高三英语一轮复习应用文图表作文写作技巧和句式课件

应用文之图表类作文高三英语一轮复习第三部分

写作（共两节,满分40分）第一节

（满分15分）

假定你是李华,你班新来的外教Glen委托你调查同学们在英语学习中遇到的困难。请你根据调查结果,给他写一封邮件,内容包括：

1.简述调查结果；

2.表达期待。1.ask--require--request(followyourrequest;atyourrequest)2.conduct/carryoutasurveyabout/of...--surveysbabout...3.facechallengein...;havedifficulty/ahardtimedoing

finditchallenging/tough/tricky;struggleindoing/todo4.chartshows/suggests/indicates/illustratesthat...;accordingtothechart5.findings/conclusions/results;Below/Hereare...;...areasfollows6.can’twaittodo/lookforwardto;hopefully,getonwellwith,getalongwith,beongoodtermswithwithyouhelpingus=underyourguidance;makeprogressin;assist/aidusinovercomingbarriers/obstacles;(be)keen/eagertolearnfrom;expertiseandguidance;facilitate/improve/boost...

文体:应用文-图表分析题结构分三段：Para1表达欢迎+调查背景：调查人+参与者+调查目的Para2

调查发现（数据分析）+点评观点（解决办法+课程建议)para3再次欢迎+表达期待热烈欢迎您来我们班！Warm

welcome

to

our

class!

按照您的要求，我已经调查了我全班同学关于他们在学英语中面对的挑战。Following

your

request,

I’ve

surveyed

our

classmatesabout

the

challenges

they

face

in

learning

English.Following

your

request,

I’ve

surveyed参与者about调查目的/conductedasurveyabout调查目的

Para1过渡句一：以下便是我的发现和结论Below/Herearemyfindingsandconclusions.过渡句二：如图表所显示的那样,

学生遇到的挑战主要分为四个类别：分别为发音，词汇，听说以及读写。Asthechartillustrates/indicates/suggests/shows,thechallengesstudentsencountermainlyfallintofourcategories,repectively/namelypronunciation,vocabulary,listeningandspeakingplusreadingandwriting.

Para2如何描绘图表信息素材一“如图所示...”

四种表达1)Asthechart/indicates/illustrates/suggests/shows….

2）Accordingtothechart,…根据图表3）Asisshowninthechart,…

如图表所显示的那样

，

4）Ascanbeseenfromthechart,…如图表看到的那样，

Dear

Glen,

Warm

welcome

to

our

class!Yours

sincerely,Li

Hua按什么顺序来描述这些数据呢？用什么句子写呢？finding1finding2finding2finding3

调查发现1.(指出最明显数据）很明显/毫无疑问听说是最显著的挑战，因为有80%学生发现它困难。It’s

clear/Thereisnodoubt

that

listening

and

speaking

are

the

most

significant

challenges,

with

80%

of

students

finding

it

difficult.

Para2

调查发现2.(运用数据对比)65%的学生写作和阅读有困难而55%的学生发现发音很难。65%

are

struggling

in

reading

and

writing

while

55%

find

pronunciation

tough.

65%

are

struggling

in

reading

and

writing,asopposedto55%

who

find

pronunciation

tough.

Para2

调查发现3.词汇是另外一个让人担心的区域，影响了40%的学生。Vocabulary

is

another

area

of

concern,

affecting

40%

of

us.Para21）Accordingtothechart,…percentofthestudents…,followedby…,whichaccountsfor….2）Studentswhochoose...are…percent

and/whilestudentswhochoose…are…percentrespectively.如何描绘图表信息素材二描述结果

其他两种句式

点评观点

(基于三个数据发现分析背后原因和给出课程建议)考虑到这些挑战，我们希望将更多的互动活动融入我们的课程，比如角色扮演和辩论，这对听说技能格外有益。Considering

these

challenges,

we

hope

more

interactive

activities

will

be

integrated

into

our

lessons,

such

as

role-plays

and

debates,

which

could

be

particularly

beneficial

for

listening

and

speaking

skills.Para2评论现象：数字背后反映的现象（一分为二：positive+negative）分析原因：造成现象的原因个人评价：你的观点+原因1）Itisarewardingsighttoseethat…2）However,theimportanceof....can’tbeignoredsince(因为)....1）Thereasonwhy...isthat2）Thechangein/tendencyto...largelyresultfromthefactthat...1）Frommypointofview,I…2）AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwouldbewise...如何描绘图表信息素材三点评观点

其他句式

再次欢迎+表达期待再次欢迎。渴望从你的专业知识和指导中学习。Welcome

again.

Keen

to

learn

from

your

expertise

and

guidance.Para3One

possible

version:Dear

Glen,

Warm

welcome

to

our

class!

Following

your

request,

I’ve

surveyed

our

classmates

about

the

challenges

they

face

in

learning

English.

It’s

clear

that

listening

and

speaking

are

the

most

significant

challenges,

with

80%

of

students

finding

it

difficult.

65%

are

struggling

in

reading

and

writing

while

55%

find

pronunciation

tough.

Vocabulary

is

another

area

of

concern,

affecting

40%

of

us.

Considering

these

challenges,

we

hope

more

interactive

activities

will

be

integrated

into

our

lessons,

such

as

role-plays

and

debates,

which

could

be

particularly

beneficial

for

listening

and

speaking

skills.

Welcome

again.

Keen

to

learn

from

your

expertise

and

guidance.Yours

sincerely,Li

HuaFollowing

your

request,

I’ve

surveyed

our

classmatesabout

the

challenges

they

face

in

learning

English.Below/Herearemyfindingsandconclusions.Asthechartindicates/Asisshowninthechart,thechallengesstudentsencountermainlyfallintofourcategories,repectively/namelypronunciation,vocabulary,listeningandspeakingplusreadingandwriting.It’s

clear/Thereisnodoubt

that

listening

and

speaking

are

the

most

significant

challenges,

with

80%

of

students

finding

it

difficult.

Accordingtothechart,65%ofthestudentsare

struggling

in

reading

and

writing,followedbythosewhoarestrugglinginreadingandwriting,whichaccountsfor55%.65%

are

struggling

in

reading

and

writing

while

55%

find

pronunciation

tough.AsfarasI'mconcerned,thechangein/tendencytoreadinglargelyresultfromthefactthatEnglishisnotourmothertongue.

作业运用课堂所学完成全国卷图表作文学校英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述；2.简单评论；3.你的建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.

Asurveyaboutstudents’variousEnglishlearningmethodsoffcampushasbeenconducted.(调查的背景信息)Beloware

thefindings.Asisshowninthechart,theapproachesstudentsadoptmainlyfallintofourcategories,namely

readingEnglishbooks,listeningtoEnglishsongs,watchingEnglishfilmsandvisitingEnglishwebsites.Accordingtothechart,thereisnodoubt

that

listeningtoEnglishsongsisdominant,

with

65%

of

students

choosing

it,

followedby

thosewhotendto

watch