高考英语复习读后续写练习：冲破奚落：安贾利追逐塔不拉鼓的梦想+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习冲破奚落：安贾利追逐塔不拉鼓的梦想1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“I’llbetAnjaliknows.Right,Anjali?Whydon’tyoushowussinceyou’rethestarstudent,”Deepaktaunted(奚落).Anjaliwasconfused.Shewasn’ttryingtoshowoff.Shewasjustplayingtabla(印度塔不拉鼓),likeeveryoneelse.AndwhywasDeepakbeingsomeanlately?Isitbecausetablaisaboy’sthing?Shedidn’tcarethatpeoplethoughtitwasaboys’instrument.Anjaliknewtherewasnosuchthing.Shedancedherfingersacrossthetablatoperformthecompositioninconfusion.“Ugh!”Anjaliheardsomeonegroan,andshestoppedplaying.4续写原文“IguessIdon’tknowitthatwellafterall,”Anjalisaidsheepishlytotheteacher,Mr.Zakir.Herstomachwasdoingflip-flops.Thatwasn’ttrue.Notevenalittle.Mr.Zakir’seyesnarrowed.Helookedlikehewasabouttosaysomething,butchangedhismind.“Therecital(演奏会)isnextweek,everyone.Keeppracticing.Iwillbeannouncingwhowillgettoperformonstagewithmeatmynextconcert!”Anjalihaddreamedofamomentlikethat.Shewantedtowintheopportunity,butsheneededtosortthingsstraightwithDeepakfirst.Astheclasswasdismissed,AnjalihurriedovertoDeepak.Whenshefinallymadeeyecontactwithhim,hepurposelylookedawayandwalkedoff.Thenextdayatschool,AnjalioverheardDeepakwhisperingtoMary.“Peopleareonlyinterestedbecauseshe’stheonlygirlintablaclassandtheywanthertofeelspecial.She’snotthatgood—”Anjaliwasfurious.Sheexcusedherselfandwenttothebathroom.Shetooksomedeepbreathsbutcouldn’trelax.Herheartwaspounding:5续写原文“It’snotmyfaultthatpeoplemakeabigdealaboutagirlplayingtabla.Imakemistakestoo,butIworkreallyhard.Maybeheshouldtoo.Heshouldbelessmeanandpracticemore.”“IfIplayinthisconcert,noonewilltalktomeagain.Hewillturneveryoneagainstme.”“Idon’twanttoseeatablaorhearatablaorplayatablaEVERAGAIN!!”Anjaliyelledatthemirror.Itwasquietforamoment.Shebelieveditwasoneofherdarkestdaysever.6段首句Paragraph1:Steppingoutofthebathroom,Anjalisawsomeinspiringpostersonthewall.Paragraph2:Aftertherecital,DeepakwalkeduptoAnjali.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9安贾利在塔不拉鼓课上正常演奏时，却遭到了迪帕克的奚落，迪帕克嘲笑她是在炫耀，还因塔不拉鼓被认为是男孩的乐器而对她充满恶意。安贾利对此感到十分困惑，她并不认同乐器有性别之分。演奏时有人发出不满的声音，安贾利无奈地向老师表示自己演奏得不好，尽管事实并非如此。老师告知大家下周有演奏会，还会选出一名学生在他的下一场音乐会上与他同台表演，这正是安贾利梦寐以求的机会。下课之后，安贾利想找迪帕克把事情说清楚，迪帕克却故意躲开她。第二天在学校，安贾利无意间听到迪帕克在背后诋毁她，说人们只是因为她是班上唯一的女生才关注她，她的演奏水平其实并不高。安贾利听后十分愤怒，跑到洗手间里，心中满是委屈，甚至一度想要放弃塔不拉鼓。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:Steppingoutofthebathroom,Anjalisawsomeinspiringpostersonthewall.走出洗手间，安贾利看到墙上张贴着一些鼓舞人心的海报。其中一张海报上，一位女性运动员在赛场上奋力拼搏，尽管汗流浃背，却眼神坚定，旁边写着“只要有梦想，就没有什么能够阻挡你前进的脚步”。另一张海报上，一位女科学家正专注地做着实验，她的眼神中充满了对知识的渴望和探索的热情，海报上的文字写着“性别从不是成功的阻碍，勇敢追求自己的热爱，就能创造奇迹”。安贾利看着这些海报，心中的阴霾渐渐散去。她想起了自己对塔不拉鼓的热爱，想起了自己无数个日夜刻苦练习的场景。她告诉自己，不能因为迪帕克的嘲笑和偏见就放弃自己的梦想。于是，安贾利决定振作起来，更加努力地练习塔不拉鼓，用实力证明自己。在接下来的日子里，安贾利每天早早起床，在晨光中练习基本功；晚上做完作业后，又会沉浸在塔不拉鼓的世界里，反复练习演奏会的曲目。她不断地向老师请教，认真听取老师的建议，每一个音符、每一个节奏都力求做到完美。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Aftertherecital,DeepakwalkeduptoAnjali.演奏会结束后，迪帕克走向安贾利。他的脸上带着一丝愧疚和尴尬，眼神中透露出对安贾利的敬佩。他走到安贾利面前，低下头，小声说道：“安贾利，对不起。我之前不该那么说你，你的演奏真的很出色。我看到了你为了这次演奏会付出的努力，我为我的偏见和恶意感到羞愧。”安贾利微笑着看着迪帕克，说：“没关系，迪帕克。我知道你也很热爱塔不拉鼓，只是我们表达的方式不同。希望我们以后能一起进步，共同享受音乐带来的快乐。”迪帕克抬起头，眼中闪烁着光芒，他用力地点了点头。从那以后，迪帕克和安贾利成为了好朋友，他们经常一起交流塔不拉鼓的演奏技巧，互相鼓励，共同进步。安贾利也凭借自己的努力和才华，在音乐的道路上越走越远，实现了一个又一个的梦想。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Steppingoutofthebathroom,Anjalisawsomeinspiringpostersonthewall.Oneofthepostersshowedafemaleathletestrugglinghardonthefield.Despitesweatingprofusely,hereyeswerefullofdetermination,andbesideitwaswritten,"Aslongasyouhaveadream,nothingcanstopyoufrommovingforward."Anotherposterdisplayedafemalescientistconcentratingonanexperiment.Hereyeswerefilledwiththedesireforknowledgeandthepassionforexploration,andthewordsontheposterread,"Genderisneveranobstacletosuccess.Bebraveenoughtopursueyourlove,andyoucancreatemiracles."Anjalilookedattheseposters,andthehazeinherheartgraduallydissipated.Sherememberedherloveforthetablaandthecountlessdaysandnightsshehadspentpracticinghard.Shetoldherselfthatshecouldn'tgiveupherdreamjustbecauseofDeepak'sridiculeandprejudice.So,Anjalidecidedtocheerupandpracticethetablaevenhardertoproveherselfwithherstrength.Inthefollowingdays,Anjaligotupearlyeverymorningandpracticedbasicskillsinthemorninglight.Afterfinishingherhomeworkatnight,shewouldimmerseherselfintheworldofthetablaandrepeatedlypracticetherepertoirefortherecital.Sheconstantlyconsultedtheteacher,listenedcarefullytotheteacher'ssuggestions,andstrivedtomakeeverynoteandeveryrhythmperfect.14范文呈现Aftertherecital,DeepakwalkeduptoAnjali.Therewasahintofguiltandembarrassmentonhisface,andhiseyesrevealedadmirationforAnjali.HewalkeduptoAnjali,loweredhishead,andsaidinalowvoice,"Anjali,I'msorry.Ishouldn'thavesaidthosethingsaboutyoubefore.Yourperformancewasreallyoutstanding.Isawtheeffortsyoumadeforthisrecital,andI'mashamedofmyprejudiceandmalice."AnjalismiledatDeepakandsaid,"It'sokay,Deepak.Iknowyoualsolovethetabla,butwejustexpressitindifferentways.Ihopewecanmakeprogresstogetherandenjoythejoybroughtbymusicinthefuture."Deepakraisedhishead,hiseyesshiningwithlight,andhenoddedvigorously.Fromthenon,DeepakandAnjalibecamegoodfriends.Theyoftencommunicatedwitheachotherabouttheplayingskillsofthetabla,encouragedeachother,andmadeprogresstogether.Anjalialso,withherownhardworkandtalent,wentfurtherandfurtherontheroadofmusicandachievedonedreamafteranother.15升级版范文呈现Steppingoutofthebathroom,Anjali'seyeswereimmediatelydrawntosomeinspiringpostersonthewall.Oneofthepostersdepictedafemaleathletepushingherselftothelimitonthefield.Despitethebeadsofsweatpouringdownherface,hereyeswereablazewithdetermination,andbesideitwerethewords,"Aslongasyouholdfasttoyourdream,nothingcanstandinyourway."Anotherposterfeaturedafemalescientistengrossedinanexperiment.Hereyesbrimmedwithathirstforknowledgeandapassionforexploration,andthecaptionread,"Genderisneverabarriertosuccess.Daretopursueyourpassion,andyou'llcreatemiracles."AsAnjali'sgazelingeredontheseposters,thedarkcloudsofdoubtandfrustrationthathadcloudedherheartgraduallydispersed.Shevividlyrecalledherdeep-seatedloveforthetablaandthecountlesshoursshehaddedicatedtopracticingdayinanddayout.Sheresolvedthenandtherethatshewouldn'tletDeepak'sridiculeandprejudicederailherfromherdreams.Thus,Anjalimadeuphermindtoredoublehereffortsandpracticethetablawithevengreaterfervor,determinedtoproveherselfthroughhersheertalentandhardwork.Inthedaysthatfollowed,Anjalirosewiththedawneachmorning,immersingherselfinthepracticeofbasicskillsinthesoftglowofthemorninglight.Afterfinishingherdailyhomeworkintheevenings,shewouldloseherselfintheenchantingworldofthetabla,tirelesslyrehearsingtherecitalpieces.Sheconstantlysoughtadvicefromherteacher,hangingoneverywordofguidance,andstrivingtoperfecteverynoteandrhythm.16升级版范文呈现Aftertherecital,DeepakapproachedAnjali.Hisfacewasetchedwithamixofguiltandembarrassment,andhiseyesheldanewfoundrespectforAnjali.Hewalkeduptoher,hisheadbowedslightly,andspokeinasubduedtone,"Anjali,I'mtrulysorry.Iwaswrongtosaythosehurtfulthingsaboutyou.Yourperformancewastrulyremarkable.Iwitnessedtheimmenseeffortyouputintopr