北师大版高三英语一轮复习类型二第4讲续写话题人与动物课件

第三部分写作专题突破类型二读后续写第4讲续写热门话题人与动物阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2023·浙江1月卷)Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend'sfarminwesternWashington．Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears．Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention，soIenteredit．Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟)，desperatelytryingtoescape．Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings．SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup．Withthebirdinmycuppedhand，Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin．Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer．Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside，closingthedoorsecurelybehindme．WhenIopenedmyhand，thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes．Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings．Still，shemadenoattempttofly．Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle，shebegantomove．Istopped，andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway．Hovering(悬停)，sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface．Foraverylongmoment，thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes，turningherheadfromsidetoside．Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight．Duringthecookout，Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident．Theypromisedtofixthewindow．AsIwasdeparting，myfriendswalkedmetomycar．Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering．Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome．Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes，thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone．Foramoment，allwerespeechless．Thensomeonesaid，“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye．”注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Afewweekslater，Iwenttothefarmagain．_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作指导：Ⅰ．梳理原文细节，理清篇章结构。Ⅱ．依据首句提示，构思后续情节。第一段：由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述我途经那间挤奶房时回想起上一回拯救蜂鸟的经历，以及享用烧烤的过程。第二段：由续写第二段的提示语可知，该段应该描述两方面的内容：一是蜂鸟与我之间的互动交流；二是关于人与动物关系的启示。范文佳作：A

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appeared．Withasqueakingcall，shedivedtowardsmeandhoveredbeforemyface，lookingatmewithherbrighteyes．Thenshestoppedonmyleftshoulder．Ipattedheronthebackwhichwascoveredbycolorfulfeathers．AndItookoutmywaterbottle，tryingtogivehersomewater．Contentandjoyful，sheflewabout2metersabovetheground，turningherheadfromsidetosideasifexpressinghergratitudeforsavingherlifetomeagain．Atthatmoment，happinessandthefeelingofbeingmovedmingled，wellingupintomyheart，tearsrollingdownmycheeks．话题佳句：1．Thedogturnedaround，eyeingus，withhistailswingingupanddown．这只狗转过身来，上下摆动着尾巴，注视着我们。2．Atfirstthebirdstuckhisheadoutofhiscagejusttotakeasipofwaterandfillhismouthwithfood．起初，这只鸟把头探出笼子，只是为了喝一口水，往嘴里塞满食物。3．AfraidImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature，Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse．我害怕会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我不假思索，发出一声喊声来阻止我的马。4．Confusedandfrightenedatmyapproach，thewolfbackedoff，pullinghardthechain．狼被我的靠近弄得既困惑又害怕，向后退却，使劲地拉着链子。5．Birdsweresinging，theairwasfilledwithlaughter，andeveryonewasinthebestofmoods．鸟儿在歌唱，空气中充满了笑声，每个人都沉浸在愉悦当中。6．Thewolfedgedcloser，earsupright，bodytense，andstoppedafewyardsoff，herbushytailwaggingslightly．狼慢慢靠近了，耳朵竖起，身体绷紧，在几码远的地方停了下来，毛茸茸的尾巴微微摆动着。7．Atthesightofme，thedogcircledaroundme，wagginghistailandlickingmyhandscheerfully．一看到我，这只狗就围着我转圈，高兴地摇动着尾巴舔着我的手。8．Shakingwithfear，Iapproacheditcautiouslyandsawthatitwasapigeon．Itlookedatmeinfear，tryingtoopenitswingsandstrugglingitsfeet，butapparentlypowerless．我心惊胆战、小心翼翼地靠近它，发现是一只鸽子。它恐惧地看着我，试图张开翅膀，双脚在挣扎，但明显力不从心。9．WheneverIsatatthetableeatingbiscuits，itlookedupatme，cooing(咕咕地叫)constantly．Tomyjoy，Icouldalsoreachintothecagetotouchit．WhenIgentlyfingereditshead，itplayfullypecked(啄)atme．每当我坐在桌旁吃饼干，它就看着我，不断咕咕叫。令我高兴的是，我可以把手伸进笼子抚摸它。当我摸它头的时候，它会开玩笑似的啄我。10．Thedogfirmlygrabbedmytrousersandmotionedmetothekitchen．AsIapproachedthekitchen，Icouldobviouslysmellastrongburningscentandinstantlyknewwhathadhappened．这只狗咬住我的裤子，拉我去厨房。当我走向厨房时，我明显地闻到强烈的烧焦味，立刻就意识到发生了什么。11．WithIndigo，ou