高考英语复习写作第20讲如何写图画类作文牛津译林版

第20讲怎样写图画类作文第1页一、魔法导航(1)确定体裁。这类文章普通以记叙文或说明文为主。审题时,应仔细阅读图

画及文字说明,确定文章使用体裁。(2)确定人称。若以日志、回想录等形式来写,普通采取第一人称;若以讲故事

形式来写,普通采取第三人称。(3)确定时态。依据图画内容及所采取文章体裁,确定文章所要使用时

态。(4)发挥联想。这类文章普通要求进行联想和发挥,以使上下文能更加好地连贯

起来,但联想要合理、适度。(5)注意详略。对于图画中内容,要注意详略得当。如图画中所出现时

间、数字或言论要一词不漏地写清楚,而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。——图文并茂,笔下华章第2页二、惯用句式1.用于描述图画或引入话题句式:(1)Asisdescribedinthepicture,...(2)Asisshowninthepicture,wecanseeclearly...2.用于记叙事件经过或分析现象句式:(1)Atfirst...then...fiveminuteslater...finally/intheend...(2)Some...;some...;others...(3)Moreandmorepeoplehavecometorealizetheimportanceof...3.用于发表议论或进行总结句式:(1)Ifsuchmeasureswerenottaken,theproblemwouldbemoreserious.(2)Wecanconcludefromthispicturethat...(3)Ashasbeenstated,wemust...第3页三、典题示例

真题在线(福建)请阅读下面图画,按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右短文。内容要求:1.描述画面;2.概述其含义;3.谈谈个人感想。第4页

凿壁偷光注意:1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、行文连贯;3.文中不能出现考生详细信息。参考词汇:凿,钻bore第5页Inthepicture,

第6页体裁图画类作文中心人称第一人称第三人称主体时态普通现在时普经过去时关键点布局第一段:描述图画(抓住主要“画意”,防止面面俱到)。第二段:概述画面透露含义。

第三段:详细谈谈个人感想。

 审题谋篇第7页考场作文:Inthepicture,wecanseeaboyinrags.Hewas①sitingatatablewithapileofbooksonit.(1)Hewasreadingabookattentivelywiththehelpofaweakrayoflightcominginthroughasmallholeinthewall.②AsisknowntousthatthisisastoryfromanancientChineseidiom.Sopoorwastheboythathecouldn'taffordevenacandle.Thus,inordertoreadatnight,heboredaholeinthewallto“steal”lightfromhisneighbor'shouse.Whatwecanlearnfromthestoryisthatweshoulddowhatwecan③acquireknowledgewhenfacedwithdifficultsituations.(2)Whenwetrytoim-

proveourselvesbylearning,wecanmakegoodpreparationsforthefuture.文章提升:1.修改错误:1)sit现在分词应先双写t,然后加-ing,故应将

①siting改为

。2)②As处于形式主语位置,故应将As改为

.3)此处应用不定式作目标状语,故应将③ac-

quire改为

.2.提升提议:1)用强调句型对画线句(1)中withthehelpof

aweakrayoflightcominginthroughasmall

holeinthewall进行强调:

2)将画线句(2)改为以only+when从句开头句

子:

阅卷现场第8页参考范文:Inthepicture,wecanseeaboyinwornclothes,sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit.Aweakrayoflightcameinthroughasmallholeinthewallandhewasabsorbedinhisreading.Thisisawell-knownstoryfromanancientChineseidiom.Theboy,beingpoor,couldn'taffordevenacandle,soheboredaholeinthewallto“steal”lightfromhisneighbor'shousetoreadat

night.Themoralofthestoryis:sparenoefforttoacquireknowledgeandnevergetdiscouragedeasilynomatterhowdifficultthesituationmaybe.Ofcourse,thingsaretotallydifferenttoday.Itisnotthestoryitselfbutwhatisreflectedinthesto-rythatcounts.Hardworkpaysoff.Weshouldtakepainstoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandgetpreparedforthefuture.第9页

答案1.修改错误:1)sitting2)It3)toacquire2.提升提议:1)Itwaswiththehelpofaweakrayoflightcominginthroughasmallholeinthe

wallthathewasreadingabookattentively.2)Onlywhenwetrytoimproveourselvesbylearningcanwemakegoodprepara-

tionsforthefuture.第10页四、高分秀场(山东济宁高三一模)下面是英语老师推荐两本课外阅读书籍,请依据以下提醒用英语写一篇100

词左右短文:1.说明你会选择哪一本书阅读;2.该书大约内容;3.你选择该书理由。第11页

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答案Onepossibleversion:OfthetwobooksrecommendedbymyEnglishteacher,Iprefer“Everyoneis

Beautiful”byCaroline,which,asthetitlesuggests,isaboutwhyandhowtore-

spectothersandhowtobeourselvesatthesametime.Asateenager,Ioftenwonderwhyonearthpeoplearesowidelydifferentfrom

one