应用文写作+致智能旅行网：完善中国景点内容之我见+讲义 高二上学期11月期中联考英语试题

应用文写作假定你是李华，发现最喜欢的网站www.smarttraveller.com有关中国景点的内容不太全面。请你用英语写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.该网站对你的帮助；2.你的建议以及理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudentfromChina.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua写作提纲第一段：开篇表明自己的身份，提及对该网站的喜爱，简要阐述网站给自己带来的帮助，从而自然地引出下文关于内容不全面的反馈。第二段：详细说明网站有关中国景点内容不全面的具体表现，例如某些小众但极具特色的景点缺失，或者对热门景点的介绍缺乏深度等。接着针对这些问题提出具体建议，如增加小众景点介绍、补充景点历史文化背景等，并阐述提出建议的理由，如满足不同游客需求、丰富网站内容等。第三段：表达对网站改进的期待，感谢对方抽出时间阅读邮件，期待回复。语言积累短语befondof喜欢benefitalotfrom从……中获益良多behelpfulto对……有帮助provide...with...为……提供……belackingin缺乏indetail详细地meettheneedsof满足……的需求enrichthecontent丰富内容lookforwardto期待awiderangeof各种各样的佳句Iamextremelyfondofyourwebsite,

,asithasprovidedmewithawealthofvaluableinformationabouttravelingaroundtheworld.（我非常喜欢你的网站，因为它为我提供了大量关于环游世界的有价值信息。）However,IhavenoticedthatthecontentrelatedtoChinesescenicspotsonyourwebsiteissomewhatlackingincomprehensiveness.（然而，我注意到贵网站上与中国景点相关的内容在全面性上有所欠缺。）Isincerelyhopethatyoucanconsideraddingmoreintroductionstothoseless-knownbutcharmingscenicspotsinChina,whichwillsurelyattractmoretravelerswithdiverseinterests.（我真诚地希望你们能考虑增加更多对中国那些不太知名但极具魅力的景点的介绍，这肯定会吸引更多兴趣各异的游客。）Byprovidingmorein-depthhistoricalandculturalbackgroundsofpopularscenicspots,yourwebsitecanofferamoreprofoundtravelexperienceforvisitors.（通过提供更多热门景点深入的历史文化背景，贵网站可以为游客提供更深刻的旅行体验。）I'mlookingforwardtoseeingtheimprovedversionofyourwebsite,whichIbelievewillbemoreappealingandusefultotravelers.（我期待看到贵网站改进后的版本，我相信它对旅行者来说会更具吸引力和实用性。）写作示范示范一DearSirorMadam,

IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudentfromChina.I'mreallyfondofyourwebsite,whichhasbenefitedmealotinmytravel-planning.Itprovidesawiderangeofinformationaboutglobalattractions.However,IfindthecontentaboutChinesescenicspotsisnotcomprehensiveenough.Forexample,manysmallbutuniqueplacesinChinaarenotincluded.Isuggestaddingmoredetailsabouttheseplaces.Thiscanmeettheneedsoftravelerswhopreferoff-the-beaten-pathdestinations.Isincerelyhopeyou'llconsidermysuggestions.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourstruly,

LiHua示范二DearSirorMadam,

I'mLiHua,aChinesehighschoolstudent.Yourwebsite,

,isofgreathelptome.Ithelpsmeexploredifferentculturesthroughtheintroductionofvarioustouristattractions.Nevertheless,thecontentonChinesescenicspotsseemsabitshallow.There'salackofin-depthhistoricalandculturalstories.Iproposeaddingmoreculturalbackgroundinformation.Thisway,travelerscanhaveabetterunderstandingofthespots.Thankyouforyourtime.I'meagertoseethepositivechanges.

Yourstruly,

LiHua示范三DearSirorMadam,

IamLiHua,ahigh-schoolstudentfromChina.Ihavebeenusingyourwebsitefrequently,andithasbeenextremelyhelpfulinmyresearchonglobaltravel.Theinformationitoffersbroadensmyhorizons.ButwhenitcomestoChinesescenicspots,Ifeelthere'sroomforimprovement.Somepopularplacesonlyhavebasicintroductions.Myadviceistoenrichthecontentwithmorevividdescriptionsandlocaltips.Thiscanattractmoretouristsandenrichtheirtravelexperience.I'mlookingforwardtoyourresponse.Thankyou!

Yourstruly,

LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudentfromChina.Ilovegeographyandtravel.Yourwebsite,www.smarttraveller.com,isoneofmyfavouritewebsites.Yourwebsitehasawiderrangeofinformationandrichknowledgebackground,whichhasbroughtmegreatconvenienceinlearningandtravelling.However,IhaverecentlyfoundthattheintroductionstotouristattractionsinChinaarenotveryrich.Afterall,Chinaisagreatcountrywithalonghistoryandmanyattractionsworthvisiting,especiallytheGreatWall.IfmorethoroughintroductionstoChina’stouristattractionsarein