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1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Bang...!”Sarapushedthedooropen.Shethrewherschoolbagontothefloorandcalledout,“I’mhome!”Noanswer.Thehousewassilent.Itsoundedempty,butsheknewitwasn’t.Hermumanddadwereworkingupstairs.Saragotaglassoforangejuice,wentintotheconservatory（玻璃房）andsatdowninherfavouritechair.Thegardenwasstillinthedarkafternoon.Ononeside,hermum’sgardenwasneatandtidywithboringshortgrass,boringstraightflowerbedsandboringstraightpaths.Butontheotherside,Sara’sNatureGardenlookedwildandexcitingwithbigdeadsunflowersandtallgrasses.“Nobodyisinterestedinme.Mumanddadonlythinkabouttheirwork,”shethoughtsadly.Thensherecalled:Onemonthearlier,shelearnedinamagazinethatmanydogswereabandonedbecausetheirownersgotboredwiththem;Onehourearlier,shesawacutedogwaggingitstailandlickingherfriend’sface.Saraknewtodaywasspecial.Todaythingswerechanging.Shecouldn’twaitanylonger.It’stimetotalktoherparents.SoSaragotupfromherchairandclimbedallthewaytotheloft（阁楼）.“Mum,Iwantatalk.”saidSara.“Justaminute!”Hermumclickedonthekeyboard,tookoffherglassesandturnedtoherdaughter.Saracoughed,tookadeepbreath,andtoldhermumthatshewantedadog.“No,Sara.That’simpossible,”hermumsaidfirmly.Sarawenttoherfatherbutgotthesameanswer.Sherushedintoherroomangrilyandslammedthedoorshut.Later,Sara’smumknockedatthedoorandwentin.“Darling,weknowthisisimportanttoyou.Youcanhaveadogifyoutaketheresponsibility.ButlookatyourNatureGarden,yourschoolbag,yourbedroom!Whatamess!Doyouthinkyoucantakegoodcareofadog?”saidhermum.注意：续写词数为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置做答。SarahSarahwaslostinthoughtanddecidedtomakeachange.Withthecompanyofthedog,Sarahbeganabusyandhappylife.文本主旨本文讲述了萨拉渴望养一只狗，然而父母因她生活杂乱，认为她无法承担照顾狗的责任而拒绝了她的请求。故事围绕萨拉如何面对这一拒绝，以及后续是否能改变父母的想法展开，体现了孩子的愿望与父母的考量之间的冲突，以及孩子在追求自己目标过程中的成长。词汇积累throw...onto...把……扔到……上callout大声呼喊beinterestedin对……感兴趣abandon/əˈbændən/v.遗弃，抛弃wag/wæɡ/v.（狗尾巴等）摆动lick/lɪk/v.舔taketheresponsibility承担责任mess/mes/n.混乱，脏乱slam/slæm/v.砰地关上（门、窗等）clickon点击续写分析衔接句：可从萨拉听完妈妈的话后的反应入手续写。比如以“Saraloweredherhead,realizinghermotherwasright.”作为衔接句，承接上文妈妈指出萨拉生活杂乱不适合养狗的情节，自然引出萨拉的反思以及后续行动。情节合理性：萨拉想要养狗，在被父母拒绝后，若续写她开始努力改变自己，将房间、花园整理干净，以实际行动证明自己有能力照顾好狗，这样的情节符合她渴望养狗的心理，也符合逻辑。例如描述她花费周末时间清理花园里的杂物，将学习用品分类整理，把房间布置得井井有条。情感铺垫：前文萨拉渴望养狗的强烈愿望，以及被拒绝后的愤怒，为她后续努力争取的行为做了情感铺垫。读者能够感受到她对养狗这件事的执着，也能理解她为什么会努力改变自己，从而使故事的情感发展更加连贯。情感走向故事开篇萨拉充满期待地向父母提出养狗请求，却遭到拒绝，此时情感跌入低谷。若续写中萨拉开始努力改变，她的情感会逐渐从沮丧、愤怒转变为充满希望与决心。当她通过努力最终获得父母认可时，情感将达到喜悦的高潮，整体呈现从低落到高涨的变化趋势。主题深化通过萨拉努力争取养狗的过程，深化了成长需要承担责任以及理解父母的主题。萨拉在追求养狗的过程中，学会了自我反思和改变，明白了只有具备承担责任的能力，才能实现自己的愿望，同时也理解了父母拒绝背后的考量，展现了孩子在成长过程中的心理变化和思想成熟。下水文两篇下水文一

Saraloweredherhead,realizinghermotherwasright.Shedecidedtoprovethatshecouldberesponsible.ThenextdaywasSaturday.ShegotupearlyandstartedwithherNatureGarden.Shepulledouttheweeds,trimmedtheovergrownsunflowers,andmadethepathsneat.Thensheturnedtoherroom.Shesortedoutherschoolbag,putawayhertoys,andmadeherbed.Afterawholeday'shardwork,boththegardenandherroomwereinperfectorder.

OnSunday,sheshowedherparentsthechanges.Herparentsweresurprisedandpleased."You'vedoneanexcellentjob,Sara,"herfathersaid."Wecanseeyourdetermination.Maybeit'stimetoconsidergettingyouadog."Sarajumpedwithjoy.Sheknewthatbytakingresponsibility,shecouldmakeherdreamcometrue.下水文二

Sarawasabitdisappointedbutnotdefeated.Shespenttheentireweekendcleaningup.Inthegarden,sherakedtheleaves,plantedsomenewflowers,andbuiltasmallfencearoundherspecialcorner.Insideherroom,shearrangedherbooksontheshelf,foldedherclothesneatly,andwipedthedustoffeverycorner.Whenherparentssawthebigchanges,theywereamazed.

"Sara,we'rereallyproudofyou,"hermothersaid."You'veshownthatyoucanberesponsible.Wethinkyou'rereadyforadog."Sara'seyessparkledwithexcitement.Shelearnedanimportantlesson:responsibilityisthekeytogettingwhatshewants.Fromthenon,shetookgoodcareofnotonlyherdogbutalsoeverythingaroundher.参考答案Sarahwaslostinthoughtanddecidedtomakeachange.Shewenttothebedroomfirst,whichwasterrible.Sarahquicklybegantosweepthefloor,foldtheclothes,andmadethebed.Finallythebedroommadepeople’seyeslightup.Thentherewashernaturalgarden,whichalsowasaterribleplace.ButSarahwasnotdiscouraged.Shespenttwohoursweedingandplantingnewflowers.Evenifshewasverytired,shedidnotstop.Motherwasveryhappytoseethechangeinher,anddecidedtobuySarahapuppy.Withthecompanyofthedog,Sarahbeganabusyandhappylife.Aftershewokeupinthemorning,shetookherdogforawalkinthepark.Aftercomingback,shecleanedherroomandhadbreakfastdelight