2023北京高三一模英语汇编：写作

2023北京高三一模英语汇编

写作

一、建议信

1.（2023•北京东城•统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim所在的学校即将迎来

百年校庆。他参与准备活动，负责向来宾介绍学校的变化，问你有什么好的建议。请你用英文给他回邮

件，内容包括：

I.表示祝贺；

2.你的建议。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：纪念日anniversary

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

2.（2023•北京西城•统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，得知

他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封|可信，内容包

括：

I.表示安慰；

2.给出建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

3.（2023•北京海淀•统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你与交换生Jim要共同完成一篇项目学习

的论文，他建议用AI完成初稿。请你用英语给他写•封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.委婉拒绝并说明理由；

2.你的建议及计划。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词语:项目学习-projecl-basedlearning

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

4.（2023•北京石景山•统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim给你写了一封信，

提及因为误解，他和同学产生了不愉快。请用英文给Jim回及邮件，内容包括：

1.安慰Jim；

2.具体建议。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

二、邀请信

5.（2023,北京朝阳•统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你正在组建与英语学习相关的研究性学

习小组，请你用英文给你校交换生Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加，内容包括：

1.介绍研究的具体内容和意义；

2.说明邀请原因和其他相关事宜,

注意：1.词数1（）0左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：研究性学习rcscarch-bascdlearning

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

6.（2023•北京丰台•统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校即将举办“中医药文化”主题活动，

你打算邀请交换生Jim参加。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.介绍活动；

2邀请参加。

提示词：TraditionalChineseMedicine（TCM）中医药

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

三、告知信/通知

7.（2023•北京延庆•统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华。你的外国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中

提到他对中国十二生肖感兴趣。请你给他回一封邮件介绍你的生肖，内容包括：

1.笥介中国的十二生肖；2.你的生肖和生肖对你的影响。

注意：

I.同数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词语：十二生肖thenvclveanimalsigns

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

四、其他应用文

8.（2023北京房山统考•模）假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。下周将有•个英国的学生代表团求你

校进行为期两天的交流访问，你将作为学生代表致词。请你用英文写一篇发言稿，内容包括:

1.表示欢迎；

2.简要介绍主要活动安排；

3.表达美好祝愿。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dearfriends,

参考答案

1.DearJim,

Congratulationsonyourschoofsupcomingcentennialanniversaiy!It'saremarkableachievementanda

testamenttotheschool'scommitinenttoeducation.

AsfbryourrequestfbrsuggestionsonhowtointroducetheschooPschangestoguests,Iwouldrecommend

highlightingtheschoofstechnologicaladvancements.Youcouldshowcasetheschool'sstate-of-the-artfacilities,

suchasthecomputerlabsandinteractivewhiteboards,andhowtheyhaveenhancedthelearningexperiencefbr

students.Additionally,youcouldalsomentiontheschool5seffortsinpromotingdiversityandinclusivity,suchas

theestablishmentofculturalclubsandtheimplementationofanti-bullyingpolicies.

Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful,andIwishyouallthebest:orasuccessfulanniversarycelebration.

Yours

LiHua

【导语】本文是一篇应用文。文章要求考生作为高三学生李华，给英国好友Jim一些建议和祝贺，关于他

们即将到来的百年校庆。

【详解】1.词汇积累

即将到来的：upcoming—>imminent

建议：suggestion—>proposal

提到：mention—>referto

有帮助的：helpful—>favourable

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Congratulationsonyourschool'supcomingcentennialanniversary!It'saremarkableachievementanda

testamenttotheschool'scommitmenttoeducation.

拓展句：CongratulationsonyourschooPsupcomingcentennialanniversarywhichisaremarkableachievement

andatestamenttotheschool'scommitmenttoeducation.

【点睛】【高分句型1]YoucouldshowcasetheschooPsstate-of-the-artfacilities,suchasthecomputerlabsand

interactivewhiteboards,andhowtheyhaveenhancedthelearningexperiencefbrstudents.（运用了how弓|导的宾

语从句）

【高分句型2]Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful,andIwishyouallthebestfbrasuccessfulanniversary

celebration.（运用省略that引导的宾语从句）

2.DearJim,

Pmsorrytohearthatyoudidn'tgetyourparents5permissiontogoonaweek-longbiketripwithyourfriends.

You'reupsetandI'dliketogiveyousomecomfbrtandadvice.

AsfarasI'mconcerned,themostimportantthingthatyouneeddonowishaveagoodconversationwithyour

parents,whichisbeneficialtoyourrelationship.Besides,thereisnoneedfbryoutobedisappointedaboutthis

becauseyourparentsjustwanttoprotectyoufrompotentiallydangeroussituation.

Ihopeyouwillgetbetterinnotime.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。最近你收到英国好友Jim的来信，

得知他和朋友们骑车旅行一周的计划没有得到父母的许可，他感到非常沮丧。请你给Jim写一封|可信，表

示安慰，并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

失望的：disappointed/upset—►discouraged

建议：advice—»suggestion

有益的：beneficial—*helpful

北匕外：besides—»inaddition

2.句式拓展

同义句转换

原句：You'reupsetandTdliketogiveyousomecomfortandadvice.

拓展句：Sinceyou'reupset,I'dliketogiveyousomecomfortandadvice.

［点睛］［高分句型1］AsfarasI'mconcerned,themostimportantihingthatyouneeddonowishaveagood

conversationwithyourparents,whichisbeneficialtoyourrelationship.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

［高分句型2］Besides,thereisnoneedfbryoutobedisappointedaboutthisbecauseyourparentsjustwantto

protectyoufrompotentiallydangeroussituation.（运用了because引导原因状语从句）

3.DearJim,

ThanksfbryoursuggestiononusingAItofinishthefirstdraftofourpaper.Butafterfiirtherconsideration,

I'mafraidit'snotawiseidea.

Firstly,itgoesagainstthepurposeofproject-basedlearning,whichistocultivatecriticalthinkingand

teamwork.Moreover,AIisunlikelytoaccuratelypresentouriccas,becauseithasn't"gotinvolvedin”our

project.

So,Isuggestwewritethepaperourselves.Wecanstartbybrainstormingtogethertocreateanoutlineafter

generatingsomeoriginalandcreativeideas.Thenwecanworkindependentlyondifferentparts,andfinallywork

togethertofinalizeourpaper.1believewecandoabetterjobthanAL

Hopeyoucanunderstand.Expectingourdistinctivedraft.

Yours,

LiHua

4.范文1

DearJim,

I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublewithyourclassmates.Ifsnevereasywhenmisunderstandings

occur.Butdon'tworry,Tmherefbryou.

Ihavesomesuggestionsthatmighthelp.Tryhavinganopenandhonestconversationwithyourclassmates.

Explainhowyou'refeelingandlistentotheirpointsaswell.It'spossiblethattheyjustdidn'trealizetheywere

causingyouhann.ifthatdoesn'twork,don'tbeafraidtoaskteachersfbrhelp.They'reexpertatdealingwith

conflictsandcangiveyouadviceonhowtohandlethesituation.

Ihopethishelps.Justrememberthatconflictsaretotallynonnal,butwithalittlepatienceandunderstanding,

youarcsuretoworkthroughit.Takecare.

Yours,

LiHua

范文2

DearJim,

I'msorrytohearthatyou'reexperiencingsomedifficultieswithyourclassmates.Ilcanbetoughwhen

misunderstandingsoccur,butpleaseknowthatyou'renotalone.Weallgothroughsimilarsituationsiiourlives.

Asfbryoursituation,herearesomesuggestionsthatmighthelp.Firstly,trytohaveanopenandhonest

conversationwithyourclassmatestounderstandtheirperspectiveandclarifyanymisunderstandings.Secondly,it's

importanttoapproachthesituationwithkindnessandempathy.Finally,don'tbeafraidtoseekhelpfromateacher

orcounselorifthesituationcontinues.

Remember,you'reagreatpersonanddon'tletthissituationbringyoudown.Keepyourheadupandstay

positive!

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属「应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim回复邮件，对于他和同学产生的不愉快表示

安慰并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

发生：occur—>happen

观点：point—>view

向...求助：ask...fbrhelp—>tumto...fbrhelp

完全：totally-♦completely

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：They'reexpertatdealingwithconflictsandcangiveyouadviceonhowtohandlethesituation.

拓展句：They'reexpertatdealingwithconflicts,whocangiveyouadviceonhowtohandlethesituation.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Ihavesomesuggestionsthatmighthelp.（运用Tthat引导的定语从句）

[高分句型2]It'spossiblethattheyjustdidn'trealizetheywerecausingyouharm.（运用了it作形式主语,

that引导主语从句以省略that的宾语从句）

【高分句型3]Ifthatdoesn'twork,don'tbeafraidtoaskteachersforhelp.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

5.DearJim,

Howisitgoing?Weplantoformaresearch-basedlearninggroup.Iwonderwhetheryouwouldliketojoinus.

Ourtopicis“AStudyontheDifferencesbetweenBritishEnglishandAmericanEnglish”.Wcmainlyfbcuson

theirdifterencesintermsofspelling,pronunciationandvocabulary.Theaimistomakeusfamiliarwiththe

underlyingcausesandeffectsofthedifferencessothatwccangainabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishlanguage.

IknowyouareanativespeakerofBritishEnglishandyoulivedinAmericafbrseveralyears,sohopefully

youcangiveussomeguidanceduringtheresearchprocess.PleaseinformmeofyourdecisionbythisFriday.

Yourinvolvementwilladdmuchjoytoourgroup.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

(2)

DearJim,

Asyouknow,wcarcrequiredtodorcscarch-bascdlearningthisterm.Iamwritingtoinviteyou:ojoinmy

team.

Hereisthedetailedinformation.WcintendtocompareChineseliteratureandEnglishliteratureinthesame

historicalperiod,forexample,ShakespeareandTangXianzuoftheMingDynasty.Sincetherewaslittlechancefbr

pureliteraryexchangebetweennationsinhistory,whatwcarcdoingcanhelpgreatwritersfromChinaandBritain

talkspirituallytosomeextent.

Iwantyouinbecause1knowyouhaveagreatpassionfbrBritishliterature.Yourprofessionalknowledgewill

surelyhelpusinefficiencyandaccuracy.Also,justimaginethesenseofaweyoumaygetfromthesimilaritiesand

differenceswewillfind.Ifyouareinterested,letmeknowbeforenextFriday.

Lookingfbrwardtoyourreply!

Yours,

LiHua

(3)

DearJim,

I'mestablishingaresearch-basedlearningteamonEnglishstudy.Iwonderifyouwouldliketobeamember

ofit.

IplantostudyhowtoimproveourEnglishabilitybywatchingEnglishmovies.TenclassicEnglishmovies

likeForrestGumpwillbecovered.Wcwillanalysetheauthenticexpressionsandnativepronunciations,and

discusshowtoapplythemtoEnglishstudy.AswatchingEnglishmoviesofiersaneasyaccesstoEnglisha

learning,thisprojectwillgivestudentsaclueaboutenjoyableandpracticallearningmethods.

Knowingyouhaveconductedrelevantresearch,Ithinkmyprojectmayfeedyourinterestfromadifferent

angle.Moreover,I'msureyourparticipationwillincreasetheefficiencyofcompletingtasks.Ifyou'dliketocome,

pleaseletmeknowbeforenextFriday.

Isincerelyhopethatwccanworktogetheronthisproject.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封电子邮件，邀请交换生Jim参加英语学习相关的研究性学习小

组，并且向他介绍研究的具体内容和意义并说明邀请原因和其他相关事宜。

【详解】1.词汇积累(以第一篇范文为例)

打算做：planto—>intendto

专注于：fbcuson—>bccenteredon

在...方面：intermsof—inthefieldof

2,句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：IknowyouareanativespeakerofBritishEnglishandyoulivedinAmericafbrseveralyears.

复合句：1knowyouareanativespeakerofBritishEnglishwholivedinAmericatbrseveralyears.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Iwonderwhetheryouwouldliketojoinus.（whether引导的宾语从句）

[高分右J型2]TheaimistomakeusfamiliarwiththeunderlyingcausesandefTectsofthedifferencessothatwecan

gainabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishlanguage.（不定式作表语以及sothat引导的目的状语从句）

6.DearJim,

ExtremelythrilledtoknowthatyouarcfascinatedbytraditionalChinesemedicine,!amwritingtoinviteyouto

participateinanactivitythemedtraditionalChinesemedicineculture,whichistobeheldintheschoolhall,this

Saturdayafternoon.

TraditionalChinesemedicinehasbeenpasseddownfbrthousandsofyears.Withanextensiveandprofound

culture,itisthetreasureofChinesecivilization.Theactivityisintendedtoprovideyouwithsomebasicknowledge

ofmedicaltheory,diagnosticmethods,prescriptionsandcuresconcerningtraditionalChinesemedicine.Presentat

theactivity,youwillalsobeexposedtosomewide-spreadstoriespraisingtheexperiencedandnotabledoctorsin

ancientChina.

Thisissurelyagoodchanceforyoutoknowmorewaysofpreservinggoodhealthandtohaveadeeperinsightinto

tracitionalChinesemedicine.Lookingfbnvardtoyoushowingup.

【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生给交换生Jim写一封邀请信，邀请他参加学校举办的“中医

药文化”活动。

【详解】L词汇积累：

对...感兴趣：befascinatedby—>showinterestin/beenthusiasticabout

激动的：thrilled—>excited

目的是：beintendedtodo—>bcaimedatdoing/aimtodo

提供：provide-*ofter/supply

了解：haveaninsightinto—>haveanunderstandingof7knowabout

2.句式拓展：

原句：TraditionalChinesemedicinehasbeenpasseddownfbrthousandsofyears.Withanextensiveandprofound

culture,itisthetreasureofChinesecivilization.

拓展句：TraditionalChinesemedicinehasbeenpasseddownfbrthousandsofyears,whichisthetreasureof

Chinesecivilization,withanextensiveandprofoundculture.

【点睛】【高分句型1】

Presentattheactivity,youwillalsobeexposedtosomewidc-sprcadstoriespraisingtheexperiencedandnotable

doctorsinancientChina.（运用了形容词作状语。）

【高分句型2】

ExtremelythrilledtoknowthatyouarefascinatedbytraditionalChinesemedicine,Iamwritingtoinviteyouto

participateinanactivitythemedtraditionalChinesemedicineculture,whichistobeheldintheschoolhall,this

Saturdayafternoon.（运用了形容词作状语和which引导非限制性定语从句。）

7.DearJim,

I'mgladtoknowthatyou,reinterestedinChineseculture,especially12Chinesezodiacsigns.Asyouknow,12

Chinesezodiacrepresenttwelvediflcrcntanimals,eachyearoneanimal.Thesetwelveanimalsplayasignificant

roleinChinesecultureandareoftenusedinvariousfbnnsofart,festivals,andevenindailylife.Theyareoften

associatedwithcertaincharacteristicsandarcbelievedtoinfluencethepersonalitiesandfortunesofpeoplebornin

theircorrespondingyears.

htheChinesezodiac,Tmamonkey.Iamoutgoing,lively,goodwithpeople,andhavemanyfriends.What's

more,Iamalsoresourceful,forward-looking,andcompetitive.What'sthemostimportantisthatIhaveagood

hearttoothers.

Ihopemyintroductionishelpfultoyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华。你的外国笔友Jim在给你的邮

件中提到他对中国十二生肖感兴趣。请你给他回一封邮件介绍你的生肖，内容包括：1.简介中国的十二生

肖；2.你的生肖和生肖对你的影响。

【详解】L词汇积累

对...感兴趣：beinterestedin—*haveinterestin

特别是：especially—>particularly

重要的：significant—>vital

此外：Whafsmore=Besides

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：IntheChinesezodiac,Tmamonkey.Iamoutgoing,lively,goodwithpeople,andhavemanyfriends.

拓展句：IntheChinesezodiac,Tinamonkey,soIamoutgoing,lively,goodwithpeople,andhav