中考英语人教版总复习主题写作突破课件主题四做事2

主题四做事主题透析教材链接七下Unit2Whattimedoyougotoschool?七下Unit4Don’teatinclass.八上Unit1Wheredidyougoonvacation?八下Unit3Couldyoupleasecleanyourroom?九全Unit10You’resupposedtoshakehands.头脑风暴素材积累一、主题词块1.

承诺做某事

2.

和某人分享某事

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熬夜

4.

最后但同样重要的一点

promisetodosth.sharesth.withsb.stayuplatelastbutnotleast二、高分句型1.Afterthat,Iusuallyexercise

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然后我通常在大约十点二十分锻炼。2.InChina,it’s

yourchopsticks

.anemptybowl.

在中国,用筷子打空碗是不礼貌的。atabouttentwentyimpolitetousetohit3.

thesummervacationcomingsoon,Ifeel

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myparents

mysisterandmetoBeijing.

暑假马上就要到了,我感到非常兴奋,我的父母答应带我和妹妹去北京。(so…that引导结果状语从句)4.Besides,

istheGreatWall,whichis

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此外,我们必须去的另一个地方是长城,它是世界上最长的城墙。(which引导定语从句)Withsoexcitedthathavepromisedtotakeanotherplacewemustgothelongestwallintheworld典例剖析(2024眉山)假定你是李华,打算在即将到来的暑假中前往北京旅行,请根据下图提示给你的英国笔友戴维(David)写一封邮件,分享你的旅行计划。注意:(1)词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。DearDavid,

Yours,LiHua第一步“五定”审题体裁应用文人称第一人称为主时态一般现在时、一般将来时要点旅行地点;活动内容;表达愿望思路点明主题:暑假计划去北京旅行介绍出发时间、旅行方式、和谁一起去、计划待几天、在北京做什么活动及原因;最后表达自己的愿望等第二步“三段”谋篇第三步润色成文【基础版】DearDavid,How’sitgoing?Thesummervacationiscomingsoon.Ifeelveryexcited,andmyparentshavepromisedtotakemysisterandmetoBeijing.NowI’llsharemytravelplanwithyou.We’llgotherebyplaneinJulyandstayfor5days.We’regoingtovisitthePalaceMuseumtoknowaboutstoriesofthepast.Besides,anotherplaceistheGreatWall,whichisthelongestwallintheworld.We’regoingtotakeawalkthereandadmirehowgreatweChineseare!Ibelievewe’llenjoyourselvesinBeijing.Whataboutyoursummerplan?Yours,LiHua【升格版】DearDavid,How’sitgoing?Withthesummervacationcomingsoon,IfeelsoexcitedthatmyparentshavepromisedtotakemysisterandmetoBeijing.①NowI’dliketosharemytravelplanwithyou.We’llgotherebyplaneinJulyandstayfor5days.Duringthatperiod②,we’regoingtovisitthePalaceMuseumtoknowaboutstoriesofthepast.升格说明①介词短语Withthesummervacationcomingsoon简化句子结构;so…that句型的使用,丰富了句式的多样性。②Duringthatperiod的出现,使时间更加具体化。Besides,anotherplacewemustgo③istheGreatWall,whichisthelongestwallintheworld.We’regoingtotakeawalkthereandadmirehowgreatweChineseare!Ibelievewe’llenjoyourselvesinBeijing.Whataboutyoursummerplan?Yours,LiHua③定语从句的使用,彰显了作者扎实的写作功底,也使短文更具有可读性。名师点评

本文为一封邮件,具体介绍了北京之旅的计划。文章结构层次分明,语言表达地道,逻辑清晰。首先作者引出将要进行的北京之旅;接着陈述旅游的具体事宜;最后表达愿望,合情合理。书写时,作者使用了一般现在时和一般将来时,还正确地使用了定语从句、宾语从句以及结果状语从句等,不愧为一篇佳作,值得学习。学以致用1.要点提示类·文明行为

(2024广元二模)如今外出旅游备受欢迎,但在

旅游中我们也时常会看到一些不文明行为。学校校报正以

“TravelinginGoodManners”为题,向广大学生征稿,倡导大家文

明旅游。请你结合以下写作要点和自己的认识,写一篇80词左右的英

文稿件。标题和开头语已给出,不计入总词数。写作要点:(1)列举常见的不文明行为(不少于两个);(2)根据不文明行为提出个人观点及建议(不少于两点建议);(3)倡导文明旅游。参考词汇:touristattractions(景区)TravelinginGoodMannersNowadays,travelingisgettingmoreandmorepopular.

Onepossibleversion:TravelinginGoodManners

Nowadays,travelingisgettingmoreandmorepopular.However,somepeopledon’tbehavethemselvesintouristattractionswhentraveling.Forexample,someofthetravelersthrowrubbisheverywhere.It’snotonlyimpolitebutalsoharmfultotheenvironmentaroundus.Weshouldputrubbishintodustbins.Someofthetravelerslikepickingflowersinapark.Itshouldalsobestoppedbecauseflowersarebeautifulandweshouldprotectthem.Wecanputupsignsbesidetheflowerstoremindtravelersnottopickthem.Let’stakeactionrightnowandtravelingoodmanners.2.图表提示类·成长之旅少年强则国强。近几年,国家颁布了诸多有关

青少年健康成长的文件。假如你是李华,请你根据下面表格提示,介绍

你们学校是如何落实这些文件的,说出自己学校出现的问题,并提出合

理化的建议。除了提示中的内容,请你至少再补充一条。HowtoGrowUpHealthilyThingsProblemsAdviceSmartphonestakethemto

schoolnotallowedat

schoolSleepingnotsleepenough

sleepfirstSportsnotdothemmoreP.E.lessonsHomework……要求:(1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;(3)100词左右,文章标题、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Onepossibleversion:HowtoGrowUpHealthily

Asteenagers,wearethefutureofourhomeland.Weshouldgrowuphealthily.Buthow?Firstly,it’swrongtotakesmartphonestoschool.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingontheirsmartphones.Soanybodyisnotallowedtodothat.Secondly,somestudentscan’tsleepwelleveryday.Sometimestheyhavetostayuplatetodohomework.Ithinkenoughsleepshouldcomefirstandhomeworkcomessecond.Next,somestudentsaren’tgoodatsports.Theydon’tlikedoingsports.Infact,sportsareveryimportantandgoodfortheirhealth.Tosolvetheproblem,therearemoreP.E.lessonsinmyschoolandwerunfortw