高考英语复习读后续写练习：暖心店主卡洛斯：超越期待的早餐之约+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习暖心店主卡洛斯：超越期待的早餐之约1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Special2，PleaseMyflightarrivedinSanDiegoaroundmidnight,andbythetimeIdrovehomeandgotintobeditwasnearly2:00a.m.Iwastiredandjet-laggedwhenIdraggedmyselfoutofthebed.Nevertheless,Ihadtobeupbrightandearlythatmorning:Iwastheopeningkeynoter(主旨发言人)atanationalconference.Inshort,Ineededtorecoverquickly.AheartybreakfastintheearlymorningsunwaswhatIneeded.IheadedforCarlos&Annie’s,apopularrestaurantlocatedintheheartoftheseasidetown.4续写原文“I’dlikesteakandeggs,please,”IsaidtothewaitressafterIhadfinallyfoundatableintherestaurant.“Oh,I'msorry,”sheapologized.“We'reoutofSpecial#2.We'veservedthelastofoursteaks.HowaboutSpecial#14?”“Oh,nosteakandeggs?”Icouldn'tseemtoacceptit.I'mnotsureifitwasmyheartfeltsighthatcaughtCarlos,theowner'sattention.Hiswarm,caringbrowneyesseemeddeterminedtopinpointthebestsolution.Hethensaid,“Youknow,IthinkIdidseeonefinalsteakbackthere.”5续写原文Pressingmyluck,Iquicklydeclared,“Wow,thatwouldbegreat.Butyouknow,I’mnotsureifIwantabreakfaststenkatall.WhatIreallywantisasteak—onethat’stwoinchesthick,tenderandjuicy,servedmediumrare.”“Nottoworry,”Carlosassuredmeandleft.Theyoungwaitressgavemeawink(眨眼)andsaidwithaknowingsmile,“CarlosisbeingCarlosagain!”Ididnotgiveherwordsmuchthought.Then,InoticedCarlosashelefttherestaurantthroughthesidedoorandwalkedintoaneighborhoodgrocerystoreacrossthestreet.Carlosexchangedmorninggreetingswitheveryoneheknewandevenhelpedtheownerofthebookstorenextdoorbyholdingtheitemsthatfilledherarms.Thenhereenteredtherestaurantwithabaginhishand.6段首句Paragraph1:Withinminutes，anexactSpecial2wasinfrontofme.Paragraph2:IwasabouttoleavewhenIlearnedCarloshadalreadysoldtherestaurant.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9作者乘飞机午夜抵达圣地亚哥，到家近凌晨两点，疲惫又有时差反应，但次日一早要在全国会议上做主旨发言，急需恢复精力。于是，作者前往海边小镇中心一家颇受欢迎的餐厅Carlos&Annie’s吃早餐，点了招牌的“特餐2号”牛排和鸡蛋，然而服务员告知牛排已售罄，推荐“特餐14号”，作者无法接受。或许是作者的叹息引起了店主卡洛斯的注意，他温暖的眼神中透着决心，称后厨还有最后一块牛排。作者提出想要一块两英寸厚、鲜嫩多汁、三分熟的牛排，卡洛斯欣然应允后离开。这时，作者注意到卡洛斯走出餐厅，穿过街道进入一家杂货店，与认识的人打招呼，还帮隔壁书店店主拿东西，随后拿着一个袋子回到餐厅。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:Withinminutes，anexactSpecial2wasinfrontofme.不一会儿，一份完美的“特餐2号”摆在了我面前。牛排色泽诱人，鲜嫩的肉质泛着油光，热气腾腾，香气扑鼻。我满心感激，迫不及待地拿起刀叉开始品尝。每一口都鲜嫩多汁，口感恰到好处，仿佛所有的疲惫都随着这美味的牛排一扫而空。我一边享受着美食，一边观察着周围的一切。卡洛斯依旧在餐厅里忙碌着，他与每一位顾客都亲切交谈，为孩子们讲有趣的笑话，逗得他们咯咯直笑；他还帮着服务员收拾餐桌，动作娴熟又自然。大家对他的态度都充满了喜爱和尊重，不难看出他在这个小镇上有着极高的人气。用完餐后，我找到卡洛斯，真诚地向他表达了感谢。他只是憨厚地笑着说，能让顾客满意就是他最大的快乐。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Truetohisword,SamuelliveduptohispromiseofgivingLilyalargesumofmoney我正要离开时，得知卡洛斯已经把餐厅卖了。这消息犹如晴天霹雳，让我十分震惊。我难以想象，这么用心经营、对顾客如此热情的人，怎么会舍得卖掉这家倾注了心血的餐厅。我找到那位年轻的服务员，向她询问详情。原来，卡洛斯的妻子生了重病，需要一大笔钱治疗，为了给妻子治病，他不得不卖掉餐厅。尽管生活如此艰难，他却依然在餐厅里尽心尽力，没有丝毫懈怠。我被他的善良和坚强深深打动，决定为他做点什么。我回到家后，在社交媒体上分享了卡洛斯的故事，呼吁大家为他的妻子捐款。没想到，这个故事引起了广泛的关注，许多人纷纷伸出援手。几天后，我带着筹集到的善款再次来到餐厅，卡洛斯看到我和这笔善款时，眼中满是感动的泪水。他紧紧地握住我的手，激动得说不出话来。我相信，在大家的帮助下，卡洛斯的妻子一定会战胜病魔，他们一家也会迎来美好的未来。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Withinminutes，anexactSpecial#2wasinfrontofme.ThesteaklookedexactlyasIhadwishedfor.Itwasthick,tenderandjuicy,withabeautifulpinkish-redcenter.Thearomawafteduptomynose,makingmymouthwaterinstantly.Ipickedupmyknifeandforkandstartedtodigin.AsIate,IwatchedCarlosmovingaroundtherestaurant.Hestoppedateachtable,chattingwithcustomers,makingsuretheyweresatisfiedwiththeirmeals.Heeventookthetimetodrawafunnypictureforalittlegirlsittingatthenexttable,causinghertoburstintolaughter.Everyoneintherestaurantseemedtoknowhimwellandgreetedhimwithwarmthandrespect.AfterIfinishedmymeal,IwipedmymouthandwalkedovertoCarlos.Ithankedhimsincerelyforgoingoutofhiswaytomakemybreakfastsoperfect.Hejustsmiledandsaid,"It'smypleasure.MakingcustomershappyiswhatIlivefor."14范文呈现IwasabouttoleavewhenIlearnedCarloshadalreadysoldtherestaurant.Iwascompletelytakenaback.Icouldn'tbelievethatthiskind-heartedman,whohadputsomuchloveandeffortintorunningtherestaurant,wasgivingitup.Ifoundtheyoungwaitressandaskedherwhathadhappened.ShetoldmethatCarlos'swifehadfallenseriouslyillandneededalargeamountofmoneyfortreatment.Inordertosaveher,Carloshadnochoicebuttoselltherestaurant.Despitehisdifficultsituation,hewasstillworkinghardintherestaurant,makingsureeverythingwentsmoothlyuntilthenewownertookover.Iwasdeeplytouchedbyhisstory.IdecidedthatIhadtodosomethingtohelphim.WhenIgothome,IsharedCarlos'sstoryonsocialmedia,askingpeopletodonatemoneytohelphiswife.Tomysurprise,thestoryspreadquickly,andmanypeopleweremovedbyCarlos'skindnessandselflessness.Theystartedtodonatemoneygenerously.Afewdayslater,Iwentbacktotherestaurantwiththemoneywehadraised.WhenCarlossawmeandthemoney,hiseyesfilledwithtearsofgratitude.Heheldmyhandtightlyandcouldn'tsayaword.Iknewthatwiththehelpofeveryone,hiswifewouldgetbetterandtheirfamilywouldhaveabrightfuture.15升级版范文呈现Withinminutes，anexactSpecial#2wasinfrontofme.Thesteak,whichwaspreciselytwoinchesthickasIhadrequested,laytheretemptingly,itstenderandjuicytextureglisteningunderthesoftlightoftherestaurant.Thearoma,waftingtowardsme,mademymouthwateruncontrollably.Ipickedupmycutleryandbegantosavorthedeliciousmeal.WhileIwasenjoyingthesteak,InoticedCarlosmovingaroundtherestaurantnon-stop.Stoppingateachtable,heengagedinfriendlyconversationswithcustomers,crackingjokesandensuringthateveryonewascontentwiththeirorders.Heevenentertainedalittlegirlbydrawingacutepictureforher,whichledtoburstsoflaughterfromthechild.Everyoneintherestaurant,whoknewhimwell,greetedhimwithgenuinewarmthandrespect.Afterfinishingmymeal,IwalkedovertoCarlos,expressingmysinceregratitudeforhisextraordinaryeffortsinmakingmybreakfastsoperfect.Withagentlesmileonhisface,hesimplyreplied,"It'smypleasure.MakingcustomershappyiswhatIlivefor."16升级版范文呈现IwasabouttoleavewhenIlearnedCarloshadalreadysoldtherestaurant.Itwasapieceofnewsthatleftmecompletelystunned.Howcouldthiskind-heartedman,whohaddedicatedsomuchofhistimeandenergytorunningtherestaurant,giveitup?Ifoundtheyoungwaitressandinquiredaboutthesituation.Whatshetoldmewastrulyheart-wrenching.Carlos'swifehadfallenseriouslyillandrequiredalargesumofmoneyfortreatment.Tosaveher,Carloshadnoalternativebuttoselltherestaurant.Despitehisowndifficultcircumstances,hewasstillworkingdiligentlyintherestaurant,making