Unit 4 《Reading for Writing 写作技法》学案2023-2024学年高一上学期英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

新人教版高中英语必修第一册PAGEPAGE1ReadingforWriting〖写作技法〗概要本单元的写作任务是为新闻报道(记叙文)写概要。概要写作是一种要求阅读和写作并重的英语高考题型，有准确性、完整性、概括性、客观性和个体性等特点。概要写作提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生在对原文阅读后，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。概要既要用词准确、结构合理、语意连贯、不得抄袭原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。注意事项1．词数要限制在60词左右，上下限不得超出10个单词。2．要根据文章的体裁特点进行概要写作。3．人称和时态要与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可以转变成为第三人称。4．写作时尽可能地使用复合句，必要时可转换词性，不得完全照抄照搬原文。5．进行概要写作时，一定不要加入自己的观点并对原文加以评论；一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。写作步骤1．确定体裁，明确主题及结构体裁结构记叙文记叙文：人物、时间、地点、事件(起因—发展—结果)夹叙夹议文：六要素＋寓意/启示说明文事物的性质功能类：对象＋性质功能问题/现象＋解决方法类：现象＋原因＋结果议论文论点＋论据＋结论2.确定主题句，找关键信息画出每一段的主题句，抓住关键信息，忽略次要信息。3．改写关键信息，得出要点使用意义相同或相近的单词、短语或句式，或使用不同的句子结构表达同样的意思，如改变语态，肯定变否定等。4．添加连接词，使行文连贯要牢记各段落要点之间的逻辑关系和自然衔接，用恰当的关联词连贯全文。常用的关联词有：however，besides，inaddition，therefore，instead等。常用表达1．Thisarticle/passagemainlytellsastoryabout...这篇文章主要讲述关于……的故事。2．Thispassagemainlydealswith/discusses/explores...这篇文章主要处理/讨论/探索……3．Thisarticlefocusesonthetopicof...这篇文章关注……的话题。4．Thisessaypresentsknowledgethat...这篇短文呈现……的知识。5．Inthispassage(about...)，theauthor...在这篇(关于……)的文章里，作者……6．Theauthorbegantheessay/passagebytelling/presenting...作者通过讲述/呈现……开始这篇短文/文章。7．First/Firstly/Inthebeginning/Inthefirstpart，theauthorargues/explains/mentions/states/pointsout(that)．..首先，作者论证/解释/提及/陈述/指出……8．Secondly/Next/Then/Inthenextpart/Inthemainpart，theauthorgoesonwith...第二/接下来/然后/在下一部分/在主要部分，作者继续……9．Finally，theauthorstressesthat...最后，作者强调……典例展示阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Plant-basedDietWhatisaplant-baseddiet？Isitjustafashionablenewtermfora“vegan(严格素食主义者)”？Whilethereisnosetdefinition，aplant-basedwayofeatingfocusesonconsumingplant-sourcedwholefoods(全天然食物)thatareleastprocessedintheiroriginalform，forexample,wholegrains，fruits，vegetables，nutsandseeds.Thesearefullofvitamins，minerals，andprovideanabundanceofnutrientsforyourbody.Followingaplant-basedlifestyledoesn’tnecessarilymeanfullyavoidinganimalproductslikeavegan.Forplant-basedeaters，animalproteinscanhappilyfitinwiththelifestyle，yettheyplaymoreofasupportingrole.Overall，“plant-based”ismoreofabroadandflexiblewayofthinkingaboutnutritionratherthanarigiddiet.Withaplant-baseddiet，thefocusisonsimple，nutritiouswholefoods.Whypeoplestartfollowingaplant-baseddiet？Oneofthemainreasonsisthehealthbenefits.Now，moresothanever，researchisshowinghoweatingmoreplantsandlessmeatcanpositivelyaffecthealth.Particularlyaplant-basedlifestylehasbeenlinkedtohearthealth.Inastudyofmorethan10,000adultspublishedintheJournaloftheAmericanHeartAssociation，itwasshownthatthosewhofollowedamoreplant-baseddiethada16percentlowerriskofhavingcardiovascular(心血管的)diseaseanda32percentlowerriskofdyingofcardiovasculardisease.Aplant-basedlifestylecanalsohelptopromoteweightlossandhelptomaintainyourgoalweight.Weightlosscommonlyoccursbecausethedietconsistsoffoodsthatarefulloffiberandhaveahigh-watercontent，whicheasilymakeyoufeelfullup.Anothermajorreasontojumpattheplant-basedeatingtrainistheexternalbenefits.Plant-basedfoodsareloadedwithvitamins，whichhelpbrightenyourskin.Oneoftheplant-basedall-starvitaminsisvitaminC，whichisapowerfulantioxidant.AlargenumberoffruitsandvegetablescontainvitaminC．Theyassistinsmoothinglines，andreducingwrinkles.范文赏读Aplant-baseddietcentersonnutritiouswholefoodscomingfromplantsources，withanimalproteinsservingascomplements.(要点1)Researchhasshownaplant-basedlifestyleisconducivetokeepinghealthy，especiallyreducingtheriskofcardiovasculardisease.(要点2)Besides，abundantfiberandwaterintheplant-based