新人教版高中英语必修第一册：Reading for Writing 写作实践

ReadingforWritingUnit3

SportsandfitnessTeachingObjectives1.Masterthestructureandthelanguagesofahealthreport.2.Masterthemethodofwritingahealthreport.3.Practisewritingahealthreport.目标一文本深度理解Activity1

细节把握1.Thephrase“wentbananas”inthepassageprobablymeans“

”.A.wenttobuybananasB.atebananasC.wentmadD.hatedbananas√2.Itwas

thatchangedherattitudetohershape.A.anarticleshereadB.thebananasC.theapplesD.thefoodssheliked√3.Wecaninferthat

accordingtothepassage.A.agirlshouldgoonadietB.agirlshouldeatmorefruitsC.beingslimismoreimportantthanfitnessD.keepingfitismoreimportantthanbeingslim√Activity2

文章架构1.Readthehealthreportandputthenecessarypartofthehealthreportinorder.①Whatmademechange.②Mylifeatpresent.③Myprobleminthepast.答案③①②2.Accordingtothehealthreport，wecanlearnthatwhenwewriteahealthreport，wecanusethefollowingoutline.(写作模板)Inthepast，Iwas/usedtodo

ThenIwastoldbyafriendthat

.Ibegantochange.Insteadofdoing

，Iwoulddo

.Ratherthandoing

，Idid

.Finally，Iwasnolonger...Bydoing...，Iamhappierandhealthierthanbefore.Activity3

增分靓句1.Readthehealthreportandfindoutthestructuresthatareusedtodescribetheauthor’schanges.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Insteadofsaying“Iwanttolosethreekilos”，Iwouldsay“Iwanttoruntwokilometresineightminutes”or“Iwanttobeabletodo30push-ups”.RatherthancuttingoutthefoodsIenjoyed，Iaddedhealthyfoodstomymeals.2.Readthehealthreportandfindoutthestructuresthatareusedtodescribetheauthor’spresentlife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally，Istoppedcomparingmyselfwithactressesandmodelsandlookingforthingsthatwerewrongwithmyfaceorbody.Instead，ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody，Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.写作技法指导目标二健康报告书本单元的写作任务是写健康报告书。常用表达1.首段常用句式Inthepast，Iwas...Iusedtodo/be...Ialways/oftendo...Iwasworriedabout...RecentlyIhavebeenconcernedabout...Whatbothersmeisthat...2.中段常用句式Ireadanarticlethattoldmethat...Isawaprogrammethatshowed...Adoctorrecommendedthat...Insteadofdoing...，Iwoulddo...Itriedtodothefollowingthings.Itookpartin...3.尾段常用句式Now，Ibecamebothhappierandmoreconfidentthanbefore.Atpresent，notonlyamIhealthierthanbefore，butalsoIbecomehappier.Thankstomyeffort，I...Iammorethanhappytoseetheimprovementsin...典例展示写一篇短文，介绍你自己是如何平衡学习和休息的。内容包括：1.以前无法平衡学习和休息；2.现在已经做到二者平衡。注意：词数80左右。范文赏读Twoyearsago，Icouldn’tbalancemystudyandrest.Iusedtobebusywithmystudy，soIhadnotimetohavearest.AtlastIfellillandhadtostayinhospitalfor3weeks.AfterIrecoveredfromillness，Ibegantothinkaboutmyproblems.Igottorealisetheimportanceofbalancingstudyandrest.Insteadofdoingmyhomeworkalltheday，Iwouldgotoplaybasketballforanhouraday.Finally，bybalancingrestandstudy，Ibecamequitehealthy.Ididn’tfallbehind；instead，Istudiedbetterthanbefore.习作分步演练目标三假如你叫Linda，过去一直因为身体瘦弱，爱生病而苦恼。后来朋友建议你跟她一起参加健身俱乐部，每天适量锻炼并持之以恒。在俱乐部其他成员的鼓励下，你现在不仅身体健康了，而且更加活泼开朗了。注意：1.词数80左右；

2.开头已给出，不计入总词数；

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第一步审题谋篇第二步遣词造句核心词汇(含本单元词汇)1.瘦的，纤细的_____2.健壮__________________3.参加俱乐部___________4.与……相比较_________________5.而不是___________6.有影响_________________slimhealthyandstrongjoinaclubcomparedwith/toratherthanmakeadifference7.苦恼的_________8.均衡的饮食_______________9.适量运动_______________________________10.增强体质_________________annoyedabalanceddiettakeaproperamountofexercisebuildupstrength连词成句(含本单元句型)1.我过去很瘦并且经常生病，我对此很苦恼。

anditmademeannoyed.2.我的一个朋友建议我参加一个健身俱乐部。(recommendsb.todo...)_____________________________________________________________3.在这个俱乐部里，我每天坚持做适量的锻炼。_____________________________________________________________IusedtobeveryslimandoftenfellillOneofmyfriendsrecommendedmetojoinahealthclub.Intheclub，Ikepttakingaproperamountofexerciseeveryday.4.此外，与过去相比，我有更加均衡的饮食。_______________________________________________________________5.我的汗水起了很大作用。_______________________________________________________________6.现在我宁愿经常去健身房而不是去医院。

，Iwouldgotothegymregularlynow.7.经常锻炼身体极大地增强了我的体质。

hasbuiltupmystrengthgreatly.Inaddition，comparedwiththepast，Ihaveamorebalanceddiet.Mysweatmadeagreatdifference.RatherthangotohospitalWorkingoutregularly第三步句式升级1.把第1句升级为定语从句。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.把第2句改为应用虚拟语气的宾语从句。_____________________________________________________Iusedtobeveryslimandoftenfellill，whichmademeannoyed.OneofmyfriendsrecommendedthatIshouldjoinahealthclub.第四步组句成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。参考范文IamLinda.Iusedtobeveryslimandoftenfellill，whichmademeannoyed.OneofmyfriendsrecommendedthatIshouldjoinahealthclub.Intheclub，Ikepttakingaproperamountofexerciseeveryday.Inaddition，comparedwiththepast，Ihaveamorebalanceddiet.Mysweatmadeagreatdifference.Ratherthangotohospital，Iwouldgotothegym