2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：雪中邂逅开启纽约温暖之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习雪中邂逅，开启纽约温暖之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文ItwasmyfirstwinterinNewYork,andthecitywascoveredinathickblanketofsnow.IdecidedtoembracetheextremelycoldweatherbyvisitingCentralParktoseeittransformedbythewinter’stouch.AsIwalkedthroughthepark,thefreshsnowcrunchedundermyboots,whichsoundedlikeapieceofcheerfulmusic,andIcouldseefamiliesenjoyingskiingdownthesmallhills,fulloffunandlaughter.Ifeltamixtureofexcitementandhomesickness,missingmyhometown’swarmerwintersyetthrilledbythenewexperiencesaheadofme.4续写原文ItwasonthatverydaythatImetAlex,afreelance(自由职业的)photographer.Whilewanderingintheworldoficeandsnow,Inoticedonethatcapturedthewinterscenes,andhiscamerawasfocusedonagroupofchildrenbuildingahugesnowman,whichstimulatedmycuriosity.IwalkedtowardshimandstruckupaconversationwithhimaboutphotographyandthemagicofNewYorkinwinter.Heofferedtosharesometipsandshowmesomeofhisfavoriteshotsandimages.Inspiredbyhisworksandpassion,Iwaswonderingandaskedifhewouldmindgivingmeaquickphotographylessonrightthereinthepark.5续写原文Alexagreedreadilyandenthusiastically,invitingmetojoinhim,andwespentthenexthourexperimentingwithdifferentsettingsonmycamera.Devotedtothiscommunicationandlearning,Ifeltthattimepassedquickly.Asthesunbegantoset,castingagoldenglowoverthesnow,wecapturedsomebeautifulshotswhileenjoyingthemagnificentscenehere.Feelinggratefulfortheimpromptu(即兴的)lesson,Ithankedhimandstartedtoheadhome,filledwithjoyandasenseofsatisfaction.AsIwalkeddownthewayoutofthepark,IrealizedIhadleftmyglovesnexttowherewehadbeenstanding.6段首句Paragraph1：IturnedbacktofindthemandsawAlexwavingtheminhishand.Paragraph2：Afewdayslater,IwenttothenursinghousewithAlex.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9初到纽约的冬天，“我”前往中央公园感受冬日魅力，在这里偶遇自由摄影师亚历克斯。他专注拍摄雪景，“我”被吸引，与之交谈并向他请教摄影。亚历克斯热情应允，教“我”调试相机，一起捕捉夕阳雪景。离开时，“我”落下手套，折返时亚历克斯正拿着手套等“我”，还提议一起去养老院拍照，“我”欣然同意。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：IturnedbacktofindthemandsawAlexwavingtheminhishand.我转身回去寻找手套，看到亚历克斯正挥舞着它们。他脸上挂着灿烂的笑容，大步朝我走来。“我就知道你会回来找，这么冷的天，可不能没有手套。”他边说边把手套递给我。我接过手套，再次向他表达了感激之情，并再次提及今天的摄影教学让我收获颇丰。亚历克斯听后，兴致勃勃地跟我分享他常去养老院为老人们拍照的经历，他说那里的老人们生活单调，照片能给他们带来很多欢乐。说着，他便邀请我也一同前往，我听后，脑海中浮现出老人们看到照片后开心的样子，当即毫不犹豫地答应了。11续写思路分析Para2：Afewdayslater,IwenttothenursinghousewithAlex.几天后，我和亚历克斯带着相机和精心准备的道具来到养老院。刚踏入养老院，老人们就用热情的笑容迎接我们。我们先为老人们拍摄单人照，镜头下，他们的眼神里满是岁月的故事。随后，我们精心布置了一场以雪为主题的拍摄活动，虽然是人工雪，但老人们玩得不亦乐乎。一位老奶奶小心翼翼地捧着“雪花”，仿佛回到了童年；一位老爷爷假装在“雪中”滑雪，逗得大家哈哈大笑。在欢声笑语中，我们按下快门，记录下这一个个珍贵的瞬间。这次经历，不仅让我摄影技术更上一层楼，更让我深刻体会到给予他人快乐的意义。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现IturnedbacktofindthemandsawAlexwavingtheminhishand.Withabroadsmileacrosshisface,hewalkedbrisklytowardsme."Iknewyou'dcomebackforthese.It'sfartoocoldtobewithoutthem,"hesaid,handingoverthegloves.IthankedhimagainandreiteratedhowmuchIhadenjoyedthephotographylesson.Alexthenbegansharinghisexperiencesofregularlyvisitinganursinghometotakepicturesfortheelderly.Heexplainedthatthephotosbroughtalotofjoytotheirrathermonotonouslives.Ashespoke,heextendedaninvitationformetojoinhim.Imaginingthehappyexpressionsontheelderly'sfaceswhentheysawthephotos,Ireadilyagreedwithouthesitation.14范文呈现Afewdayslater,IwenttothenursinghousewithAlex.Wearrivedwithcamerasinhandandcarefullypreparedprops.Assoonasweentered,theelderlygreeteduswithwarmsmiles.Westartedbytakingindividualportraitsoftheelderly,andthroughthelens,theireyeswerefilledwiththestoriesoftheirlives.Then,wesetupasnow-themedphoto-shoot.Althoughitwasartificialsnow,theelderlyhadagreattime.Anoldladyheldthe"snowflakes"carefully,asifshehadreturnedtoherchildhood.Anoldmanpretendedtoskiinthe"snow",makingeveryoneburstintolaughter.Amidstthelaughterandjoy,wepressedtheshutter,capturingthesepreciousmoments.Thisexperiencenotonlyenhancedmyphotographyskillsbutalsomademedeeplyunderstandthesignificanceofbringinghappinesstoothers.15升级版范文呈现Uponrealizingmygloveswereleftbehind,Iswiftlyturnedback,onlytospotAlexwavingthemintheair.Hisfaceadornedwitharadiantsmile,hemadehiswaytowardsmewithpurposefulstrides."Iwascertainyou'dretraceyourstepsforthese.Inthisfrigidweather,glovesareanabsolutenecessity,"heremarked,presentingmewiththegloves.IexpressedmygratitudeoncemoreandemphasizedhowmuchIhadrelishedthephotographysessionearlier.Alex,inresponse,delvedintosharinghisfrequentvisitstoalocalnursinghome,wherehededicatedhimselftocapturingmomentsfortheelderly.Heelaboratedonhowthesesimpleactsofphotographyinjectedmuch-neededjoyintotheirotherwisemonotonousroutines.Ashesharedhisexperiences,heextendedaninvitationformetoaccompanyhimonhisnextvisit.Visualizingtheelatedexpressionsthatwouldgracethefacesoftheelderly,Iconsentedwithoutamoment'shesitation.16升级版范文呈现Afewdayselapsed,andIfoundmyselfaccompanyingAlextothenursinghome,camerasslungoverourshouldersandanarrayofcarefully-chosenpropsintow.Themomentwesteppedthroughthedoors,weweregreetedbyaseaofwarmsmilesfromtheelderlyresidents.Wecommencedbytakingindividualportraits,eachclickoftheshutterfreezingintimetheuniquestoriesetchedintheireyes.Subsequently,weorchestratedasnow-themedphoto-shoot.Despitethesnowbeingartificial,itdidn't