考点17 书信写作解题技巧模板-新高考英语一轮总复习（上海专用）（解析版）

PAGE1考点17书信写作解题技巧模板课前热身练（2023·上海松江·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。你校图书馆计划布置一个英语读书角，需要一张图片作为背景。校方搜集了以下两张图片，向同学们征求意见。请你给图书馆馆长写封邮件，内容包括：(1)你的选择；(2)你的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Deartheheadlibrarian,I’mdelightedtohavethechancetoexpressmyopinionaboutthechoiceofthebackgroundimagefortheEnglishcorner.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ichoosethesecondone.Thereasonsareasfollows.First,thesecondimageiseasytounderstand,highlysymbolic,withanoriginalitythatanyonecanswimintheoceanofbooksattheEnglishcorner.Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,makingstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.Second,thepatternisclearandsmooth,thecolorsaresimpleandgenerous,withanappropriateandprofoundimpressiontostimulatestudents’interestinEnglishlearning.Ihopemysuggestionwillbeacceptedbyyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给图书馆馆长写封邮件，表达布置一个英语读书角所选的图片的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：delighted→pleased就我而言：AsfarasIamconcerned→Formypart不由自主地：spontaneously→involuntarily参加：takepartin→participatein2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,makingstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.拓展句：Itsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,whichmakesstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.【点睛】【高分句型1】First,thesecondimageiseasytounderstand,highlysymbolic,withanoriginalitythatanyonecanswimintheoceanofbooksattheEnglishcorner.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）【高分句型2】tsvisualappealcanmakepeoplespontaneouslycometotakepartinthereadingthere,makingstudentsfeeltheatmosphereofthereadingandlearningEnglish.（运用了现在分词短语充当结果状语）核心考点梳理一．评分标准（1）本题总分为25分，其中内容10分，语言10分，组织结构5分。（2）评分时关注的主要方面:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性以及上下文的连贯性。（3）评分时，会先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后对照相应的组织结构档次给予加分。其中，内容和语言两部分相加，得15分或以上者，可考虑加4—5分，15分以下者只能考虑加0、1、2、3分。（4）词数少于70，总分最多不超过10分。高分策略Step1：确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等；Step2：确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等；Step3：正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯；Step4：检查粗心犯下的错误。注意：（1）卷面一定要清爽，单词拼写完整清晰，不要过分连写或太潦草；

（2）开篇点题（开门见山，直奔主题，切勿模棱两可）；（3）结尾呼应（回应主题，拓展和升华中心思想）；（4）语言准确，适当修辞（适当运用特殊句式（虚拟、倒装、强调等），注意句式要有变化，长短句、难易句交错有层次）。二．应用文体模板1.建议信Dear___________,Aboutyourquestionwithregardto_______,Iwouldliketomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,thefollowingactionsmaybeapplicable:firstly,…Secondly,…Moreover,...Lastbutnottheleast,…（建议的内容）Ihopeyouwillfindtheaboveproposalsuseful,andpleasefeelfreetodiscusswithmeformoredetails.Goodluckwithyour_______（祝愿）,andkeepintouch.YourssincerelyLiMing2.申请信Dear___________,Iamwritingtoformallyapplyfor___________（申请的内容）Isawthenoticefromourschoolwebsite,andIamveryinterestedin________becauseIthink__________(从哪里得知信息并简单陈述申请原因).IfIcanbegiventhechancetoget…,Iplantouseitforthefollowingthreepurposes:…(具体陈述和论证申请物的用途及重要性） Isincerelyhopeyouwillconsidermyapplication,andlookforwardtoyourreply.Thankyou!Bestregards,LiMing3.申请信Dear___________,Iamwritingtoformallyapplyfor___________（申请的内容）Isawthenoticefromourschoolwebsite,andIamveryinterestedin________becauseIthink__________(从哪里得知信息并简单陈述申请原因).IfIcanbegiventhechancetoget…,Iplantouseitforthefollowingthreepurposes:…(具体陈述和论证申请物的用途及重要性） Isincerelyhopeyouwillconsidermyapplication,andlookforwardtoyourreply.Thankyou!Bestregards,LiMing4.求职信DearSirorMadam,Iwritethislettertoapplyforthepositionthatyouhaveadvertisedin____________（报纸或网站名称）of________（招聘广告发布日期，对在网站上看到的内容而言，此处日期也可以省略）.Ihavethequalificationandcertificatesrequiredforthisposition,andI’ma…(陈述自己的优点，比如positive,self-motivated,open-minded等）personwholikes…(进一步展现自己的长处，比如喜欢挑战、善于人际沟通，等等。）What’smore,Ihadtwosimilarinternshipworkexperienceduringmysenioryearincollege,andcanthereforeadapttothepositionveryquickly.I’llbeverygratefulifyoucouldconsidergivingmeaninterview.Thankyouverymuch!YourssincerelyLiMing5.书信应用文DearEditor,Iwritethislettertorecommendaphotofor____________eventheldbyyourmagazine（某杂志的某个活动）.Thisphotodepicts__________（图画中的内容）,with_______________（补充说明）.Wecansee________（进一步阐释）Ithinkthisphotoisawakeupcallfor______（所涉群体，如thewholeofthehumanrace）to…(例如，protecttheenvironment/wildanimals,etc.)ifwewantto…Nowadaysasthe…isgetting…,moreandmorepeoplebeginto...becausetheyrealizehowimportant…(夹叙夹议）.Afterall,we…(结论性的一句话）.Ihopeyoucouldconsiderusingthisphotofortheupcomingevent,andIhavefaiththat…(强调所推荐之物可能带来的积极正面影响，升华主题）Lookforwardtohearingfromyou.Thankyou!YourssincerelyLiMing三．常考谚语总结，以下谚语警句可以进行写作训练。Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。3.Easiersaidthandone.说起来容易做起来难。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。Slowandsteadywinstherace.稳扎稳打无往而不胜。Afallintothepitagaininyourwit.吃一堑，长一智。Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.实践出真知。Allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。Beautywithoutvirtueisarosewithoutfragrance.无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。Morehasty,lessspeed.欲速则不达。Ifsnevertoooldtolearn.活到老，学到老。Allthatglittersisnotgold.闪光的未必都是金子。Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行女台于足下。Lookbeforeyouleap.三思而后行。Romewasnotbuiltinaday.伟业非一日之功。Greatmindsthinkalike.英雄所见略同。wellbegun,halfdone.好的开始等于成功的一半。四．高考常考谚语警句积累Honestyanddiligenceshouldbeyoureternalmates.诚实和勤奋应成为你永远的伴侣。Itisnevertoolatetolearn.学习永远不嫌晚。Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。Healthisbetterthanwealth.健康胜于财富。Acontentedmindisaperpetualfbast.矢口足长乐。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真青。Self-trustisthefirstsecretofsuccess.自信是成功的第一秘诀。Exampleisbetterthanprecept.言传不如身教。Strictnesshelps,indulgencespoils.严是爱;松是害。AllworkwithoutplaymakesJackadullboy.只干活不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。Neverputoffuntiltomorrowwhatcanbedonetoday今天的事情今天干。Timewaitsfornoman,时不待人。Knowledgeispower.知识就是力量。Nosweetwithoutsweat.苦尽甘来/梅花香自苦寒来。Toerrishuman,toforgiveisdivine.人非圣贤，孰能无过。Agoodthingisknownwhenitislost.失去才知珍贵。Onegoodturndeservesanother.善有善扌艮。Parentsarethefirstteachersofthechildren.父母是孩子的第一任老师。Nogardenwithoutweeds.有利有弊。Romewasn'tbuiltinaday.罗马不是一天造成的。当堂知识检测1．（2023·上海·一模）假设你是明启中学学生李华，你校英语广播站计划在每周五中午开设名为“TalkandTalk”的栏目，目前正在招募主持人。请给广播站负责人Mr.Li写一封信，应聘这一岗位。信中需包含以下内容：1)应聘的理由；2)专栏内容的策划。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearMr.Li,Inoticedintoday’sschoolnewspaperthatyouwerelookingforpeopletobeahostoftheprogramnamed“TalkandTalk”.SoI’mwritingtosayI’dliketoapplytheposition.Hereisabriefintroductionofmyself.Firstofall,Iamanoutgoingpersonwithstrongcooperationability.Secondly,IamverygoodatEnglish.IcanspeakfluentspokenEnglish.Finally,andIthinkthisisthemostimportantpoint,Ihaverelevantexperienceasapresenter,whichwillgreatlyassistmeinthisposition.Ofcourse,Ihavemyownideasabout“TalkandTalk”.Inmyopinion,wecaninviteandinterviewsomeexcellentstudentstosetagoodexampleforstudents.Sincerely,ifthispositionisofferedtome,Iwilldevoteallmywisdomandeffortstoit.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校英语广播站写一封申请信，应聘“TalkandTalk”的栏目的主持人。信中应包括学生应聘的理由和对专栏内容的策划。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：firstofall→firstandforemost此外：secondly→what’smore我认为：Ithink→asfarasIamconcerned喜欢：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Ofcourse,Ihavemyownideasabout“TalkandTalk”.Inmyopinion,wecaninviteandinterviewsomeexcellentstudentstosetagoodexampleforstudents.拓展句：Ofcourse,Ihavemyownideasabout“TalkandTalk”thatwecaninviteandinterviewsomeexcellentstudentstosetagoodexampleforstudents.【高分句型1】Inoticedintoday’sschoolnewspaperthatyouwerelookingforpeopletobeahostoftheprogramnamed“TalkandTalk”.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Ihaverelevantexperienceasapresenter,whichwillgreatlyassistmeinthisposition.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）2．（2023·上海·一模）假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青，你校校刊上的“展望未来”栏目正在征文，请以“50年后的学校”为题写一篇文章投稿。你的稿件必须包括：描述50年后的学校里的一个场景；谈谈现在的你置身其中的感受。（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Schoolsin50years50yearslater,theschoolusesrobotstoteachstudents,andstudentssitinatransparentclassroomonallsidestolearn.Besides,students’performanceinclassandlearningfeedbackareallconductedbyAIequipment.Theconstructionoftheschoolisnolongerwhatitisnow.Theschool50yearslaterisveryintelligent,andstudents’needscanbemetinaninstant.Theschoolhasonlyafewtechniciansandteacherswhomanagemachineryandequipment,soitissoconvenient.Imaginetravelingthroughtimeandspacetothefutureschool50yearslater.ItwillbeafastandconvenientschoollinkedbytheInternet.Iwillbeshockedbyallmoderndevicesandintelligentfunctions.It’sgreattofeelthelearningefficiencybroughtbytheinfinitepowerofmodernscienceandtechnology,feelthefriendshipbetweenclassmates,andcarefullytastethemagicofknowledge.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“50年后的学校”为题为校刊上的“展望未来”栏目写一篇文章投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累用、利用：use→makeuseof此外：besides→what’smore智能的：intelligent→smart震惊的：shocked→astonished2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Imaginetravelingthroughtimeandspacetothefutureschool50yearslater.ItwillbeafastandconvenientschoollinkedbytheInternet.拓展句：Imaginetravelingthroughtimeandspacetothefutureschool50yearslater,whichwillbeafastandconvenientschoollinkedbytheInternet.【高分句型1】Theconstructionoftheschoolisnolongerwhatitisnow.（运用了what引导的表语从句）【高分句型2】Theschoolhasonlyafewtechniciansandteacherswhomanagemachineryandequipment,soeverythingissoconvenient.（运用了who引导的定语从句）课后巩固提高3．（2023·上海奉贤·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，你的朋友Jack邀请你一同制定毕业后的暑假计划，请从他提供的计划清单中选择你所心仪的一个。给他写封邮件，内容需包含：1.你的选择2.你的理由及如何执行该计划①参加山区支教志愿服务②去祖国各地走走③学习技能，如驾驶、乐器演奏、视频剪辑等________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearjack,I’mmorethangladtohearfromyou.Yes,likeyousaid,IhavebeenlongingfortheupcomingsummervacationaftertheCollegeEntranceExamination,duringwhichIcandoalotofamazingthings.Thisthree-monthvacationwillundoubtedlybemylongestholidayever.Therefore,I’dliketomakeitasmeaningfulaspossible.Firstly,I’lltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoneytocoverpartofmycollegetuition.Inthemeanwhile,Icanmeetmanyinterestingpeopleandlearnaboutsociety.Besides,I’mplanningtoenrollinadrivingcourseandtrytogetmydriver’slicenseasdrivingwillbeanimportantandnecessaryskillinmodernsociety.Iftimepermits,I’mgoingtolearnsomeMusicalInstruments,whichissomethingI’vealwayswantedtodo.Ihaveastronginterestinguitar,soIwanttolearnhowtoplayguitar,whichcanenrichmyhobby.Ipracticeinmysparetimeintheevening,sothatIcanenjoythepeaceoftheguitarmelody.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的朋友Jack邀请你一同制定毕业后的暑假计划这一情况，请从他提供的计划清单中选择你所心仪的一个，写封邮件给他。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→happy与此同时：Inthemeanwhile→Atthesametime此外：Besides→What’smore重要的：important→vital2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,I’lltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoneytocoverpartofmycollegetuition.拓展句：Firstly,I’lltakeapart-timejobtoearnsomemoney,whichcancoverpartofmycollegetuition.【点睛】【高分句型1】Yes,likeyousaid,IhavebeenlongingfortheupcomingsummervacationaftertheCollegeEntranceExamination,duringwhichIcandoalotofamazingthings.（运用了介词during+which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Ipracticeinmysparetimeintheevening,sothatIcanenjoythepeaceoftheguitarmelody.（运用了sothat引导的的目的状语从句）4．（2023·上海浦东新·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假期即将来临，你的朋友李华计划完成一篇调查报告，他对去公共图书馆还是去自习室(self-studyroom)写报告犹豫不决，现征求你的建议。请参考以下信息，写一封邮件，内容需包括：1.你的建议；2.你建议的理由。公共图书馆自习室收费标准免费20元/5小时开放时间9：00a.m—5：00p.m24小时交通时长45分种10分钟设施环境免费使用馆内资源免费茶点________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearLiHua,

Knowingthatyouareintwomindsaboutwhethertogotothepubliclibraryortheself-studyroomtowriteyourreport,Isuggestthatyougotothepubliclibraryforthefollowingreasons:Firstofall,thepubliclibraryisfreeofcharge,whilegoingtotheself-studyroomwillcostyou20yuanevery5hours.Second,althoughtheself-studyroomisopen24hoursaday,itisenoughtowriteyourreportfrom9a.m.to5p.m.Third,itmaytakeyoumoretimetogotothepubliclibrarythantotheself-studyroom,butyoucanusethetimeonthebustoformulateyourreport.Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthofresourcesandtheseresourcesmaybehelpfultoyouinwritingyourreportandtheyarefree;however,youcanonlyenjoyfreerefreshmentsintheself-studyroom.Hopethatmysuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Yours,...【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友李华写一封邮件，就寒假期间去公共图书馆还是去自习室写调查报告提出建议，并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累犹豫不决：intwominds→hesitant建议：suggest→advise丰富的：awealthof→abundant对……有帮助：behelpfulto→beofhelpto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthofresourcesandtheseresourcesmaybehelpfultoyouinwritingyourreportandtheyarefree.拓展句：Lastbutnotleast,publiclibrarieshaveawealthofresourcesthatmaybehelpfultoyouinwritingyourreport,andtheyarefree.【点睛】【高分句型1】Second,althoughtheself-studyroomisopen24hoursaday,itisenoughtowriteyourreportfrom9a.m.to5p.m.（运用了although引导的让步状语从句）【高分句型2】Knowingthatyouareintwomindsaboutwhethertogotothepubliclibraryortheself-studyroomtowriteyourreport,Isuggestthatyougotothepubliclibraryforthefollowingreasons.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）5．（2023·上海·一模）假设你是启明中学高三学生王华，你校学生会将组织一次“品上海”的活动，已在学校官网上发布方案，征求全体学生的意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点：1.提出你觉得需要改进的地方；2.需要改进的原因。主题品上海时间2023年1月2日上午7:00–下午18:00路线从人民广场坐旅游巴士前往青浦，参观“陈云故居”、“朱家角古镇”、“青西郊野公园”，然后返回人民广场。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________