浙江省2025年首考高考英语读后续写试题范文解析

（四）最终写作Paragraph1:WhenMr.andMrs.Greengothome,Kevinwenttotalktothem.微情节1Sbdidsth.Doing/done,...凯文鼓起全部勇气，敲响了门。Musteringupallhiscourage,Kevinknockedonthedoor.Sbdidsth.with复合结构随着脚步声渐近，门吱呀一声开了，格林先生和格林太太出现在眼前。Withthesoundoffootstepsapproaching,thedoorcreakedopentorevealMr.andMrs.Green.“...”,sbsaid,doing/done.或者Doing/done,...“格林先生，您不在的时候出事了，”凯文结结巴巴地说，解释说他看到有人闯入了他们家。“Mr.Green,somethinghappenedwhileyouwereaway,”Kevinstammered,explainingthathehadwitnessedsomeonebreakingintotheirhouse.微情节2Sbdidsth.但是but格林先生惊讶得瞪大了眼睛，但很快恢复了平静。Mr.Green’seyeswidenedinshock,buthequicklyregainedhiscalmness.Sbdidsth.Doing/done,...在凯文颤抖的手指的指引下，他们来到了凯文看到那个人试图撬开地板的地方。GuidedbyKevin'stremblingfinger,theymadetheirwaytothespotwhereKevinhadseenthemantryingtoliftthefloorboard.Sbdidsth.格林先生跪下身，小心翼翼地把它打开了。Mr.Greenkneltdownandcarefullyopenedit.Toone’s感情n，Sbdidsth.令他们吃惊的是，里面躺着一块手表。Totheirastonishment,therelayawatch.微情节3“……”某人说道，声音里充满XX情感：“...”,sbsaid,hisvoicefilledwith情感n.“我们必须去警察局，把一切都告诉他们，”格林先生说，他的声音充满了决心。“Wehavetogotothepolicestationandtellthemeverything,”Mr.Greensaid,hisvoicefilledwithdetermination.

Paragraph2:KevinandMr.Greentookthewatchtheyhadfoundtothepolicestation.微情节1Sbdidsth.Doing/done,...格林先生把手表递给了一名警官，并解释了情况。Handingthewatchtoanofficer,Mr.Greenexplainedthesituation.Sbdidsth.独立主格结构警官聚精会神地听着，眼睛眯起，陷入沉思。Theofficerlistenedattentively,hiseyesnarrowinginthought.“...”,sbsaid.Doing/done,...“凯文，你做得对。这件事我们会彻底调查的，”警官向他们保证，并热情地拍了拍凯文的肩膀。“Youdidtherightthing,Kevin.Thematterwouldbelookedintothoroughly,”theofficerassuredthem,givingKevin'sshoulderaheartypat.微情节2Sbdidsth.withsth;独立主格结构凯文深深地叹了口气，一股释然之情涌上心头，过去几个小时的重负瞬间烟消云散。Withadeepsigh,Kevinfeltawaveofreliefwashoverhim,theweightofthepastfewhoursmeltingaway.微情节3Sbdidsth.As+句子离开警察局时，凯文忍不住回想起当天的事件。Astheyleftthestation,Kevincouldn'thelpbutreflectontheday'sevents.Itdawnedonhimthat+句子evenwhen+句子他意识到，即使感到害怕，也要坚持做正确的事，这一切的恐惧和不确定都是值得的。Itdawnedonhimthatstandingupforwhatwasright,evenwhenitwasscary,waswortheverymomentoffearanduncertainty.某物makeadifference他的勇气起到了作用，这是一种他将永远珍惜的感觉。Hiscouragehadmadeadifference,andthatwasafeelinghewouldcherishforever.

（五）范文Paragraph1:凯文鼓起全部勇气，敲响了门。脚步声渐近，门吱呀一声开了，格林先生和格林太太出现在眼前。“格林先生，您不在的时候出事了，”凯文结结巴巴地说，解释说他看到有人闯入了他们家。格林先生惊讶得瞪大了眼睛，但很快恢复了平静。在凯文颤抖的手指的指引下，他们来到了凯文看到那个人试图撬开地板的地方。格林先生跪下身，小心翼翼地把它打开了。令他们吃惊的是，里面躺着一块手表。“我们必须去警察局，把一切都告诉他们，”格林先生说，他的声音充满了决心。Musteringupallhiscourage,Kevinknockedonthedoor.Thesoundoffootstepsapproached,andthedoorcreakedopentorevealMr.andMrs.Green.“Mr.Green,somethinghappenedwhileyouwereaway,”Kevinstammered,explainingthathehadwitnessedsomeonebreakingintotheirhouse.Mr.Green’seyeswidenedinshock,buthequicklyregainedhiscalmness.GuidedbyKevin'stremblingfinger,theymadetheirwaytothespotwhereKevinhadseenthemantryingtoliftthefloorboard.Mr.Greenkneltdownandcarefullyopenedit.Totheirastonishment,therelayawatch.“Wehavetogotothepolicestationandtellthemeverything,”Mr.Greensaid,hisvoicefilledwithdetermination.Paragraph2:格林先生把手表递给了一名警官，并解释了情况。警官聚精会神地听着，眼睛眯起，陷入沉思。“凯文，你做得对。这件事我们会彻底调查的，”警官向他们保证，并热情地拍了拍凯文的肩膀。凯文深吸一口气，一股释然之情涌上心头，过去几个小时的重负瞬间烟消云散。离开警察局时，凯文忍不住回想起当天的事件。他意识到，即使感到害怕，也要坚持做正确的事，这一切的恐惧和不确定都是值得的。他的勇气起到了作用，这是一种他将永远珍惜的感觉。Handingthewatchtoanofficer,Mr.Greenexplainedthesituation.Theofficerlistenedattentively,hiseyesnarrowinginthought.“Youdidtherightthing,Kevin.Thematterwouldbelookedintothoroughly,”theofficerassuredthem,givingKevin'sshoulderaheartypat.Withadeepsigh,Kevinfeltawaveofreliefwashoverhim,theweightofthepastfewhoursmeltingaway.Astheyleftthestation,Kevincouldn'thelpbutreflectontheday'seven