高考英语复习写作第17讲如何写开放类作文牛津译林版

第17讲怎样写开放类作文第1页一、魔法导航1.仔细观察,认真审题。审题对开放类作文写作相当主要,经过审题确定文

章主题、时态和体裁。2.直奔主题,重点突出。尽管开放类作文考生发挥空间较大,但一定要紧紧

围绕主题展开写作,在文章结构上必须做到重点突出。3.内容充实,紧紧围绕主题。全文要紧紧围绕所给信息主题,进行合理阐述,并表示

自己感想。在这一部分,只要用简单语言讲出道理即可,没必要过深地挖

掘信息,同时要确保文章立意是主动向上。4.过渡自然,结构紧凑。要让一篇文章读起来通顺、流畅,就应该注意段落之

间过渡衔接。所以,有必要在上下文之间添加一个过渡词或过渡句。——收放自如,文采飞扬5.全方面审核,仔细检验。写完文章后,要注意对照写作要求仔细审核,看所写内

容是否符合题意,内容是否充实,句型是否正确,有没有拼写错误等。第2页二、惯用句式1.分析原因(1)Thereare...reasonsfor...(2)Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.(3)Thereasonforthisisthat...2.表示主要、必要、困难、方便、(不)可能(1)Itisimportant/necessary/difficult/convenient/possibleforsb.todo...(2)Itplaysanimportantrole/partin...(3)beofimportance/significanceto...(4)attachimportanceto...3.说影响(1)haveanimpact/effecton...(2)dogreatharmto/beharmfulto...第3页4.列办法(1)...candomanythingsto...(2)Agoodmany/Avarietyofthingscanbedoneto...(3)Strong/Effectivemeasuresshouldbetakento...5.展望与呼吁(1)appealtosb.todo/urgesb.todo/callonsb.todo...(2)try/doone'sbesttodo...(3)dowhat/allthatsb.cantodo...(4)sparenoefforttodo/makethegreatestefforttodo...(5)doeverythinginone'spowertodo...6.表示好处(1)Ithasthefollowingadvantages.(2)Itdoesusalotofgood.第4页三、典题示例

真题在线(湖北)请依据以下提醒,并结合详细事例,用英语写一篇短文。Smallthingsmakeabigdifference.Thesmallthingswedocanmakeusarespon-

siblememberofthesociety.注意:①无须写标题;②除诗歌外,文体不限;③内容必须结合你生活中详细事例;第5页④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;⑤词数不少于120,如引用提醒语则不计入总词数。

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审题谋篇写作类型开放类作文中心人称第一人称主体时态普通现在时普经过去时关键点布局第一段:引入话题,如说明自己经历一件小事对自己影响等。第二段:记叙一件证实自己观点事例,说明“小事不小”道理。叙事时一定要紧紧围绕主题,扩展要得当,过渡要自然。第三段:自己认识和感想,升华主题。第7页考场作文:Fromathingsomedaysago,Iknowthatitisn'

ttoohardtobecomearesponsiblememberofthesociety.Icanstillremember①aincidentwhichhap-penedonarainySundayafternoon.Iwasonmywaytothebookstoreandwas②waitingthegreenlightatacrossingwhenagirlofabouttenwasknockeddownbyapassingcar,whichdroveoffquickly.Amanimmediatelyrushedtothegirltogiveherfirstaid.Ialsojoinedinwithouthesitation.③Comparingwiththees-capeddriver,IamproudofwhatIdid.Asamemberofthesociety,Irealizethatre-sponsibilityplaysaveryimportantroleincreat-ingabettersociety.文章提升:1.修改错误:1)incident读音以元音音素开头,故应将①a改

为

。2)wait是不及物动词,故应在②waiting后加介

词

。3)compare与其逻辑主语I之间是被动关系,故

将③Comparing改为

。2.提升提议:将画线部分改为强调句型:

阅卷现场第8页参考范文:DuringthelastsummervacationIexperiencedmanythingsbutitwasonesmallthingthatwasthe

mostunforgettable.OnasunnySaturday,Iwastakingabustovisitmyuncle.Somanypeoplewerethereonthebus

thatsomepersonshadtostand,includinganoldwoman.Onseeingthisscene,Iofferedmyseatto

herwithouthesitationbecauseIthoughtrespectingtheoldisavirtueintraditionalChineseculture.

Whenseeingthesmileonthewoman'sface,Ifeltveryproud.FromthissmallthingIcametounderstandthatsmallthingsmakeadifferencetotheworld.Only

wheneveryoneplacesahighvalueonresponsibilityforthesocietycanwecreateabettersociety

tolivein.第9页

答案1.修改错误:1)an2)for

(3)Compared2.提升提议:it'sresponsibilitythatplaysaveryimportantroleincreatingabetter

society第10页四、高分秀场(江西高三十校第一次联考)北大前任校长王恩哥说过:作为新时代学生,我们应该插上两个翅膀——理

想和毅力,结交两个朋友——图书馆和运动场。请就以上话题展开想象写一

篇文章,阐述你对此了解。注意:1.词数100左右;2.能够适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇:理想ideal;毅力perseverance

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答案Onepossibleversion:AsWangEnge,formerPresidentofPekingUniversityonceput,“Giveyourself

twowings—idealsandperseverance;maketwofriends—thelibraryandtheplay-

ground.”Whathesaidissurelyofgreatimportanceandbenefittous.Idealsreflectwhat

wevalueandcherishintheworld,whichwillshapeusinthefuture.Without

them,wemaygetlostanddon'tknowwheretostartinlife.Onthecontrary,if

yousticktothemandpersevere,neverquittinghalfway,youwillmakeit.第12页Andthenweshouldhaveanothertwofriends—thelibraryandtheplayground.