高考英语复习读后续写练习+巴厘岛之旅遇困：现金不足难乘巴士+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习巴厘岛之旅遇困：现金不足难乘巴士1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ItwasintheearlymorningofonesummerholidaythatIwasflyingtoBali,Indonesiatoseevolcanoes.Andmybestfriendwaswaitingformyarrivalthere.WhenIgotofftheplaneandsteppedoutoftheairport,Iwasthinkinghowunbelievableitwastostandinfrontofthespectacularvolcanomountain.Theimaginarysightsdistractedme,foramoment,frommycurrentproblem.OnlywhenIstoodbythebusstationtoBali,didIrealizethatIhadnoenoughcashonme.TheonlyATMnearbydidn’tseemtohaveanypower,andInervouslylookeddownatmycreditcard,myonlylifeline.IhopedtheremightbeawaytoconvincethebusdrivertoletmeonandpayhimonceIreachedthedestinationandgotthecashfrommyfriend.4续写原文Whenthebusdooropened,Istoodbehindayoungladyandherlittlegirl.Istartedtoworry,wonderingwhatI’ddoifthecreditcarddidn’tmakethecut.Theyboardedthebus,paidincashandsatdowninthefirstrow.WhenIapproachedthedriverandheldoutmycreditcard,helookedatmeseriouslyandshookhishead.“Idon’thaveanymoney,”Isaid.IshowedhimmywallettoconfirmthatIwastellingthetruth.Hestaredbackblanklyandthensaidno.Istillwantedtoconvincehimagain.Ipulledupmyflightinformationonmyphoneandshowedittohim.IpointedtothenearbyATMandsignaledthatitdidn’twork.Thistime,helookedatmeandapologizedtome.“I’mreallysorry.Canyoumakewayfortheotherpassengers?”5续写原文Istoodaside.“WhatshouldIdo?”Ihesitated.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadvisitedthecity.Iwasunfamiliarwitheverythingaroundme.IsearchedthelocationsofotherATMsinthearea.Theyweretoofaraway.Itwouldtakemeatleasttwohourstogetthereonfoot.Ireallydidn’twantmyfriendtowaitformetoolong,butunfortunately,Ihadto.6段首句Paragraph1:Iwasabouttogetoffthebuswhentheyoungladystoodup.Paragraph2:OncewearrivedatBali,Ifollowedtheyoungladyandherlittlegirloffthebus.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9本文以人物为中心展开，主要讲述作者要去印度尼西亚巴厘岛和在那里等着他的朋友一起去看火山，但是下了飞机却发现没有足够的现金坐公交车，他去了自动取款机，发现不能用。所以等一位年轻的女士和她的女儿上车之后，他打算和司机商量一下，先坐上车，等下车的时候让朋友帮忙付钱。但是，不管他怎么解释，司机就是不让他上车。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Iwasabouttogetoffthebuswhentheyoungladystoodup.当我正准备下车时，那位年轻女士站了起来。她走到我面前，脸上带着友善的微笑，递给我一些当地货币，说她在公交车上听到了我的困境，很理解我初来乍到的不易，希望这些钱能够帮助我顺利到达目的地与朋友会合。我惊讶又感激地接过钱，连忙向她道谢，她只是轻轻摆了摆手，便带着小女孩准备离开。我看着手中的钱，心中满是温暖，也为自己之前的焦虑和无助感到有些不好意思。11续写思路分析Para2：OncewearrivedatBali,Ifollowedtheyoungladyandherlittlegirloffthebus.一旦我们到达巴厘岛，我跟着年轻女士和她的小女孩下了车。下车后，我再次真诚地向她们表达了感激之情，年轻女士笑着告诉我附近有一家不错的小餐馆，如果我还没吃饭可以去试试。我向她询问是否可以留下联系方式以便日后还钱，她却婉拒了，说这只是一个小忙，不必挂怀。看着她们远去的背影，我感慨万千，这趟旅程刚开始就遭遇波折，但也让我感受到了陌生人的善意。我怀揣着这份温暖，朝着与朋友约定的地点走去，心中对接下来的火山之旅又充满了期待，也决定以后也要像这位年轻女士一样，在他人遇到困难时伸出援手。12续写思路分析故事的发展方向续写线索：帮助付钱——感谢——下车——询问——还钱——婉拒——接受——再次感谢。13Part3范文呈现14范文呈现WhenIwasabouttogetoffthebusastheyoungladystoodup,shewalkedtowardsmewithakindsmile.Shetookoutsomelocalcurrencyfromherpurseandhandedittome,sayingthatshehadoverheardmypredicamentonthebusandunderstoodhowdifficultitcouldbeforanewcomer.Shehopedthatthismoneywouldhelpmereachmydestinationsmoothlyandmeetmyfriend.IwasbothastonishedandgratefulasItookthemoneyandthankedherhurriedly.Shejustwavedherhandslightlyandthenpreparedtoleavewiththelittlegirl.Ilookedatthemoneyinmyhand,filledwithwarmth,andalsofeltabitembarrassedaboutmypreviousanxietyandhelplessness.15范文呈现OncewearrivedatBaliandIfollowedtheyoungladyandherlittlegirloffthebus.Aftergettingoff,Isincerelyexpressedmygratitudetothemagain.TheyoungladysmiledandtoldmethattherewasanicesmallrestaurantnearbyandIcouldgiveitatryifIhadn'teatenyet.IaskedherifIcouldgethercontactinformationsothatIcouldpayherbacklater,butshedeclinedpolitely,sayingitwasjustasmallfavorandnottoworryaboutit.Watchingtheirfigureswalkingaway,Iwasdeeplytouched.Thisjourneyhadstartedwithasetback,butitalsomademeexperiencethekindnessofstrangers.Withthiswarmthinmyheart,IwalkedtowardstheplacewhereIhadarrangedtomeetmyfriend,fullofanticipationfortheupcomingvolcanotouranddeterminedtolendahelpinghandtoothersinneedlikethisyoungladyinthefuture.16升级版范文呈现Shetookoutsomelocalcurrencyfromherpurseandhandedittome,sayingthatshehadoverheardmypredicamentonthebusandunderstoodhowdifficultitcouldbeforanewcomer.Shehopedthatthismoneywouldhelpmereachmydestinationsmoothlyandmeetmyfriend.IwasbothastonishedandgratefulasItookthemoneyandthankedherhurriedly.Shejustwavedherhandslightlyandthenpreparedtoleavewiththelittlegirl.Ilookedatthemoneyinmyhand,filledwithwarmth,andalsofeltabitembarrassedaboutmypreviousanxietyandhelplessness.17升级版范文呈现Aftergettingoff,Isincerelyexpressedmygratitudetothemagain.TheyoungladysmiledandtoldmethattherewasanicesmallrestaurantnearbyandIcouldgiveitatryifIhadn'teatenyet.IaskedherifIcouldgethercontactinformationsothatIcouldpayherb