2025年高考英语应用文第06讲 读后续写满分动作描写：动作链（讲义）(解析版)

第06讲读后续写动作描写动作链读后续写·负面情绪必背一利用and形成动作链 1二利用非谓语形成动作链 2HYPERLINK三利用精彩纷呈不同动词“说”形成动作链 4知识点1一利用and形成动作链1.Shefoldedherarmsandstaredathim.她抱起双臂，盯着他看。Itappedthemanontheshoulderandaskedhimtomove.我拍了拍那名男子的肩膀，让他挪动一下。Sheburiedherfaceinherhandkerchiefand

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loudly.她把脸埋在手帕里，大声地擤着鼻子。4.Irushedhome,searchedthroughmycollectionofhats,andgrabbedthecottonone.我冲回家，翻遍了我收集的帽子，抓起了那顶棉质的。5.Janeturnedtomewithtearsinhereyes,andbeggedmetohelpher.简眼里含着泪水转向我，恳求我帮帮她。6.Lauraburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.劳拉突然哭了起来，然后从房子里跑了出去。7.Jane站起来用尽全力挥动着她的衬衫并大声喊叫。Janestoodup,screamedatthetopofherlungsandwavedheryellowblousewitheverybitofherstrength.【即时练】1.歌手瞥了一眼观众，深吸了一口气，开始唱歌。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.2.他停下出租车，提着箱子跳上车，对司机说:“请到警察局去。”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedinwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.”3.男孩们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服跳进水里。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theboysrushedexcitedlytothelake,tookofftheirclothesandjumpedintothewater.4.她冲上前，跪下，把儿子抱在怀里。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shedashedforward,kneltdownandgatheredhersonintoherarms.5.双胞胎起得很早，踮着脚尖走到厨房，从袋子里舀了一些面粉________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thetwinsgotupearly,tiptoedtothekitchenandscoopedsomeflouroutofthebag.6.他们的父亲悄悄走进厨房，拍着双胞胎的肩膀，用温柔的声音安慰他们。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theirfatherslidintothekitchen,pattingthetwins’shouldersandcomfortingtheminasoftvoice.7.他们端着早餐，走上楼，叫醒了他们的母亲。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theycarriedthebreakfast,advancedupstairsandwokeuptheirmother.他穿上外套，冲了出去，砰地关上了门。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Heputonhiscoat,stormedoutandslammedthedoorshut.9.洛娜走到窗前，打开窗户，抬头看着外面的夜空。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lornacametothewindow,openeditandlookedoutupatthenightsky.10.然后玛丽站了起来，穿过人群向我走来。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThenMarystoodupandmadeherwaythroughthecrowdtowardme.知识点2二利用非谓语形成动作链Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.他们站在空荡的路边，仰望天空，从内心感受到珍贵的宁静。Throwingtheovercoatacrossherarm,shecrossedthehallquietly.她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿过大厅。Shelaughed,hereyesshining/sparkling/glistering/glowing/twinklingwithexcitement.她笑了，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。Tearsblurringhereyes,shetookabiteofthebread,enjoyingthepreciousmoment.泪水模糊了她的眼睛，她咬了一口面包，享受着这珍贵的时刻。Hedoveintothewater,kickinghislegsandstretchinghisarmsasfarashecould.他跳进水里，踢着腿，尽可能地伸直胳膊。Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertogoout.看到包里的外套，他看起来很惊讶，然后叫他妈妈出去。Gaspingwithpain,Davidforcedhimselftohisfeetandwithslow,shakysteps,begantorun.疼得直吸气,大卫还是强迫自己站起来,然后(迈着)缓慢、摇摇晃晃的步子开始跑起来.【即时练】1.看着劳拉转身并走远，萨拉忍不住大哭。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WatchingLauraturningherbackandwalkingaway,Sarahburstintotears..2.他们站在空荡的路边，仰望天空，从内心感受到珍贵的宁静。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Standingbesidetheemptyroad,theylookedupintothesky,feelingthepreciouspeacefromwithin.3.她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿过大厅。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Throwingtheovercoatacrossherarm,shecrossedthehallquietly.4.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hefelthischeeksburningwithshame.5.她呆住了，嘴巴张得大大的。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shefroze,hermouthhangingopen.6.他向窗外望去，咬着嘴唇，好像在思考。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Helookedoutofthewindow,bitinghislips,asifthinking.7.手里拿着项链，珍妮抬起嘴唇，泪水模糊了她的视线。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Holdingthenecklaceinherhand,Jennyliftedherlip,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.妈妈听了笑了，轻轻地拍了拍她的背。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hearingthis,hermothersmiled,pattingherbackgently.走到门口，珍妮深吸了一口气。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Walkingtothedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.詹姆斯朝着着水街跑去，惊恐得发抖。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Jamesran/rusheddownWaterStreet,tremblingwithgreatpanic.知识点3三利用不同动词“说”形成动作链基础“say/talk”announce宣布；argue争论；chat闲聊；complain抱怨；debate辩论；discuss讨论；murmur低语；whisper低语，耳语；persuade说服；explain解释；add补充说；repeat重复说；reply/respond回答；comment评论，发表意见；declare宣布1.“I...I..don’tthinkI’mrightforthepart,”Irepliedwithembarrassment.“我...我..认为我不适合这个角色，”我尴尬地回答。2.“Ididn'tgetanidealscoreinthemathexam,”saidTom,disappointed.“我在数学考试中没有得到理想的分数,”汤姆失望地说。3.“Iwillneverdothatagain,”Iansweredfirmly.“我再也不会那样做了，”我坚定地回答。“Itworkslikethis,”sheexplained.“它是这样工作的。”她解释道。WechattedabouteverythingandthenBenturnedtome.我们聊了所有的事情，然后本转向了我。“IneverthoughtI’dseethisplace,”hesaidatlast,inawhisper.“我从没想过，我还能见到这样的地方。”他最后近乎耳语般地说。“No,Iamnot,”Maryanswered,herownwhispersoundinghalffrightened.“不，我不是。”玛丽低声回答说，她自己的声音听起来也有点害怕。【即时练】萨姆大发雷霆，冲出房间，尖叫着说：“我再也不会回来了！”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Boilingwithrage,Samstormedoutoftheroom,screaming,“I’mnevercomingback!”“哦，不！”我们会死在这里的！”八戒说。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“Oh,No!Wewilldiehere!”saidBajie.3.“悟空！你怎么能这么残忍呢！”唐的和尚说。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“Wukong!Howcanyoubesocruel!”saidTangMonk.4.猪说：“为什么总是我！”我只是坐下来！”_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________