读后续写优化句子表达常见微技能 课件-2025届高三英语一轮复习

读后续写优化句子表达常见微技能广州大学附属东江中学Tell:Hethrewtherockintotheriver.Show:____________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Hebalancedhimself,leanedbackandthrew

therockinto

theriver.Tip:Howtoshow?细化动作，把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作，形成动作链。Tip1:动作链:主语+谓语A(,谓语B)and谓语C.

Hepicked

uparock

,leanedbackandthrew

therockinto

theriver.Tell:Thelittleboywasverysorry.Show:_________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Thelittleboy

hung

hisheadlow(低垂着头)andmurmuredanapologytohismother.Tip1:动作链:主语+谓语A(,谓语B)and谓语C.Tell:Theydrovetorescuethefatherandthesister.Show:_________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

They

droveto

theboat,gotcloserto

thefatherandthesisterand

pulled

themoutof

water.Withoutasecondthought,they

droveto

theboat,gotcloserto

thefatherandthesisterand

pulledthem

out

of

water.Tip2:介词短语+句子:介词短语/副词,

主语+谓语A(,谓语Band谓语C).Tell:Margarito

answeredthephone.Show:________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Withtremblinghands,

Margaritotookoutthephoneandpressedit

to

hisear.Tip2:介词短语+句子:介词短语/副词,

主语+谓语A(,谓语Band谓语C).Tell:Tomquicklywenttorescuethelittlegirlfromtheburninghouse.Show:_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Withoutdelay,Tomkickedthedooropen

withgreatforce,onlytofindthelittlegirllyingonthefloor.

Immediately,

hepickedherup

andrusheddownstairs.Tip2:介词短语+句子:介词短语/副词,

主语+谓语A(,谓语Band谓语C).Tell:Shewasdesperate.Suddenlyshesawaboatwithafigure.Show:_____________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Withdesperatetears,shesuddenlyspottedaboatwithafigurewalkingonit.Tip2:介词短语+句子:介词短语/副词,

主语+谓语A(,谓语Band谓语C).Tell:Hecriedforhelp.Show:___________________________________________Show;don'ttell

He

wavedhishands

and

criedforhelp

withallhisstrength.Tip2:句子+介词短语:主语+谓语A(,谓语Band谓语C)+介词短语.Tell:Aferawhile,hewassaved.Show:_________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,

he

waspulledontotheboat.Tip3:时间状语+句子:时间状语,

主语+谓语A(and谓语B).Tell:TheboatapproachedandKianascreamed.Show:__________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Astheboatwasapproaching,Kianapointedtoherfatherandsisterandscreamed.Tip3:时间状语+句子:时间状语,

主语+谓语A(and谓语B).Show;don'ttell

Tell:Ilookattheaudienceoffthestage,tryingtocalmdowntobeginmyspeech.Afterthespeech,allmyclassmatescheeredupandapplaused.Show:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________nervousadmiration

Iglancedthroughtheaudienceoffthestage,tookadeepbreathtocalmdownandbeganmyspeech.ThemomentIfinishedthespeech,myclassmates

cheeredupandburstintothunderousapplause.Tell:HehungupthephoneandthankedSteveandMike.Show:_________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Tip4:非谓语+句子：Doing/Done...,+句子/句子，+doing/done....

Hangingupthephone,he

turnedto

SteveandMikeandsincerelythanked

bothofthem.Tell:Thegirlwasexcitedandunwrappedhergiftbox.Show:_______________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Wearingashiningsmileonherface,

thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.Tip4:非谓语+句子：Doing/Done...,+句子/句子，+doing/done....

Screamingwithexcitement,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.Tell:Theboywasencouragedbytheteacher’wordsandheraisedhishandandanswered.Show:_____________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Encouragedbytheteacher’swords,theboyraisedhishandshigh,

answering,“Ivolunteer.”Tip4:非谓语+句子：Doing/Done...,+句子/句子，+doing/done....Tell:ShelookedatmeandwantedtokonwwhathappenedandwhyIperformedsuchmovements.Show:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Shelookedatmeinsurprise,seemingly

wondering

whathappenedtomeandwhyIperformedsuchstrangemovements.Tip4:非谓语+句子：Doing/Done...,+句子/句子，+doing/done....Tell:Heheardthenewsandwasveryhappy.Show:__________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Hearing

thenews,

she

jumpedtoherfeet,

feelingwildwithjoy(欣喜若狂）.Tip4:非谓语+句子：Doing/Done...,+句子/句子，+doing/done....Tell:Kianawastrembling,andshebeggedthemtorescueherfatherandsister.Show:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Tremblingbecauseofthefreezingwateraswellastheunbearablewind,Kianabegged

themtorescueherfatherandsisterinashakingvoice,“Please…pleasehelpmyfamily…”Tip4:非谓语+句子：Doing/Done...,+句子/句子，+doing/done....Tell:Isighedandwenttowashthedishes.(介词短语，非谓语）Show:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Withasigh,ldraggedmyfeettothesinkwithpilesofdirtyplates.Theoilydishesseemedtobeteasingatmyfoolishness,

blowingawaythebaseballexcitementandthecookiejoy.Tip4:非谓语+句子：Doing/Done...,+句子/句子，+doing/done....Henryrushedtotheriverside,threwoffhiscoatandjumpedintotheriverimmediately.

演出一结束，她就冲到亨利身边，紧紧地抱着他，向他表示感谢。

亨利满意地点点头，朝她竖起了大拇指(thumbv.)，“你的努力终于得到了回报”。(时间状语,动作链，介词短语，非谓语)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Themomenttheperformancewasover,she

rushedtoHenry,huggedhimtightlyand

expressedhergratitudetohim.Henrynoddedwithsatisfaction,thumbingupat

her,“Youreffortspaidofffinally”.Show;don'ttell

PracticemakesperfectlTell:Inthesunlight,thelakewasbeautifulandthebreezewasblowing.Show:_______________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Bathedinthegoldensunlight,thelakewasshiningcharmingly,withthebreezegentlyblowing.Tip5:with+宾语+宾补，句子

/句子，with+宾语+宾补，

Tell:Hewasfrightened.Show:____________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Hewasstunned

(adj.目瞪口呆的)there,with

hismouth

wideopen.

Tip5:with+宾语+宾补，句子

/句子，with+宾语+宾补，

Asuddenrushofpanicrulinghim,hewasfrozentothespot,

withhisheartbeatingviolently.Hestoodstill,withhisheartbeatingwildlyandhiseyes

fullofhorror.Tell:Hecametomeandsmiled.Show:_________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Hecameuptome,withasmile

shining

likeadiamond.(闪烁着钻石般的微笑）Tip5:with+宾语+宾补，+句子

/句子，+with+宾语+宾补，

Hecameuptome,withhereyes

dancingwithjoyandsweetness.Tell:Luckily,theydidn’tdie.HerfathergaveoutandheldtheboatandCierrah.Show:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Fortunately,theydidn'tdrownbutherfatherseemedtobegiving

out,

withonehandholdingtighttotheboatand

theotherholdingCierrah.Tip5:with+宾语+宾补，句子

/句子，with+宾语+宾补，

Show;don'ttell

Tell:Iwalkedtothebridge,butwasnervous.Myhusbandheldmyhandandpattedmeonmyshoulder.(with+宾语+宾补，非谓语）Show:_______________________________________________________________________________________________I

walkedslowlytothebridge,

withmylegstremblingandmyheartbumping([bʌmp]碰撞)nearlyoutofmychest.Sensingmyfear,myhusbandheldmyhandtightly,withtheotherhand

pattingmeonmyshouldergentlytogivemeencouragement.PracticemakesperfectlTell:Hecametomeandsmiled.Show:_________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Hecameuptome,withasmile

shining

likeadiamond.(闪烁着钻石般的微笑）Hecameuptome,

asmile

shininglikeadiamond/hiseyesdancingwithjoyandsweetness.Tip6:独立主格+句子/句子+独立主格Tell:Luckily,theydidn’tdie.HerfathergaveoutandheldtheboatandCierrah.Show:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Fortunately,theydidn'tdrownbutherfatherseemedtobegiving

out,

onehandholdingtighttotheboatand

theotherholdingCierrah.Tip6:独立主格+句子/句子+独立主格

Fortunately,theydidn'tdrownbutherfatherseemedtobegiving

out,

withonehandholdingtighttotheboatand

theotherholdingCierrah.Tell:Shewashappyandhuggedhim.Show:____________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Asurgeofhappinessandwarmthrunningthrough

her,shebentdown

togivehimahug,

with

tearsof

happinessrollingdownhercheeks.Tip6:独立主格+句子/句子+独立主格

Shebentdown

togivehimahug,

tearsof

happinessrollingdownhercheeks.Tell:Everythingwassettled,andthetwinsheldthebreakfasthappily.Show:_______________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Tip6:独立主格+句子/句子+独立主格

Witheverythingsettled,

thetwins

heldthebreakfastintheirhands,grinningfromeartoear.

Everything

settled,

thetwins

heldthebreakfastintheirhands,grinningfromeartoear.Tell:Butshesmiledandthemoneywasplacedinmyhands.Show:_______________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Tip6:独立主格+句子/句子+独立主格

Butshesmiledwarmly,themoneyplacedinmyhandsfirmly.

Butshesmiledwarmly,withthemoneyplacedinmyhandsfirmly.Tell:Peopleontheboatwereshockedandanxiouswhentheynoticedherandthenrescuedher.Show:_______________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Shockedandanxious,peopleonthatboatnoticedher,

hurriedtooperatetheengineandthenapproached

her.Tip7:情感类形容词+句子/

句子+情感类形容词Tell:Margaritowasrelievedandwasrescued.Show:___________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Relieved,MargaritoreachedoutforSteve'shandandwasrescued.Tip7:情感类形容词+句子/

句子+情感类形容词Tell:Hewassurroundedbyhisclassmatesandseemedlikearockstar.Hefeltcheerfulandproud.Show:___________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Tohisdelight,

surroundedbyhisclassmates,heseemedlikearockstar,cheerfulandproud.Tip7:情感类形容词+句子/

句子+情感类形容词Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandsparednoeffortto

yellatthetopofherlungsoastoattractothers'attention.Tip7:情感类形容词+句子/

句子+情感类形容词Tell:Shewashappyatthegoodnews.Show:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Shecheerilygrinnedfromeartoear

atthisgoodnews,

abigsmilespreadingacrossherface,

whichmadeherappearanceshinelikeastar.Tip8:三大从句(定从、状从、同位从)Tell:ItriedbutIcouldnotfinishmyproject.Show:_________________________________________________________________________Show;don'ttell

Nomatterhowhardltried,

lcouldnotfinishmywholeprojectinsuchashorttime.Tip8:三大从句(定从、状从、同位从)Show;don'ttell

Tell:Mymotherhadneverreceivedsuchagift.Shewasmoved.Show:______________________________________________________________________________________________________

Neverhad

mymother

receivedsuchagift.Somovedwasshethatshe

huggedmetightly,tearswellingupinhereyes.Tip9:特殊句式(倒装，感叹、省略，强调...)Show;don'ttell

Tell:Thoughshetriedhard,thatlittleeffortwouldnothelpstoptheboatsinking.Show:__________________________________________________________________

Hardasshetried,