读后续写+迁徙之旅后的惊喜：纽约新生活画卷+讲义 高二下学期期中英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文AMovetoaNewLifeIwasshockedwhenmyparentstoldmeweweremovingfromBatonRouge,Louisana,toNewYork.First,IcomplainedaboutnotbeingabletomakenewfriendsandnotknowinganythingaboutNewYork.Mymomsaid,“You’llmakenewfriends,andit’snotlikeyouknowanythingaboutBatonRougeanyway.Iprotested,“ButIdon’twanttoleaveLouisiana.Theweatherisperfecthere!”Mymomshotmeadisapprovinglookandsaid,“You’llgetusedtotheweatherinNewYork.”Irememberthinkingaboutrunningawayandjoiningacircussomewhere,butthenIrememberedthatcircusanimalssmellreallybad,andIwouldmissmyparents.SoIwanderedaroundthehousepickpickinguprandomthings,likemybaseballandglove,andthrowingthemintoacardboardbox.Ifeltlikeabig,heavyraincloudIwashangingovermyhead.Withinthreedays,allthefurnitureweweretakingetakingwithuswaspackedintoamovingvan(小型货车).Oderthingswerereadytobesoldfornowherenearwhatwepaidforthem.Littlebylittleouryardsaledecreaseduntilnooneevenlookedatthewell-worncoffeetable,chewed-upplastictoys,andslightlydamagedcoffeecups—allofwhichIhadmyteethonatonetimeoranotherThenextdaywasMonday,andwegotupearlytobeatthetraffic.I’llspareyouthedetailsofhowboringitwastositinavanandwatcheachtreeasitpassedbyonlytoseeanothertreegettingcloseruntilitasopassedby.Halfwaythere,westoppedatamotel(汽车旅馆)tospendthenight.Thistime,noonecouldsleepbecauseofthesmellcomingfromtheheaterintheroom.BythetimewefinallymadeittoNewYork,itwasthemiddleofthenight,andmyheadwasalreadydrooping(低垂)ontomyshoulder.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。WhenIwokeup,Ididn’tfindasmog-filledcityasexpected.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsIgotusedtothisnewsetting,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavetobeafraidofchange____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者得知全家要从路易斯安那州的巴吞鲁日搬到纽约后十分震惊，抱怨连连。在打包好家具并处理完旧物后，一家人踏上旅途，途中在汽车旅馆过夜，饱受异味困扰，最终在半夜抵达纽约，而作者也疲惫不堪。

伏笔与回应：伏笔：作者对纽约的诸多担忧和抱怨，如担心交不到新朋友、不适应天气等，为后文他发现纽约的美好并改变想法埋下伏笔。续写中他看到纽约不同的一面后逐渐适应并喜欢上这里。伏笔：对搬家过程中无聊旅途和汽车旅馆糟糕体验的描写，与后文到达纽约后的新发现形成对比，突出变化。续写中纽约的新气象让作者忘却旅途的疲惫与不适。伏笔：作者在搬家前收拾物品时的消极情绪，预示他对搬家的抵触，而后续的转变更能体现其成长。续写中他从抗拒到接受，心态有了很大转变。伏笔：提到旧物被低价出售，暗示过去生活的结束，为在纽约开启新生活做铺垫。续写中他在纽约开启全新的生活篇章，与旧生活告别。伏笔：作者在旅途中的疲惫不堪，为他醒来后看到纽约景象时的精神一振做衬托。续写中他被纽约的美景唤醒活力，对新环境充满好奇与期待。续写要点：第一段：描写作者醒来后看到的纽约景象，如干净的街道、美丽的公园或独特的建筑等，与他之前的预期形成反差，让他开始对这个城市产生好奇与好感。第二段：讲述作者在逐渐适应纽约的过程中，意识到自己可以积极面对变化，比如主动去探索周边、结识新朋友等，他开始期待在纽约的新生活，体现勇于接受改变的主题。情感线：从得知搬家时的震惊、抱怨与抵触，到旅途中的疲惫与消极，再到醒来看到纽约后的惊喜与好奇，最后适应过程中的释然与期待。故事线：作者因家庭搬家而不满，经历旅途波折后到达纽约，醒来看到不一样的纽约景象并逐渐适应新生活。主旨升华句：“Changeistheonlyconstantinlife.”（变化是生活中唯一不变的。）“Theonlywaytomakesenseoutofchangeistoplungeintoit,movewithit,andjointhedance.”（理解变化的唯一途径是投身其中，随它而动，与之共舞。）“Lifeisaseriesofnaturalandspontaneouschanges.Don'tresistthem-thatonlycreatessorrow.Letrealitybereality.Letthingsflownaturallyforwardinwhateverwaytheylike.”（生活是一系列自然且自发的变化。不要抗拒它们——那只会带来悲伤。让现实成为现实。让事物以它们喜欢的任何方式自然地向前发展。）“Inthemidstofchange,weoftenfindourgreatestopportunities.”（在变化之中，我们常常能找到最大的机遇。）“Changeyourthoughtsandyouchangeyourworld.”（改变你的想法，你就改变了你的世界。）写作示范一：

WhenIwokeup,Ididn’tfindasmog-filledcityasexpected.Instead,Isawabeautifulparkrightacrossthestreetfromournewhome.Thetreeswerelushandgreen,andtherewerecolorfulflowersbloomingeverywhere.Theairwascrispandfresh,carryingafaintscentofbloomingblossoms.Isteppedoutsideandheardthecheerfulchirpingofbirds.Therewerepeoplejoggingandwalkingtheirdogs,andeveryoneseemedsofriendly.Istartedtofeelaglimmerofexcitementaboutthisnewplace.

AsIgotusedtothisnewsetting,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavetobeafraidofchange.Idecidedtoexploretheneighborhood.Ifoundalocallibrarywithavastcollectionofbooksandafriendlylibrarian.Ialsometsomekidsplayingbasketballinanearbycourt.Theyinvitedmetojointhem,andImademyfirstnewfriends.Ibegantounderstandthatchangecouldbringnewandwonderfulexperiences.IlookedforwardtoalltheadventuresthatawaitedmeinNewYork.写作示范二：

WhenIwokeup,Ididn’tfindasmog-filledcityasexpected.Thesunwasshiningbrightly,andIcouldseeaclearblueskyabove.Thereweretall,modernbuildingswithuniquearchitecturesthatcaughtmyeye.Thestreetswerecleanandlinedwithallkindsofinterestingshopsandcafes.Inoticedasmallrivernearbywithducksswimminggracefully.Thecityseemedfulloflifeandenergy.Iwasinstantlycaptivatedbyitscharm.

AsIgotusedtothisnewsetting,IrealizedthatIdidn’thavetobeafraidofchange.Istartedtotrynewthings.IwenttoalocaltheaterandwatchedaBroadwayshow,whichwasanamazingexperience.Ialsojoinedacommunityclubandmetpeoplewhosharedmyinterests.IfoundthatIcouldcreateagreatlifehere.IstoppeddwellingonthepastandembracedtheopportunitiesthatNewYorkhadtooffer.Iwasreadytowriteanewchapterofmylifeinthisvibrantcity.参考答案WhenIwokeup,Ididn’tfindasmog-filledcityasexpected.Instead,IwasmetwithaclearskyandthesoftsoundsofmorninginNewYork.Thecityseemedtobewakingupwithagentlehum,notthechaoticrushIhadimagined.Icouldseepeoplewalkingtheirdogs,joggersinthepark,andthefirstlightofdayreflect