2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+矿洞救援：生死一线的兄弟情+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习矿洞救援：生死一线的兄弟情1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Steve,21,wasleadingasmallteamintoanabandoned(废弃的)minenearParadisePines,California.Withhimwerehis19-year-oldbrotherAllen,andafishingfriend,32-year-oldBobbyErler.Afteracoupleofhoursofexploring,Stevesuddenlyfelttheearthgivewayunderhim.Thedrainageshaft(排水井)!Hisfingersclawedhelplesslyatthewetsoilashefell.Hewasfallingintodarkness,hisbodystrugglingagainstthewallsoftheshaft.20feetaway,Allenheardaloudcry.“I’mclimbingdown,”hetoldBobby.Withhistorch(手电筒)underhisarm,Allenslidrapidlydownthepipe.“I’mcoming,Steve!”heyelledseveraltimes.Noanswer.AsAllenslidtowardsthebottomofthemineshaft,hesawStevefloatingfacedowninthewater.HeslippedhisarmsroundSteveandpattedhimontheback.WatercameoutofSteve’smouthcontinuously.4续写原文“I’mgoingtodie,right?”Stevesaidinaweakvoice.“Noway,”Allensaid.“Bobby’sgoingforhelp.”At3:20pm,Bobbysteppedthroughthedoorofthelocalfirestation,amileandahalffromthetopofthecanyon(峡谷).“Myfriends.Trapped,”hesaid,outofbreath.“LastChanceMine.Youhavetohurry!”Onehundredmilesaway,BobTrussell’sphonerangat5pm.LeaderoftheLassenCountySearchandRescueTeam,Trussell,44,hadtheonlyteaminnorthernCaliforniatrainedtoleadminerescues.“I’llpulltogethermyteam,”hesaid,“butit’lltakesometimetogetthere.”Anhourlater,hewasleadingalineofsixtruckstowardsParadisePines.Suddenly,Stevefellunconscious(不省人事的).Allenwonderedhowlongtheycouldholdon.5段首句Paragraph1：SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.Paragraph2：Stevewasrushedtohospitalatonce.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了史蒂夫带领团队在废弃矿洞探险时掉进排水井，弟弟艾伦不顾危险下去营救。艾伦发现史蒂夫脸朝下浮在水中，设法让他吐出积水。与此同时，鲍比去消防局求助，救援队随后赶来。在等待救援的过程中史蒂夫失去意识，最终被救出送往医院。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.艾伦发现史蒂夫掉进排水井后，迅速顺着管道下滑，在黑暗中摸索着靠近史蒂夫。他发现史蒂夫脸朝下浮在水中，急忙将他扶起，让他吐出积水。艾伦不断鼓励史蒂夫，同时呼喊着希望有人能听到。10续写思路分析Para2：Stevewasrushedtohospitalatonce.鲍比向消防局求助后，救援人员迅速赶来。他们顺着管道下到排水井，将史蒂夫和艾伦救出。史蒂夫被送往医院，艾伦守在他身边。最终史蒂夫脱离危险，兄弟俩劫后余生。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.Itwasabeamoflightfromtherescueteam'sflashlight.Thelightgrewbrighterastheyloweredaropedowntheshaft.AllenquicklytiedtheropearoundSteveandhimself.Withthehelpoftheteamabove,theywereslowlypulledup.Astheyreachedthetopoftheshaft,therescueteamquicklycarriedStevetothewaitingambulance.13范文呈现Stevewasrushedtothehospitalatonce.Thedoctorsimmediatelybegantotreathim.Allenwaitedanxiouslyoutsidetheemergencyroom.Afterwhatseemedlikehours,thedoctorcameoutandtoldAllenthatStevewasoutofdanger.Allenfeltahugereliefwashoverhim.Hewasgratefulfortherescueteam'seffortsandthehelptheyhadreceived.Steve'srecoverywasalongprocess,butwiththesupportofhisfamilyandfriends,hewasable14升级版范文呈现SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.Itwasabeamoflightfromtherescueteam'sflashlight,cuttingthroughthedarknessoftheshaft.Thelightgrewbrighterastherescueteamloweredaropedown.AllenquicklytiedtheropearoundSteveandhimself,hishandsshakingwithurgency.Withthehelpoftheteamabove,theywereslowlypulledup,thesoundoftheirbootsscrapingagainsttheroughwallsoftheshaft.Astheyreachedthetop,therescueteamrushedtocarryStevetothewaitingambulance.15升级版范文呈现Stevewasrushedtothehospitalatonce.Thedoctorsimmediatelybegantotreathim,theirfacesseriousandfocused.Allenwaitedanxiouslyoutsidetheemergencyroom,hisheartpoundingwithworry.Afterwhatseemedlikehours,thedoctorcameoutandtoldAllenthatStevewasoutofdanger.Allenletoutasighofrelief,feelingawaveofgratitudetowardstherescueteam.Steve's