2025年广东深圳高三二模英语应用文写作指导课件

2025深二模演讲稿（穿越）Lead-in第一节（满分15分）口语课上，外教组织同学们讨论:“假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代，你会带什么?”请你准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.简介物品；2.说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hello,everyone________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua1.

Haveaclearunderstandingofthestructureofthespeech.2.Learntheusefulexpressionsandsentencepatterns.3.Makeuseofwhatyouhavelearnttowriteaspeech.苏州线上教育Learningaims:

演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场合发表的讲话文稿，是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体。演讲一般用以交流思想感情、表达主张见解等，具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用，以期使听众信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。Whatisaspeech?开头（第一段）：自我介绍，说明演讲稿的主题正文（第二段）：陈述发言的具体内容，表达观点结尾（第三段）：总结发言，提出期望，表达感谢写作框架常用句型开头用语1.Goodmorning,everyone!I’mLiHua,I’mhonoredtohavetheopportunityto

giveaspeechon…大家上午好。我是李华。我很荣幸有机会做有关……的演讲。2.

It’smygreathonortobeheretodeliveraspeech

titled“Goodhabitshelpmesucceed”.Ihopemyspeechwillofferyouaninsightinto

thetopic.我很荣幸能在这里发表题为“好习惯助我成功”的演讲。我希望我的演讲能对你们了解这个主题有所帮助。常用句型中间用语3.Asweallknow,…playsanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlife.众所周知，……在我们生活中起着越来越重要的作用。4.Noonecandenythefactthat.../There’snodenyingthat.../There’snodoubtthat.../Undoubtedly...没有人能否认这样一个事实/无可否认/毫无疑问....5.Aseverycoinhastwosides,…hasalsoitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.正如任何事物都有两面性，......也有利弊。常用句型6.Frommypointofview,it’sourduty/responsibilityto...

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只有用这种方式我们才能……9.That’sall.Thankyouforyourattention/listening！

我的演讲到此结束，谢谢大家聆听！第一节（满分15分）口语课上，外教组织同学们讨论:“假如你可以带一件现代物品穿越到古代，你会带什么?”请你准备一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.简介物品；2.说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hello,everyone________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua写作类型SubjectyourarticleReasonstotakethearticle结构分析演讲稿分三段：第一段：点出主题，表示很荣幸在此发言，分享自己的看法和偏好---既在穿越情况下你要带的物品，希望得到大家的共鸣和启示。---一般现在时或者虚拟语气。第二段：介绍你的物品，尤其是它的功能的特点，可以列举两点，一般现在时用来介绍东西的属性。(Itemdescription)第三段：列举两点理由，如何适应古代，会为之带来什么好处和便利，一般现在时。（物品和理由可以撮合写在一起，可重叠）（practicalbenefits）撮合之后第三段：表示感谢，希望分享带来乐趣和启示。根据写作要点，激活词汇，词组，句型结构，草稿纸上列出句子架构。检查过脑后行文，检查拼写和句子结构。认真撰抄在答卷上，做到不涂改。Chunksofwordsandphrases1.发表演讲__________________________________2.代表我们团队______________________________3.穿越回古代________________________________4.携带________________________________give/make/deliveraspeechonbehalfofoursquadtravelbackwardstoancienttimestravelbackintimecarryalong/takealong常用词块5.物品_______________________6.对...有影响_______________________________7.在我看来__________________________________8.总而言之__________________________________article/itemhaveaneffect/impact/influenceoninmyopinion/asfarasIamconcerned/frommypointofviewtosumup/allinall/inaword常用词块9.当提到...__________________10.疗伤减痛_______________11.激发科学好奇心________________12.革新古人的生活________________________13.促进文明进步________________Whenitcomesto...

inspirescientificcuriositytreatwoundsandeasesuffering.revolutionizedailylifeofancientpeopleacceleratetheprogressofcivilizationpaytodosth：做某事是值得的whatcountsmostis...：最重要的是……makeabigdifference：带来巨大改变drawinspirationfrom：从……汲取灵感openone'smind：开启某人的思维句式迁移IfIcould...,Iwould...（虚拟语气）虚拟语气需通过"要是/如果...就..."等结构体现假设性Notjust...,butalso..."不仅...而且..."需要平衡前后成分的语法对等性Evenwithout...,peoplecouldstill..."即使没有...仍能..."要突出条件缺失下的可能性Whatcountsmostisthat..."最重要的是..."需用判断句式强调核心价值词汇迁移IfIcould...,Iwould...（虚拟语气）虚拟语气需通过"要是/如果...就..."等结构体现假设性Notjust...,butalso..."不仅...而且..."需要平衡前后成分的语法对等性Evenwithout...,peoplecouldstill..."即使没有...仍能..."要突出条件缺失下的可能性Whatcountsmostisthat..."最重要的是..."需用判断句式强调核心价值句式迁移Smartphone:Multifunctionaltoolfordocumentation,navigation,andmedicalguidance.Medicalkit:Antibiotics/vaccinesdirectlyaddresshistoricalmortality.SustainableTools:Solarchargersandsteeltoolspromotelong-termsocietalgrowth.Culturalitems:Emphasizesknowledge-sharingandethicalresponsibility.可携带物品推荐1.如果有机会穿越回古代，我会带一件太阳能面板手机。___________________________travelbackintimetoancienttimes______________________,Iwouldchoosetobringasolar-poweredsmartphone.如果有机会穿越回古代，我会带一件太阳能面板手机。__________________________________toancienttimes,Iwouldchooseaportablemedicalkit.IntroductionsIfgiventheopportunitytoWereItobringonemodernitemwithonemodernitem3.这个设备配备有先进的太阳能面板确保不打扰的交流和接触大古代的信息。

Thisdevice,___________________________________,ensuresuninterruptedcommunicationandaccesstoinformation.4.太阳能电筒通过光电细胞捕捉太阳光并转化成电能，并把它储存在可充电电池中备用。Solarflashlightscapturesunlightthroughphotovoltaiccells,convertitintoelectricalenergy,__________________________________________________.5.手电筒小且方便携带，能白天储存太阳能夜间供光。_____________________________,theflashlightcanstoreenergyfromsunlightduringthedayandprovidebrightlightatnight,__________willbeagame-changerinthepast.第二步：featuresandfunctionsequippedwithanadvancedsolarpanelandstoreitinarechargeablebatteryforlaterusewhichIbelieveSmallandeasytocarry7.它充当古今的桥梁，让我分享我们这个时代的知识，也许可能解放古代的社会。It__________________________________thepastandthepresent,allowingmetoshareknowledgefromourera,_____________________________________ancientsocieties.8.想象一下拍照摄影和放视频或者几秒内解数学题，带着这些无限可能，将第一时间见证它改变历史的进程。________________________________,playingvideos,orcalculatingcomplexmathematicalproblemsinseconds.Withendlesspossibilities,itwouldbeincredibletowitnessfirsthand__________________________________________________.9.意外和健康紧急情况在缺医少药的古代可能发生，使得携带Kit很关键。Accidentsandhealthemergenciescanhappenespeciallyinancienttimes____________________________________________________________,makingitcrucialformetotakealong.reasonsservesasabridgebetweenwhichcouldpotentiallyrevolutionizeImaginetakingphotosandfilmshowthistechnologywouldchangethecourseofhistorywhentherewasashortageformedicalcare7.它有导航和照明功能，在日常生活和旅游中非常有用。It_______________________________________,whichcouldbeveryhelpfulindailylifeandtravel.8.手机有各种各样的有助日常生活的应用，从导航到计算。Smartphoneshavevarious______________________________________________,fromnavigationtocalculating.9.有了电筒，我可以帮助古人夜视清楚，无论是夜读还是劳作抑或是夜间旅行。Withthisflashlight,Icouldhelppeopleseeclearlyinthedark,_______________________________________________________________________.reasonshasfunctionslikelightingandnavigationapplicationsthatcanassistindailylifewhetherit'sforreadingatnight,working,ortravelingondarkroads11.这个物件能连接起时代，为古代的困难提供实际的解决方案。Theitembridgeseras,___________________________________________.12.总之携带一个太阳能手机不仅能连接两个世界，而且能为改变历史进程的社会变革铺平道路Inconclusion,bringingasolar-poweredsmartphonetothepastwouldnotonlyconnecttwoworlds_________________________________________________thatcouldalterthecourseofhistory.13.总的来说，不仅是一件工具，它更是一个变革和发展的象征，对古代社会的发展有深远的应用。Inconclusion,morethanjustatool,______________________________________________________thatcouldhaveprofoundimplicationsforthedevelopmentofancientsocieties.conclusionsofferingpracticalsolutionstoancientchallengesbutalsopavethewayfortechnologicalandsocialadvancementsthesmallharvesterisratherasymbolofprogressandsustainability

Hello,everyone.IfIcouldbringonemodernitemtoancienttimes,Iwouldchooseasolar-poweredsmartphone,anindispensablepartinourlife.Asmartphoneisacompactdevicethatcombinesatelephone,camera,calculator,andmanyotherfunctionsintoone,providingconvenienceandefficiency.Firstly,Icanaccessavastarrayofinformationonanytopicwithasmartphone,fromhistoryandsciencetoliteratureandartinancienttimes,whichwillfacilitatemycommunicationwithancientpeople.Besides,withdifferentfunctionalappsinit,Icouldtakephotosandfilms,playvideosandsongs,ormaketaperecordings,informingancientpeoplewhathasneverbeenknowntothembeforeandsparkingtheirimaginationandcreativity.Inconclusion,asmartphoneisanincrediblyversatileandvaluableitemthatwouldbeofgreatuseinancienttimes.Itwouldenablemetocommunicatemorefreelywhilehelpingthemmakesocialandscientificadvancements.Hello,everyone.IfIcouldbringonemodernitemtoancienttimes,Iwouldchooseasolar-poweredflashlight.Itcapturessunlightthroughphotovoltaiccells,convertitintoelectricalenergy,andstoreitinarechargeablebatteryforlaterusewithoutrelyingonelectricityorfuel.Solarflashlightsoffersustainability,reducedenvironmentalimpact,andreliabilityduringemergencies,makingthemapriorchoicefortravelingbacktoancienttimes.Imagineitwouldgreatlyimprovedailylifeinancientsocieties,wheredarknesslimitedproductivityandsafetyaftersunset.Bydemonstratinghowsunlightconvertstoenergy,itmightaccelerateearlyunderstandingofrenewabletechnology,potentiallyinspirescientificcuriosityandchangingthecourseofhistory.Unlikecomplexgadgets,aflashlightissimpleyetrevolutionary—practicalenoughtoavoidculturaldisruptionwhileofferingtangiblebenefits. Hello,everyone!Ifallowedtobringonemodernitemtoancienttimes,Iwouldchoosethetinyinfection-fightingmedicine-smallinsizeyetpowerfulinimpact. Intimeswhenminorwoundsoftenledtodeathsduetopoormedicalcare,thisportablemedicinecouldsavelivesbypreventingdeadlyinfectionscausedbybattleinjuriesorcommonillnesses.Additionally,itwouldinspiredeepermedicalexploration,Oncethebasicproductionmethodsareshared,peoplemightadvancetheirunderstandingofdiseaseprevention,potentiallyreshapinghealthpracticesthroughouthistory. Inshort,antibioticsrepresenthopeandprogress,Theynotonlyaddressimmediatesurvivalneedsbutalsoplantearlyseedsforscientificcuriositythatcouldblossomintogroundbreakingdiscoveries.Thankyou!(113)

Hello,everyone!Iflcouldtravelbacktoancienttimesandbringonemodernitem,I’dbringasolar-poweredflashlight.Itisalightingdevicethatusessolarenergytochargeitsbatteries,Whenexposedtosunlight,thesolarpanelwillconvertthelightenergyintoelectricalenergy,whichisthenstoredintheflashlight’sbatteries. Inancienttimes,lightingwasoftenlimitedtotorches,candles,oroillamps,whichwereinconvenientandcarriedtheriskoffire.Asolar-poweredflashlightwouldprovideacleanandlonglastingsourceoflight,reducingtherelianceonflammablematerials.Besides,itwouldenableancientpeopletoengageinawidervarietyofactivities,suchastravelingatnightorworkingindarkplaces. Justimaginehowamazedpeoplewouldbetoseesuchausefuldevice!【2021·全国乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：1.分析优势与不足；2.提出学习建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目和首句已为你写好。BesmartonlinelearnersGoodmorning,everyone.___________________________________________Advantages/DisadvantagesYourtips写作类型Subject第一步：审题人称（person）时态(tense)Let’shaveatry第二步：要点翻译1.网上学习已逐渐成为人们获取知识的一种重要的方式。Onlinelearning______________________________________forpeopletoacquireknowledge.2.正如任何事物都有两面性，网络学习也有利弊。______________________,onlinelearningalsohasits__________________________. hasbecomeanincreasinglyimportantmeansAseverycoinhastwosidesadvantagesanddisadvantages第二步：要点翻译3.一方面，它的优势很明显。首先，我们可以充分利用大量的教育资源来拓宽我们的视野。_______________,itsadvantagesareobvious._____________,wecan__________________

awiderangeofeducationalresourcestobroadenourhorizons.

FirstofallForonethingmakefulluseof第二步：要点翻译4.此外，我们可以反复学，直到我们掌握所学的。Besides,wecanlearnrepeatedlyuntil________________________________.5.另一方面，它的弊端也不容忽视。

Foranother,itsdisadvantagescannotbe

ignored.

wemasterwhatwearelearning6.网上有各种各样的信息，有些不利于我们的学习和生活。Thereisallkindsof

informationontheInternet,andsomemaybeharmfultoourstudyandlife.

第二步：要点翻译7.另外，长时间盯着屏幕会伤害我们的眼睛。Inaddition,staringatthescreenforalongtimewillcausedamagetooureyes.8.因此，在网上学习的时候经常休息是很重要的。Therefore,itisofgreatimportancetohaveregularbreakswhilestudyingonline.第二步：要点翻译9.总之，我希望我们所有人都成为明智的线上学习者。Inconclusion,Ihopeallofuscanbesmartonlinelearners.第二步：要点翻译01覆盖所有的要点04有效地使用了语句建的连接成分02应用了较多的语法结构和词汇03尽可能选用高级词汇Brainstorm如何算是一篇好的文章？要点全多样化连接词高级感Firstofall,Firstly