2024-2025学年高中英语Module2HighlightsofMySeniorYear写作园地-事物简介：理想的高中外研版选修7

PAGEPAGE2Module2HighlightsofMySeniorYear写作园地-事物简介：志向的中学[感悟范文]某报社正在举办征文活动，请你以《我志向的中学生活》为题写一篇短文，以便投稿。短文内容必需包括：1．你的个人信息：姓名(李萍)、年龄、所在年级和班级、你最喜爱的科目、学校类型、你认为假期多长最为合理。2．你最喜爱参与什么样的课外活动小组以及缘由。3．你志向的学校中最重要的是什么。为什么？留意：1.词数：100左右；2．参考词汇：intellectual智力的。[范文]MyIdealMynameisLiPing.I'mseventeenandI'minClassOne，GradeTwoofseniorhighschool.Ilikemaths,physics,chemistryandEnglishbest.①Ipreferalargeschooltoasmallone.②AsfarasI'mconcerned,thevacationshouldbeaboutamonth.Ilikecompetitivesports,soIthinkmyidealhighschoolshouldhavesuchafter­schoolclubsasBasketballClub,DebatingClub,RunningClub③andsoon.InthiswayIcannotonlybuildmybodybutalsomakemanyfriends.Inmyview,aschoolshould③putimportanceonboththedevelopmentofsocialskillsandthedevelopmentofintellectualskillsaseverystudentwillmakealivingbythemselvesinthefuture.[技法探讨]本文为半开放作文，要求学生针对题目要求提出自己的观点。每一段围绕一个中心，切忌一段话写究竟。对于此类作文，同学们要在用词精确的基础上，言之有物，条理清楚，能自圆其说。写此类作文时，通常运用一般现在时。常用句式1.Myidealseniorhighschoolislikethis.2.Itshouldbeanindividualschool.3.Wehavealotoffreetimetotakepartinout­of­classactivities.4.Wecanborrowbooksfromthelibrary.5.Thereshouldbemanyassociations.6.Teachersandstudentsgetalongwellwitheachother.黄金表达1．要点信息①与……相比更喜爱……prefer...to...②就……而言asfarassb./sth.isconcerned③等等andsoon④在我看来inmyview/opinion⑤把重点放在……上putimportanceon...2．一句多译就我而言，假期应当是大约一个月。①Ithinkweshouldhaveavacationofaboutamonth.②Ithinkthereshouldbeavacationaboutamonth.③Inmyopinion,thevacationshouldbeaboutamonth.④AsfarasIamconcerned,thevacationshouldbeaboutamonth.亮点分析：本文亮点颇多，能根据半开放性作文的要求提出观点，并论证观点，实为一篇佳作。①正确运用困难的结构prefer...to...，notonly...butalso...②精确运用了本模块中所学的短语asfarasI'mconcerned，达到了学以致用的目的。③andsoon,putimportanceon短语的运用体现了作者较高的写作水平和语言运用实力。[类文演练]学校最近组织了一次中美学生沟通活动，你参与其中的“高校校内生活”探讨。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“PreparingMyselfforCollegeLife”，内容要点包括：1．以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；2．然后以约120个词谈谈你志向的高校生活，内容包括：(1)对中学生活的感受；(2)志向的高校生活；(3)中学生活和高校生活的差别，以及你准备如何适应。[联想词汇]1.适应，调整________________答案：adjustto2.过着劳碌的生活________________答案：liveabusylife3.首先，最重要的是________________答案：aboveall4.习惯于________________答案：getusedto5.主动参与________________答案：takeanactivepartin[连词成句]1.________Idreamedwastheexcitinglifeinthecollegecampus.我所幻想的是高校校内里令人兴奋的生活。答案：What2.ButImustrealizethatthelifeinthehighschoolisdifferentfrom________inthecollege.但是我必需要意识到中学的生活与高校的生活是不同的。答案：that3.Imustgetusedto________thingsofmyown.我必需习惯自己处理事情。答案：handling[连句成章]_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnePossibleVersion：PreparingMyselfforCollegeLifeFromwhatMikesaidIknowthatthoughMikedidn'tadjusttohislifeinthecollegeatfirst,hehasovercomethevariousdifficultiesandgottoenjoythelifeinthecollege.InhighschoolIlivedabusylifealltheday.Ispentmostoftimestudying.ThenwhatIdreamedwastheexcitinglifeinthecollegecampus—moregoodfacilities,helpfulinstructors,andaboveall,morefreetimetodowhatIreallylike.ButImustrealizethatthelifeinthehighschoolisdifferentfromthatinthecollege.Inanewplace,everythingisstrangetome.Imustlearntostudy，learntoliveonmyownandlearntodealwiththeproblemsImeetwithinthecourseofgrowing.Imustgetusedtohandlin