2025届读后续写写作练习-人与自我：野外历练成长蜕变

读后续写-人与自我：野外历练，成长蜕变第二节(满分25分)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwasfifteenyearsold,myparentssignedmeupforawildernesssurvivaltrainingcamp.Atfirst,Iwasextremelyreluctanttogo.Tome,leavingthecozyenvironmentofhomeandventuringintothewild,whichwasfilledwithuncertaintiesandchallenges,wasnothingbutaformoftorture.However,myparentsweresoinsistentthatIhadnochoicebuttoembarkonthisjourney.Uponarrivingatthetrainingcamp,IfeltevenmorelikebackingoutwhenIsawtheunfamiliarpeersaroundmeandthestrictcoaches.Thefirstday'strainingtaskwastosearchforthedesignatedsuppliesinthemountainforestandthensetupsimpletentsforustosleepinatnight.Iclumsilyfollowedeveryone'slead,butmistakeskeptpoppingup.SometimesIwouldlosemywaywhilelookingforthesupplies,andothertimesIaccidentallybrokethepoleswhentryingtoputupthetent.Ifeltlikeatotalfailureandwasoverwhelmedwithfrustration.Istoodthere,staringblanklyatthehalf-builttentandthescatteredpoles,feelingasenseofhelplessnesswellingupinsideme.Theothercampersseemedtobegettingalongjustfine,chattingandlaughingastheycompletedtheirtaskssmoothly.Incontrast,Iwasinsuchamess,anditmademefeelevenmoreoutofplaceanddiscouraged.Icouldn'thelpbutthinkthatmaybeIjustwasn'tcutoutforthiskindofactivityandthatIwouldneverbeabletofitinorsucceedhere.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。JustasIwasonthevergeofgivingupandgoingtothecoachtobegtogohome,aboywholookedevensmallerandthinnerthanmewalkedoverwithafriendlysmileonhisface.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hecarefullystudiedtheinstructionmanualwhileguidingmeonwhattodostepbystep.一、事件线索1.十五岁时，父母坚持给“我”报名野外生存训练营，“我”虽不情愿但只能前往。到达训练营后，面对陌生伙伴和严苛教练，“我”本就想打退堂鼓，而第一天训2.练任务中，在山林找物资和搭建帐篷时“我”不断出错，状况频出，感觉自己像个失败者，内心满是沮丧和无助。3.看着其他营员顺利完成任务，“我”越发觉得自己不适合这里，融入不了也难以取得成功。二、人物情感线索从最开始对参加训练营的极度不情愿，到抵达训练营后的害怕退缩，在第一天训练任务里因不断犯错而产生强烈的挫败感、无助感，看到别人顺利时进一步陷入自我怀疑、气馁的消极情绪之中。三、文章主旨文通过描述“我”在野外生存训练营初期经历困难与挫折时的种种表现和内心感受，旨在展现成长往往伴随着面对挑战、克服困难以及突破自我怀疑的过程，启示人们要勇于在困境中坚持并尝试改变，才能实现成长。续写思路可以沿着“我”在小亮帮助下重燃信心后继续后续训练的角度展开，比如在后续其他项目中又遇到新困难，“我”如何运用从搭帐篷中获得的经验和新收获的勇气去应对，进一步体现成长；或者写在训练营后续日子里与伙伴、教练之间关系的变化，以及“我”心态上从消极到积极的彻底转变等，最后点明这次经历对“我”今后人生的深远影响，突出成长这一主题。优秀范文JustasIwasonthevergeofgivingupandgoingtothecoachtobegtogohome,aboywholookedevensmallerandthinnerthanmewalkedoverwithafriendlysmileonhisface.Hiseyeswerebrightandfullofwarmth,asifcarryinganinvisiblepowerthatcoulddispelthegloomycloudshangingovermyheart.Hesaidgently,"Don'tworry.Everyonemakesmistakesatfirst.Let'sdoittogether."Hisvoicewassoftyetfirm,likeagentlebreezeinthestillairofmydespair,andhiswordswerelikeawarmrayofsunshineinthecold,graduallymeltingtheiceofself-doubtandfrustrationwithinme.Hecarefullystudiedtheinstructionmanualwhileguidingmeonwhattodostepbystep.Everynowandthen,hewouldlookupatme,explainingindetailhowtoinsertthepolesintotherightslotsandsecurethemfirmly.WhenIfumbledwiththeropes,notknowinghowtotietheknotsproperly,hepatientlydemonstratedthecorrectwayagainandagain,hishandsmovingdeftly,showingmeeachmovementslowlyuntilIgotthehangofit.Withhispatienthelp,wefinallymanagedtosetupthetentproperly.AnditwasthenthatIrealizedthatIshouldn'tgiveupeasily.Thissmallsuccesswaslikeasparkthatreignitedthefireofmyconfidence,givingmenewcouragetofacethefollowingchallengesinthecamp.高分表达likeagentlebreezeinthestillai