Unit7Outdoorfun写作课课件译林版七年级英语下册

2025Unit7OutdoorfunWritingLead-inMycampingtripLastsummer,Iwentcampinginthemountainsnearmycity.IwentwithmybestfriendTom.Wepitchedatent,cookedfood,andenjoyedbeautifulscenery.Wefeltveryexcitedandrelaxed.What'syourfavoriteoutdooractivityandwhy?HaveafreetalkHaveyoueverhadanimpressiveoutdoorexperience?Cycling;

scenery;freshair;

exciting;memorable…Let’sgetmorefunoutside!Areyouready?ReadandanswerWhatkindofinformationdoesSimonincludeinhisoutline?whenandwherehewentwhowentwithhimwhathedidhowhefeltCompletethetableinPartD1withtheinformationaboutoneofyouroutdoorexperiences.MeWhereWhenWhoWhatHowLastweekendInavillagenearourcityWithmysisterWentcyclingEnjoybeautifulsceneryTakephotosTired,buthappyReadingtime1.Thepassageismainlyabout____.hikingbirdwatchingjoggingcycling

2.Thepassageisa/an____.novelnews

storydiaryGivetheday,dateandweatherwhenwritingadiaryentry!ReadSimon'sdiaryentryinPartD2onpage90andworkoutthecontentofeachparagraph.ParagraphsContentPara(s).______Para(s).______Para(s).______WhatoutdooractivityhetookpartinWhathedidduringthetripWhathe___________theexperienceWhenand________theactivityhappenedand______wasthereWhenheenjoyed,what______hehadandwhathedidaboutit1who4thoughtofwhere2-3problemHaveathinkingLanguageBesidesstructureandcontent,whatelseshouldwepayattentiontowhenwritingFindusefulexpressionsinthearticleandcomeupwithmore.Thenfinishthechartbelow.ParagraphsExpressionsPara.1When,where,whoYesterdayI…with…ContentMoreusefulexpressionsYesterdayI...Lastsummer/weekend/week,Iwent...with...Wetook...to.../wentto...by...Findusefulexpressionsinthearticleandcomeupwithmore.Thenfinishthechartbelow.ParagraphsExpressionsPara(s).2-3WhatyoudidContentMoreusefulexpressionsThefirst/second/last/...partofthe...waseasy/difficult/...Wesaw/enjoyed...Itwasveryrelaxing/exciting/interesting/enjoyable/..Theviewwasfantastic/amazing/wonderful/...Itwasvery…ParagraphsExpressionsContentItwasvery…Findusefulexpressionsinthearticleandcomeupwithmore.Thenfinishthechartbelow.ParagraphsExpressionsPara.4WhatyouthinkoftheexperienceThetripwas…ContentMoreusefulexpressionsThetripwasalittletiring,but...Itwasagreatchanceto...Iwillneverforgetit.Wehadalotoffunandlearntabout...Ican'twaittodoitagain.WritingtimeWriteadiaryentryaboutanoutdooractivity.YoucanrefertoPartD2and"Usefulexpressions"onpage90forideasaboutstructurecontentandexpressions.TIPPayattentionto:FrameworkVocabularySentencestructureGrammarPunctuationShowtimeMonday,26May2025SunnyLastSunday,Iwentcyclinginthecountrysidewithmyfriends.Whenwearrivedatasmallvillage,wemetalocalfarmer.Hewasveryfriendlyandshowedusaroundhisfarm.Wesawallkindsofcropsandevengottopicksomestrawberries.Iwasabitclumsyatfirst,butsoonIgotthehangofit.Wefoundanicespotbyariverandhadapicnic.Weeatthestrawberrieswejustpickedalongwithotherdeliciousfoodwebrought.Intheafternoon,westartedourwayback.Althoughwewerealittletired,wewereallinhighspirits.Itwasagreatoutdooractivity,andI'mlookingforwardtoournextadventure.WhatWhereWhoWhenAfterthatateSelf-assessmentEvaluationCriteria

YesDoesthediarydescribetheauthor'soutdooractivityexperience?Doesthediaryhaveaclearbeginningandending?Doesthediarydescribethebasicinformation?Doesthediaryuseappropriatesentencepatternsandrichvocabulary?Isthediarycorrectinspelling,grammarandpunctuation?No

HowtoimproveitPeer-assessmentEvaluationCriteria

ScoreDoesthediarydescribetheauthor'soutdooractivityexperience?Doesthediaryhaveaclearbeginningandending?Doesthediarydescribethebasicinformation?Doesthediaryuseappropriatesentencepatternsandrichvocabulary?Isthediarycorrectinspelling,grammarandpunctuation?5=Excellent4=Good3=Acceptable2=Needsimprovement1=NotgoodGooutside,enjoynature'scharm,andfillyour