寻找女儿的故事读后续写课件-高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

读后续写专题复习3读后续写Step1ReadStep2AnalyzeStep3ImagineStep4DraftStep5PolishParents,fromthemomenttheytakeontherole,putalltheirconcentrationontakinggoodcareoftheirchildrenandmakingtheirchildren’slivesbetteruntiltheyareindependentenoughtoliveadecentlife.Iwasthiskindofmotherfromthetimemydaughterwasborn.However,thingscanbedifferentnow,becauseyouneverknowhowfarchildrencangowithoutyou.Afewweeksago,IsentmydaughterYuki,an11-year-oldgirl,tothedancingcourseonanelectricbikeasusual,whichlastedtwohoursstartingfrom6:30pm.Uponarrival,IpromisedmydaughterthatIwouldcomepickingherupontime.ThenIwenttomyyogaclass.IwasinsuchahurrythatIrodemyelectricbikenearlyatfullspeed.ButwhenIwasonmyhalfway,Ifeltsomethingwrongandfoundmyelectricbikealmostshortofpower.IknewIhadtogobackhomefirstaftermyworkoutandthenwentforYukibycar.However,whenIgothome,Iwastoldbymymumthatmydadhaddriventhecarout.MomrangupdadimmediatelyandrepeatedlyurgedhimtobringYukihomeattherighttimeandmydadsaidyesonthephone.Relieved,IthoughteverythingwouldbeOKandIjustrelaxedmyselfandtookmylittlesondownstairstoplaywithotherkids,meanwhilewaitingformydaughter.Whenitwasapproximatelytwentypastnine,afterItookahotbathandplacedmysontobed,mydadandmydaughterstilldidn’treturnhome.Whatwaswrong?Itwouldnottakesuchalongtimeforthemtobehomefromthedancingtrainingcenterbycar.Wherewerethey?Weretheysafe?Uneasyandanxious,Iphonedmydad.Noresponse.Iphonedagain,andheanswered.Muchtomyshockandterror,mydadrespondedinsurprisethatheknewnothingaboutmyrequest.Hedidn’tevenhearwhatmymumhadsaidonthephoneduetothepoorsignalandhisbadhearing.Iwasentirelyrootedtothespot,palmssweating.Whatonearthhappened?Wouldmydaughterbealoneandscared?Wouldshegetlost?Afterall,shewasjustaprimaryschoolstudent.ThinkingofYukibeingaloneoutsidewaitingforme,withoutaphoneandmoney,Iwasinpanic.Withoutasecondthought,Icalledataxithroughtaxiservice.Step1ReadMaincharacters:IMydaughterYukididn’ttimelypickupPlots:Itookmydaughtertohavedancingcoursebutmyelectriccarwasshortofpower.Myparentspromisedtopickherupbuttheyforgotit.Feelings:nervousrelievedUneasyandanxiousinpanic注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150词左右：2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Ihurriedlypulledmycoatonandrushedoutofthedoor._____________________________________

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IwassearchingforYukieverywhere,downstairsandupstairs,whenmyphonesuddenlyrang.__________________________________________________________________________________________Step2AnalyzeHomeDancingtrainingcentrehurriedtoIYukiwaitedandwalkedbackpara1重点写作为母亲的我没有找到女儿的焦急和不安para2重点写女儿是如何冷静自己独立安全回家的，最后升华主题注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150词左右：2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Ihurriedlypulledmycoatonandrushedoutofthedoor.______________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________IwassearchingforYukieverywhere,downstairsandupstairs,whenmyphonesuddenlyrang.___________________________________________________________________________________________Step3Imagineparagraph1paragraph2WheredidIgoWhatdidIdoHowdidIfeeldancingtrainingcentercalledtheteacher,searchedthecenterandthestreetsextremelyworriedWhocalledmemydaughterWhatdidshedoShewentbackhomeherselfsafelyWhatdidIrealizeMydaughterhadgrownupStep4Draft

Ihurriedlypulledmycoatonandrushedoutofthedoor.Whenthetaxiarrived,Igotonandaskedthedrivertoridemetothedancingtrainingcenter.Ihopedthatshewasstillthere.AndItriedtoringupYuki’sdancingteacherbutnoresponse.Iwassoanxiousthatmyeyeswerewet.Seeingmyuneasiness,thedriveraskedme,“Iseverythingok?”Ishookmyheadandsaidanxiously,“Couldyoupleasedrivefaster?Iaminahurry.”Thedriverspedupandafterfifteenminutes,wegottothedestination.Itseemedasifitwasalongway,andindeeditwas.

IwassearchingforYukieverywhere,downstairsandupstairs,whenmyphonesuddenlyrang.Itwasmydaughterandshetoldmethatshewalkedallthewayhome.Ifeltrelievedandcalmedmyselfdown.Thetruthwas:mydaughtergothomealone,safeandsound.Therewasnoneedformetobethatpanicandterrifiedandanxious.Shewassoindependentandbraver!Iwasveryproudofher.Arrivinghome,Ihuggedhertightly,tearsineyes.AndYuki,justshruggedhershoulderwithabroadsmileonherfaceandsaid,“Mom,I’mbacktoyou.”主旨升华句Thisexperiencetaughtmethatourchildrenareoftenmoreresilientthanwethink,capableofhandlingunexpectedsituationswithgrace.Itmademerealizethatintheprocessofparenting,weneedtograduallyletgoandtrustourkids'abilitiestofacechallenges.Theincidentshowedthateveninthefaceoffear,loveanddeterminationcanguideourchildrentomakewisedecisions.Itisareminderthatourchildren'sgrowthisajourneyofself-discovery,andweshouldbetheretosupportratherthanover-protect.Thiseventnotonlytestedmydaughter'scouragebutalsodeepenedourbond,provingthatlovecanovercomeanyfear.

Ihurriedlypulledmycoatonandrushedoutofthedoor.

Themomentthetaxiarrived,Ileaptintoitandaskedthedrivertoridemedirectlytothedancingtrainingcenter,hopingthatshewasstillthere.Meanwhile,ItriedtoringupYuki’sdancingteacherbutwithoutanyresponse.Anxietysweptovermeandtearswelledupinmyeyes.

Sensingmyuneasiness,thedriveraskedme,“Iseverythingok?”Ishookmyheadandutteredinananxioustone,“Couldyoupleasedrivefaster?Iaminahurry.”Thedriverspedupandfifteenminuteslater,wereachedthedestination.Itseemedasifitwerealongway,andindeeditwas.Step5Polish替换when更显作者的焦急动作更加灵动加副词修饰动词语言更加生动连词使文章更加连