2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+公交车上的温暖与改变+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习公交车上的温暖与改变1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文FlowersontheBusWewereaverymotley(混杂的)crowdofpeoplewhotookthebuseverydaythatsummer33yearsago.Duringtheearlymorningridefromthesuburb,wesatsleepilywithourcollarsuptoourears,acheerlessandboringcrowd.Oneofthepassengerswasasmallgreymanwhotookthebustothecentreforseniorcitizenseverymorning.Hewalkedslowlywithasadlookonhisfacewhenhe,withsomedifficulty,boardedthebusandsatdownalonebehindthedriver.Nooneeverpaidverymuchattentiontohim.ThenoneJulymorninghesaidgoodmorningtothedriverandsmiledshort-sightedlydownthroughthebusbeforehesatdown.Thedrivernoddedguardedly.Therestofusweresilent.4续写原文Thenextday,theoldmanboardedthebusenergetically,smiledandsaidinaloudvoice,“Andaverygoodmorningtoyouall!”Someofuslookedup,amazed,andmurmured“Goodmorning,”inreply.Thefollowingweeksweweremorealert.Ourfriendwasnowdressedinaniceoldsuitandawideout-of-datetie.Thethinhairhadbeencarefullycombed.Hesaidgoodmorningtouseverydayandwegraduallybegantonodandtalktoeachother.5续写原文Onemorninghehadabunchofwildflowersinhishand.Theywerealreadydangling(低垂的)alittlebecauseoftheheat.Thedriverturnedaroundsmilinglyandasked:“Haveyougotyourselfagirlfriend,Charlie?”Wenevergottoknowifhisnamereallywas“Charlie”，buthenoddedshylyandsaidyes.Theotherpassengerswhistledandclappedathim.Charliebowedandwavedtheflowersbeforehesatdownonhisseat.EverymorningafterthatCharliealwaysbroughtaflower.Someoftheregularpassengersbeganbringinghimflowersforhisdates.Everyonesmiled.Themenstartedtojokeaboutit,talktoeachother,andsharethenewspaper.6段首句Paragraph1：ThesummerwentbywhenonemorningCharliewasn’twaitingathisusualstop.Paragraph2：Hearingthenews,weallremainedsilenttherestofthewaytowork.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了33年前的夏天，一群人每天乘公交车上班，大家沉闷无趣。一位老人上车后，每天向大家打招呼，后来还带来野花，逐渐让大家变得积极友好。夏天过去，老人某天没在车站出现，大家得知他去世的消息，都感到悲伤。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：ThesummerwentbywhenonemorningCharliewasn’twaitingathisusualstop.夏天过去了，一天早晨查理没在往常的车站等车。公交车停下来，司机等待了一会儿，透过后视镜看向后面，露出担忧的神情。车上的人们开始议论，有人猜测他是不是生病了，有人说可能去度假了。随着时间推移，大家都开始想念查理，回忆起他每天带来的快乐和温暖。11续写思路分析Para2：Hearingthenews,weallremainedsilenttherestofthewaytowork.听到查理去世的消息，大家在去上班的路上都沉默不语。大家想到查理在公交车上的样子，他的笑容和热情，心中充满了不舍。大家意识到查理的存在给原本沉闷的公交车旅程带来了生机和活力，他的乐观影响了每一个人。大家虽然悲伤，但也感激查理曾经带给他们的美好时光。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现ThesummerwentbywhenonemorningCharliewasn'twaitingathisusualstop.Thebusstoppedforawhile,andthedriverlookedbackintherearviewmirror,abitworried.Weallfeltabitofunease.Someofuswonderedifhewasillorhadgoneonvacation.Asthedayspassed,wemissedCharlie'scheerypresence.14范文呈现Hearingthenews,weallremainedsilenttherestofthewaytowork.WewereaccustomedtoseeingCharliewithhisflowerseveryday.Hisabsenceleftavoidinourroutine.Westartedtothinkabouthowmuchhehadbrightenedourdays.ThedriversaidCharliehadpassedaway.Weweresad,butalsogratefulforthetimehehadspentwithus.15升级版范文呈现ThesummerwentbywhenonemorningCharliewasn'twaitingathisusualstop.Thebushaltedforawhile,withthedrivercastingaworriedlookintherearviewmirror.AnairofuneasepermeatedthebusasweallponderedoverCharlie'sabsence.Somewerespeculatingwhetherhewasilloronvacation.Asthedayspassed,hischeerypresencewassorelymissed.16升级版范文呈现HearingthenewsthatCharliehadpassedaway,weallfellsilentfortherestofthejourneytowork.Charlie,whohadbrightenedourdayswithhisflowersandfriendlygreetings,leftavoidinourroutine.Itwasasiftheworldhadlostarayofsunshine.Wereflectedonhowmuchhehadchangedourlivesonthebus.Thedriver,withasolemnexpression,brokethesilence,sharingCharlie'sstory.Weweresad,yetgratefulforthetimewehadspentwithCharlie.Hismemorywouldforeverbe