2024北京初三（上）期末英语汇编：电子邮件

2024北京初三（上）期末英语汇编

电子邮件

一、电子邮件

1.（2024北京房山初三上期末）假如你是李华，你和你的英国笔友Peter都热心参与志愿服务，他给

你发来邮件询问你参与志愿服务的情况。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所参加过的一次志愿者活动，并

谈谈你的感受。

不少于50词。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

提示词语：Children'sHome,tellstories,teach,tired,happy

提示问题：

•Wheredidyoudothevolunteerwork?

•Whatdidyoudothere?

•Howdidyoufeel?

DearPeter,

I'mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

I'mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.Lastmonth,IvisitedaChildrensHomeandspentadaywith

thekidsthere.Itoldstoriestotheyoungerchildrenandhelpedtheolderoneswiththeirhomework.Ialsohadthe

chancetoteachthemsomesimpleEnglishphrases.

AlthoughIfelttiredafterthedaysactivities,Iwasalsoincrediblyhappy.Seeingthechildren'ssmilesand

knowingthatImadetheirdayalittlebettermadealltheeffortworthwhile.Itwasaveryrewardingexperience,and

Ilookforwardtodoingmorevolunteerworkinthefuture.

Yours,

LiHua

2.(2024北京海淀初三上期末)假设你是李华。你校将举办“校园科技节(SchoolScienceDay)”活动。

你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动时间、地点及活动

内容。

提示词语：watch,try,speech,invention,amazing

提示问题：Whenandwherewilltheeventbeheld?

Whatactivitieswillyouhave?

DearPeter,

I'mgladtoinviteyoutotakepartintheSchoolScience

Day_____________________________________________________________________________________________

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

I'mgladtoinviteyoutotakepartintheSchoolScienceDayatourschool.TheeventwillbeheldnextFriday,

March10th,from9:00AMto3:00PMintheschoolhall.

Duringtheevent,youwillhavethechancetowatchvarioussciencedemonstrationsandeventrysomefun

experiments.Therewillalsobeaspeechonthelatestinnovationsintechnologyandscience.Oneofthehighlightsis

ashowcaseofstudentinventions,whicharesuretobeamazing!

Ibelieveyouwillenjoythiseventandfinditbothfunandeducational.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

3.（2024北京门头沟初三上期末）2023年7月末，我们的家乡门头沟区出现了灾害性特大暴雨天气，

受损严重。家乡人民众志成城，积极抗洪救灾。

假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter非常关心你和你的家乡，想了解一下这次灾情的情况。请你用英文回复

邮件，简述家乡受灾的基本情况，谈谈令你印象深刻的人或事以及感受。

提示词语：flood（洪灾）,damage,seriously,neighbour,inspiring

提示问题：•Whatwasyourhometownlikeduringtheflood?

•Whoorwhatimpressedyou?

•Howdidyoufeel?

DearPeter,

Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns.

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns.

InlateJuly2023,ourhometown,Mentougou,washitbyadevastatingfloodduetoheavyrain.Therainfallwas

extremelyheavy,causingseveredamagetohomes,roads,andinfrastructure.Manyhouseswereflooded,andsome

areaswerealmostcompletelysubmerged.Thefloodaffectedthousandsofpeople,andthesituationwasveryserious.

Whatimpressedmemostwasthewaythewholecommunitycametogethertofightagainstthedisaster.Iwas

particularlymovedbymyneighbour,anelderlymanwhovolunteeredtohelpdistributesuppliestothoseinneed,

despitehisageandhealthcondition.Hisselflessnesswastrulyinspiring.

Theexperiencewasdifficult,butitalsoshowedmethepowerofunityandhowpeoplecancometogetherin

timesofcrisis.Ifeltbothgratefulandproudofmycommunityfortheirbraveryandteamwork.

Yours,

LiHua

4.(2024北京丰台初三上期末)假如你是李华，你们班计划开展一次读书分享活动(areadingsharing

activity)o你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件。

提示词语：invite,library,encourage

提示问题：

•Whenandwherewillyouhavethisactivity?

•Whydoyouorganizethisactivity?

•Whatdoyouadvisehimtoprepare?

DearPeter,

Howiseverythinggoing?

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

Howiseverythinggoing?

I'mwritingtoinviteyoutoourclass'sreadingsharingactivity!ItwillbeheldnextThursday,February15th,

inthelibraryafterschool.

Wereorganizingthisactivitytoencourageeveryonetosharetheirfavoritebooksandtheknowledgethey've

gainedfromreading.It'sagreatchanceforustodiscussdifferentbooksanddiscovernewones.Ibelieveyou'll

enjoyit,especiallyifyoushareabookorstoryfromyourownculture.

I'dadviseyoutoprepareashortintroductionaboutabookyou'verecentlyread,andfeelfreetosharewhy

youlikeditorwhatyoulearnedfromit.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

5.（2024北京石景山初三上期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom与你交流如何安排课余生活，请

你用英语回复一封邮件。

提示词语：enjoy,sports,relax

提示问题：

Howdoyouspendyoursparetime?

Explainyourreasons.

DearTom,

I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmysparetime.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

DearTom,

I'mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmysparetime.

Inmyfreetime,Iliketoenjoyamixofactivities.Iusuallyspendsometimedoingsportslikebasketballor

running.Ithelpsmestayfitandalsorelaxesmymindafterabusyday.WhenIwanttounwind,Ienjoyreadingbooks

orwatchingmovieswithmyfriends.

Ithinkit'simportanttohaveabalancebetweenworkandrelaxation,andmyactivitieshelpmestayboth

physicallyandmentallyhealthy.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

6.（2024北京通州初三上期末）假如你是李华，你们学校正在举办“我最喜欢的书”的主题活动。请用

英语写一封电子邮件向你们班交换生Peter介绍你最喜欢哪一本书，这本书的主要内容是什么以及你喜欢的

原因。

提示词语：favourite,writer,words,learn,spirit

提示问题：

•Whafsyourfavouritebook?

•Whatisthebookabout?

•Whydoyoulikeit?

DearPeter,

Howareyou?

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

Howareyou?

I'dliketotellyouaboutmyfavouritebook,whichis"TheAlchemist"byPauloCoelho.It，saninspiring

novelaboutayoungshepherdnamedSantiagowhosetsoutonajourneytofindtreasure.Alongtheway,helearns

valuablelessonsaboutfollowinghisdreams,listeningtohisheart,andunderstandingthesignsoftheuniverse.

WhatIlovemostaboutthisbookisthespiritofadventureandthepowerfulwordsthatencouragereadersto

pursuetheirpassions.It'snotjustastory,butalifelessonthatinspiresmetolearnandgrow,nomatterthe

challengesIface.

Ireallyrecommendyoureadit-itsanamazingbookthatmakesyouthinkaboutlifeinadeeperway.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

7.(2024北京东城初三上期末)假设你是李华。你校英语社团将开展“用英语讲中国故事(Storiesof

ChinaRetoldinEnglish)”的展示活动。你打算邀请交换生Peter参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子

邮件，简要介绍该活动，并说明邀请他参加该活动的理由。

提示词语：hall,makespeeches,actout,learn,history

提示问题：

•Whenandwherewilltheactivitybeheld?

•Whatwillstudentsdointhisactivity?

•WhydoyouinvitePetertotakepartinit?

DearPeter,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.

I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.

I'mexcitedtotellyouaboutanupcomingeventinourschool'sEnglishclub.Wewillbeholdinga"Stories

ofChinaRetoldinEnglish"activitynextFriday,March17th,intheschoolhall.

Duringthisactivity,studentswillmakespeechesaboutfamousChinesestoriesandactoutsomehistorical

eventsorlegends.It'sagreatchancetolearnmoreaboutChinesecultureandhistorywhilepracticingEnglish.

I'minvitingyoutojointhisactivitybecauseIbelieveyouwillenjoyitanditwillbeagoodopportunityto

explorethefascinatingstoriesofChina.Plus,itwouldbegreattohaveyouruniqueperspectiveasanexchange

student!

I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

8.（2024北京密云初三上期末）假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Peter正在安排他的寒假生活，他给你

发来邮件，询问你的假期安排，如做家务、旅游、学习、做公益等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你的寒

假计划及理由并给他提出相关建议。

提示词语：housework,travel,read,volunteer,skill,meaningful

提示问题：

•Whatisyourplanforthewintervacation?Andwhy?

•WhatdoyouadvisePetertomakehisplan?

DearPeter,

I'mgladthatyouaskedformyadviceonhowtospendthewintervacation.

Ihopemyadvicehelps.Pleasewritetomeifyouneedanymorehelp.

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

I'mgladthatyouaskedformyadviceonhowtospendthewintervacation.

FormywinterholidayIplantofocusonamixofproductiveandenjoyableactivities.First,I'llhelpwith

houseworkathome,asit'sagoodwaytocontributetothefamilyandkeepbusyduringthebreak.Ialsowantto

traveltosomenearbyplacestoexplorenewculturesandrelaxabit.Iplantoreadseveralbooksaswell-thereare

somenovelsvebeenwantingtofinish.Additionally,Iwillparticipateinsomevolunteerwork,suchashelping

organizeacharityevent.Ifindtheseactivitiesverymeaningfulandtheywillhelpmeimprovemyskillsin

communicationandorganization.

Asfaryourvacation,Isuggestyoualsobalancerelaxationwithlearningsomethingnew.Youcouldvolunteer,

trylearninganewskillorlanguage,andalsomaketimetorestandrecharge.

Ihopemyadvicehelps.Pleasewritetomeifyouneedanymorehelp.

Yours,

LiHua

9.（2024北京昌平初三上期末）假设你是李华。你的英国笔友Peter给你发来邮件，想询问你身边的

感人故事。请你用英文回复他的邮件，分享发生在你生活中的感人故事以及你的收获。

提示词语：nervous,encourage,help,confidence,lightup

提示问题：•Whatmovingstorywouldyouliketoshare?

•Whathaveyoulearnedfromthestory?

DearPeter,

Howiseverythinggoing?I'dliketoshareyouamovingstorythathappenedinmylife.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

DearPeter,

Howiseverythinggoing?I'dliketoshareamovingstorythathappenedinmylife.

Lastyear,Iparticipatedinaschoolspeechcompetition.Atfirst,Iwasverynervousanddidn'tbelieveIcould

dowell.However,mybestfriendnoticedmyanxietyandtookthetimetoencourageme.Shehelpedmepracticemy

speecheveryday,offeringsupportandadvice.Onthedayofthecompetition,Ifeltmuchmoreconfidentthanksto

herhelp.Iendedupwinningsecondplace,whichwasahugeachievementforme!

Thisexperiencetaughtmethepowerofhelpandhowencouragementcanreallylightupsomeone'sspirit.It

showedmethatbelievinginothers—andhavingothersbelieveinyou-canmakeabigdifferenceinovercoming

fearsandachievinggoals.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

10.（2024北京大兴初三上期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你发来电子邮件，想了解中国

人常见的社交礼仪。请你给他回复一封电子邮件，介绍一些常见的中国社交礼仪，其适用场合以及你对社交

礼仪的看法。

提示词语：meet,shakehands,servetea,showpoliteness,necessary

提示问题：

•Whatsocialmannersdoyouwanttointroduce?

•Whendoyouusethesocialmanners?

•Whatdoyouthinkofthesocialmanners?

DearTom,

I'mgladtointroducesomesocialmannersinChina.

Ifyouhaveanyotherquestion,writetomesoon.

Yours,

LiHua

DearTom,

I'mgladtointroducesomesocialmannersinChina.

Onecommonsocialpracticeiswhenpeoplemeetforthefirsttime,theyoftenshakehandsasasignofrespect.

However,closefriendsandfamilymightnotalwaysfollowthis.Anotherimportantcustomisservingteatoguests

whentheyvisityourhome.Itsconsideredawaytoshowpolitenessandhospitality.Often,guestswillbeojfered

teaassoonastheyenterthehouse.

Additionally,whengreetingolderpeopleorpeopleinhigherpositions,itisnecessarytoshowrespectbyusing

formallanguageandgestures.Forexample,youngerpeoplemaybowslightlyorusepolitetitlestoaddresselders

orteachers.

Ithinkthesesocialmannersarenecessarybecausetheyhelpmaintainharmonyandshowrespectbetween

people.TheyaredeeplyrootedinChinesecultureandreflectthevaluesofhumilityandconsiderationforothers.

Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,writetomesoon.

Yours,

LiHua

参考答案

1.范文：

DearPeter,

I'mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.Lastsummer,Igotanopportunitytovolunteerata

Children'sHomeinthecommunity.Mymaindutywastotakecareofchildrenagedfivetosevenyearsold.They

wereveryfriendly.TheyshowedmebigsmileswhentheysawabagofgiftsIbroughtforthem.Ididlotsofthings

withthem.Itoldstories,sangsongs,andtaughtthemsomethingIwasgoodat.Itwasawonderfulday.Iwashappy

tobeabletodosomethingforlittlekids.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。

③提示：文章为第一人称，向别人介绍自己的志愿服务经历和感受。问题回答完整，提示词运用在文章中

去，适当增加细节。

［写作步骤］

第一步，引出地点在哪里做的志愿服务；

第二步，具体介绍自己做了哪些事情；

第三步，谈谈自己对于这次志愿服务活动的感受。

［亮点词汇］

①takecareof照顾

②wasgoodat擅长

③washappyto高兴做某事

④beableto能、会

⑤opportunity机会

［高分句型］

①TheyshowedmebigsmileswhentheysawabagofgiftsIbroughtforthem.（时间状语从句）

②Ireadstories,sangsongs,andtaughtthemsomethingIwasgoodat.（限制性定语从句）

（3）Mymaindutywastotakecareofchildrenagedfivetosevenyearsold.（动词不定式作表语）

2.例文

DearPeter,

FmgladtoinviteyoutotakepartinourSchoolScienceDay.TheeventwillbeheldonJanuary19thinthe

schoolhall.

Therewillbeavarietyofactivitiesforyoutoenjoy.Youwillhavethechancetoattendinterestinglectureson

differentscientifictopics.Also,you'llseeamazinginventionsshowingthelatestdevelopmentsinscienceand

technology.Ifyouwanttogethands-onexperience,thereareinteractivestandswhereyoucantryoutexperiments.

Ifsgoingtobeagreatopportunitytolearnandhavefunatthesametime!

Isincerelyhopeyoucanjoinusforthisspecialevent.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasefeelfreetocontact

me.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时“；

③提示：根据提示问题进行写作，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。

［写作步骤］

第一步，表明写作目的是邀请对方参加学校科技节；

第二步，具体介绍活动的时间、地点及内容；

第三步，书写结语，希望对方能够参加该活动，并期待对方的回复。

［亮点词汇］

①tryout尝试

②feelfreetodosth随意做某事

③atthesametime同时

［高分句型］

①Ifyouwanttogethands-onexperience,thereareinteractivestandswhereyoucantryoutexperiments,（if弓|导

条件状语从句；where引导定语从句）

②Isincerelyhopeyoucanjoinusforthisspecialevent.（宾语从句）

3.例文

DearPeter,

Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns.

DisastrousheavyrainsoccurredinourhometownMentougouDistrict,causingseriousdamagein2023July.

Manylow-lyingcommunitiesfloodedagain.Itwasfullofmuddywater.

ThePLAmenarrivedimmediatelytorescuethevillagersofthefloodedareas.Andtheydidtheirbesttofight

againsttheflood.Theysuppliedthevillagerswithfreshvegetablesandfood.Somemedicalteamswereorganized

tohelpussothatwecouldhavehealthydiet.

Afteralongtime,everythingwentonverywell.Andthatwasasignofvictory.Iwasdeeplymovedbythese

people.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文为一封电子邮件；

②时态：本文时态一般过去时为主;

③提示：本文要点以问题形式给出，注意要点衔接自然。

［写作步骤］

第一步，感谢好友的关心；

第二步，描写洪水中家乡的样子，谁或什么事情给你留下了深刻的印象；

第三步，结束语，感觉如何。

［亮点词汇］

①wasfullof充满；

©immediately立即地

@fightagainst与...战斗

［高分句型］

Somemedicalteamswereorganizedtohelpussothatwecouldhavehealthydiet.（目的状语从句）

4.例文

DearPeter,

Howiseverythinggoing?IamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheReadingActivity.

TheReadingActivitywilltakeplaceat10:30nextMondayinourlibrary.Bysharingourfavoritebooks,we

hopetoencourageourclassmatestoreadmoregoodbooksanddevelopthehabitofreading.I'msureyouhave

readmanybookssoIhopeyoucanjoinus.Besides,Ibelieveitwillbefun.

Pleasemakesuretoarriveontimeandbringyourfavoritebookwithyou,speakslowlyandwearasmile.

Letmeknowifyouwillcome.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；

③提示：邮件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，承接邮件开头，表明写信目的；

第二步，介绍活动的时间、地点，举办的原因，可列举具体的事例；

第三步，给Peter提出相关建议并书写结语。

［亮点词汇］

①invitesbtodosth邀请某人做某事

②takeplace举行

③encouragesbtodosth鼓励某人做某事

©makesuretodosth确保做某事

［高分句型］

①I'msureyouhavereadmanybookssoIhopeyoucanjoinus.（so连接两个并列分句，第一个并列分句中含

有省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）

②Letmeknowifyouwillcome.（if引导的条件状语从句）

5.例文：

DearTom,

Fmwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmysparetime.

Iusuallyenjoyplayingsportsduringmysparetime.Playingsportswithmyfriendsallowsustobondand

buildstrongerrelationships.IspendsomeofmyfreetimereadingEnglishbooksandmagazines,too.IlikeEnglish

becauseitcanwidenmyfieldofvisionandprovidemewithalotofknowledge.Itisalsoatoolthatcanhelpme

communicatewithforeigners.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇应用文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时、现在进行时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意标点符号及大小写等问题，避免语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑

关系，语意连贯。

［写作步骤］

第一步，表明写作意图。说明写信的目的；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己课余生活的安排以及这么安排的原因；

第三步，书写结语。表达希望收到来信。

［亮点词汇］

①sparetime业余时间

②allowsb.todosth.允许某人做某事

③widenmyfieldofvision扩大我的眼界

©communicatewith...与...沟通

［高分句型］

①IlikeEnglishbecauseitcanwidenmyfieldofvisionandprovidemewithalotofknowledge,（because引导的

原因状语从句）

②Itisalsoatoolthatcanhelpmecommunicatewithforeigners,（that弓I导的定语从句）

6.参考范文：

DearPeter,

Howareyou?MynameisLiHuaandI'mamiddleschoolstudentinBeijing.TodayFdliketosaysomething

aboutmyfavouritebook.

TheAdventuresofTomSawyerismyfavouritebook.ItwaswrittenbythefamousAmericanwriterMark

Twain.Itwasaboutalovely,naughtyboywhoalwaysplayedtricksonhisauntPolly.TomandhisfriendBecky

didn'tliketogotoschool,andtheyalwaysranawayfromschoolandbegantheirownadventures.Ilikethebook

becausethewordsareeasytounderstandandthestoryismeaningful.

Afterreadingthebook,IlearnedthatIshouldlearnTomSawyer5sspiritofadventure.

Hopetohearfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；

③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。

［写作步骤］

第一步，直切主题，说明你将介绍最喜欢的书；

第二步，具体阐述书名、书的内容以及喜欢这本书的原因；

第三步，阐述从书中学到了什么。

［亮点词汇］

①lovely可爱的

②naughty淘气的

③playtricksonsb.捉弄某人

［高分句型］

①Itwasaboutalovely,naughtyboywhoalwaysplayedtricksonhisauntPolly,（who引导的定语从句）

②Ilikethebookbecausethewordsareeasytounderstandandthestoryismeaningful,（because弓|导的原因状语

从句）

③Afterreadingthebook,IlearnedthatIshouldlearnTomSawyer'sspiritofadventure,（that引导的宾语从句）

7.范文：

DearPeter,

Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.

Ourclubwillholdaspecialactivity-anEnglishspeechcontestwiththethemeof"StoriesofChinaRetoldin

English^^intheschoolhall.Theactivitywillconsistofthreeparts.Firstly,everycontestantwillmakespeechs.

Thentheywillactoutthetopicsgivenbythejudges.Thelastpartisevaluatingandpresentingthetrophiestothe

winners.

ThiscontestwillgiveusagoodopportunitytolearnourhistoryandenhanceourabilitytospeakEnglishas

wellashavingadeeperunderstandingofthedifferencesandconnectionsbetweenChinaandothercountries.More

importantly,wegettoknowitisourresponsibilitytospreadthesplendidChineseculuretotheworld.Doyouwant

totakepartinthisactivity?

I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的三个问题，并适当增加细节。

［写作步骤］

①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“社团活动”来引出下文中对“用英语讲中国故事”的介绍；

②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间地点、活动内容和邀请”三方面入手，重点介绍该社团活动；

③第三步，书写结语。表达对回信的期待。

［亮点词汇］

①consistof由...组成

②makespeeches演讲

③enhanceourability提高我们的能力

④aswellas也

⑤moreimportantly更重要的是

©takepartin参加

［高分句型］

①Moreimportantly,wegettoknowitisourresponsibilitytospreadthesplendidChineseculuretotheworld.（宾

语从句）

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例文

DearPeter,

I'mgladthatyouaskedformyadviceonhowtospendthewintervacation.Asforme,Ihaveseveralplansin

mind.Firstly,IplantojoininanEnglishreadingcamptoimprovemyEnglish.Thiswillnotonlyhelpmeprepare

forhighschoolbutalsochangemyskillsofthinking.Secondly,Iwanttovolunteerinmycommunitytoget

experienceinhelpingtheoldinneed.Thirdly,Ialsowanttohelpmyparentsdosomehousework.Lastly,Iplanto

traveltoXi'anwhichisfamousforTerra-CottaWarriors.

Ingeneral,Iadviseyoutofindahobbyoractivitythatyouenjoyandcarryitoutduringthewintervacation.

Youwillalsohaveameaningfulvacation.

Ihopemyadvicehelps.Pleasewritetomeifyouneedanymorehelp.

Yours,

LiHua

【详解】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍“我”很高兴能给你提供建议；

第二步，具体阐述寒假生活计划；

第三步，书写结语，总结全文。

［亮点词汇］

©improve提高

②notonly...butalso…不仅...而且....

③preparefor为...准备

［高分句型］

①Lastly,Ipl