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第三部分写作专题突破类型二读后续写第6讲续写热门话题生活趣事阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2021·浙江1月卷改编)Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I'munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(软木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican'tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThevideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________写作指导:Ⅰ.梳理原文细节,理清篇章结构。Ⅱ.依据首句提示,构思后续情节。第一段:由续写第一段及续写第二段的提示语可知,该段应该描述我的头被拔出来的整个过程。第二段:由续写第二段的提示语可知,该段应该描述这段视频被上传到网上走红,我也成了网络红人。范文佳作:I
was
stuck
for
five
or
six
minutes
though
it
felt
much
longer.Myheadspundizzilyasiftheworldswirled.Ifeltastaboffear.Jasonsuggestedusingaknifetocutthepumpkinopen.Iwavedmyhandswildlyinprotestattheplan.“Thenyouneedtofindawayofpullingyourselfout,”Mydadsaidinacalm,coolvoice.Hisvoicesettledmynerves.Iwasconsciousthatmynosewasactingasanimpedimenttomyescape.Withstretchingoutmyfaceandbitingintothepumpkin,Imanagedtopullmyheadout.ArippleofexcitementranthroughusbutthefirstthingIsawwasthecamera.The
video
was
posted
the
day
before
Halloween.Mybigrednoseandmysorechinbecamenetizens'favoritetopic.Bytheendofthatday,ithadover1,000views.PeopleaskedMomtoputitonYouTube,andweevengotcallsfromTVbreakfastshows.Meanwhile,thevideostartedrackinguphundredsofthousandsofviews.WhenIwentout,IwasrecognizedbypeopleIhadnevermet.Thepumpkinalsobecameaminorcelebrity.Passers-byandtrick-or-treaterswouldknockandaskforselfieswithit.WhatanunforgettableHalloween!话题佳句:1.Amusedbyhissillymistake,welaughedourheadoff.我们被他愚蠢的错误逗乐了,狂笑不已。2.Withcrowdsoftheaudiencearound,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly,feelingthebloodrushtoherface.周围有大批观众,她感到很难堪,尴尬地站在那里,感觉血液涌上了自己的脸。3.Thecookiescooledonthetable,fillingthekitchenwiththeirsweetsmell,makinghermouthwater.小甜饼在桌上变凉了,厨房里充满了甜甜的味道,馋得她直流口水。4.Seeingnootherpeoplenoticeus,Iroseandslippedoutofthehousesilently.见没有其他人注意到我们,我便站起来,悄悄地溜出了房子。5.Heslidtothewindowofthehut,raisedhimselfontiptoe,andstoleaglance.他溜到小屋的窗口,踮起脚尖,偷偷看了一眼。6.Ispenttherestofthedayinastateofexcitement,theextremelygoodmoodIhadeverexperienced.那天剩下的时间我都在兴奋中度过,这是我经历过的最愉快的心情。7.Islowlypulledmypictureoutofmydrawerandhelditup.Theentireclasssuddenlyexplodedwithlaughter!我把我的画慢慢地从抽屉里拿出来,举了起来,全班同学突然哄堂大笑!8.Whenrecognizingwhothevisitorwas,Johnopenedhismouthwithhiseyeswidening.当认出来访者是谁时,约翰张大了嘴巴,眼睛睁得大大的。9.Shedroppedhereyesandstaredatherfeet,hopingnoonewouldnoticehowembarrassedshewas.她垂下眼睛,盯着自己的脚,希望没有人会注意到她有多尴尬。10.Shepulledoffhershoesanddashedintoherbedroom,barefootandfast.她脱下鞋子,光着脚飞快地跑到自己卧室中。11.Theylaughedloudly,exceptforme,
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