2024北京初三（上）期末英语汇编：材料作文

2024北京初三（上）期末英语汇编

材料作文

一、材料作文

1.（2024北京大兴初三上期末）学校英语公众号正在开展以“我最喜欢的歌曲”为主题的征文比赛。假

如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的歌曲，并谈谈理由及感受。

提示词语：lyrics（歌词），rhythm（节奏），perfect,dance,forgetworries

提示问题：

•Whafsyourfavoritesong/music?

•Whydoyoulikeit?

•Howdoyoufeelaboutit?

MyFavoriteSong

MyfavoritesongisShapeofYou'byEdSheeran.Ilovethissongbecauseofitscatchyrhythmandmeaningful

lyrics.ThebeatissoenergeticthatitmakesmewanttodanceeverytimeIhearit.Thelyricstellafunandromantic

story,andtheyalwaysputmeinagoodmood.

Ilikethissongbecauseitisnotjustaboutlove,butalsoaboutenjoyingthemomentandhavingfun.Whenever

Ilistentoit,Iforgetaboutmyworriesandfeelmorerelaxed.Therhythmissoupbeatthatitmakesmefeelpositive

andenergetic,nomatterhowtiredIam.

Overall,ShapeofYou'tstheperfectsongtoliftmyspiritsandmakemefeelhappy.Ienjoysingingalongand

dancingtoit,anditsalwaysmygo-tosongwhenIneedamoodboost.

2.（2024北京昌平初三上期末）假设你是李华。你校英语俱乐部正在开展读书分享活动，其公众号计

划做关于“好书推荐”系列推送。请你用英文给公众号留言，推荐一本你喜欢的书籍，对其作简要介绍，并说

明推荐理由。

提示词语：novel,knowledge,attractive,achieve,makeadifference

提示问题：

•Whatisyourfavouritebook?Pleasedescribeit.

•Whydoyourecommend（推荐）thisbook?

Hithere!I'dliketorecommendagreatbookthatIrecentlyread-ThePowerofHabitbyCharlesDuhigg.

Thisisafascinatingnon-fictionbookthatexploreshowhabitsareformedandhowtheycanbechanged.Theauthor

usesacombinationofscientificresearchandreal-lifeexamplestoshowhowhabitsaffectourpersonaland

professionallives.

Irecommendthisbookbecauseitoffersvaluableknowledgeabouthowtocreategoodhabitsandbreakbad

ones.It'snotjustaboutself-improvementbutalsoaboutunderstandingthepowerofhabitsinshapingourbehavior

andachievingsuccess.Thebook'scontentisveryattractive,especiallyifyou'reinterestedinmakingadijference

inyourlifeandimprovingyourproductivity.

ThePowerofHabithasinspiredmetopaymoreattentiontomyownhabitsandhasgivenmepracticaltoolsto

improvethem.It，saninsightfulreadthatcanhelpanyonelookingtomakepositivechangesandachievetheirgoals.

Idefinitelythinkit'sworthreading!

3.（2024北京燕山初三上期末）在人生旅途中，总会有这样一些人，他们或令你感动、或让你崇敬、

或使你难忘……某英文报社正在开展以“难忘的人”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，谈谈谁是你难忘的

人，他（她）曾经做过什么以及你从他（她）。

要求：根据中英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词

语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。

提示词语：

helpful,fail,encourage,makeprogress

提示问题：

•Whoisthepersonyouwillneverforget?

•Whatdidhe/shedo?

•Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?

AnUnforgettablePerson

ThepersonIwillneverforgetismybestfriend,Jack.Hehasalwaysbeenthereforme,especiallyduringdifficult

times.WhenIfailedanimportantexam,Iwasreallydiscouraged,butJackwastheonewhoencouragedmenotto

giveup.Hehelpedmereviewmymistakesandgavemetheconfidencetotryagain.

Jack'ssupporthelpedmemakeprogress,andIpassedmynextexamwithmuchbetterresults.Fromhim,I

learnedtheimportanceofstayingpositive,helpingothers,andnevergivingup,evenwhenthingsseemtough.His

kindnessandencouragementhaveleftalastingimpactonme,andIwillalwaysbegratefultohim.

4.（2024北京朝阳初三上期末）绿水青山就是金山银山，形成绿色发展方式和生活方式，建设美丽中

国。

某英文网站正在开展以“绿色生活，从我做起”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文

投稿，谈谈你对绿色生活的看法，简单描述你在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法以及你对如何践行绿色

生活的建议。

要求：根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示

词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

提示词语：

important,protecttheenvironment,dividethewaste,save,recycle

提示问题：

Whatdoyouthinkofgreenlife?

Howdoyoudotohaveagreenlife?

Whafsyouradviceabouthavingagreenlife?

GreenLife,StartingwithMe

Ibelievethatlivingagreenlifeisveryimportantforprotectingtheenvironmentandensuringabetterfuture.It

isourresponsibilitytoreducepollutionanduseresourceswisely.Agreenlifestylenotonlybenefitstheenvironment

butalsoimprovesourownqualityoflife.

Inmydailylife,Itrytofollowgreenpractices.Forexample,Ialwaysdividethewasteintorecyclableandnon-

recyclableitemstomakesurethatmaterialslikepaper,plastic,andglassareproperlyrecycled.Ialsotrytosave

energybyturningofflightswhentheyarenotinuseandusingpublictransportationtoreducecarbonemissions.

Myadviceforhavingagreenlifeistostartwithsmallactions.Wecansavewaterbytakingshortershowers,

avoidusingplasticbagsbybringingreusableones,andchooseeco-friendlyproductswheneverpossible.Ifeveryone

takessmallsteps,wecancollectivelymakeabigdifferenceinprotectingourplanet.

5.（2024北京密云初三上期末）榜样的力量是无穷的。假设你是李华，你校英语社团在其公众号上正

在开展身边榜样人物推送活动，现就“RoleModel”这一话题在校内搜集素材，请你用英语给公众号投稿，推

荐一位身边的榜样人物，对其作简要介绍，并说明你从榜样的身上学到了什么。

提示词语：kind,helpful,hardworking,difficulty,keep

提示问题：

•Whoisyourrolemodel?Pleaseintroducehimorher.

•Whathaveyoulearnedfromhimorher?

Therearemanyrolemodelsaroundus.

RoleModel:MyClassmate,Lily

Therearemanyrolemodelsaroundus.Oneofmyrolemodelsismyclassmate,Lily.Sheiskind,helpful,and

hardworking.Despitefacingmanydifficult湫,shealwayskeepsapositiveattitudeandnevergivesup.Whetherit's

inclassorduringgroupactivities,sheisalwayswillingtolendahandandencourageotherstodotheirbest.

WhatIadmiremostaboutLilyisherabilitytostayfocusedandworkhard,evenwhenthingsgettough.She

doesn'tletchallengesstopher;instead,sheseesthemasopportunitiestolearnandgrow.Fromher,Ihave

learnedtheimportanceofperseveranceandhelpingothers.Shehastaughtmethatkindnessandhardworkcan

makeabigdifferenceinbothourownlivesandthelivesofthosearoundus.

Lilyisatruerolemodel,andIstrivetofollowherexampleeveryday.

6.（2024北京东城初三上期末）适应并融入新环境是每个人成长的必经之路。在初中生活中，无论是加入

新班级还是学校社团，都需要我们学会融入新的集体。某英文网站正在开展以“融入”为主题的征文活动。

假设你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你融入集体的一次经历，包括你最初的感受，你是如何融

入这个集体的，以及你的感悟。

提示词语：lonely,help,improve,effort,growth

提示问题：

•Howdidyoufeelwhenyoufirstjoinedthenewgroup?

•Whatdidyoudotofitin?

•Whathaveyoulearnedfromtheexperience?

FittingintoaNewGroup

WhenIfirstjoinedmynewclassinmiddleschool,Ifeltquitelonely.Ididn'tknowanyone,andeverything

seemedunfamiliar.Iwasnervousaboutmakingfriendsandfittinginwithmynewclassmates.However,Isoon

realizedthatIneededtomakeaneffortifIwantedtofeelcomfortableinthisnewenvironment.

Tofitin,Istartedbybeingfriendlyandapproachable.Ijoinedgroupactivities,volunteeredforclassevents,

andhelpedotherswhentheyneededit.Gradually,myclassmatesbegantoopenuptome,andIstartedtomakenew

friends.Ialsolearnedtolistencarefullyandcommunicatebetter,whichhelpedmeunderstandothersandfeelmore

connected.

Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatfittinginrequirespatienceandeffort.It'simportanttobeopen,kind,and

proactivewhenenteringanewgroup.Theprocessofadaptingtoanewenvironmentalsohelpedmeimprovemy

socialskillsandtaughtmehowtohandlechange.Thisexperiencewasnotonlyaboutmakingnewfriendsbutalso

aboutpersonalgrowth.

7.(2024北京西城初三上期末)旅行中拍摄的一张照片、常常翻阅的一本书、比赛中赢得的一个奖品，

都可能对我们具有特殊意义。

假设你是李华。某英文网站正在开展以“TheMostMeaningfulObjecttoMe”为主题的征文活动，请你写

一篇短文进行投稿，描写一件对你最有意义的物品(object),讲述它的来历，并谈谈它对你的意义或影响。

提示词语：prize,encourage,importance,valuable

提示问题：

•Whatisthemostmeaningfulobjecttoyou?

•Whatisthestorybehindit?

•Whyisitmeaningfultoyou?

TheMostMeaningfulObjecttoMe

TheMostMeaningfulObjecttoMe

ThemostmeaningfulobjecttomeisasmalltrophyIwonduringaschoolspeechcompetition.Itwasmyfirst

timeparticipatinginsuchacompetition,andIwasreallynervous.Ispentweekspracticingmyspeech,improving

mypronunciation,andrehearsinginfrontofthemirror.Whenthedayofthecompetitionfinallyarrived,Ifeltboth

excitedandanxious.

Tomysurprise,Iwonthirdplace,andtheyawardedmeasmall,shiningtrophy.Itmayseemlikeasimpleobject

toothers,buttome,itholdsgreatimportance.Thistrophyrepresentsmyhardwork,determination,andthebelief

thatIcouldovercomemyfears.Itwasnotjustaprize;itwasasymbolofmygrowth.

Sincethen,thistrophyhasencouragedmetokeepchallengingmyselfandnevergiveup,evenwhenfacedwith

difficulties.Itremindsmethateffortandperseveranceleadtosuccess,andthatsmallachievementscanhaveabig

impactonmyconfidence.Thetrophyisnotjustvaluableintermsofwhatitrepresents,butitalsoremindsmeofthe

lessonsIlearnedthroughtheexperience.

8.（2024北京通州初三上期末）某英文网站正在开展以“我最敬佩的人”为主题的征文活动。假如你是

李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最敬佩的人是谁，敬佩这个人的原因，以及从这个人身上学习到了

什么。

提示词语：admire,care,solve,helpful,work

提示问题：•Whodoyouadmiremost?

•Whydoyouadmirehim/her?

•Whathaveyoulearnedfromhim/her?

ThePersonIAdmireMost

ThepersonIadmiremostismymother.Sheisnotonlyacaringandlovingpersonbutalsosomeonewhoworks

veryhardeveryday.Despitethemanychallengesshefaces,shealwaysstayspositiveandfindswaystosolve

problems.Iadmireherforherstrength,kindness,andabilitytobalanceworkandfamilylife.

Mymotherhastaughtmetheimportanceofcaringforothersandstayingfocusedonmygoals.Sheisalways

readytohelpthosearoundher,whetherit'sgivingadvicetoafriendorhelpingwithhouseholdchores.Her

selflessnessanddeterminationhaveinspiredmetobemorehelpfulandhardworking.

Frommymother,Ihavelearnedthatnomatterhowdifficultlifemayseem,thereisalwaysasolutionifyouare

willingtoputintheeffort.Shehasshoyvnmethatlove,care,andhardworkarethekeystoovercomingchallenges

andmakingapositiveimpactonothers.

9.（2024北京石景山初三上期末）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德。劳动可以强健体魄，培养品格。

假如你是李华。请你用英文写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一次你的劳动经历（labour

experience),并谈谈你的收获。

提示词语：plant,soil,water

提示问题：

•Describeoneofyourlabourexperiences.

•Whathaveyoulearnedfromthatexperience?

MyLabourExperience

OneofmymostmemorablelabourexperienceswaswhenIhelpedmyparentsplantagardeninourbackyard.

Itallstartedwhenwedecidedtogrowsomevegetables,andIwasexcitedtobepartoftheprocess.First,weprepared

thesoilbydiggingandlooseningittomakesureitwasgoodforplanting.Then,wecarefullyplantedseedsand

wateredthem,makingsureeachplanthadenoughspacetogrow.

Throughthisexperience,Ilearnedalotabouttheimportanceofhardworkandpatience.Atfirst,itseemedlike

alotofeffort,butasIsawtheplantsstarttogrow,Irealizedthateverybitofworkpaidoff.Ialsounderstoodthat

takingcareofsomething,likeagarden,requiresconsistenteffort,asyouneedtowatertheplantsregularlyand

protectthemfrompests.

Thisexperiencetaughtmethevalueoflabourandthesenseofachievementthatcomesfromseeingyourhard

workresultinsomethingbeautiful.Italsoremindedmeoftheimportanceofpatienceandresponsibilityineverytask.

10.（2024北京顺义初三上期末）某英文网站正在开展以“榜样”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请

用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈谁是你心中的榜样，你的理由，以及他/她对你的影响。

提示词语:helpful,care,workhard,overcome（克月艮）

提示问题:Whoisyourrolemodel?

Whyishe/sheyourrolemodel?

Whatinfluencehashe/shehadonyou?

Everyonemayhavehisownrolemodel.

MyRoleModel

Everyonemayhavehisownrolemodel.Forme,myrolemodelismyoldersister,Lily.SheissomeoneItruly

admireforherhardwork,helpfulnature,andcaringattitude.Shehasalwaysbeenthereforme,offeringsupportand

encouragementwheneverIneededit.

Whatmakeshermyrolemodelisherabilitytoovercomechallengeswithdetermination.Whetherit'sstudying

forexams,facingpersonaldifficulties,orhelpingothers,Lilyapproacheseverythingwithapositiveattitudeanda

strongwill.Shenevergivesup,nomatterhowtoughthingsget.

Lily'sinfluenceonmehasbeenincredible.Shehastaughtmethevalueofhardworkandpersistence.Fromher,

Ilearnedthatit'snotenoughtojustwishforsuccess——youmustputintheeffortandkeepgoing,evenwhenthings

aredifficult.Herkindnessandcarehavealsoshownmehowimportantitistosupportandhelpothers.

Lilyistrulyarolemodeltome,andIstrivetobeashardworking,caring,andstrongassheis.

11.（2024北京顺义初三上期末）假如你是李华，你校英语社团的公众号计划做以“MyFavoriteBook”为

主题的系列推送。请你用英语给社团公众号留言，推荐你最喜欢的一本书，谈谈你喜欢的理由及收获。

提示词语：writer,interesting,encourage

提示问题：•Whatisyourfavoritebook?

•Whydoyoulikeit?

•Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromit?

Readingcanmakeourlifecolorful.

MyFavoriteBook

Hi,Iwouldliketorecommendmyfavoritebook,TheAlchemist'byPauloCoelho.Thisisanovelaboutfollowing

yourdreamsandpursuingwhattrulymakesyouhappy.Thestoryisbothinspiringandthought-provoking,witha

simpleyetpowerfulmessageaboutlisteningtoyourheartandfindingyourpersonallegend.

Ilovethisbookbecauseitisnotonlyinterestingbutalsodeeplyencouraging.Themaincharacter,Santiago,

goesonalongjourneytofindtreasure,butalongtheway,helearnsthattherealtreasureisself-discovery.Thebook

remindsmetokeepgoingaftermydreams,nomatterhowchallenginglifegets.

ReadingTheAlchemist'hashelpedmedevelopamorepositiveoutlookonlife.Ithastaughtmetheimportance

ofperseverance,thevalueoflearningfromexperiences,andhoweverystepinlifehasitsownmeaning.Ibelieve

thisbookcaninspireanyonetobelieveintheirdreamsandtakeactiontoachievethem.

12.(2024北京海淀初三上期末)功成不必在我，功成必定有我。

假设你是李华。你校英文报刊正在开展以“人人参与，共创美好(BeanActiveParticipant)”为主题的征文

活动。请你用英文写一篇文章投稿，分享一次你积极参与家庭、学校或社会生活的经历，并谈谈你从中学到

了什么。

提示词语：offer,takepartin,organize,skill,meaningful

提示问题：■Whatdidyoudoasanactiveparticipant?

•Whathaveyoulearntfromtheexperience?

BeanActiveParticipant

Beinganactiveparticipantisimportantinourlife.

BeanActiveParticipant

Beinganactiveparticipantisimportantinourlife.Lastyear,Ihadtheopportunitytotakepartinorganizinga

charityeventatschool.Theeventaimedtoraisefundsforunderprivilegedchildren,andIwastaskedwithhelping

toplanandmanagetheactivities.Iworkedwithateamofstudentstoofferideas,createposters,andpromotethe

event.Onthedayofthecharitysale,Ihelpedsetupbooths,encouragepeopletodonate,andinteractwithguests.

Throughthisexperience,Ilearnedthevalueofteamworkandhowimportantitistotakeresponsibility.Itwasn'

talwayseasy,butseeinghowoureffortsmadeadifferenceinthelivesofotherswastrulymeaningful.1alsoimproved

myorganizationalskillsandlearnedhowtocommunicateeffectivelywithothers.

Fromthisexperience,Irealizedthatbeinganactiveparticipantnotonlyhelpsachieveacommongoalbutalso

bringspersonalgrowth.Iwillalwaysrememberthesenseofaccomplishmentandthelessonslearnedfromworking

togetherforagoodcause.

13.（2024北京房山初三上期末）好的习惯有着无穷的力量，它如同种子在日复一日的坚持中生根发芽,

茁壮成长。

学校英文网站开展“好习惯伴我成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈

谈你的一个好习惯是什么，你是如何保持的以及它带给你的收获。

不少于50词；文中已给出内容不计入总词数；所给提示词语仅供选用；请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

提示词语：reading,keepdoing,freetime,improve,knowledge

提示问题：

•Whatisyourgoodhabit?

•Howdoyoukeepyourgoodhabit?

•Whatcanyougetfromyourgoodhabit?

Goodhabitscanchangeourwholelife.

GoodHabitsHelpMeGrow

Goodhabitscanchangeourwholelife.Oneofmygoodhabitsisreading.Imakeitapointtoreadeveryday,

whetherit'sduringmyfreetimeorbeforebed.Ikeepdoingitbysettingasideatleast30minutesadaytoreadbooks

orarticlesthatinterestme.

Thishabithashelpedmeimprovemyknowledgeandbroadenmyhorizons.Ithasalsotaughtmetheimportance

ofconsistency.Byreadingregularly,Inotonlylearnnewthingsbutalsodevelopbetterfocusandconcentration.

Overall,readinghashadapositiveimpactonmylife.Ithasmadememoreinformed,creative,andthoughtful.

Ibelievethatthisgoodhabitwillcontinuetohelpmegrowinmanyways.

参考答案

1.范文：

MyfavoritesongisLetItGobyIdinaMenzel.Ilovethissongbecauseithasmeaningfullyricsthatalways

makemefeelhappy.Anditisalsoeasyformetosingalongwith.Therhythmisperfectfordancing.WheneverI

listentoit,Ican'thelpmovingmybodyandtappingmyfeet.Ifsthekindofsongthatputsmeinagoodmoodand

makesmeforgetworriesImayhave.Inaword,itisnotjustasongtome,butasourceofjoy.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示词语”和“提示问题”中“我最喜欢的歌曲，喜欢的原因

以及我的评价”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，开篇点题，介绍喜欢的歌曲的名称；

第二步，具体阐述喜欢这首歌曲的原因。

第三步，对这首歌曲作出评价并书写结语。

［亮点词汇］

①caifthelpdoing忍不住做某事

②inaword总而言之

［高分句型］

①Ilovethissongbecauseithasmeaningfullyricsthatalwaysmakemefeelhappy,（because弓|导原因状语从

句，that引导限制性定语从句）

©WheneverIlistentoit,Ican'thelpmovingmybodyandtappingmyfeet,（whenever弓|导时间状语从句）

③It'sthekindofsongthatputsmeinagoodmoodandmakesmeforgetwomesImayhave,（that弓|导限制性定

语从句，省略引导词that的定语从句）

2.参考范文：

MyfavouritebookisTheRomanceoftheThreeKingdoms,whichisoneoftheFourGreatClassicalNovelsof

Chineseliterature.ItisanepicretellingofhistoricaleventsinChina.Thenoveldescribesthewarriorsandleaders

whohelpedfoundtheThreeKingdoms.

ThereasonwhyIrecommendthisbookisthatitnotonlygivesyouhoursofentertainment,butalsoteaches

youvaluablelessonsabouthistory,culture,andhumannature.Thebookisveryattractiveanditcanalsoinspire

youtolearnmoreaboutChineseliterature.Hopeyoucanreadthisbookandgetpleasurefromit.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生应推荐一本你喜欢的书籍，根据“提示问题”对其作简要介绍。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的书是哪一本，并简述书的内容；

第二步，谈谈自己为什么推荐这本书；

第三步，表达希望。

［亮点词汇］

①oneof+名词复数...之一

②notonly...butalso不仅...而且....

③inspiresb.todosth.激励某人做某事

［高分句型］

①ThenoveldescribesthewarriorsandleaderswhohelpedfoundtheThreeKingdoms.（who弓I导的定语从句）

②ThereasonwhyIrecommendthisbookisthatitnotonlygivesyouhoursofentertainment,butalsoteachesyou

valuablelessonsabouthistory,culture,andhumannature,（that弓|导的表语从句）

3.例文

AnUnforgettablePerson

Mr.Wuismymathteacher.Heistallandoutgoing.Helikessportsverymuch,especiallybasketball.Because

hethinkstakingexercisecanmakehimhealthier.Healsolikestoeathealthyfood.Mymathwasoncesopoorthat

Icouldnotworkouttheproblems.Hehelpedmeandtoldmegoodwaystolearnmath.Hewaspatienttomeand

heregardedmeashisownchild.NowmymathisbetterandIoftengetgoodgrades.Ireallythankhimforhiskind

help.NomatterwhereIgo,Iwillneverforgethimforeverandhelpotherslikehim.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重

点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己难忘的人；

第二步，具体介绍这个让自己难忘的人的职业以及难忘的原因；

第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。

［亮点词汇］

①verymuch非常

②workout成功解决

③bepatienttosb.对某人有耐心

④regard…as...把...看作....

［高分句型］

©Becausehethinkstakingexercisecanmakehimhealthier.（动名词作主语）

②MymathwasoncesopoorthatIcouldnotworkouttheproblems,（that弓|导结果状语从句）

4.例文

Greenlifestyleisveryimportantbecauseitcanhelpustoprotectourenvironment.Ithinkeveryoneshoulddo

somethingfortheenvironment.Weshouldturnofflightsbeforeleavingtosaveelectricity.Andwecanuseboth

sidesofpapertosavepaper.Whafsmore,wecanrecycleoldbooksandgivethemtothechildreninneed.

Everyoneshouldtakeactionstoliveagreenlife,YoucanalsostartanEnvironmentalClubatyourschool.Itisa

greatwaytohelpstudentstakecareoftheearthandhelpyourcommunity.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。

②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。

③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“对绿色生活的看法”；“在日常生活中践行绿色生活的具体做法”；以

及“对如何践行绿色生活的建议”等要点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，点题说明绿色生活是很重要的。

第二步，介绍日常生活中如何具体践行绿色生活的。

第三步，给出绿色生活的建议并收尾。

［亮点词汇］

①turnoff关掉

②takeaction采取行动

©community社区

［高分句型］

①Greenlifestyleisveryimportantbecauseitcanhelpustoprotectourenvironment,（because弓|导的原因状语

从句）

@Itisagreatwaytohelpstudentstakecareoftheearthandhelpyourcommunity,（itis+名词+todo的句型）

5.例文

Therearemanyrolemodelsaroundus.Inmyopinion,Nancycanbeourschoolrolemodel.

Sheisthemonitorofourclass.Shelooksbeautifulandsheisakind,helpfulandhardworkinggirl.Whenever

wemeetdifficulties,Nancyisalwaysthefirstonetogiveusahand.Wewillneverfeelboredifwetalkwithher.

Besides,sheisverysmartandworksreallyhard.Shelistenstotheteachercarefullyinclass.Afterclass,shedoes

herhomeworkefficientlyandkeepsondoingsomesports.Nancysetsagoodexampleforeverystudentinour

school.

SheissuchagoodrolemodelthatIhavelearnedtobehelpfulandpatient.AndIwillalwayslearnfromher.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，承接开头，点明心中的榜样人物；

第二步，详细介绍这位榜样人物；

第三步，介绍从榜样身上学到了什么。

［亮点词汇］

①inmyopinion在我看来

②givesb.ahand伸出援手

③talkwith与...交谈

@keepondoingsth.继续做某事

［高分句型］

©Wheneverwemeetdifficulties,Nancyisalwaysthefirstonetogiveusahand.（Whenever弓|导的时间状语从

句）

②Wewillneverfeelboredifwetalkwithher.（if引导的条件状语从句）

③SheissuchagoodrolemodelthatIhavelearnedtobehelpfulandpatient.（such...that弓|导的结果状语从

句）

6.例文：

Iamgladtosharemysorrowandsuccessofmylifeinthenewschoolthisterm.WhenIfirstcametothisnew

school,IfoundeverythingwasnewtomeandIwasataloss.Besides,thestudywasgettingmoredifficultthan

before.Whafsworse,sometimesIwassohomesickthatIfeltlonelyandevenbegantoloseheart.Fortunately,

withthehelpofmyteachers,Igotthroughalltheproblems.Inaddition,thankstomynewhelpfulclassmates,I

managedtobecomeaconfidentmemberofthenewclass.Now,IamproudtotellthatIammakingprogressevery

day!

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：一般现在时；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍你融入集体的一次经历、最初的感受；

第二步，介绍你是如何融入这个集体的，以及你的感悟。

［亮点词汇］

①ataloss茫无所知

②what'sworse更糟糕的是

③makeprogress取得进步

［高分句型］

①WhenIfirstcametothisnewschool,IfoundeverythingwasnewtomeandIwasataloss,（when弓|导的时间

状语从句）

©Besides,thestudywasgettingmoredifficultthanbefore.（比较级）

7.Onepossibleversion:

TheMostMeaningfulObjecttoMe

ThemostmeaningfulobjecttomeisagoldmedalthatIwonlastyear.

IusedtobeveryweakandIwantedtomakeachangewhenIenteredmiddleschool.Luckily,myclassmate

Tonyagreedtohelpme.Heinvitedmetorunwithhimafterschooleveryday.WheneverIwantedtogiveup,he

wouldencouragemetokeepgoing.Besidescompanyandencouragement,Tonyalsotaughtmehowtoimprovemy

speedandavoidgettinghurt.Lastyear,Itookpartintheone-kilometerrunattheschoolsportsmeetingandwon

thegoldmedal!HowexcitedIwas!

Thegoldmedalreallymeansalottome.Itnotonlysymbolizeshonorandpride,butalsoprovesthat

persistenceissovaluable.Moreimportantly,themedalrepresentsthepreciousfriendshipbetweenTonyandI.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给要点描写一件对你最有意义的物品，注意不要遗漏“提示问题”介绍它

的来历及意义或影响。适当增添细节，突出写作重点，使得行文连贯。

［写作步骤］

第一步，开篇点题。指出对我最有意义的物品是去年赢得的金牌；

第二步，具体介绍金牌的来历。在Tony的帮助和鼓励下我参加了学校运动会的一千米长跑，最后赢得了

金牌；

第三步，书写结语。介绍金牌对我的意义。它不仅是荣誉和自豪的象征，也证明了坚持是如此的宝贵。更

代表了Tony和我之间的友谊。

［亮点词汇］

①usedtobe过去是

②makeachange做改变

③giveup放弃

©takepartin参加

［高分句型］

①HowexcitedIwas!（感叹句"how+形容词/副词+主语+谓语！”）

②Itnotonlysymbolizeshonorandpride,butalsoprovesthatpersistenceissovaluable,（"notonly...butalso…”

不仅……而且……）

8.例文

Iadmiremymotherverymuch.Sheishelpfulandcareful.

Everydayshegetsupveryearlyandgoestobedlate.Sheisnotonlybusywithherworkbutalsotakesgood

careofourfamily.Whafsmore,sheisveryhelpfultoothers.Whenpeoplearoundherareintrouble,she'salways

readytohelpthemtosolvetheproblems.Allthepeoplelikeher.

I'mluckytohavesuchagoodmother.IloveherandIhavelearnedalotfromher.Ihaveknownthe

importanceofresponsibilityandhelpingothers.Iwillworkhardandtrymybesttohelpothers.

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中询问的三个主要问题，并适当增加细节。

［写作步骤］

①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最敬佩的人”来引出下文中对三个问题的回答；

②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我最敬佩的人是谁、原因和值得学习的地方”三方面入手，重点介绍我

的母亲；

③第三步，书写结语。表达对母亲的爱。

［亮点词汇］

①getsup起床

@notonly...butalso...不但...而且....

③bebusywithsth忙于某事

©takecareof照顾

⑤what'smore此外

@introuble有困难

⑦tryone'sbesttodosth某人尽全力做某事

［高分句型］

Whenpeoplearoundherareintrouble,she'salwaysreadytohelpthemtosolvetheproblems,（when弓I导的时间

状语从句）

9.例文

Labouristhemostglorious.I'dliketosharemylabourexperiencewithyou.

LastyearonArborDay,ourschoolorganizedatreeplantingactivity.Thatwasmyfirsttimetoplanttrees,andI

wasveryexcited.Myteachergavemeayoungtree.First,Ichosearightplacewherethetreecouldgetmuch

sunlight.Second,Idugade