专题10 书面表达热点话题16篇-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（江苏专用）

2023江苏省中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递第六期专题10书面表达热点话题16篇一、材料作文1．（2023·江苏徐州·统考二模）最近网上流行这样一句话：要么旅行，要么读书，身体和灵魂总有一个在路上。旅行和读书一样重要，它是一种学习和体验，能给我们带来身心的愉悦。某青少年英文网站举办了一场主题为“Awonderfultour”的征文比赛。假如你是王平，你准备投稿参加这次比赛，内容包括：1.分享一次你难忘的旅行经历及感受；2.阐述旅行的好处（至少两点）3.呼吁更多的同学外出旅行。要求：1.100词左右，已给出的句子不记入总词数；2.必须包括全部要点，但不能逐条翻译，可适当发挥；3.文章不要提及真实的校名和人名。Travellingtenthousandmilesisasgoodasreadingtenthousandbooks.Ilovetravelling.Lastsummervacation,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Travellingtenthousandmilesisasgoodasreadingtenthousandbooks.Ilovetravellingverymuch.Lastsummervacation,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.Onthefirstday,weclimbedtheGreatWall.Ifelttiredbuthappy.Thenextday,wevisitedthePalaceMuseumandenjoyedmanybeautifulworksofart.IlearnedmoreaboutthehistoryofMingandQingDynasties.ThenItastedBeijingduckinWangfujingStreet.IreallyhadagoodtimeinBeijing.Ithinktravellingcanopenupourminds.Wecanmeetallkindsofpeopleandlearnmoreaboutdifferentcultures.Dearguys,let’sgotravellingandlearnmoreabouttheworld!【详解】[整体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：具体描述自己难忘的旅行经历；第二步：阐述旅行给你带来的好处；第三步：书写结语，呼吁更多同学出去旅行。[亮点词汇]①haveagoodtime过得开心②allkindsof各种各样的[高分句型]①Ithinktravellingcanopenupourminds.（省略that的宾语从句；动名词作主语）②Dearguys,let’sgotravellingandlearnmoreabouttheworld!（祈使句）2．（2023·江苏扬州·统考二模）假如你叫李明，是南京阳光中学学成会成员之一。该校的国际部要组织学生下周三来扬州瘦西湖开展研学活动。请你以学生会的名义，根据以下提示，为国际部的学生们拟一则英文通知。提示如下：Time,transportation&placesWhen&howwillyougo?Wherewillyougo?ActivitiesWhatcanyouseethere?Whatcanyoudothere?…Tips(Atleast3points)MannersSafetytips参考词汇：studytour,theSlenderWestLake要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

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It’smygreathonortoinformyouthatwewill…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Students’UnionofSunshineMiddleSchool【答案】例文Dearschoolmates,It’smygreathonortoinformyouthatwewillgototheSlenderWestLakeinYangzhouforastudytournextWednesday.We’llmeetattheschoolgateat6a.m.andthengototheSlenderWestLakebycoach.Springisthebesttimetovisitthelake.Therewecanenjoybeautifulviewsandhaveachancetoseebeesandbutterfliesplayamongdifferentkindsofflowers.Wecanalsowalkalongtheriversideandgoboatingwithourfriendsifweareinterested.What’smore,whilewalkinginthepark,wecanhearbirdssinghappilyinthegreentrees.Whenweenjoythebeauty,weshouldmindourbehaviors.Alwaysremembernottopickflowersordroplittereverywhere.Besides,itisimportantforustokeepsafetyrulesinmind,especiallywhenwerowaboatorplayintheamusementpark.Itwillbeafineday.Ihopewecanenjoyourselves.Students’UnionofSunshineMiddleSchool【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：以一般现在时为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生不要遗漏表格中提示的每一项内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点题介绍国际部要组织学生下周三来扬州瘦西湖开展研学活动。第二步，具体介绍活动的时间、交通方式、具体活动及注意事项等情况。第三步，书写结语，表达期许和祝愿。[亮点词汇]①haveachancetodosth.有机会做某事②differentkindsof各种各样的③mindourbehaviors注意我们的行为④keepsafetyrulesinmind牢记安全规则[高分句型]①What’smore,whilewalkinginthepark,wecanhearbirdssinghappilyinthegreentrees.（省略句）②Besides,itisimportantforustokeepsafetyrulesinmind,especiallywhenwerowaboatorplayintheamusementpark.（“Itis+adj.forsb.todosth.”句型）3．（2023·江苏宿迁·统考二模）劳动实践对学生的成长有着至关重要的影响，它不仅可以培养学生的生活技能，增长生活见识，还能让学生在劳动中体会到付出的价值和收获的喜悦。比如为父母做一餐饭；帮助班级打扫一次卫生；在社区里做志愿服务等等。五一劳动节即将来临，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你在生活中或课堂中的一次劳动实践。要点：1.你经历的一次劳动实践是什么？2.你是如何完成这次劳动的？3.你的收获和感想是什么？注意：1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.词数90个左右；3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Nowadays,ourparentsalwaysprepareeverythingforus.Soweseldomhaveanchancetodosomethingforthem.

Mymotherwasilllastweekend.Ithoughtitwasmyturntocookbreakfastforher.Idownloadedacookingapp.Ifollowedtheinstructionsstepbystep.Aftermymothertastedit,shesmiledatmeandsaidthatwasthemostdeliciousmealshehadeaten.

Fromthisexperience,Irealizedoinghouseworkisimportantforus.Itcannotonlydevelopourbasicskills,butalsoteachushowtotakecareofourselves.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，讲述当今父母为孩子安排好一切，所以孩子没有机会做一些劳动实践，以此来引出本文主题；第二步，讲述自己如何完成这次劳动的；第三步，讲述自己的收获和感想。[亮点词汇]①perparefor为……准备②stepbystep逐步地③beimportantfor对……重要[高分句型]①Aftermymothertastedit,shesmiledatmeandsaidthatwasthemostdeliciousmealshehadeaten.（after引导时间状语从句）②Fromthisexperience,Irealizedoinghouseworkisimportantforus.（动名词作主语，宾语从句）4．（2023·江苏南京·统考一模）Inourgrowth,wemaymakepromisestoourfriends,toourparents,toourteachers,andeventoourselves.Pleasewriteapassagetotalkaboutanunforgettablepromise.Kitty,“Ipromisetokeepsecretsforyou,Lucy.”Tom,“Ipromisetodothethingsmyself,dadandmum.”Ben,“Ipromisetostudyharderinthecomingterm,MissWang.”注意：1.题目自拟，词数80左右；2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；3.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Inourgrowth,wemaymakepromisestoourfriends,toourparents,toourteachers,andeventoourselves.Iusedtobeveryfat,andwhenIwasinphysicaleducationclass,Iwasverytiredafterrunningforawhile.IpromisedmyphysicaleducationteacherthatIwouldstrengthenphysicalexerciseandmakemyselfhealthier.Sincethen,Ihavebeenrunningforhalfanhouronmyowneverydaybeforegoingtoschool.Ialsoenjoyplayingbasketballverymuch.IfIhavetimeonweekends,Ioftengototheparkwithfriendstoplaybasketball.Iamveryhealthynow,andmysportsareverygood.Ijustdidit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：根据提示内容，介绍你做出的一次难忘的承诺，可适当发挥，注意语句通顺，条理清晰。[写作步骤]第一步，通过介绍我们成长过程中可能做的承诺来引出话题；第二步，介绍自己难忘的一次承诺；第三步，介绍做出承诺后的结果。[亮点词汇]①usedtobe过去是②enjoydoingsth喜欢做某事③onone’sown独自[高分句型]①whenIwasinphysicaleducationclass,Iwasverytiredafterrunningforawhile.（when引导时间状语从句）②IfIhavetimeonweekends,Ioftengototheparkwithfriendstoplaybasketball.（if引导的条件状语从句）5．（2023·江苏淮安·校联考二模）2023年4月9日上午，随着发令枪响，2023淮安马拉松暨大运河马拉松系列赛（淮安站）激情开赛，来自14个国家以及全国31个省市的1.5万名选手陆续通过起跑点。赛道途经钵池山公园、森林公园、河下古镇、周恩来纪念馆等49个淮安当地地标。这次赛事依旧秉承“运河三千里，醉美是淮安”这一主题，现在请你围绕这一主题，向你的外地朋友介绍这次赛事和淮安这座城市，内容包括以下要点：1.描述这次马拉松比赛（举办时间、参赛人数和来源、我市人民在现场表现、……）；2.介绍淮安这座城市（运河之都美誉、地理位置、景点、……）3.表达你对这次赛事的感受和对这座城市的喜爱。参考词汇：选手runner

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纪念馆MemorialHall注意：1.词数在100左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3.补齐要点，适当发挥；Mydearfriends,I’mgladtointroducesomethingaboutThe2023Huai’anMarathonandtheHuai’ancitytoyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Huai’anwelcomesyou!【答案】例文Mydearfriends,I’mgladtointroducesomethingaboutthe2023Huai’anMarathonandtheHuai’ancitytoyou.TheracewasheldonApril9,2023.Fifteenthousandrunnerstookpartintheraceandtheycamefrom14countriesand31provincesorcities.Localpeoplecheeredforthembydancingandshouting“Comeon!”whentherunnersranby.Moreover,someevenplayedtheroleoftheMonkeyKingforthem.Huai’aniscalledthecapitalofcanal.ItliesinthenorthofJiangsuProvince.Therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchasBochishanPark,HexiaAncientTownandZhouEnlaiMemorialHallt.Itisalsofamousforitsdeliciousfood.TheraceissuccessfulandIfeelhappytolivehere.Huai’anwelcomesyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示向外地朋友介绍2023淮安马拉松和淮安这座城市。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题。表明本文要介绍淮安马拉松和淮安这座城市；第二步，具体介绍淮安马拉松的举办时间、参赛人数和来源以及市民在现场表现；第三步，介绍淮安的地理位置和著名景点等；第四步，总结对这次赛事的感受和对这座城市的喜爱。[亮点词汇]①tookpartin参加②camefrom来自③liesin位于[高分句型]①TheracewasheldonApril9,2023.（被动语态）②Localpeoplecheeredforthembydancingandshouting“Comeon!”whentherunnersranby.（when引导的时间状语从句）6．（2023·江苏宿迁·统考二模）初中生活就要结束了，同学们即将开始新的征程，规划新的人生。请根据下表提示以“Myplanforthenewlife”为题，给你们校报写一篇英语短文，介绍你的计划。学习制定计划，努力学习；多读好书，……生活早睡早起，勤做锻炼，如……做做家务，感恩父母；听听音乐，放松自己；外出旅游，参观名胜；愿望……注意：1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。MyplanforthenewlifeOurmiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Anewlifeisontheway._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyplanforthenewlifeOurmiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Anewlifeisontheway.Iplantodolotsofthingsforthenewlife.First,Iwillmakeaplanandtrytokeepabalancebetweenworkandrest.I’llworkhardonallsubjects.Inmyfreetime,Ihopetoreadmoreusefulbookstolearnaboutdifferenthistoriesandcultures.Readingcanopenupanewworldtome.Second,I’dliketohaveahealthylifestyle.It’sgoodformetogetupearlyandgotobedearly.Exercisemoreeveryday.I’llgojoggingintheparkorplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Moreover,I’mgoingtodosomehouseworkformyparentstothankthem.Listeningtomusicisgoodformetorelaxmyself.Ialsowanttogotravellingtoenjoythenaturalbeautyandvisitthepalacesofinterest.Inaword,I’mlookingforwardtohavingameaningfulnewlife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：本文要求从学习、生活和原文等方面介绍新生活的计划，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，先介绍学习计划；第二步，介绍生活计划；第三步，介绍自己的愿望。[亮点词汇]①begoodfor对……有好处②Inaword总之③wanttodosth想要做某事[高分句型]①It’sgoodformetogetupearlyandgotobedearly.（it固定句型）②Listeningtomusicisgoodformetorelaxmyself.（动名词作宾语）7．（2023·江苏南京·统考一模）你在学校英文校刊KIDSMAG上看到征文启事。请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。注意：1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。2.不少于80词（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。AnAmazingFestivalI’mgladtosharemyideasabouttheamazingfestival.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnAmazingFestivalI’mgladtosharemyideasabouttheamazingfestival.IwanttonamethefestivalGreatestChefsandcelebrateitonMay8.Ilikeitbecauseitcanenrichourschoollifeandprepareusforabetterfuture.Tomakethefestivalinterestingandcolorful,afoodDIYcompetitioncanbeheld.Firstly,wewillencouragestudentstomakeoneortwodishes.Afterthat,parentsandteacherswillbeinvitedtotastewhatwehavecookedforthem.Finally,ourteacherswillvotefortheBestDIYCookinourschool.Asforthewinners,theycangetabigprize—onedaywithouthomework!Isn’tthatamazing?I’msureeveryonecanhavealotoffunonthatamazingday!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要求，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，首先谈谈你把这个节日命名为什么，以及在什么时间庆祝；第二步，具体阐述组织哪些活动来庆祝这个节日；第三步，谈谈这个节日为何令人惊喜。[亮点词汇]①encouragesbtodosth鼓励某人做某事②beinvitedtodosth被邀请去做某事③alotof许多[高分句型]①Ilikeitbecauseitcanenrichourschoollifeandprepareusforabetterfuture.（原因状语从句）②I’msureeveryonecanhavealotoffunonthatamazingday!（宾语从句）二、话题作文8．（2023·江苏泰州·统考二模）随着智能手机的普及以及网络的快速发展，观看短视频成为人们的热门消遣方式。假如你是某中学九年级的一名学生，你班进行了主题为“Areshortvideosgoodforteenagers?”的英语辩论。请你根据正、反方的观点及提示写一篇总结报告。写作提示：1.同学们对青少年观看短视频的看法；2.你的看法及建议。注意事项：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Nowadays,shortvideoshavebecomemoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.Aretheygoodorbadforteenagers?Thestudentshavedifferentopinions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Nowadays,shortvideoshavebecomemoreandmorepopularinourdailylife.Aretheygoodorbadforteenagers?Thestudentshavedifferentopinions.Somestudentsthinkwatchingshortvideosishelpfultoteenagers,asit’sagoodwaytogetknowledgeaswellasrelax.However,othersdisagree.Intheireyes,watchingshortvideosisawasteoftime.What’sworse,spendingtoomuchtimeonscreenmaycausepooreyesight.Inmyopinion,wecanwatchshortvideos,butwehadbettermakeagoodchoicefirst.Weshouldchoosevideosthatcanhelpimproveourselves.Besides,weneedtocontrolthetimethatwespendonthem.Halfanhoureachdayisenough.Aslongasweuseshortvideosproperly,wecannotonlyhavefunbutalsolearnsomethingusefulfromthem.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示中关于正反方的观点的内容，需补充不同观点所对应的理由，以及个人看法与建议。[写作步骤]第一步，表明主题，不同人对短视频的看法不同；第二步，阐述正反两方对“短视频是否对青少年有益”的不同看法及理由；第三步，表达个人看法及“看或不看短视频”的建议。[亮点词汇]①aswellas以及②inone’seyes在某人看来③what’sworse更糟糕的是④inone’sopinion在某人看来⑤hadbetterdosth.最好做某事⑥aslongas只要[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkwatchingshortvideosishelpfultoteenagers,asit’sagoodwaytogetknowledgeaswellasrelax.（省略that的宾语从句）②What’sworse,spendingtoomuchtimeonscreenmaycausepooreyesight.（动名词作主语）③Weshouldchoosevideosthatcanhelpimproveourselves.（that引导定语从句）④Aslongasweuseshortvideosproperly,wecannotonlyhavefunbutalsolearnsomethingusefulfromthem.（“notonly...butalso...”句型）9．（2023·江苏苏州·统考二模）“是角色，有光芒。”小组合作中，你通常会担任什么角色？请从以下情境中任选一个，谈谈你喜欢承担的角色及理由，并描述你承担该角色的经历，写一篇约100词的英语短文，在学校英语公众号WeDo,WeShow板块分享。注意：文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。TheroleIliketoplay_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheroleIliketoplayIprefertoplaytheroleofleaderingroupdiscussions.Asthenamesuggests,leadersarepeoplewhocanleadtheprocessanddirectionofthediscussion.Sometimestheleadershouldsolvetheproblemsbetweengroupmembers.Asforme,Ithinkbeingaleadercanhelpmelearnhowtoarrangethingsproperly,whichmeansalottome.Lastweek,wediscussedthetopicofhowtheinternetaffectedourlife.Theteacheraskedustoworkingroupsandmakepresentationsthenextday.Asthegroupleader,Iassigneddifferenttaskstodifferentmembers.Weallcompletedourowntasksinanorganizedwayanddidthepresentationsuccessfully.Whatawonderfulexperience!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中所给出的提示“喜欢承担的角色及理由，相关经历”，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步，表明自己喜欢承担的角色及理由；第二步，阐述承担该角色时的经历；第三步，表达个人感受。[亮点词汇]①prefertodosth.更喜欢做某事②asfor至于③asksb.todosth.要求某人做某事④inanorganizedway有组织地，有条理地[高分句型]①Asforme,Ithinkbeingaleadercanhelpmelearnhowtoarrangethingsproperly,whichmeansalottome.（动名词作主语，which引导非限制性定语从句）②Whatawonderfulexperience!（what引导感叹句）10．（2023·江苏扬州·统考二模）你校将组织英语作文比赛，请根据所给提示，以“LiveaMeaningfulLife”为题，写一篇短文参赛。要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2.必须包括所有要点内容，并适当发挥；3.词数在100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。LiveaMeaningfulLifeLifeisagift.Weshoulddowhatisinterestingandcolourfultomakeitmeaningful.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LiveaMeaningfulLifeLifeisagift.Weshoulddowhatisinterestingandmeaningfultomakeitmeaningful.Firstofall,ameaningfullifeisalsohealthy.Readingispartofourlife.Asaresult,wecan’tlivewithoutit.Ofcourse,exercisingisasimportantasreading.Astrongbodycanreducethepossibilityofthedisease.Wealwaysneedahealthydiet.Itisnecessaryforustoeatmorehealthilyandexercisemore.Weshouldeatvegetablesandfruits.Unhealthyfoodwillberefused.Second,wearesupposedtohaveasenseofduty.Theenvironmentisourhome.Werequirestoplantmoretreesandrecyclethewatserightnow.Also,animalsneedprotecting.Everylifeisvaluable.Wecan’thurtorkillthemforourneeds.Third,takingpartincharitycanmakeourlifemeaningful.Wecanserveasvolunteerstohelpthedisabledorcleanuptheparks.Wehopewecanimprovetheirlives.Lastbutleast,weshoulddevelopgoodmanners,suchasqueuinginlinesandbeingpoliteinpublic.Otherswillbecomfortablebecauseofthegoodmanners.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给的材料，以“LiveaMeaningfulLife”为题写一篇短文，介绍一下过有意义的生活该怎么做。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步：先承接短文开头。第二步：直入主题，详细地介绍过有意义的生活该怎么做。[亮点词汇]①partof部分②besupposedtodo应该做③takingpartin参加

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②Wehopewecanimprovetheirlives.（省略that的宾语从句）③Lastbutleast,weshoulddevelopgoodmanners,suchasqueuinginlinesandbeingpoliteinpublic.（suchas用来列举示例）11．（2023·江苏苏州·统考一模）在我们成长的过程中，总离不开一些人、一些事，比如父母、老师、学习、爱好等。他们像雨露一样滋润着我们，帮助我们成长，丰富我们的生命。请你以________Help(s)MeGrow为题写一篇文章，谈谈自己成长中的变化，以及这个变化对你的意义。内容包括：1.你过去的状态；2.你发生的变化；3.变化对你的意义。注意：1.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.需先把标题补充完整，文章内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。________Help(s)MeGrowAsweprogressthroughlife,avarietyofthingsorpeoplecontributetoourpersonalgrowthanddevelopment._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WritingHelp(s)MeGrowAsweprogressthroughlife,avarietyofthingsorpeoplecontributetoourpersonalgrowthanddevelopment.IusedtobeashypersonwhoneverfeltcomfortablespeakinginfrontofacrowdandIoftenfeltlikemyvoicedidn’tmatter.Growingup,IwasoftenoverlookedandfeltlikeIwasnobody.ButallofthischangedwhenIdiscoveredmytrueloveforwriting.Ithelpedmefindmyvoice.Istartedtoexpressmythoughtsandfeelingsthroughmywritingfreely,whichhelpedmegrowmoreconfident.Throughwriting,IwasabletolearnmoreaboutwhoIwasandwhatIwantedinlife.Mygrowthandconfidencehavechangedmylifeforthebetter.Ihavebeenabletorealizemydreamswithcourageandfaith.WritinghasopenedupmanynewdoorsformeandhasmademeintothepersonIamtoday.【详解】[总体分析]题材：本文是一篇话题作文；时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和”现在完成时“；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注心不要遗漏“信息提示”中帮助我们成长的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图借用“随着我们在生活中的进步，各种各样的事情或人对我们的个人成长和发展做出了贡献”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“你过去的状态、你发生的变化、变化对你的意义等”几个方面重点介绍写作帮助我成长具体情况；第三步，书写结语，表达“写作为我打开了许多新的大门，使我成为今天的我”的感悟。[亮点词汇]avarietyof各种各样的contributeto贡献beableto能够[高分句型]①Istartedtoexpressmythoughtsandfeelingsthroughmywritingfreely,whichhelpedmegrowmoreconfident.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）②Ihavebeenabletorealizemydreamswithcourageandfaith.（现在完成时，表达对现在的影响）12．（2023·江苏盐城·统考二模）当你跨越时间之门，打开历史之窗，你会追随谁的足迹？阳光中学英语广播站推出一个专题为MyFavoriteHistoricalPerson的栏目，请同学们介绍他们心中最喜欢的中国历史人物，请你就此写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.Generalinformation（name,age,birthplace...）2.Whydoyouchoosehim/her?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromhim/her?要求：不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校和考生的真实信息；词数100个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。MyFavoriteHistoricalPersonInthelonghistoryofChina,therearemanyfamoushistoricalpersons.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MyFavoriteHistoricalPersonInthelonghistoryofChina,therearemanyfamoushistoricalpersons.Agreatnumberofhistoricalfigureshavemadegreatcontributionstothesocietyandsomeofthemreallyimpressedthemselvesonourmemory.Asforme,myfavoritehistoricalpersonisZhugeLiang,afamouspoliticianwithgreatachievementinliteratureintheThreeKingdomsperiod.HisintelligenceisacknowledgedbytheChinese.HehelpedLiuBeitogetovertheemergenciesandsuccessfullyestablishedShu.Moreover,variousarticleswrittenbyhimhavebeenpassedonuntilnow,impressingmewithhisloyaltyandhugeamountofknowledge.Therefore,Iregardloyaltyasthemostvaluablequalityandalwayskeeponlearningtobeaknowledgeableperson.Atthesametime,Ia