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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Whetherwenoticeitornot,ourchildisalittlereflectionofourselves.Theygrowuplookingmoreandmorelikeus.Theyevenhavesimilarpersonalitiesandhobbies,andinsomecases,thestandardofchoosingagoodfriend.Oneday,my10-year-oldJanesaid,“Mom,Imadeanewfriendatschooltoday.Canshecomeovertomorrow?”HerwordsmademeextremelyhappybecauseJanewasashygirlandIwantedhertomakesomefriendstobringheroutofhershell.“Sure,honey,thatsoundsgreat.”Isaid,thinkingbacktomyownchildhoodbestfriend,Susan.WelivedacrossthestreetfromeachotherinWashingtonHeights,NewYork.Wemetattheageof10,too.Likemydaughter,Iwasshyandhadtroublemakingfriends.ButSusandrewmeout.Shewasoneofthefriendliestpeopleinschool,withshinyblackhairandamile-widesmile.ThankstoSusan.Iwashappyeveryday.Inseniorhighschool,SusanwentonatriptoFlorida.Thiswasthefirsttimewehadtobeawayfromeachotherforafewdays.“I’llbebacksoonandIwillwritetoyouassoonasIarrive.”shetoldme.ButIdidn’tgetherphonecallnorreceiveanymailfromher.Soon,myfamilymovedtoNewJersey,makingmyhopeofseeingSusanimpossible.WheneverIthoughtofher,tearscameintomyeyes.ThenextdayJanebroughthernewfriendhome.“Hi,Mrs.Smith.”thelittlegirlsaid.Herhairwassoshinyandblackandshegavemeabigsmile.“MynameisJo.Mymomwillpickmeup2hourslater.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:Iwaspuzzledbecausemydaughter’snewfriendlookedsofamiliar._________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Twohourspassedreallyquickly,andtherewasaknockonthedoor._________________________________________________________________友谊的续写第一段续写分析故事线:“我”看到女儿的新朋友Jo,因她的外貌和性格特点,感觉似曾相识。在与Jo的交谈中,得知她母亲曾住在华盛顿高地,“我”瞬间意识到可能的关联,便询问Jo她母亲的名字,果然证实了“我”的猜测,原来是命运让两个孩子走到了一起。短语putone'sfingeron(确切指出)outofcuriosity(出于好奇)usedto(过去常常)asuddenrealization(突然意识到)happento(碰巧)beovercomewithemotion(情绪激动)bring...together(使……相聚)lookfamiliar(看起来熟悉)主旨升华句Sometimes,lifehasamysteriouswayofbringingbackwhatwasoncelost,andthisencounterbetweenourdaughterswasabeautifulreminderofthat.(有时候,生活以一种神秘的方式带回曾经失去的东西,我们女儿之间的这次相遇就是对此美好的印证。)ThesimilaritybetweenJoandSusanwasn'tjustacoincidence;itwasasignthatfriendshipcantranscendtimeanddistanceinunexpectedways.(Jo和Susan之间的相似并非仅仅是巧合,这是一个信号,表明友谊可以以意想不到的方式跨越时间和距离。)Thischancemeetingmademebelievethattheconnectionsweforminlife,eveniftheyseemtofadeaway,canbereignitedthroughthemostunlikelycircumstances.(这次偶然的相遇让我相信,我们在生活中建立的联系,即使看似消逝,也能在最意想不到的情况下重新燃起。)It'samazinghowtheuniverseworkstobringpeopletogether,andinthiscase,itwasthroughthefriendshipofourchildrenthatthepastandpresentcollidedinthemostwonderfulway.(宇宙让人们相聚的方式令人惊叹,在这种情况下,正是通过我们孩子的友谊,过去和现在以最美妙的方式交织在一起。)Ourdaughters'friendshipbecamethebridgethatreconnectedtwooldfriends,showingthatthecircleoffriendshipisunendingandcanspangenerations.(我们女儿的友谊成为了重新连接两位老朋友的桥梁,表明友谊的圈子是无尽的,并且可以跨越几代人。)第二段续写分析故事线:两个小时很快过去,有人敲门,“我”打开门看到了Susan,两人都震惊不已,随后激动相拥,泪流满面。在孩子们困惑的目光中,我们坐下来分享过去的故事,从年少时的时光到如今孩子们成为朋友的奇妙缘分,我们明白多年前失去的友谊因女儿们得以重燃。短语passquickly(很快过去)therewasaknockonthedoor(有人敲门)amiddle-agedwoman(一位中年妇女)freezeinshock(震惊得呆住)rushtowards(冲向)embracetightly(紧紧拥抱)shareone'sstories(分享某人的故事)berekindled(被重新点燃)主旨升华句Thisreunionwasmorethanjustameetingofoldfriends;itwasacelebrationofthepoweroffriendshipandtheunexpectedtwistsoffate.(这次重逢不仅仅是老朋友的相聚,更是对友谊的力量和命运意外转折的一次庆祝。)Throughtheeyesofourconfuseddaughters,wesawthebeginningofanewchapterinourfriendship,onethatwouldbestrengthenedbythebondbetweenourchildren.(从我们困惑的女儿们的眼中,我们看到了我们友谊新篇章的开始,这将因我们孩子之间的纽带而更加牢固。)Thetearsweshedwereamixofjoyandnostalgia,symbolizingthejourneyofourfriendshipthathadcomefullcircleafteralltheseyears.(我们流下的眼泪是喜悦和怀旧的混合,象征着我们的友谊在历经这些年后圆满回归的旅程。)Ourdaughters'innocentfriendshiphadunwittinglygivenusasecondchancetocherishthefriendshipweoncehad,provingthatsometimes,themostpreciousgiftscomeinthemostunexpectedpackages.(我们女儿纯真的友谊在不知不觉中给了我们第二次珍惜曾经友谊的机会,证明了有时候,最珍贵的礼物往往以最意想不到的方式出现。)Thismagicalreuniontaughtusthattruefriendshipendures,andevenwhenseparatedbytimeandspace,itcanfindawaytothriveagain,thankstotheconnectionswemakeinlife.(这次神奇的重逢告诉我们,真正的友谊经得起考验,即使被时间和空间分隔,它也能找到再次蓬勃发展的方式,这都要归功于我们在生活中建立的联系。)写作示范一第一段续写Iwaspuzzledbecausemydaughter’snewfriendlookedsofamiliar.Hermannerisms,asshetalkedandlaughed,wereuncannilylikesomeonefrommypast.Aswesatinthelivingroom,Icouldn'thelpbutbedrawntoJo.Herstoriesaboutschoolandherhobbiesweretoldwithsuchenthusiasm,justlikeSusanusedto.WhenIcasuallyaskedaboutherfamily'sorigin,andshementionedWashingtonHeights,myheartskippedabeat.Ileanedforward,myvoicetremblingslightly,“DoesyourmomhappentobeSusan?”Jo'sfacelitupwithsurprise.“Yes!Howdidyouknow?”Ifeltalumpforminmythroat.Itwasasiftheuniversehadconspiredtobringourworldstogether.第二段续写Twohourspassedreallyquickly,andtherewasaknockonthedoor.MyhandsshookasIwalkedtowardsit,anticipationfillingeveryfiberofmybeing.WhenIopenedthedoor,therestoodSusan,abitolderbutstillunmistakablyher.Oureyeslocked,andforamoment,timestoodstill.Then,asobescapedmylips,andwerushedintoeachother'sarms,holdingontightlyasifwewereafraidtoletgo.Ourdaughtersstaredatusinwide-eyedwonder.Wesatatthekitchentable,cupsofteainhand,andsharedourstories.Fromtheadventureswehadaskidstothechallengesofmotherhood,andhowourdaughtershadunknowinglyreconnectedus.Itwasamomentofpuremagic,agiftfromthepastthatwewouldcherishforever.写作示范二第一段续写Iwaspuzzledbecausemydaughter’snewfriendlookedsofamiliar.Jo'sshinyblackhairswayedasshemoved,andherinfectioussmileseemedtoholdamemorythatwasjustoutofreach.Aswechatted,Inoticedherkindandfriendlynature,whichwassoreminiscentofSusan.Mycuriositygotthebetterofme,andIaskedaboutherfamilybackground.WhenJomentionedthathermomwasfromWashingtonHeights,ashiverrandownmyspine.Itookadeepbreathandasked,“IsyourmomSusan?”Jo'seyesgrewasbigassaucers.“Yes!Howdoyouknowher?”Awaveofemotionwashedoverme.Itwasclearthatsomeunseenforcehadbroughtourdaughterstogether,andIcouldn'twaittoseewherethiswouldlead.第二段续写Twohourspassedreallyquickly,andtherewasaknockonthedoor.MyheartpoundedinmychestasImademywaytoanswerit.WhenIopenedthedoor,Susanstoodthere,alookofshockandrecognitiononherface.Withoutaword,wethrewourarmsaroundeachother,ourbodiesshakingwithemotion.Ourdaughterswatchedinconfusionasweheldeachothertightly.Wesatonthecouch,ourhandsclaspedtogether,andrecountedtheyearsthathadpassed.Welaughed,wecried,andwemarveledathowourdaughters'friendshiphadrekindledourown.Itwasabeautifulreminderthattruefriendshipneverfades,nomatterhowmuchtimepasses.参考答案Iwaspuzzledbecausemydaughter’snewfriendlookedsofamiliar.ButIwassurethatIhadnevermetJobefore.ShetoldmethatherfamilyjustmovedfromLosAngeles,whi
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