案】例文Deareditor,YesterdaywedidasurveyinourclassaboutthemostpopularactivitiesbytheschoolEnglishclub.Herearetheresults.Accordingtothesurvey,Storytellingisthemostpopularactivity,with31%ofthestudentschoosingit.Englishsongscomenext,preferredby26%ofthestudents.Fundubbingisalsoquitepopular,attracting24%ofthestudents.Englishdrama,however,istheleastpopular,withonly19%ofthestudentsshowinginterest.Personally,IenjoyFundubbingthemost.Itisnotonlyinteresting,butalsohelpstoimprovemyEnglishpronunciationandintonation.Moreover,itallowsmetolearnmoreaboutdifferentculturesthroughvariousmovieclips.ThisactivityraisesmyinterestinEnglishandmakeslearningmoreenjoyable.LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，直入主题，交代调查的内容（已给出）；第二步，根据饼状图详细介绍调查的结果；第三步，介绍你本人最喜欢的社团活动，并给出理由。[亮点词汇]①accordingto根据②notonly...butalso不但……而且……③allowsbtodosth允许某人做某事[高分句型]ThisactivityraisesmyinterestinEnglishandmakeslearningmoreenjoyable.（and并列句）（2024·山东潍坊·中考真题）TeensAroundtheWorld是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原帖后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。注意：1.80词左右；2.不要出现考生本人信息；3.禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。TeensAroundtheWorldSubject:problemsandsolutionsHey,guys!Wehavetofaceallkindsofproblemsinourdailylife.However,differentproblemshavedifferentsolutions.Whatproblemdidyoumeetandhowdidyousolveit?Pleaseshareyourstorywithus.Harry,Australia__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua,China【答案】例文IoncefacedabigproblemwithmyEnglishpronunciation.Ifounditdifficulttospeakclearlyandconfidently.Tosolvethis,Istartedpracticingeveryday.IlistenedtoEnglishsongs,watchedEnglishmovies,andimitatedthepronunciationofnativespeakers.Additionally,IjoinedanEnglishclubatschoolwhereIcouldpracticespeakingwithmyclassmates.Overtime,mypronunciationimprovedsignificantly,andIbecamemoreconfidentinspeakingEnglish.Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofpersistenceandpractice.LiHua,China【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：根据所给的帖子中提到的信息，结合自己的经历，介绍自己遇到的问题及解决方法，注意逻辑清晰，语句通顺。[写作步骤]第一步，点明主题——遇到的问题；第二步，具体介绍解决问题的方法；第三步，讲述解决问题后的收获。[亮点词汇]①faceabigproblem面临一个大问题②practiceeveryday每天练习③imitatethepronunciation模仿发音④theimportanceofpersistenceandpractice坚持和练习的重要性[高分句型]①Ifounditdifficulttospeakclearlyandconfidently.（it作形式宾语）②Additionally,IjoinedanEnglishclubatschoolwhereIcouldpracticespeakingwithmyclassmates.（where引导定语从句）（2024·山东菏泽·中考真题）假如你是李华，在学校上周举办的毕业典礼上，老师们表演了一个令人惊喜的节目。请你以“ASurpriseBroughtUsCloser”为题用英语写一篇短文，向某英文报投稿。内容包括：1.描述该节目；2.表达你的感受。写作要求：1.100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名等个人信息。ASurpriseBroughtUsCloserLastweek,wehadagraduationceremonyinourschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ASurpriseBroughtUsCloserLastweek,wehadagraduationceremonyinourschool.Atthebeginningoftheceremony,ourheadmasterdeliveredaspeech,expressinghispraise,encouragementandexpectationstous.Themostsurprisingthingwastheprogramthatourteacherpreparedforallourgraduates.Ourteacherscollectedphotosofallofthegraduatesandmadeaposterofusall,spellingoutthewords“HappyGraduation.”Theyalsosanganoriginalsongforus,wishingusabrightandwonderfulfuture.Iwasdeeplymovedbytheteachers’program.Isincerelythanktheteachersfortheirhelpandsupportinthepastthreeyears,andIwisheveryonethebestinthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：以“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅；③提示：要求以“ASurpriseBroughtUsCloser”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出对毕业典礼的介绍；第二步，具体介绍这次典礼中老师们表演的令人惊喜的节目；第三步，表达自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①Atthebeginningof...在……开始②deliveraspeech发表演讲③preparefor准备[高分句型]①Themostsurprisingthingwastheprogramthatourteacherpreparedforallourgraduates.（表语从句和定语从句）②Isincerelythanktheteachersfortheirhelpandsupportinthepastthreeyears,andIwisheveryonethebestinthefuture.（并列句）10．（2024·山东东营·中考真题）假如你校校报英语专栏正在以“Takecareofyourself(照顺好自己)”为题举办征文活动，请根据以下内容要点和要求写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。内容要点：1.我们应从哪些方面做起，比如：身体健康（饮食、锻炼等）、生活技能（洗衣，做饭等）、心理健康（心态，抗挫等）……Wordbankphysicalhealth身体健康lifeskills生活技能mentalhealth心理健康2.具体应该怎么做；3.这样做的好处是什么。要求：1.至少从两个方面给出自己的看法；2文中不得出现考生姓名、学校及其他相关信息；3.照抄试卷内容不得分。Takecareofyourself________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TakecareofyourselfAsweallknow,healthisveryimportantinourlife.Soyoushouldtakecareofyourself.Itisimportanttohavephysicalhealth.Soyoushouldtrytohaveahealthydiet.Also,youshouldkeepdoingexercise.Havingenoughsleepisnecessaryaswell.Theyaregoodforyourhealthandhaveastrongbody.What’smore,learningsomelifeskillsisofgreatimportance.Youcanlearnhowtowashclothes,cookandsoon.Theyhelpyoubeindependent.Atthesametime,youshoulddoyourbesttokeepyourmentalhealth.Youshouldhaveanactiveattitudewhenyouhavefailuresandproblems.Inthisway,youwillhavemorecouragetofacethechallengesahead.Takecareofyourselfandyouwillhaveabetterfuture!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“Takecareofyourself”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体介绍应该怎么做以及这样做的好处；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①haveahealthydiet饮食健康②What’smore此外③Atthesametime同时④facethechallengesahead面对未来的挑战[高分句型]①Youshouldhaveanactiveattitudewhenyouhavefailuresandproblems.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Takecareofyourselfandyouwillhaveabetterfuture!（祈使句）11.（2024·山东临沂·中考真题）假定你是李平，请根据该邮件内容，用英语给Eric回复。HiLiPing,Youmentionedyourdreamjobinyourlastletter.I’mreallyinterestedinit.Whydidyouchooseit?What/Whoinfluencedyoutomakethedecision?Tellmeyourexperience,please.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon!Eric要求：1.词数不少于80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。DearEric,Thanksforyoure-mail.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiPing【答案】例文DearEric,Thanksforyoure-mail.I’mverygladtotellyousomethingaboutmydreamjob.IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofessionandIenjoystayingwithchildren.Besides,Iwanttobeateacherbecauseofthepowerofanexample—MissLi,myEnglishteacher.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish,andinfluencesmealot.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupset.ShecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,ImadegreatprogressinEnglish.IhavemadeupmymindtobeagoodteacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.AlthoughIknowitisnoteasytobeateacher,Iwillredoublemyeffortstorealizemydream.Bestwishes!LiPing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：根据邮件内容进行回复，从中提炼写作要点，注意不要有遗漏，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。告知对方为什么选择成为老师；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍选择成为老师的原因及对自己影响最深的人或事；第三步，书写结语。表明成为老师的决心，并表达祝愿。[亮点词汇]①begladto乐于……②thepowerofanexample榜样的力量③failin在……方面失败④cheersb.up使某人振作起来⑤makeupone’smindtodosth.下定决心做某事[高分句型]①IhavedreamedofbeingateachersinceIwasachild,becauseIthinkteachingisasacredprofessionandIenjoystayingwithchildren.（since引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）②IhavemadeupmymindtobeagoodteacherlikeherwhenIgrowup.（when引导的时间状语从句）③AlthoughIknowitisnoteasytobeateacher,Iwillredoublemyeffortstorealizemydream.（although引导的让步状语从句）（20