2025届高三英语一轮复习读后续写专题训练1课件

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填表格2读P1P2首句定情节发展列大纲

两段12句法3写句式

招招升级45写句式

招招升级水到渠成范文赏析1读原文

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填表格1AsIenteredmyfreshmanyearofcollege,Ihappilymovedintomydormitory(宿舍).Myroommate,Alex,welcomedmewithahalf-heartedsmile.Weexchangedpleasantries(寒暄),butsomethingfeltstrange.MaybeitwasthewayAlex'seyeslookedaroundtheroom,sizingmeup.Orperhapsitwasjustthetension(紧张局面)thathungintheair.AlexandIwereasdifferentasstormsandsunnydays.Iwasanearlyriser,whileAlexburnedthemidnightoil.Ipreferredatidyspace,whileAlexkeptthingseverywhere.Ourdisagreementsgrewfromthedirtyfloortolate-nightmusic.原文Oneevening,afteralongtiringdayofclasses,Ireturnedtofindmyfavoritecupbrokenonthekitchenfloor.Alexstoodthere,lookingguilty(内疚的).IfeltveryunhappyandstartedshoutingatAlex.Wordsflewlikearrows(箭),hurtingeachother'sfeelings.Hateandangerfilledtheroom.“Ican'ttakethisanymore!”Ishouted,andthenhurriedoutofthedormitory,leavingAlexalone.Daysturnedintoweeks,andAlexandIcontinuedtobelikestrangerssharingthesamespace.Idealtwithmystudiesandspentmoretimeoutsidethedorm.Alex,ontheotherhand,seemedtostayinhisownworld.Wealmosthadnocommunicationwitheachother.Butthen,onerainyafternoon,IfoundAlexsittingonhisbed,lookingoutofthewindow.Hiseyeswerered.“Look,”Alexbegan,“Iknowwe'redifferent.Butmaybewecanfindamiddleground."Thenhehandedmeafreshcupoftea.“Forthebrokencup,"hesaid.Iacceptedit,touchedbyhisfriendliness.“Andforthesleeplessnights,"Iagreed.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Westartedsmall.TherealturningpointcamewhenAlexfellill

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（adj./v./短语）角色1Alexmyroommateverydifferentfromeme角色2I背景事件微情节

动作(v.)/情绪(adj.)1TherearesomeproblemsbetweenmyroommateandI.Afteranincident，webecamegoodfriends.Myroommate,Alex,welcomedmewithahalf-heartedsmile.MaybeitwasthewayAlex'seyeslookedaroundtheroom,sizingmeup.Orperhapsitwasjustthetension(紧张局面)thathungintheair.Iwasanearlyriser,whileAlexburnedthemidnightoil.Ipreferredatidyspace,whileAlexkeptthingseverywhere.Wordsflewlikearrows(箭),hurtingeachother'sfeelings.Hateandangerfilledtheroom.Ishouted,andthenhurriedoutofthedormitory,leavingAlexalone.2读P1P2首句定情节发展Paragraph1:Westartedsmall._______________________________________________________Paragraph2:TherealturningpointcamewhenAlexfellill_______________________________________________________2Westartedsmall..

P1大意Iturnedoffmusicduringlaterhours.Alexmanagedtokeeptheroomorganized.Wesharedalotthingswitheachother.Theicywallsbegantodisappear.P1角色续写思路角色IAlex

动作(v.)情绪(adj.)

读P1P2首句

定情节发展I;Alex①HowdidIfeel?③WhatdidAlexdo?2②WhatdidIdo?④WhatdidAlexmake?P2大意P2角色续写思路角色Alex

动作(v.)情绪(adj.)

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定情节发展Ilookedafterhim.wedidalotofthingstogether.Webecomegoodfriends.I2TherealturningpointcamewhenAlexfellill

IAlex①WhatdidIsay?②WhatdidIdo?③HowdidAlexreact?列大纲：两段12句法3

列大纲：两段12句法1）2）3）4）5）6）7）8）9）10）11）12）思考：12句话中，有哪几句是固定内容？3Westartedsmall.

TherealturningpointcamewhenAlexfellill

列大纲：两段12句法1）固定2）3）4）5）6）固定7）固定8）9）10）11）12）固定结局/升华主旨续写首段首句续写二段首句承接首段开启下段首句3Westartedsmall.TherealturningpointcamewhenAlexfellill

列大纲：两段12句法1）2）3）4）5）6）7）8）9）10）11）12）3Westartedsmall.

TherealturningpointcamewhenAlexfellillIturnedoffmusicduringlaterhours.Alexmanagedtokeeptheroomorganized.WesharedalotofthingswitheachotherIknewhimmore.Wetalkedalot.Theicywallsbegantodisappear.Imadechickensoupforhim.Wedidalotofthingstogether.Ourconnectionhaddeepened.Webecamegoodfriends.IfoundAlex'snoteDifferencescouldbebridgesratherthantroubles.写句式

招招升级4

写句式

招招升级

招式1：while"引导一个并列句，通过对比两个或多个情况来表达对比或对照。例如："Shelovesplayingpiano,whilehersisterisonlyinterestedinguitar."（她喜欢弹钢琴，而她的姐姐只对吉他感兴趣）

4Iturnedoffthemusicduringlatehours,whileAlexmanagedtokeephissideoftheroommoreorganized.在深夜，我关掉了音乐，而亚历克斯设法让房间的另一边更加整洁。IlearnedaboutAlex'sloveforart,whileAlexlistenedcarefullyasItoldhimmyworriesaboutcollegelife.我了解了亚历克斯对艺术的热爱，而当我告诉亚历克斯我对大学生活的担忧时，亚历克斯仔细地听着。

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招招升级

1）Knowinghehadnoappetite,ImadechickensoupforAlex,andwewatchedoldmoviestogether.招式2：非谓语动词常用句式：

①

Doing...,...../

③...,doing...

②

with+n+doing/done/todo

4知道他没有食欲，我做了鸡汤给亚历克斯，我们一起看老电影。随着时间的推移，我发现我们的联系加深了。2）Withtimeelapsing,Ifoundthatourconnectionhaddeepened.

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招招升级招式3：倒装句notonly...butalso...notonly的部分提至句首，后面接半倒装的句型。4Notonlydidwesharestoriesaboutourfamilies,butalsoourdreams,andfears.我们不仅分享了关于我们家庭的故事，还分享了我们的梦想和恐惧。

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招招升级4招式4：

动作链（V1,V2andV3)

将笼统的大动作拆解成具体的小动作，画面感十足

Welaughed,cried,andexperiencedcollegelifesidebyside.我们一起欢笑，一起哭泣，一起体验大学生活。

写句式

招招升级e.g.:6）Suddenly,awarmcurrentwashedoverme.4招式5：无灵主语

①afloodof+（情绪类）n.seized/welledup/cameoversb.②

无灵主语（表示时间、地点的名词）+有灵动词（see/witness）Step4.写句式

招招升级

e.g.:7）ItwasatthattimethatIrealizedthatasmallkindnessactioncouldmakesuchabigdifference!招式6：主旨升华常用句式：“直到那时我才意识到......”

ItwasatthattimethatIrealizedthat...

ItwasatthattimethatIrealizedthatdifferencescouldbebridgesratherthantroubles,andmakingatruefriendisworthit.正是在那个时候，我意识到差异可以是桥梁而不是麻烦，而结交真正的朋友是值得的水到渠成范文赏析5

范文赏析5

Westartedsmall.Iturnedoffthemusicduringlatehours,whileAlexmanagedtokeephissideoftheroommoreorganized.Asthedayspassed,wegraduallyopeneduptoeachother.AndIneverimaginedbeforethatIcouldhavedeep,all-nightconversationswithAlex.Notonlydidwesharestoriesaboutourfamilies,butalsoourdreams,andfears.IlearnedaboutAlex's